oh wow,Part 2 is that right?
woohooo! wish I had asked for more hehe
ok lemme read now
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wow simmi, that was such a sweet part
Armaan falling for this mystery girl
and she sounds so beautiful,somehow i cannot imagine her as Shilpa or Suks
she just seems someone else,but of course Armaan 's character is def Karan
the way he approached her whe she danced away was cutemher description was perfect for the scene
with all the realities hitting hard at her she holds onto the tiny ray of hope she contains in herself ,to see the next day ...that was the best part of it,the hug idea after she was diagnosed ,great
it did make sad when she talked of her own death and made the children see life when she's gone
aaah i cud write a five page essay i think lolz,but yeh this time it didn't seem that short,may be u had less gaps in between 😆
love it totally simi,just simple and effective,thats what i like
keep it going hun
i wudn't pester u for anotha update soon,much as i'd like to
just update when u can ,hopefully soon lolz
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forgot to mentio the song,i love that song and i loved the way u showed her full of life image despite of
knowing it wasn't a long one she enjoyed every moment of it
jaane kyu.....
love
Hina
Edited by hinanaziri - 16 years ago
