I'll Be There (AR) Pt8/Pg24-12/14 - Page 9

Originally posted by: spln

simmy use the DMG magic which cured paddy out of her incurabloe brain tumor, u just have to fix ridziii plzzzzzzzzzzzz...i love the innocence of this fic its cute n yet theres the SIMMY SIZZLING TOUCH haha, even though romance is no where close to touching the couple yet, as a couple i mean its only ammy struck by the cupid so far....but the fic is a such a read....waiting for the next part....n hun the confessions to father gosh, if i was him id have to ban these kids to maintain my own sancticity to god by not having to forgive them lolzzz

cant wait to see how u will take this from here on....love dthe update kudos!

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Originally posted by: anitamalik

Simran yaar! You left us at a cliffhanger like Kat does...LOL...I so wanted to read more...I could have read on and on for that matter....Your FF is just that captivating and intriguing! And I read your reply to my last comment and Simran you truly deserve the compliments for your writing on this FF....I never knew that you could write soo good! I'm so glad that I chanced upon this fic!

Sorry for the cliffhanger, but I know how you feel 😉 I promise I won't keep you waiting ages like Kat does, I should have another update this week. Anita I am also glad that you spotted this FF your comments are an absolute delight

I was reading this update with a bowl of gaajar ka halwa..It was a double treat = D

yummy Gajar ka Halwa mmmm😳 my dal chawal is suddenly tasting bland😕

I loved this part...First off, I would like to state the way with which you started the part...With Riddhima being in a church and asking for forgiveness..That was totally creative! I loved reading the mischief she caused..It was hilarious! Made me crack up...It just shows that she is living life and making the most out of it! And then, being the sweet soul that she is, she goes to Father and apologizes for her actions! Brilliantly penned Simran!

I am so glad everyone has liked her mischief and confession, that was my favorite part, I really enjoyed writing that

LOL...I loved how she gave the man the wrong directions to the sari shop..I guessed that was coming! Armi sure got a glimpse of how naughty she is!

Minnie is just tooo cute! I love her..and the interaction Armi had with her was adorable! I could imagine it all!

And then....You made Armi spill the beans to Rahul so beautifully! The way Rahul figured it out being his best friend and all...

"Eh I haven't fallen for her or anything ok, I just..she's just so different man, I mean she isn't affected by me, and she's so full of life so carefree, I just love that about her?" Armaan's sober expression suddenly turned dreamy as he continued telling Rahul about Riddhima "I am not in love yet Rahul or at least I think I am not, but I do like her, I like her laughter, I like her smile, I like her eyes which twinkle with joy, I like her childish mischief, I like when she sulks?"

I didn't want him to love her just yet, but I do want him to be fond of her, love will happen too eventually😳

Aww! Armi, her personality is definitely attracting you to her!

OMG Simran...I hate the ending..I mean, I love it---only if it wasn't the cliffhanger...LOL....

Guess Armi will find out the reason why her friends are so protective of her...

OMG Simran....Will this fic have a sad ending? lol...

Grr don't ask me or I might spill the beans, I am terrible with suspense😆

Aww, the woman who you work with who is a survivor of breast cancer is surely enjoying life to the fulll...I like seeing that enthusiasm in people...At least they don't quit on life...Bless her! Just yesterday I was watching the news and this 11 year old boy died of Leaukimea...but he made a difference in the world before he died...He helped the homeless and involved the community in being a part of his cause...He died yesterday, but made a difference..It really touched my heart to see that!

Aww now that made me cry, it's so sad to hear but I hope he is in a better place and bless his soul for the good deed he has done!😳

Continue soon!

Love ya,

Anita

Originally posted by: zhasan2

omg i bet ARmaan's gonna find out the truth now :( plz cont. soon! i hope riddhima is okay and maybe a treatment??? maybe..idk if there can be a treatment..but i hope she's ok

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

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i was so waiting for an update yest,and was gonna request one,but thot u mite be busy wid work
oh wellmi was delighted to see the update this morning,ok now my comments
Aww hina so sweet😳
beautiful!👏👏👏
👏simmi u cudn't have depicted Armaan's emotions any better
it was so staright from the heart kinda confession to his feelings
when he says he still isnt in love,dont know if its called love,i just loved that bit
and him making Rahul think is ok to think about an ok girl,loved that too
I didn't want Armi to immediately fall in love with her, but I do wanted him to start liking her. He likes that she is different and she still intrigues him. Love will happen but not yet
and i just laughed out loud at the pranks she played,dead bride lolzzz
i see a nutter in u to have imagined that I loved writing that part😆
i know this fic is an intense sad one with her illness,but somehow i was hoping u cud do a bit more on the happy side of things,u probably will still cont showing her merry side even when she's not well,but i wanted Armaan to be more affected by her charms Don't worry Hina Ridz has plenty more up her sleeve, and it will definitely her charms that Armi looses his heart over.
but still love the way u make it sound all so perfect,the story has obviously come to the bitter truth about ridz
can't wait to see wat Armaan treats her like,and i so want ridz to stay as long as she cud...
Thanks for reading and leaving me sweet comments, I will try to make it live up to your expectations😳
cheers for the update simmi
love
Hina

wow!!!!!!!!!!! tht was so gd. continue soon!!!!!!!