A RAHUL MUSKAAN STORY #2 ! UPD pg 13 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy di......great update!!! soo cute!! plzz cont soon and thanx fr the pm!!
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awesome yaar!!!!!update sooner!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome yaar!!!!!update sooner!!!!
thanx for the pm!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww such a cute update!!
omg Atul LMAO Dustbin!!haha
update soon!!
btw best of luck with your Pre boards
Edited by luv_dmg_armaan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That's it? u made us wait 3 weeks for 5 lines? can i kill u now?! longer!!!!!!! don't take 5 years this time
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Anjali - Atul...shut up !
Jai ( Pointing towards a building )- WOH DEKHO GUYS !!! HOTEL MIL GAYA !!
* All of them squel with delight *
*They all rush towards the hotel and jump upon the receptionist *
Armaan ( breathlessly ) - Hume ek kamra chahiye !
Atul - Ek kamre mein hum san kaise fit honge ?
Jai - Dr.Atul aapko adjsut karna padegaa kyunki humhe paise waste nahi karne chahiye
* Muskaan rolls her eyes...he boyfreind could be such a miser sometimes *
Recpetionist - Yeh ligiye aapki chabi...( hands over the key to Armaan ..
* Suddenly - *
Muskaan - OYE !
Anjali - Kya hua ?
Muskaan - main pna purse bus mein hi bhul aayi ! aabhi jaakar le aati hu !
Armaan - pagal mat ban Muskaan ! Bahut raat ho chuki hai...kal ke aana !
Muskaan - nahi !mjhe abhi jaana hai...Bag mein meri mobile bhi toh hai...tum loag merebag leke room mein chale jaao...mein abhi aati hu
* And before anyone could say anything else she rushes out of the hotel *
*She walks slowy back to the bus *
* The road was deserted...Muskaan was scared *
Muskaan ( talking to herself ) - You are a brave girl Muskaan...Tumhe darr nahi lagta...bhoot whoot thode hote hai...
* While she was walking she spots a drunkard in the other side of the road..she walks faster ingnoring him *
* The durnkard spots her *
Drunkard - Oye kudiye !
* Muskaan walks faster but to her dismay the drunkard followed her *
Drunkard - Oye ! Kaha jaa rahi hai ! Mere paas aaja...time spend karne ke liye
* Muskaan is terrified....and then suddenly the drunkard breaks into a run and grabs Muskaan's hand *
Muskaan ( Struggling ) - Chod mujhe !!
Drunkard - Soniye...intni jaldi bhi kya hai...thoda sa-
* But before the drunkard could finish his words someone knocked him out with his fost...Rahul *
* Muskaan looked up at him...he looked very angry *
Rahul - TUM PAGAL HO KYA ?? AKELE PURSE LENE KE LIYE KYUN GAYI ? KISKO SAATH NAHI LEKAR JAA SAKTI ??
Muskaan - main -
Rahul ( cutting Muskaan out in mid sentence ) - THANK GOD I FOLLOWED YOU...AGAR MAINE FOLLOW NAHI KIYA HOTA TO KYA HOTA ? ORR AGAR TUMHE KUCH HO JAATA TO MERA KYA HOTA ?
Muskaan ( angry that she was being shouted at ) - TUMHE KYA FARAK PADTA HAIN ? MAIN TUMHARE LIYE KAUN HU ? KAL HI TO MILE THE HUM !
( P.s - The story for this part from now will be in English bcuz I can express the feelings better in english )
Rahul - What are you to me ?? Dont u REMEMBER me Muskaan ??
* Muskaan just stares at him...Rahul did look familiar to her..*
Muskaan - I dont remember ..
* Rahul shakes his head in anger and pulls out a photograph...the same photograph of him and Muskaan standing under a tree 5 years back *
* Muskaan looks at the phoograph and is stunned....she dint say anything *
Rahul - Do u remember now Muskaan ? I am the same person you were in love with 5 years ago...
Muskaan ( looks into his eyes ) - You are the same Rahul ?
* Rahul just nods *
* Fresh tears of happiness leaked from Muskaan's eyes...she finall got the person she used to love so deeply back...and then suddenly she remembered something *
* She caught Rahul by the collar *
Muskaan - Yes I was in love with you and maybe I still am...but I can never forgive you for leaving me all alone..
Rahul - Muskaan...I am sorry..
Muskaan 0 SORRY ?? Sorry wont do anything Rahul...I was 18and I was desperatly in love with you...I was mad for you and I thought you felt the same way
Rahul - I did feel the same way Muskaan...infact I still do..
Muskaan ( tearful ) - If u had loved me you woudnt have left me like that and went away.....i was 18rahul...18..and I was mad in love with you....I dreamt of us getting married...I dreamt many things
Rahul...andyou left all my dreams shattered...
Rahul - am sorry Muskaan...but I never meant to leave you like that...Mt father suddenly lost his job and he lied to me that we were going on a holiday and he brought me to Bombay...and only then I realized that we had left patiala forever....
Muskaan - you could have tried and contacted me !!
Rahul - I did try !! But then I found out that you had gone away to delhi for further studies...Muskaan please forgive me !!
Muskaan - its too late Rahul...too late...
* and saying so Muskaan runs back to the hotel with tears in her eyes forgetting to pick her bag up *
* Rahul is meanwhile left standing alone...silent tears dripped from his eyes...*
Ths it for today ...I am sorry for the spelling mistakes....suthing is wrng with my keyboard !
Edited by I-luv-Mayank - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awsome very Lovley update😃 do continue waiting for the next part thxxxxxxxxx for pm 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyashaz

Awsome very Lovley update😃 do continue waiting for the next part thxxxxxxxxx for pm 😃

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Thankz diyva !
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome update!!! loved it continue soon plz!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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as always fantastic awesome stunnign
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but as always short 😒

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