Definitely Yes, Maybe II- (AR) END pg 65-1/12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

congrats on ur second thread

great part beegi dont no ur actual name bt lyk callin u beegi sounds different. anyways bout da update u did a gr8 job yet again. the way AR met was sooo unexpected but i guess its good in a way it always keeps up glued to the screen. i jus totally luv the portrayal of muskaan character shes definately created a good bond with ridz knowing dat her n rahul were to marry , any1 is her place wud have hated ridz.

do continue soon as i cant seem to gt enuf ov ur updates

luv iram

p.s hope da bag ridz is hiding contains the letter he wrote

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Anita Malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

That was some update Di! Seriously...I loved it...You get better and better with each passing update...You already are the best with updates anyways...lol...

I love how you started out the part with Muskaan being a serial lover...LOL....I love the way you have depicted her punjabi self! I could totally relate to her outburst...I used to do the same...and then I found IF and started reading articles that gave away the story ahead of time..LOL...So I was well-prepared to face the scenes in the serials..LOL...

Aww, Muskaan knew about AR...Thts called immortal love! AR sure have created a unique love story for themselves!

Di, that is so creative....I loved how you easily slipped in the Italian misdoing news in NY Times in the form of an article..and Ridz just had to read it....That was amazing...and the way you put Tony in the article....That was amazing...I can tell this is all Sophie and her mob family's doing! Arghh!

Then the hospital scene is my favorite in the update...The way Ridz recognized Armaan from his tattoos and got the shock of her life...She really loves Armaan badly! I bet she can recognize him in a crowd too! Assli true love...sigh.....

I loved how Armaan was trying to be Sameer GUPTA...He loves Ridz as much as she loves him and to feel more closer to her, he is using her last name...Feel bad for Armi...Fix him soon Di..Poor guy got shot! I'm in pain...lol...

And Di, I love the way you put in the most effective songs into the update...I love the song"Kitni Baatein" and while I was reading the hospital scene and listening to that song..I could seriously feel the tension brewing up in the room between AR...The song with your mesmerizing update made me feel as if I was in the hospital room witnessing the scene before me! Kudos Di! You described it brilliantly! The way you explained the emotions were brilliant...The sarcasm in Riddhima's tone, but you showed that deep inside, she was hurt on seeing Armi like this....I loved it!

"All men like to fish," he chuckled, his characteristic dimpled smile back, peeping through his unshaven bristles, "even when wounded….especially if there is a beautiful medical student in the room."

Whatever Armaan...You know you're asking her that cause you think she's married to Rahul...but what you don't know is that she hasn't moved on in life...with marriage and all... Glad to see even in such a bad state, Armaan is being his usual self, or is trying too!

Fix him soon Di!

Glad Ridz hid the bag from the officer...

I want both AR to know the truth about eaach other soon! Ahiste ahiste sab raaaz khul jaayenge--I hope so...lol..

Great update Di!

Love, Anita

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Suvarna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Hey Bheegi ... my comments for part 13 are also due and am extremely sorry for not responding earlier. I just reserved space but never added anything there.

Well, my first thought after hearing about the rahul-muskaan and their kid was ... balle ballle, Rahul and Riddhima are not married. How relieved I felt, can't really explain.

Congratulations to you for a new thread. 🥳👏

Now talking about this part ...

Muskaan is such a darling ... keeping up the hope in Riddhima that AR will surely unite. Loved Riddhima and Muskaan's understanding. Harminder-Balvinder bit was too hilarious. I was laughing out loud when I read this bit.

Even though I believed in what Muskaan had just said, as days went by, my hope was wearing away although my faith was unshaken. This is highlight of today's part. Just gives away all the expressions of love, wait, pain, want ... in one simple statement.

Hey, are you a doctor by profession? I mean the stress and thoughts u have expressed are so true. My parents are doctors and I hear them say similar things. Just curious.
Wow ... finally AR in front of each other. I hope Ridz gets the letter written by Armaan in his bag. Felt very bad for Armaan. Armaan has now become analogous to KSG and can very well see him sobbing in the bed just as you have written. The impact was me in tears 😭 To add to that, you chose lyrics of the song from Lakshya.

don't worry….I will never let anything happen to you Waiting for next parts to understand what Ridz would do to support this statement. Well, she has already hidden his bag.

All in all, a great part and eagerly waiting to read on!!!

Cheers,
Suvarna

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Miloni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Hi Bheegi...loved this part!!!! It was awesome!!!! I love how you have portrayed Muskaan...her crying on Prem dying and teasing Ridhima...sooo cute!!!! I also love how you showed Muskaan and Ridhima's friendship, totally adorable!!!! I loved how Muskaan told Ridhima that Armaan and Ridhima are meant to be!!!! The whole newspaper thing was really nice!!! Armaan and Ridhima coming face to face...Wow!!!!!!!! That was seriously amazing!!!! I loved how Armaan came up with Gupta as his last name!!!! The update was fantastic!!!!!! Loved everything!!!! Uhh, i think you forgot to PM me, but thats ok!!!! Can't wait for your next part!!! Please update soon!!!

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

[FONT=Verdana]wow, i knew that they were going to meet for sure cause u told us that earlier but i never expected it to happen like this. loks like armaan has been completely caught in the web of those gangsters. i hope ridz's id-ing of tony won't create a problem for him but awww he calls himself "gupta" to remind himself of her , how romantic 😍 and heart-breaking 😭 . i want ridz to stand by him, i think she will, after all she saved his bag from the cops. [FONT]

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Samira

@mishti4maan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sounds so good. congo on the new thread. plzzzz continue soon!!!!!!!

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krina

@krina_17

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

di... thanks for reply..... so when u want to start the shooting for this movie.... (LOL) & TO make the novel... is my pleasure and it is relaxing from college.....BUT COLLEGE AND NOVEL IS MY SECOND MOST PRIORITY.... FRIST IS MY FAMILY......Rest later....

his next part is so quik.... lots of events happened and now everything is going to unfolded one - be - one... but though have a question how's Armaan landed up in NY and is Tony involved in the gang or He is helping Armaan. I bet Armaan did not marry Sophie n he compromised to do what gang said him to do...

But this are my prediction and sure what must be having a nice story going in your mind...... it is awesome....

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The Newspaper article was really nicely shown and her emotions for Armaan and Italy (not getting the rights words) for the feeling or concerns she have for Armaan....

Even the Friendship btwn Muskaan and Riddima is awesome.... AR is meant to be together....... Very nice chemistry and jokes which relaxed her....

When you showed the scene of Little Italy shoots out... that reminded me of watch the latest buzz from India...

**** Actually there is some bad news about India... that they are terror attacks in Mumbai tonite.... ANd in all post hotels and taxis.... chk the lastest news... and also call the friends and relaitives that they are safe and sound.....****

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

AWESOME!!....it was ssooo good.....

they finally meet.......very different......but i hope Armaan is okay.....

cant wait to know wat he is actually hiding.......its so interesting!.....

pls continue sooon!!!....this part was great.....n it just keeps on getting better!!.......

love the beginning....the scene between Ridhimma n Muskaan......how she always has a bachelor ready for her......u really have made Muskaan's charcter really nicely

GREAT JOB!...n congratulations on ur second thread

-Simran

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hydrogurl001

@hydrogurl001

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

omg AR finally meet! i really want to know the whole secret behind armaan,now! i hope they get together and confess soon!

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Nruti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#50

hey OMG i just loved this part finaly he is here i hope he gets better when i read it i was like yes yes armaan is back but its with wond n not with the bang but oh well he is here that mater wonder y he is calling himself "SAMMIR GUPTA" hmmmmmmmm i think that ridz will find that later that armaan wrote to her while he was in captive then there will b no confution n al i wonder how wud she react to the letter i just cant wait till the next part plz di updat soon luv nruti

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