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Part 13

The next day arrives and everyone one is doing some last minute packing. At the Bhushan house the bus has arrived carrying the Singh's. With a last Bye to Chachaji. All of them head to Samrat's house where they pick Samrat, Benji, Chako and Annie. The last stop is Mayank's house where MM and Mayank join the others.

The seating arrangement was such. Gunjan and Samrat were sitting together, Mayur were together too. Benji and Uday were sitting together, Annie and Chako, Dia and Karan. Whereas behind MM, Dad and Raj were discussing something important.

With Sajan

Samrat – Are chashmish aaj koi book nahi laayi kya

Gunjan – Nahi Samrat laayi hoon na par bus ke liye nahi. Aur vaise bhi tumhare hote hue mujhe aur kuch zyaada entertain kar sakta hai kya.

Samrat – Hai!! Bahut sahi kaha vaise mujhe laga tha ki tum Karan ke saath baithne vaali thi par kya kare mera luck zyaada acha hai usse.

flashback

Samrat, Benji, Chako and Annie had just entered the bus. Raj and Karan were out keeping the luggage in the compartment. After everyone entered the bus Karan seeing Samrat walking towards Gunjan rushed forward and was just about to sit when…..

Dia – Oh Karan

Karan turning – Yea Dia kuch chahiye

Dia – Tum hamesha toh Gunjan ke saath baith te ho aaj toh mere saath baitho.

Looking at Gunjan and Samrat

Karan – Thik hai.

Walking past Samrat

Karan – Aaj tumhari baari enjoy.

present

Gunjan – Haan varna tum toh aaj Dia ke bagal main baithe hote. Kitna maza aata na

Samrat – Shayad par tumse zyaada I don't think so.

With Mayur

Mayank – Nupur bus chale hue kaafi time hua hai. Ab toh puja karna chodo.

Nupur – By God Mayank maine tumhe kabhi kaha hai ki tum hamesha padhte kyun rehte ho. Nahi na. Toh har cheez par tum apni taang kyun adate ho

Suddenly Benji

Benji – Aaah!!! Haa!!!

Everyone turns to see

Nupur and Gunjan are the only ones who rush to him

Nupur – Kya hua Benji

She lifts Uday and sits next to Benji

Nupur – Are tum toh aise lagte ho ki bimaar ho gaye ho. Chalo leto.

Benji – Ok and he lies on her lap

Nupur – Are…Nupur Bichaara kitna bimaar lagta hai abhi sahi vakt nahi hai hala machaane ka. Acha ab apni aankhein band karo.

Gunjan – Ek minute main tumhare liye coffee laati hoon.

She goes to get coffee. And then helps him to drink it.

Gunjan – Vaise tum itne der se jaag kar kya kar rahe the

Benji – Voh Samrat ne kaha tha

Samrat – Benji!!!

Gunjan – Samrat chup raho tum bolo Benji

Benji – Haan toh Samrat ne farm house ke liye kuch kaam ka list banane diya tha aur kaha ki main tab tak so nahi sakta jab tak voh list complete nahi hota.

Gunjan – KYA!! Samrat!!

Samrat – Voh Gunjan aisa kuch nahi hai maine toh mazak main keh diya yeh toh….

Benji – Jab dost itna pyaar se kehta hai toh kaise mana karu hai na Gunjan

Gunjan – Mujhe pata hai Benji tum Samrat ko apne bhai ki tarah maante ho par itna nahi karna chahiye

Saying this she started feeding him something and ruffled his hai. Benji was enjoying the attention and Samrat's glare

Benji – Aur pata hai Nupur jab maine Samrat ko kaha ki Mayank ko kehna toh voh keh raha tha ki Mayank nahi maanega

Mayank – Nahi aisa….

Nupur – Mujhe pata tha Mayank hi is problem ka jad hai. Padhai ke liye raat bhar jaaga rehta hai par dost ke liye NO!! Chalo tum so jao.

Benji – Tumhare lap pe chalega

Nupur – Haan

Benji – Gunjan tum mere baal sehlaogi feels Good

Gunjan – Kyun nahi

Saying this they both ignored Samrat and Mayank. There Samrat and Mayank depicting in Benji's voice

Mayank - Tumhare lap pe chalega Nupur. HUH!!! Kya samajhta hai

Samrat - Gunjan tum mere baal sehlaogi feels Good. Baad main main feel good karvata hoon.

Mayank – Abe teri vaali aur meri vaali tere dost ka kitna khayal rakhti hai

Samrat – Haan yaar meri vaali use coffee pila rahi hai aur teri vaali ko toh pillow ki tarah use kar raha hai.

Mayank – Meri vaali ne kabhi mujhe apni lap pe sone nahi diya.

Samrat – Aur meri vaali ne kabhi mujhe apni haathon se coffee nahi pilaya.

Mayank – Meri vaali ne kabhi apne kissi ache dost ke samne meri tareef nahi ki

Samrat – Meri vaali ne kabhi mere liye kissi achi dost se jhagda nahi kiya

Mayank – Fir Benji …

Samrat – Haan apna Benji jisse main zero kehta tha…

Mayank – Usne ek ko nahi dono ko le liya.

Samrat – Mayank maine kapde toh thik pehne hai na

Mayank – Haan mere baal toh thik hai na. Maine kaha tha maa ko ki baal mat chuo nikalne se pehle dekho kya hogaya. Vaise Nupur ke lap main sona kaisa hota hoga.

Samrat – Mujhe kya pata main uske lap main soya thodi hoon. Vaise Gunjan jab chuthi hai toh kaisa lagta hai. Voh toh mujhe use chune bhi nahi deti

Mayank – Mujhe kya….Nahi yeh mujhe pata hai.

Samrat – Matlab…

Mayank – Are voh Samrat jisske paas ladkiyaan makhi ki tarah chipakti hai usne Gunjan ko chua tak nahi hai.

Samrat – Nahi yaar vaise nahi dekh kitne pyaar se voh Benji ke baal sehla rahi hai.

Mayank – Are voh check kar rahi hai ki use temperature hai ki nahi

Samrat – TOH KYA MUJHE NAHI KIYA!!!

Gunjan – SAMRAT shh!! Benji so raha hai. Pehle toh galti karte ho fir shor machete ho

Nupur – By God tum Mayank ke sangat main reh kar bigaad gaye ho Samrat.

Mayank – Maine….

Nupur – Haan tum hi ho basic culprit. Tumhari vajah se Benji ki yeh haalat hai. Tumhe toh aadat hai na raat bhar jaagne ki toh voh kaam nahi kar sakte the. By God

Mayank – Dekha humpe baras gayi. Dekh kaise baal sehla rahi hai.

Samrat – Voh bhi temperature check kar rahi hai.

Mayank – Nahi baal sehla rahi hai

Samrat – Oho jab Gunjan kar rahi thi toh temperature aur jab Nupur kar rahi hai toh sehlana

Mayank – sehlana

Samrat – temperature

Mayank – Sehlana

Samrat – Temperature

Mayank – SEHLANA!

Samrat – TEMPERATURE!

Mayank – SEHLANA!!

Samrat – TEMPERATURE!!

Nupur and Gunjan – SHHH!!!!!!!!!! Jaakar apni jaga par baitho

Mayank – Thik hai par tum ab use apne lap se utha sakte ho

Samrat – Haan aur chashmish aur zyaada haath pakadna aur baal sehlaane ki zaroorat nahi hai

They go and sit in their places

Dia – Inhe ho kya gaya hai

Karan – pyaar…

Dia – Huh

Karan - Kuch nahi tum so jao na

After some time everything becomes all right and Gunur return to their places to see a very sad and angry Samrat and Mayank.

Gunjan – Kya hua

Samrat – Tum mujhpe chila rahi thi voh bhi sab ke samne us Benji ke liye

Gunjan – Haan toh

Samrat – Mujhpe……Benji ke liye

Gunjan – Oho Samrat galti ki hai toh sudharni toh padega tumhe ya mujhe kya faraq padhta hai

Nupur – Monkey ko aaj kya hua hai

Mayank – Itni jor se toh maa ne bhi nahi chilaya

Nupur – Oho toh yeh baat hai main abhi aunty ko bolti hoon ki tumpar chilaye. Au…

Mayank – baat voh nahi hai……Tumne us Benji ke liye mujhpe chilaya.

Nupur – Haan bechara

Mayank – haan main bechara

Nupur – Tum nahi Benji

Mayank – kya

Samrat – Aur tum usko khila pila kyun rahi thi uske haath main thodi hi dard tha aur baal ko kyun chu rahi thi mere baal ko toh kabhi nahi chua

Gunjan – Hmm baat toh tumne sahi kahi Benji hai hi itna pyaara ki dil karta hai

Samrat – KYA!!! Aur main pyaara nahi hoon kya

Gunjan – Ho par utne nahi

Mayank – Aur voh tumhare lap pe kyun so raha tha.

Nupur – Oh voh bechara thak gaya tha toh maine sone diya. Koi problem

Mayank – haan main kabhi nahi soya hoon tumhare lap par……..I mean koi aur nahi soya hai.

Nupur – Haan Benji ko tum kabhi na bol sakte hi nahi ho voh itna pyaara jo hai.

Mayank – Main pyaara nahi hoon

Nupur – Nahi utne nahi

Mayank and Samrat – HUH!!!! Pyaara nahi hoon!!!

Suddenly Uday starts up.

Uday – Chalo guy's bahut bore ho raha hai picture dekhte hai

Dia – DODO!!

Uday – Kya Di

Dia – What a lovely idea!!!!

Uday – Huh!!!

Dia – Chalo guys apne partner's ke saath movie dekho

Now the bus looked like a regular bus from the outside but from the inside it had a tv on each pair of seats.

Uday – Chal hum Dostana dekhte hai

Benji – KYA!!! KYUN!!!

Uday – Oho usme itne hot log hain

Getting up from the chair

Benji – Mujhe tera irada sahi nahi lagta.

Uday – Kyun Priyanka ko dekhne main kya burai aur vaise bhi Di nahi hai

Benji – Oh Priyanka toh aise bolna chahiye tha na

Uday – haan toh tujhe kya laga. Oho shuru hogaya kya beach hai, kya ladkiyan, hai kya Shilpa hai

With Dia and Karan

Dia – chalo Karan hum Love Story 2050 dekhte hai

Karan – What voh toh flop picture thi

Dia – Toh usme Harman kitna cute lag raha tha

Karan – No way hum Rock on dekhenge

Dia – please mere liye

Karan – Fine….

They start watching the movie Dia has put her head on Karan's shoulder and watching the movie whereas Karan is sleeping

With Annie and Chako

Annie – Hum kya dekhe

Chako – Roadside Romeo

Annie – No Fashion

Chako – No Annie voh adults picture hai.

Annie – Right chalo Roadside Romeo hi dekhte hai.

With Mayur

Mayank – Chalo koi sci-fi film dekhte hai.

Nupur – No way yahan koi Sharukh ya Ranbir ki nahi hai kya

Mayank – Thank God!!!

Nupur – BY GOD!!! Sharukh nahi Ranveer nahi toh Saif toh hai hum Hum tum dekhte hai

Mayank – Kya!!

Looking at Nupur's pleading eyes

Mayank – Ok

While watching the movie

Nupur – Mayank yeh Bilkul hamari kahani batata hai.

Mayank – Haan sivai ki tum Rani nahi ho…

Nupur – Kya matla…..

Mayank – Tum toh meri Madhuri ho. Hai na

On hearing Meri from Mayank she blushed and hid her face by resting her head on his shoulder.

Mayank – Is film main Saif idiot hoga par main nahi hoon main tumhe kissi ke paas nahi jaane doonga I promise

Nupur – Tumne kuch kaha

Mayank – Nahi….

The movie when reaches the sad part where Saif tries to get Rani out of her heartache Nupur is in tears.

Nupur – Mayank agar mere saath aisa kuch hua toh kya tum mujhe khush karne ki koshish karoge

Mayank – Nahi

Nupur – Nahi!!!

Now she is crying. This Mayank can't see and turns her face to look at him. Wipes her tears and then says

Mayank – Kyunki main tumhare saath aisa hone hi nahi doonga.

Nupur – Sachi…

Mayank – Sachi…

Nupur hugs Mayank

Mayank – Kyunki main tumhe har mushkil se dur rakhoonga

Nupur – Uhm Mayank

Mayank – Haan

Nupur – tum Benji se zyaada cute ho aur agar tumhe meri lap ki zaroorat pade kabhi toh puch lena

Saying this she quickly turns back to see the movie and hide her blush whereas she also didn't see Mayank smirking. She also didn't see Mayank moving closer to her and whispering in her ear

Mayank – Abhi chahiye

Nupur turned suddenly and saw Mayank very close to her. She couldn't hide her blush now.

Nupur – Mayank abhi sab dekh rahe hai

Mayank – Benji ke time bhi toh sab dekh rahe the…

Nupur – Haan par tumhare liye special …..Main dekh ke aati hoon aunty ko kuch chahiye ki nahi.

She gets up but Mayank holds her hand and pulls her back on the seat

Mayank – Maa ko kuch chahiye hoga toh voh Raj aur uncle ko keh degi. Tum kya keh rahi thi

Nupur was stuck suddenly she saw the movie

Nupur – Oho last part bahut cute hai dekho Mayank

Mayank – Main jaanta hoon ki tum kya kehne vaali thi par kab tak chupaogi

With Sajan

Samrat – Toh chashmish hum kya dekhe

Gunjan – Kuch bhi

Samrat – Kuch bhi great toh yaha koi basketball ka film hai kya

Gunjan – NAHI!!! Basketball nahi kuch aur. Jahan dekho vahan basketball. College se chuti li hai aur basketball se bhi. Hum yeh dekhte hain.

Samrat – Vivah yucks yeh bhi koi film hai.

Gunjan – Haan bahut achi film hai after all Shahid jo hai….matlab chote sheher ka jo hai

Samrat – Shahid….matlab

Gunjan – Dekho Samrat kissi ko kehna mat Di ko bhi nahi pata mujhe Shahid bahut cute lagta hai

Samrat – KYA!!!

Gunjan – Haan

Samrat – gunjan tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai aaj tumhe mere siva sare ladke cute lag rahe hai

Gunjan – Mazak mat karo Samrat

Samrat – Mazak…Acha Shahid main kya hai jo mujh main nahi hai.

Gunjan – Voh dance bahut acha karta hai

Samrat – Main bhi karta hoon

Gunjan – Voh guitar bajaata hai

Samrat – Main bhi bajaata hoon

Gunjan – Voh basketball nahi khelta

Samrat – Main bhi nahi…..Main khelta hoon

Gunjan – Dekha hua na tumse alag ab chalo picture dekho

While watching the picture Gunjan couldn't get over smiling and leaning more and more into Samrat. And Samrat couldn't stop watching Gunjan smiling and being close to her.

Gunjan – Pata hai Samrat yeh jo scene aa raha hai na yeh mera favourite hai

Samrat – Terrace vala

Gunjan – Haan kitne pyaar se bol raha hai na Shahid.

Samrat – Haan main bhi toh kitne pyaar se keh raha hoon Gunjan.

Gunjan – Samrat tum kya kar rahe ho.

Samrat – Tumse baat…… ab Shahid toh tumse milne nahi aa paya toh usne apne duplicate ko bhej diya jo basketball khelta hai.

Gunjan – Samrat….Yeh dono aise lagte hai jaise ek doosre ke liye bane ho au….

Samrat – Shh….Shayad unki tarah……hum bhi ho.

Gunjan – Main dekh kar aati hoon ki hum pahunche ki nahi

Samrat – Hum jab pahunchenge toh sab batayenge ab….

Gunjan – Samrat scene shuru ho gaya…Concentrate. Aur ek aur baat sorry tumpe cheekhne ke liye.

Then she ruffles his hair

Samrat – Concentrate toh kar raha hoon par us Shahid par nahi balki tumpe aur main jaanta hoon ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho par darti ho jaise Talent parade ke vakt thi. But don't forget tab bhi guru Samrat tha aur ab bhi. Aur Samrat tumse naraaz reh hi nahi sakta aur chalta hai ki tum Benji ko itna support kar rahi ho. Hone vaali bhabhi jo ho.

With MM, Dad and Raj

Dad – Hmm toh in charo ko milaane ka plan soncha tum dono ne ya machar maar rahe ho

MM – Itna interest hai toh khud kar lo

Dad – Tum…

MM – Tum…

Raj – AAP……

Both glare at him

Raj – Aap dono time kyun waste kar rahe hai. Yahan main picture dekh raha hoon

MM & Dad – HUH!! Kaunsi hum bhi dekhe

Raj – Sure front vaali dekhni hai ya back vaali

MM – Matlab

Raj – Vahan dekhiye

Pointing to Mayur

Raj – Aur vahan

Pointing to Sajan

Dad – Yeh toh humare umeed se bhi aage nikal gaye. Chalo Megha pata nahi time kyun waste kiya. Hum movie dekhte hain.

MM – Haan chalo

Raj – Aur main

Dad – Tum yahan double film dekho aur khabar dete raho. Ladko ko apne had main rehna chahiye.

MM – Mera beta tumhaari tarah nahi hai

Dad – acha thik hai chalo film dekhe

After a long time they reach the farm house.

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That's the end of this extremely long update. The countdown has begun for the days left for new year. Let's see what happens. Do give your feedback guys.

Short dialogue update from the coming chapters. I'm not
sure that it is from the next one or not but will come real soon

COMING UP

Mayank aur Nupur toh mil nahi rahe. Samrat aur Gunjan
bhi subah se Gayab hai. Pura area dhoond liya par mil hi
nahi rahe pata nahi kaha chale gaye.
Raj - Abhi bahut andhera hai hum kal subah jaakar dekhenge.

hey tina.....i actually replied sayin dat ur update was amazing.......excellent etc but it didnt cum nyways ........once again tnx for updatin updat soon

🤗 Awesome..!!!!!!!!! just fabulous..!!!! i was blushing readin the update...LOL.....do update soon

awesome update!!!!👍🏼please coninue!!😃😃

Originally posted by: ananya_s

hey tina.....i actually replied sayin dat ur update was amazing.......excellent etc but it didnt cum nyways ........once again tnx for updatin updat soon

Thanks ananya Love ur comments and yea ur earlier comment didn't come

AS USUAL.....

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!

That was really sweet and i really loved it