I'll Be There (AR) Pt8/Pg24-12/14

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#71

Simran yaar! You left us at a cliffhanger like Kat does...LOL...I so wanted to read more...I could have read on and on for that matter....Your FF is just that captivating and intriguing! And I read your reply to my last comment and Simran you truly deserve the compliments for your writing on this FF....I never knew that you could write soo good! I'm so glad that I chanced upon this fic!

I was reading this update with a bowl of gaajar ka halwa..It was a double treat = D

I loved this part...First off, I would like to state the way with which you started the part...With Riddhima being in a church and asking for forgiveness..That was totally creative! I loved reading the mischief she caused..It was hilarious! Made me crack up...It just shows that she is living life and making the most out of it! And then, being the sweet soul that she is, she goes to Father and apologizes for her actions! Brilliantly penned Simran!

LOL...I loved how she gave the man the wrong directions to the sari shop..I guessed that was coming! Armi sure got a glimpse of how naughty she is!

Minnie is just tooo cute! I love her..and the interaction Armi had with her was adorable! I could imagine it all!

And then....You made Armi spill the beans to Rahul so beautifully! The way Rahul figured it out being his best friend and all...

"Eh I haven't fallen for her or anything ok, I just..she's just so different man, I mean she isn't affected by me, and she's so full of life so carefree, I just love that about her?" Armaan's sober expression suddenly turned dreamy as he continued telling Rahul about Riddhima "I am not in love yet Rahul or at least I think I am not, but I do like her, I like her laughter, I like her smile, I like her eyes which twinkle with joy, I like her childish mischief, I like when she sulks?"

Aww! Armi, her personality is definitely attracting you to her!

OMG Simran...I hate the ending..I mean, I love it---only if it wasn't the cliffhanger...LOL....

Guess Armi will find out the reason why her friends are so protective of her...

OMG Simran....Will this fic have a sad ending? lol...

Aww, the woman who you work with who is a survivor of breast cancer is surely enjoying life to the fulll...I like seeing that enthusiasm in people...At least they don't quit on life...Bless her! Just yesterday I was watching the news and this 11 year old boy died of Leaukimea...but he made a difference in the world before he died...He helped the homeless and involved the community in being a part of his cause...He died yesterday, but made a difference..It really touched my heart to see that!

Continue soon!

Love ya,

Anita

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hydrogurl001

@hydrogurl001

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#72

omg i bet ARmaan's gonna find out the truth now :( plz cont. soon! i hope riddhima is okay and maybe a treatment??? maybe..idk if there can be a treatment..but i hope she's ok

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#73

Such a cute part, loved the way you showed how slowly slowy Arman is getting attracted to Ridz, her naughtiness is too much.....& the father laughs at that.....its such a sad situation Muskan & Atul are so protective of her, maybe cos they know about her illness...

what an end to the part.....Ridz in an ambulance...you have to continue soon

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#74

Hi Simran ... I just loved your third update. Waiting to read on :)

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Hima

@j&b84

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#75

Hi Simran.

just finished reading all the three part nw... it brilliantly written yar, tt way to wrote about armaan confuse tt he only like ridz was beautifully written and pranks ridz and her gang are doing is tt same from the movie.. update soon yar..

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Hina

@hinz

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#76

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i was so waiting for an update yest,and was gonna request one,but thot u mite be busy wid work
oh wellmi was delighted to see the update this morning,ok now my comments

beautiful!👏👏👏
👏simmi u cudn't have depicted Armaan's emotions any better
it was so staright from the heart kinda confession to his feelings
when he says he still isnt in love,dont know if its called love,i just loved that bit
and him making Rahul think is ok to think about an ok girl,loved that too

and i just laughed out loud at the pranks she played,dead bride lolzzz
i see a nutter in u to have imagined that
i know this fic is an intense sad one with her illness,but somehow i was hoping u cud do a bit more on the happy side of things,u probably will still cont showing her merry side even when she's not well,but i wanted Armaan to be more affected by her charms
but still love the way u make it sound all so perfect,the story has obviously come to the bitter truth about ridz
can't wait to see wat Armaan treats her like,and i so want ridz to stay as long as she cud...

cheers for the update simmi
love
Hina

Edited by hinanaziri - 16 years ago

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ttimpy

@ttimpy

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#77

omg this riddhima is so different from the serial.........full of life and totally naughty............i love her...............worried about her gng to the hospi....hope things get ok fast...........

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Huma

@HS.KaSh

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#78

hey rocking update yaar

armaan is totally smitten by ridz so as rahul by muski

im really liking it

but poor ridz.......lets c what happens next

beautifully written

chandni

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simran1285

@simran1285

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#79

@Hina- Armi has not fully fallen for her, but he will and it will not be because of her sickness; it will indeed be her charms, please keep reading and thanks so much for commenting. 😳

To the rest of my lovely readers I will reply to your comments personally when I am free, but want to thank you for leaving me such beautiful words.