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Part 10

Gunur – Aap

Voice – Haan main

Raj – Yeh haan bhai inke bina hum party kaisa kar sakte hai

Voice – Oye apne baap se koi aise baat karta hai kya

(For all those of u who had guessed correctly CONGRATS!!!)

Note: Raj and Karan's Dad is like Amitabh Bachan in Kabhi Alvida Na kehna

Nupur – Bilkul sahi ab kabhi bhi koi bhi apne pita ka itna disrespect karta hai kya

Dad – Oho tum Bilkul meri hi Nupur ho aur meri Gunjan kaisi hai

Gunjan – Main toh badiya hoon aur aap kaise hai. Apne tabiyat ka toh khayaal rakhte hai ki nahi. Aur aap davai lete hai ki Raj ko aapke peeche padna padta hai.

Karan – Ladkiyon se fursat milega tabhi toh davai khayenge. Ab tak cholesterol diabetes ke liye warning mil gaya hai list main pata nahi aur kya kya hai.

Dad – Oho mere chaar ravan yahan koi ram nahi hai mujhe bachaane ke liye ya fir sita.

Looking at Ms Aha

Vaise yeh kaun hai.

Raj – Dad voh humari teacher hai Ms Aha

Karan – Aur vaise bhi time pass bahut karti hai

Dad – Apne dad ki future girlfriend ke baare main izzat se baat karo

He leaves them

Karan – Lo fir shuru ho gaye

C.J – Yeh tumhaare hi Dad the na

Raj – Haan

Benji – Sure Dude

Karan – Haan unfortunately

Mayank and Samrat – He's weird

Gunjan – Tum dono uncle ko weird kaise keh sakte ho tum toh unke baare main kuch jaante bhi nahi

Nupur – Haan who weird nahi tum ho

They leave them and go

Raj & Karan – Tip No 1Gunjan and Nupur are really close to dad toh agar dad ki burai ki then you are gone, Tip no 2 Gunjan and Nupur are even closer to us so agar humari burai ki toh……………tum samjh hi gaye hoge

Mayank – Yeh kya tha

Raj – Tips hai tum dono ke liye kyunki akele tum se kuch hoga nahi

Samrat – Agar yeh basketball hota toh ek shot main hi basket kar leta

Mayank – Agar yeh koi exam hota toh ek minute main answers likh leta

Together – Par yeh ladkiyan hai

Samrat – Woh bhi Gunjan

Mayank – Woh bhi Nupur

Benji – Haan bhai Singing sensation Gunjan padhako sharmili Samrat ki opposite

C.J – Aur Morena express Nupur bindaas aur moofat Mayank ki opposite

C.J & Benji – Bechare

D.J – Ab humare hosts would like to tell you something

Mr. Singh takes the mike

Dad – I know tum log sonch rahe hoge ki why am I talking when the hosts are my son's but I would just like to welcome all the pretty girls and tell the guys to stay away from them

Raj – DAD!!!!

Dad – Ok I know ladkon ko ladkiyon se door rakhna impossible. Isi vajeh se we have or should I say I have put a special surprise. Each one of you will be asked to write down a performance you would like to see. We will have a lucky draw and the first two performances will be seen. What say?

Everyone – Yea

Everyone writes it down. The chits are put in the box and Mr. Singh removes a chit.

Dad – OHO. The performance which everyone wants to see is of NUPUR AND MAYANK

Mayank – What????????

Samrat – Are itna acha mauka mila hai ja dance kar le

Nupur – Par gaana

Dad – Jo tumhari pasand ho

Samrat – Koi slow song chunna agar Raj ko jalana ho. What say!

Dad – Toh Mayank gaana jaakar D.J ko bata do aur Nupur centre stage aa jao. Lights out spot light! Start

Mayank – Shuru kare ijazat hai

Nupur – Hmm

She gives him her hand

Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Pyaas, Tu Aagayi Mann Ko Raas Raas, Ab Toh...
Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Pyaas, Tu Agayi Mann Ko Raas Raas

Nupur – Yeh Mayank ne yeh gaana kyun choose kiya. Mujhe kya bahut acha lag raha hai.


Ab Toh Tu Aaja Pass Pass, Hain Guzaarish
Hain Haal To Dil Ka Tang Tang, Tu Rang Ja Mere Rang Rang
Bas Chalna Mere Sang Sang, Hain Guzaarish

Mayank – Yeh tumhara best performance hoga Nupur I promise!


Kehde Tu haan Toh Zindagi, Chainon Se Chutke Hasegi
Moti Honge Moti Rahon Mein, Yeh Yeh Yeh
Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Pyaas, Tu Agayi Mann Ko Raas Raas
Ab Toh Tu Aaja Paas Paas, Hain Guzaarish

He didn't make a lot of spins just pure dance. Instead of salsa he chose waltz


Sheeshe Ke Khwaab Leke, Raaton Mein Chal Raha Hon
Tirana Jao Kahin...
Aasha Ki Lon Hain Roshan, Phir Bhi Tufan Ka Dar Hain
Lon Bhuj Na Jaye Kahin...
Bas Ek Haan Ki Guzaarish, Phir Hogi Khusiyon Ki Baarish
Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Pyaas, Tu Agayi Mann Ko Raas Raas
Ab Toh Tu Aaja Pass Pas..., Hain Guzaarish

Samrat – Yeh Mayank ek dum sahi le raha hai aankhon main aankhein baahon main baahein. Ek dum filmy style jaise Nupur ko pasand hai.

Gunjan – Di aur Mayank ek dum perfect lag rahe hai. Made for each other Hai na Samrat.

Samrat – Yeh just like us

Gunjan – What tum ne kuch kaha

Samrat – Nahi toh. Jab suna chahiye tab sunti nahi ho.


Chanda Hain Aasman Hain, Aur Badal Bhee Ghane Hain
Yeh Chanda Chup Jaye Na...
Tanhayi Das Rahin Hain, Aur Dhadkan Bad Rahi Hain
Ek Pal Bhi Chain Aaye Na...
Kaisi Ajab Dastaan Hain, Bechainiyan Bas Yahan Hain Oh
Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Pyaas, Tu Agayi Mann ko Raas Raas
Ab Toh Tu Aaja Paas Paas, Hain Guzaarish
Hain Haal Toh Dil Ka Tang Tang, Tu Rang Ja Mere Rang Rang
Bas Chalna Mere Sang Sang, Hain Guzaarish

Then in the last was a final lift. And a quick fall. It seems as time had stopped and there was nothing other than the two lost in each others eyes….Lost….Until…..CLAP!!!!

CLAP!!!!CLAP!!!!

Everyone was clapping which got them out of their trance

Dad – Spectacular if we hadn't known better we would have thought they were in love

Mayank – That is true sir and soon not only you but the whole Excel will come to know Nupur is mine

Dia – Yes! Yes! Sir hume pata hai yeh amazing hai par jo humne dekha hai uska hum kya kare jo humne nahi dekha usko dekhna would be better.

Dad – Kya matlab

Dia – Sir, Karan kehta hai Raj aur Nupur ek saath sensational hota hai toh hume who dekhna hai. WHAT SAY GUYS!!!
Everyone – YA!!!

Mayank stands next to Samrat – Kasam se isko pehle hatana hoga Raj ke pehle varna yeh mujhe aur Nupur ko paas aane nahi degi.

Samrat – Pata nahi Dia ne aisa kyun….

Then he hears

Dia – Maine thik kiya na Karan

Karan – Ya sweetie!!!

Samrat – Yeh Dia ke vajah se nahi Raj aur Karan ke vajah se hi hua

Dad – Ok Raj Nupur tum dance karo sab dekhna chahte hain.

(O Solemiya o solemiya

Dil tujhko diya

Pyaar tujhse kiya) -2

Raaton main bhi aaye na chaina

Beetegi kaise yeh raina

Too na mila to maine kya jiya

maine kya jiya -2

(O Solemiya o solemiya

Dil tujhko diya

Pyaar tujhse kiya) -2

Spins, lifts, co-ordination all are excellent as if they have practiced this before. People watching this thought this was better than the Nupur Mayank fiasco

Banke ki koi dard

Mere dil main kahin

Chubh rahe ho

Aahen bhi ab le rahi hain

Naam tumhara

Is dard ki tum dawa ho

Hoh khush vahi tum jahan ho

Chahat main gum ho gaya hai

Yeh dil bechara

Nupur looks at Mayank. Mayank just smiles at her as if to indicate she is doing good but inside he is boiling seeing Raj so close to Nupur

Ab tanha kya rahna

Jab milna hai tumse hi aakhir

Kyon rokun main khud ko

Kho jana hai ishq main aakhir

Jo khudh to sambhala to maine kya jeeya

Maine kya jeeya -2

(O Solemiya o solemiya

Dil tujhko diya

Pyaar tujhse kiya) -2

Aisa koi pal na hoga

Jisme main mere dil main

Tum na ho aur khwaabon main

Na ho chehra tumhara

Nupur tries to look at Mayank but Raj turns her which angers Mayank more. He is about to go to her but is stopped by C.J

Saanson main tum

Chaa rahe ho ban ke nasha

Is qadar ke dol raha hai

Nashe main jahan saara

Is pal main milna hai

To lo hum yahan pe mile hain

Is pal main agar kal ho

To kal hum yahin phir milenge

Mil na sake to kam se kam

Maine jeeya is pal main jiya

Ik pal to jeeya

(O Solemiya o solemiya

Dil tujhko diya

Pyaar tujhse kiya) -2

(Raaton main bhi aaye na chaina

Beetegi kaise yeh raina)-2

Too na mila to maine kya jiya

maine kya jiya

O Solemiya o solemiya

Dil tujhko diya

Pyaar tujhse kiya) -2

She completes the song and bows. The whole hall is filled with claps. She is very happy and then she sees Mayank with a grim expression. She tries to make him smile but he turns to talk to C.J. This hurts Nupur more.

Samrat – Tum gadhe ho abhi jealous hone ka nahi usse yeh dikhane ka time hai ki tumhe kuch faraq nahi padta

Mayank – Ya you are right!

Goes to Nupur

Hey Nupur bahut acha performance hai PAR!!!!........

Nupur – Par kya

Mayank – Par ours was better

Nupur – HA! HA! By god Mayank mujhe laga tumhe bura laga

Mayank – Aise hi hasti rehna achi lagti ho aur jo tumhe khushi deta hai voh mujhe kabhi bura nahi lag sakta.

Then goes near her ear and says.

Haan thoda jealous zaroor hua tha. Tumhe mere alava kissi aur ke saath dekha nahi hai na isiliye.

He walks away from her

Raj – Kya kaha usne aur tum lal kyun ho gayi ho

Nupur – Haan! Kuch nahi bus performance ki tareef kar raha tha.

Raj – Oh! Voh toh karega hi HUMNE jo perform kiya hai

He purposely says loudly so that Mayank turns behind and purposely puts a hand on Nupur's shoulder to see Mayank's angry look.

Samrat – Uncle, Ek problem abhi bhi hai.

Dad – Voh Kya??

Samrat – Hume pata hai ki Nupur achi hai par Raj aur Mayank main se kaun acha hai yeh ek joint dance se prove hoga RIGHT!!!

Dad – Haan bhai correct Mayank, Raj on the floor.

Mayank – Yeh kya kiya Samrat

(Obviously bechaare kitna dance karenge thak gaye honge.)

Samrat – Jaa aur Nupur ko prove kar ki tu hi best hai

C.J – Ya go and bring Raj's ego down

Benji – Haan Excel ka naam roshan karo. Jai mata di Let's rock

Raj starts the dance

If you feeling me make some noise
Ladies and gentleman raise your voice
Nan nan nana nana...
Naa nan nana nana...
If you feeling me make some noise
Ladies and gentleman raise your voice
Nan nan nana nana...
Naa nan nana nana...

Tu hai meri soniye,
I'll be with you night and day,
Jab tujhe dekhe nazren,
Kismat Konnection ho jaaye..
Everybody on the floor,
Make some noise, aa kar le shore
Deewanepan ka hai zor,
Common everybody now, sing it one time..chill
Aai pappi, Aai pappi, aa Aai pappi, Aai pappi,
Aai pappi, Aai pappi
Let me take you higher..
Aai pappi, Aai pappi, Aai pappi, Aai pappi,
Aai pappi, Aai pappi
Higher and higher..

Mayank then follows

Badli badli si raatein,
Sach ho gayi saari baatein,
Badli badli si raatein,
Sach ho gayi saari baatein,
Yeh khushiyon ki saugaten,
Jaise rab ki hai dua..
Everybody with me swing,
Let Sebastian just nod away
Dil mein jo hai aa keh de,
Common everybody now,
Hit it like that. Chill

Aai pappi, Aai pappi, Aai pappi, Aai pappi,
Aai pappi, Aai pappi
Let me take you higher..
Aai pappi, Aai pappi, Aai pappi, Aai pappi,
Aai pappi, Aai pappi
Higher and higher..
Let's go

Jump down feel my floor
Baby take it easy, I m nice n slow
Wanna show you why we are to be two
And wanna make you part of all that I do
Cant do without you I testify
Need you in my life and I cant deny
Read it in the stars and stars don't lie
Without you girl my heart rather die
If you feeling me, make some noise
Ladies and gentleman raise your voice
Nan nan nana nana..
Naa nan nana nana..
If you feeling me, make some noise
Ladies and gentleman raise your voice
Nan nan nana nana..
Naa nan nana nana..

Mayank and Raj together start dancing

Peeche duniya mein aage,
Mere soye armaan jaage,
Peeche duniya mein aage,
Mere soye armaan jaage,

Ab to bass aisa laage,
Mere kadmon mein jahan.

Everybody join the song,
Keep the party going on,
Yaaron humse
badhke kaun

Together - Common everybody now,
Hit it like that..chill
Aai pappi, Aai pappi, Aai pappi, Aai pappi,
Aai pappi, Aai pappi
Let me take you higher..
Aai pappi, Aai pappi, Aai pappi, Aai pappi,
Aai pappi, Aai pappi
Higher and higher..
Tu hai meri soniye,
I'll be with you night and day,

Jab tujhe dekhe nazren,
Kismat Konnection ho jaaye..

Everybody on the floor,
Make some noise,
aa kar le shore
Deewanepan ka hai zor,
Common everybody now, sing it one time..chill

Aai pappi, Aai pappi, Aai pappi, Aai pappi,
Aai pappi, Aai pappi
Let me take you higher..

Everyone – WOOO!!! ONCE MORE!!!!

Dad – Bus bus kitna karoge aur thak gaye hoge bechaare

( Thank god u realized varna pyaar ke chakkar main hospital pahunch jaate)

Raj and Mayank reach Nupur

Both – Kaisa tha

Looking at Mayank with a sad face – Tumhara acha tha.

Looking at Raj's face with a big smile – Tumhara……

Mayank – I knew it yeh usko acha bolegi

Nupur – Bhi acha tha. After all tum dono great ho tum dono main faisla karna no joke.

Mayank – Chalo at least she is on that stage when she can't decide who to choose that means I'm progressing. Main Samrat ko batata hoon.

Abhi aaya Nupur

He goes to Samrat

Mayank – SAMRAT!!!!

And hugs him

Samrat – Woh! Dude kya hua

Mayank – Usne kaha mera performance acha tha YES!!!
C.J – Mayank dheere bol sab tujhe paagal samajh rahe hain

Benji – Ya dude tum ajeeb behave kar rahe ho. After all usne sirf acha hai kaha hai. I LOVE U nahi.

Samrat – Tu kya jaanta hai aashiq ke dil ka haal. Congrats dude kuch toh taraki hui. Ab bus mere side pe bhi kuch acha ho.

Mayank – Don't worry sab thik ho jayega.

Karan – Mere rehte hue lets see

Samrat – Haan tumhare rehte hue main gunjan ko tumse door karoonga.

Dad – Ok pehle entry toh ho gaya next choice hai GUNJAN!!!!

Gunjan – KYA!!!

Dad – Haan Excel. Woops aaj ke humare guests tumhara gaana suna chahta hai.

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That's all for now Gunjan's performance and rest of the suspense next time.

Edited by TINAMALHONTRA - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesum.,,...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
just love reading ur ff....!!...hw do u write so well???!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesum..............😊
update soon..................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@bubblygurl - Thnx for reviewing
And hope u like ot in future too
@Anjalika Khanna - Thnx for ur comment
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@ tina u can calll me Amber!
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WOW ....WOW....WOW

THIS ONE OF UR BEST UPDATES.....I SWEAR....
IT WAS AWESOME......SUPERB.....
MAYUR WERE SOUNDS VERY EMOTIONALLY CUTEY NICEY!!!
"Haan thoda jealous zaroor hua tha. Tumhe mere alava kissi aur ke saath dekha nahi hai na isiliye."
WOW DIALOGUES WERE SO CUUUTE AND FUNNY "BY GOD"!!!
I THINK IN NEXT PART IT WILL BE SAJAN 'S AND KARAN-GUNJAN PERFORMANCE!!! AND THEN SAMRAAT VS KARAN!!!!
CONT SOON YAAR
WHEN U CAN
TAKE UR TIME
HOPE I WILL ENJOY NEXT PART AS USUAL.....
SEE YAAA
LOVE U!!!
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mere dil main to bas ek hi word hai it was.......

awesome😃
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great updates!!!!!!!!!

benji saying himesh ki dialogues...funnyy😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG
that was really good
cant wait to read more
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Posted: 16 years ago

nice update,u shud b a writter!!!!plz plz plz continue soon!!!!

ynaiita😉😉

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