I'll Be There (AR) Pt8/Pg24-12/14 - Page 7

Originally posted by: noe23

Ok, I am back.

I am going to like this story - First, the movie. Second, the book - A Walk to Remember. It is my favorite Nicholas Sparks book, though people tend to prefer the notebook, I somehow love this book and had cried all the time while reading. Hmm....sad that this story may have a similar end. Third, Shimla. You have describe Shimla so well and you have never been there 😲. You sure have good imagination.

Riddhima's character introduction is too good. I am very much waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: anitamalik

Simran!!!

I just got time to read this FF, especially since I have a week worth of holidays this coming week

= D..The title has always been intriguing me to read the FF but due to lack of time, I haven't been able to..But I finally did today!

Okay, so I've totally got to tell you that you have pure talent! The way you set both parts forward was sooo wonderful...Your writing style is so unique and makes one fall in love with the characters and makes one visualize each scene as if it was happening right in front of our eyes...I commend you for that Simran! You're doing an absolute brilliant job with this Fic..

Aww please stop you're embarrassing me and I don't know how to sharmaofy properly😆 but thank you am touched😳

I loved Riddhima's character in this FF a lot...I couldn't agree more with you...I loved the second part of the fic..Her character is so different from the other fics I have read..This Riddhima is so carefree, mostly because she knows she is dying...She wants to live life to the fullest...and I completely agree with Ridz thoughts...I would so hate to be in her situation...I loved how she was dancing carelessly in the rain--that just shows that she really wants to avoid the sorrow in her life and enjoy each day as it comes...It's a true fact of life...This happens to a lot of people...They don't want to quit on life and just leave the world...They want to enjoy it...I really love the way you brought forth this aspect in Ridz character..Kudos Simran!

I couldn't agree with you more Anita I know so many people who live life to the fullest because they don't just want to leave the world sad, I work with a lady who is a breast cancer survivor and honestly she's one of the best people I know so full of life and energetic. She knows her cancer could come back but she doesn't care and lives in the moment.

I like how you also described how Ridz was pale one day and the other day she looked refreshed...It just shows how the disease gets to her...

"So what I would have probably gotten sick or perhaps even died, but death is inevitable" He looked at her a bit stunned as she stated that fact so simply.

One indication that she is dying...Armaan won't realize it so soon...I like how Ridz is being optimistic about her future...Death is inevitable...

Yes I agree, I am one of those people who is not afraid of death rather afraid to leave my loved ones behind but I always tell myself that death is inevitable and when it's my time I will go.

Armaan seems attracted to her cause of her uniqueness....Can't wait for him to be head over heeels for her...

That's right she is pretty and he knows but she is also unique and it is her uniqueness that pulls at him

I loved it Simran! Keep on giving us more parts like these...Take your time though..I know you're handling like three FF's at one time...It's hard and I completely understand since Im like struggling with two...LOL--So i read your comment, and I will be posting the part for JS tommorow...Im done halfway with it...

Thanks I am litreally cursing myself for starting 3😆

Hope you aren't bored with my analysis...LOL..

I absolutely loved reading this Anita 😳

BTW, forgot to add....You are a brilliant writer..You know why??? You almost brought tears to my eyes with the latest part..The bonding she had with her brothers and sister was so sweet...and Minnie's innocence made my eye well up...

Awwww now that is an accomplishment and a huge compliment, thank you!😳 but to tell you the truth even I was choking up a little, I am glad I am not the only sobster

Love, Anita

Love you too!!🤗

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Omg, those two parts are just beautiful! You are a very talented writer...I wish I could post a longer review, but I have an exam coming up so I better go...but do continue soon! I will definitely be keeping up with this story! 😃

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Hi Simran,

Thanks for the pm....loved both the parts, I would agree with you I liked part 2 more than part 1, its really sad that Ridz can die anytime, & whats more hurtful is that she knows & she is trying to console her family

loved the bonding between the siblings....I can understand debo not allowing her to kiss him, my bro is 15 & he hates it, hehehehe....

Hopefully Arman can give her some happiness.....