Definitely Yes, Maybe II- (AR) END pg 65-1/12

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sagaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

OMG what an entry of araman. I just could not belive it happens this way
but i really hope that he come out of all this gang and society things fast!
i want both of them together and SAFE!
LOVELY PART.

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Simone

@-simi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Hi bheegi! CONGO again on ur new thread!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

What a co-incidence, I JUST got back to check whether u have updated... and VOILA!😆

13 parts and nearly 150 pages?? maanna padega bheegi! 👏👏 (oh btw, the link u posted in ur first thread is actually to the editting page, you proabably want to correct that incase someone is looking for the new thread)

Loved Muskaan - Ridhima scene! Muski definitely seems to be very much in love with Rahul! 😳 She's quite funny!!

"I am so glad jee that you both didn't marry….warna dono sofa par baith kar sirf newspaper hi padhte rehte……romance shomance ki baatein kab karte?" 😆😆

And the Harjinder part was hilarious too!! 😆😆 You are perfect in comic relief during the intense story!😆

Well AR finally met!!😃 But i feel extremely sorry for the situation they are in! Im glad that atleast Armaan didnt take too long to reveal that he's not Sameer! He couldnt control looking at Ridhima i guess! 😳

So now Armaan is a GUPTA and Ridhima is a MALLIK?? hehe they think alike too now! 😉 Waiting to see some romance blossom between them soon! 😳😳

Hope Ridhima doesnt do anything against the law to endanger her own life because, she doesnt really know about Armaan's past, and what his connection to the gang is! Even though we know through the letter that he is innocent, Ridhima's character doesnt! At the moment, its just her love for him that's making her want to protect him! 😕

And my heart says that the bag contains the 'letters' he wrote! 😳 But only you know what's inside the bag 😆

Wow i just realized i blabber wayy too much! You probably get so tired of reading this non-sense analysis and replying to it! AHAHAHA

Well as always, continue soon 😳

Oh btw, (this is just my two-cents), would you consider the suggestion of finishing this story first and then going on to SWD? You only have about 6 parts to go for this one, im assuming? I like both stories equally, but as a reader, it would be nicer just to be able to read one story at one time rather than switching back and forth every couple days... And as a writer, i would think it would be easier for you to concentrate on one story at a time? Again, this is just my sole opinion, there are many other readers and ultimately you are the writer, so obviously do whatever you feel is better for you! 😃

Love you lots 😃

Simi

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

bheegi... loved it loads... it was so good... hmm... so much has happened... waiting to know what is the fact Armaan is hiding... gr8 one dear.. now plz plz plz continue soon.

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

aww! yay they finally met! now i cant wait to see what happens next! too lil info was revealed in this part! nd im dying to find out the whole story! lol..grr..jkjk. this is wat makes ur work even better :)

cont soon!

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Resssssssssserrrved!

Congrads on making for the 2^nd, it was doubt deserved!!

LMAFO.....seriously I was in the same state as Muskaan Haiiii Rabbbaa Preeem!!

I'm glad Ridz and Muskan got along, hehe or else she'd would be playin her gangsta mundas prowling for her lol.

Whoa......what a meeting!.......Hero bleedin as the heroine tending him, hmmm that's cheeky to change his same to Sameer Gupta, ......but romantic.....but i'd prefer 'Armaan'

I love the conversation u displayed b/w AR.....such raw emotions displayed through, beautifully expressed!.....OMG Ridz taking the law into her hands?,,,,Ridz has def change!

Hmmm if she accept him as a relative......does it mean he'll hafta live her place?!........man ur twist just keep getting better!

Love it Love it Love it

-NAtasha

Edited by Ladoo645 - 16 years ago

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KAT

@Catwoman

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

congrats on the 2nd thread.....

wow alot as happend and she got to solve this puzzle i guess.... love her and muskhans relationship

tell me about i to cryed as they killlllllled PREM😭😆

continue soooooooon

Love Kat

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Hina

@hinz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

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sorry dozed off after reading😆
ok i'm back

Fabulous writing Sangeetz👏👏👏
loved the way u described the cute bond Ridz and Muskaan share
Muskaan's character is sweet and Rahul's even sweeter I guess
loved their little tease
the link to Tony Lanza aha,cool
the tattoos and the eyes of sameer gupta,wow
hats off to u for your creativity
u make me smile and wonder everytime
the description,the writing and the awsome plot
u've got it all hun
great update Sangeetz
hope u update soon,we like wait for your update jointly
thanks for the part
love
Hina

oh and congrats for the 2nd thread truly deserved👏

Edited by hinanaziri - 16 years ago

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Krani

@Krani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

omg Bheegi I finally found your new thread!! part 14 was AMAZING!!!! they met again!!! YAY!!! I am sooo excited fir the next part!! please please updte soon!! please!! :DD

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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

ohhh wow...i didnt expect them to meet like this!!!!!!!! quite a suprise...i wonder how deep armaan is in with the mob! i mean the guy changed his name and got shot! this doesnt look like a happy reunion riddhima was dreaming of!!!!!!
crazyyy update di, really tooo good! finally they come face to face! and even tho he was denying everything, the love he had for her was sooo clear!
im really looking forward to the next part, and dying to know what armaan has been up to for the past 3 years!!!!! i have a feeling their "milan" is not going to be sweet and easy! im expecting drama, and i cant wait!!!!!!!!
ohhh i just loved the beginning bit with muskaan! the whole prem heer thing had me in splits!!!!!!! reminded me of my moms reaction! i remember coming home and finding her crying in front of the tv saying whyyyy did they kill prem! hahaha goddd
awsome part di, continue soon!

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Sonia Sharma

@Sony_1234

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

very nice update. what a meeting bw AR. armaan choosing gupta as his name was very nice. their conversation is wonderfully pened down. this is probably my shortest comment, but i really liked this part. i guess or atleast i hope ridz is finally going to find the letter armaan wrote for her in his bag.

oh, i forgot to tel - congrats on ur 2nd thread sangeta di.

Edited by sony_123 - 16 years ago

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