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hi!TINAMALHONTRA
i read your whole ff within just 3 days.must say,u r an excellent writer,there's just one word for your fic FANTABULOUS.trust me,its fun to see samrat and mayank burn wid envy.keep up d good job and update soon.😊
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Part 11

Gunjan – Par….

Dad – Par Var kuch nahi abhi stage pe aao

Gunjan – Par gaana

Dad – Kaha na par var nahi gaana main tumhe deta hoon. Meri ek poem thi na jo tum mujhe gaane ke roop main sunati thi bachpan main voh sunao Ok

Gunjan – OK!

Dad – Ok spotlight and lights of. Start Gunjan

{Note if Gunjan sings Karan sings and Samrat sings}

The song started with Gunjan looking at Samrat who just smiled at her. With that smile she closed her eyes and started.

(Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Humko pyaar hai sirf tumse) - 2
Ab yeh pyaar na hoga phir humse
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Humko pyaar hai sirf tumse

This was when she opened her eyes and smiled at Samrat then her eyes started to look for someone but couldn't find that person. Samrat knew it was Karan and didn't like it one bit but couldn't help it so he continued listening.
Log kehte hain paagal hoon main yeh bhi na jaanoon
Dil lutaaya hai maine, ab kisi ki na maanoon
Chain de karke maine bechainiyaan ab yeh li hai
Neendein udaake maine tumse vafaayein ki hai
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Jee rahe hain hum tere dam se
Ab yeh pyaar na hoga phir humse
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Humko pyaar hai sirf tumse


Dad – Vaah Vaah kya baat hai are ab toh light kholo…are…………..
Suddenly a piano started playing and then
Kuch ishaaron mein tumne humse jo yeh kaha hai
Ab yakeen aa raha hai, tumko bhi kuch hua hai

This made Gunjan smile which angered Samrat even further

Samrat – Yeh kahin bhi tapak jaata hai isko kissi ne kaha tha gaane ke liye par nahi aa gaya beech main.
Kyun tumko dekhte hain, kya dil mein sochte hai
Toofaan jo uth raha hai, hum usko rokte hain
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Yeh milan hai sanam ka sanam se
Ab yeh pyaar na hoga phir humse

Coming near to Gunjan he smiled.

Kasam
Ki kasam
Haan kasam
Yeh kasam
Di kasam
Li kasam
Haan kasam
Kasam
Kasam
Kasam
BOTH

Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Humko pyaar hai sirf tumse
Ab yeh pyaar na hoga phir humse

Dad – Oho mujhe toh yaad hi nahi raha ki is gaane ka yeh part bhi tha THANKS KARAN. RIGHT GIRLS. OH AND GUNJAN KA GAANA SPECTACULAR THA RIGHT GUYS.

There was a loud outburst

Samrat – Hmm ladkiya paagal ho gayi hain pata nahi kyun. Karan ne toh gaane ko kharab kar diya par agar meri chashmish na hoti toh yeh gaana kharab ho jaata. Aur yeh baaki ladkon ko kya hogaya aaj Gunjan ke peeche kyun pade hain. Ek kum tha ki itno se nipatna hai

Benji – Maan gaye Gunjan ne bahut acha gaaya

Samrat – Haan chashmish hamesha se hi best thi

Ms Aha – Are Mr Singh

Dad – Yes beautiful

Aha – Gaana toh bahut acha hai par Nupur se suna hai ki Gunjan aur Karan jab romantic gaate hai toh couple ki tarah lagte hain. Humme bhi dekhna hai….Sorry suna hai

Dad – Are haan haan Bilkul chalo tum dono kuch romantic sunao.

Samrat – WHAT!!! Kya maine tum logon ko kaha hai ki mujhe Ms Aha aaj se nahi nahi abhi se napasand hai

Benji – Kya baat kar raha hai dude aisa mat keh mera chance hai unke saath apne dost ki sonch

Samrat – Mera chance bigaad ke apne chance ki sonch raha hai. It's decided I hate her aur main teri aur madad nahi karne vaala

Benji (with a devdas face) – Dost, dost na raha pyaar pyaar na raha. Aaj toh mujhe C.J meri dost lag rahi hai. C.J tumhara shoulder kaha hai mujhe rone do aaj mera dost aur mera pyaar dono mujh se bichad gaye, ya mujhe dono ke beech main chunna padega. Yeh din dekh ne se pehle main mar kyun nahi gaya.

C.J – SHUT UP!!! Suno Gunjan kuch keh rahi hai

Gunjan – Par Uncleji

Samrat – That's right say no

Dad – Maine tujhe par ke baare main kya samjhaya tha chal ab gaa

Gunjan looks at Samrat for his view and Samrat looks the other way. Gunjan is really sad that he doesn't want her to sing with her best friend

Gunjan – Nahi Uncle……

Mayank – Samrat haan bol yaad hai tune mere case main kya kaha tha dekh uska chehra kitna utra hua hai.

C.J – Yes bol varna karan issi ko weapon banake tumhare khilaaf use karega

Gunjan – Nahi nahi uncleji

Samrat – Gao na chashmish main bhi dekhoon tum meri saath zyaada achi dikhti ho ya uske saath

Gunjan got her smile back – Thik hai tum kehte ho toh.

Karan – Haan Gunji hum inhe dikhaate hai ki hum isse kitne better hain

Yeh saajish hain boondon ki koi khwaahish hain chup chup si
yeh saajish hain boondon ki koi khwaahish hain chup chup si
dekho na dekho na
dekho na dekho na

Hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole
kyon duuri hain ab darmiyaan
dekho na dekho na
dekho na dekho na

Nupur – Chalo guyz apne partners ke saath dance karo

phir na hawayen hongi itni besharam
phir na dag mag dag mag honge yeh kadam

Hai! phir na hawayen hongi itni besharam
phir na dag mag dag mag honge yeh kadam

haan saawan yeh seedha nahi khufia bada
kuchh toh baraste hue keh raha

samjho na samjho na

Looking at Samrat and giving him an evil smile by looking back at Gunjan
samjho na samjho na

hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole
kyon duuri hain ab darmiyaan
dekho na dekho na

dekho na dekho na

Nupur starts dancing with Raj but ends up in Mayank's arms

jugnu jaise chahat dekho jale mujhe
meethi si mushkil hain koi kya kare

Looks at Karan then at Samrat

jugnu jaise chahat dekho jale mujhe
meethi si mushkil hain koi kya kare

hmm hothon ki arzi aaise thukraaon na
saanson ki marzi ko jhuthlaaon na

Going near Gunjan and looking at Samrat while keeping his hand on her waist. Laughing silently while seeing C.J and Benji trying to hold Samrat

chhuu lo na chhu lo na

Removing Karan's hand
chhuu lo na chhu lo

Nupur and Mayank do sort of Waltz lost in each other and Raj taping this on his mobile

C.J – Chup ho jao Samrat voh tumhe jala raha hai dekho Gunjan ne bhi uska hand move kiya

hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole
na duuri hain ab darmayaan
dekho na dekho na....

dekho na hmm hmm hmm

Closes her eyes
hmm hmm hmm

Open it to see Samrat and smiles at him. Dekho naaa……….. He gives a smile back and then turns away about to leave the party

Karan – HEY SAMRAT. I hope tum jaa nahi rahe ho kyunki tumhari baari abhi baaki hai

Samrat – What!!!

Karan – Tumne toh humari chemistry dekh hi li hogi. Vaise maine tumhari gaane ki badi prashansa suni hai Gunjan se toh tum gaaoge nahi

Samrat – Main…..

Karan – Kyun dar gaye

Samrat – Samrat kissi se nahi darta bus Samrat ka mood nahi hai isliye no thanks

Karan – Fine tumhe pata hai tum haar jaoge….

Gunjan goes to Samrat – Gao na please varna usse lagega tum har gaye ho

Samrat – Par…

Gunjan – Mere liye kyunki main jaanti hoon tum kabhi nahi haar sakte

Samrat – Ok!

Goes to stage

Samrat – HEY!!!!

Everyone – SAMRAT!!!!

Samrat – Guyz main aaj koi fast paced gaana nahi gaaonga but ek slow song jo mera personel favourite hai kissi khaas ke liye…

Looking at Gunjan

Tu Hi To Jannat Meri, Tu Hi Mera Junoon

Tu Hi To Mannat Meri, Tu Hi Rooh Ka Sukun

Smiling at Gunjan

Tu Hi Ankhiyon Ki Thandak, Tu Hi Dil Ki Hai Dastak

Aur Kuch Na Janu Mein, Bas Itna Hi Jaanu..

(Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu) - 2

Sajde Sar Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu

Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu..

Struming the guitar and remembering the time he spent with his chashmish

Kaise Hai Yeh Doori, Kaise Majboori

Mene Nazaron Se Tujhe Choo Liya

Remembering the first time they met and the time he touched her unintentionally and the way she reacted.

Kabhi Teri Khusboo, Kabhi Teri Baatein

Bin Maange Yeh Jahan Pa Liya

Tu Hi Dil Ki Ha Rounak, Tu Hi Janmon Ki Daulat

Remembering the time when she stopped talking to him and how he felt

Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu..

(Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu) - 2

Sajde Sar Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu

Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu...

breaking his train of thoughts to look at Gunjan his chashmish who unmistakebly had a small smile

Cham Cham Aaye, Mujhe Tarsaaye

Tera Saaya Ched Ke Chumta...

Remembers the time he realized he was in love

Karan – I know tum unknowingly Gunjan ko propose kar rahe ho

O O, Tu Jo Muskaye, Tu Jo Sharmaye

Jaise Mera Hai Khuda Jhomta...

Sees Gunjan looking at him with a clear smile now and a clear blush

Tu Hi Meri Barkart, Tu Hi Meri Ibaadat

Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu...

Looks at Gunjan and sees Karan next to her

(Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu) - 2

Sajde Sar Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu

Looks down and keeps the guitar with his head on it

Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu……………

The whole hall was silent unable to say anything suddenly

Na Kuch Poocha, Na Kuch Manga

Tune Dil Se Diya Jo Diya

Samrat looks up to see Gunjan with tears in her eyes which she wipes away so that he doesn't notice but he has already seen them and in some way he is really happy

Na Kuch Bola, Na Kuch Tola

Muskura Ke Diya Jo Diya

She goes and stands next to him

Tu Hi Dhoop, Tu Hi Chau

Tu Hi Apna Paraya

Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu

(Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun) - 2

Sajde Sar Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun

Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun

Everyone starts clapping unaware of the turmoil going inside the two.

Samrat – Hmm tum ne jo kaha voh tum sach main……..

Gunjan – Haan jab se main tum se mili hoon tum ne ek sache dost ki tarah mujhe help kiya

Samrat – Dost… Haan dost hi toh hoon

Goes and stands next to Mayank

Gunjan – par shayad tum dost se kuch zyaada hi ho. Main itni confused make up karne par bhi nahi hoti hoon

Karan hears all of this from behind and laughs

Karan – Pareshaan lag rahi ho main ek suggestion deta hoon. For sometime apna dimaag closet main chod ke aao aur dil ko safe se nikaal kar use karo tumhe sab pata chal jaayega kya chal raha hai

Gunjan – Huh!!! Haan shayad

Karan – Vaise tu kamaal ki thi usne bhi thik thak gaaya

Gunjan – Thik thak nahi bahut acha gaaya

Karan – haan haan jaise voh train main gaate hain na kuch vaise hi sound kar raha tha

Gunjan – HUH!! BILKUL NAHI Samrat ne tumse bhi acha gaaya

Karan – Kya kuch bhi

Gunjan – Haan

From far Samrat was watching all this

Samrat – Dekha yeh dono ek dusre main itne busy hai aur khush hai ki they wouldn't want me interrupting hai na Mayank…………. Mayank ……………….Mayank sun rahe ho

Looking at Mayank who was glancing at Nupur

Mayank….!!!!!!!!!

Mayank – Huh Oh kya keh rahe the Samrat main Nupur aur humare dance ke baare main sonch raha tha

Samrat – Voh toh dikh raha hai.

Dad – Acha bhai ab bahut ho gaya sweet, lovely and sad songs. Ab aisa lag raha hai ki main tumhare age ka hoon aur tum sab mere age par pahunch gaye. Samrat my boy Karan tum dono kuch mazedaar nahi kar sakte rock–n-roll type's apni dushmani bhula kar

Gunjan – Yeh acha idea hai tum dono karo na kuch

Dad – Oho Gunjan baat beech main kaato mat Raj Mayank tum dono bhi aao we'll make a song with everyone singing and dancing. Come on everyone on the dance floor

Karan – Gunjan ke liye ek saath aaj kuch kar hi lete hai

Samrat – Yea sure

Raj – Aur tum

Mayank – Haan

Benji – Oho toh chak de fatte

C.J – Yea chalo dance karte hain

Uday (Yes he is back) – Bilkul main vaise bhi hrithik lag raha hoon. GIRLS LISTEN MERA YAANI U-D-A-Y ka partner kaun banna chahta hai.

No answer

Chako – Hey dude apna dance ka jalwa dikha and then they will come.

Dia – Oh dodo sab mere hero ka wait kar rahe hain.

Dodo – Look Di yahan kya chal raha hai mujhe sab pata hai

Dia – What dodo kya chal raha hai.

Uday – Ab tum hi dekho morena's ko attention de rahe hai who dono. Toh tumhara koi chance nahi and Sam and Mayank toh ek dusre ke saath hi khush hai toh vahan bhi koi chance nahi

Dia – Kya bol rahe ho. Sam aur Mayank vaise nahi hai

Uday – Trust me di aise logon ko door se pehchaan sakta hoon main. Aur rahi baat Karan aur Raj ki toh u know who bhi usi type ke lagte hai kyunki ab tak single hai na isiliye

Dia – Shut up dodo!!!!! Bakvas ma karo. Voh single is liye hai kyunki un main se ek mera future hain

Annie – Voh single is liye hai kyunki I'm finalized bus announcement baaki hai

At a corner Gunjan was remembering what happened a few minutes back.

Gunjan – Jo bhi hua kya voh hona chahiye, sab kehte hain pyaar zindagi kharab karta hai, par Samrat ke saath sab acha hi hua hai. Par kya yeh pyaar hai yeh dosti bhi toh ho sakti hai. Par jab voh mujhe chuta hai toh ajeeb lagta hai. Jaise current ja raha hai body main. Di aur Mayank ki tarah main aur Samrat toh nahi hai. Nahi Di aur Mayank ka agar kuch hota toh voh mujhe bata deti par…..pata nahi……kya bolo………..pyaar……nahi……..haan……nahi……..pata nahi………….shayad. Uff ho Raj ne kaha tha dil se soncho par dil kitne confusing answers deta hai. Tabhi main dimaag use karti thi. Agar yeh koi math's ka sum hota toh main jhat se solve kar leti. Par yeh pyaar hai……fir pyaar mujhe baar baar yeh shabd dimaag main kyun aata hai.

Everyone comes on the dance floor when suddenly the light goes

Uday – Yeh kya hua din se raat kaise hogayi. Where are the stars and the moon?

Dia – Dodo light gayi

Annie – Oh no ab main apna make-up kaise dekhoon

Chako – Pata nahi kya hoga…..

Nupur – Uncleji……kya hogaya

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Humme bhi nahi pata kya hoga. Pata lagane ke liye wait for the next update.

Wait and watch😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
waite tho kar lunga lekin mere paas itna time nahi hai i will move to the next ff :P
ok it was fantastic part :)
Edited by miss.sonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
AMAZING>>>!!!!....waiting foe ur next update..!!
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great going yaar..............
plz pm me when you next update it
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Posted: 16 years ago
tht was cool part i love it
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VERY NICE AND CUTE AS USUAL!!!!
U R A AWESOME WRITER!!!!
LOVE SAJAN STORY ....MAYUR TOOO!!!
HOPE I WILL ENJOY UR FUTURE PARTS TOO!!!!
I WILL WAIT 4 NEXT PART!!!!
TAKE UR TIME!!!!
CONT SOON!!!!
SEE YAAA!!!!
LOVE UUUU!!!
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@ Anjalika Khanna - Thanx so much
@cutiepooja - Thanks
@sonia - Learn to wait yaar. AND THANKS SO MUCH
@mamata_stutee - Thanks will do so
@Amber - Thanks dear
@nupur - Thanks for ur review

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