A RAHUL MUSKAAN STORY #2 ! UPD pg 13 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey its getting hard to wait now plzzzz update soon
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Abbey continue kab karegi tu? JALDI KAR YAAR! Diaries and this one as well!
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continue kar na plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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i love it cant wait for the next update

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arey tu to time pe time liye ja raha hai :P
plz yaar updtae kar na : (
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Sorry sorry sorry...I cant help it guys...I have my Darn pre boards going on..
Anyway....heres the next part !!
* All doctors were fast alseep...*
* Suddenly the bus came to a screeching halt *
* All the interns and Jai wake up with a jerk *
Jay - Kya hua Driver ? bus kyun ruk gaayi ??
Driver - pata nahi sa'ab...dekh kar aata hu
* Saying so the driver gets out of the bus while the rest of them exchange nervous glances *
* After 10 mins or so the driver comes back into the bus *
Driver - Bus khaarb ho gayi hai....Aaj raat ko app sab ko yahi kahi hotel mein raat guzarna padega *
*All of them groan *
* Soon all the interns and Jai get out of the bus with their bags in their hands....amd were walking down the deserted road in search of a hotel *
Armaan ( To Jai ) - Humhe yaaha koi hotel nahi milne waala....This place is deserted !!
Jai - Sssh Dr.Armaan ! Be positive !!
Muskaan - Be positive ? Jai...tum pagal ho gaye ho kya ?? Yah hume konsi hotel- shotel milne waali hai ? Chalo waapas jaake hum bus mein hi raat guzarlete hai...
Atul - Good idea Muskaan !
Anjali - GOOD IDEA ?? Atul tum bhi pagal ho gaye ho kya ?
Armaan - Anjali...Atul pehle se hi paagal tha,,,
* Atul gives Armaan a death look and sticks his tongue out at him *
* It was a chilly night...Muskaan could feel her teeth chattering *
* Rahul notices this and takes off her sweater and drapes it over Muskaan *
* Muskaan gives him a smile *
Muskaan - tumhe thandh nahi lag raha ?
Rahul - Nahi
* He gives her a smile...and Muskaan could feel herself going weak at the knees *
* Suddenly- *
Atul - WOH DEKHO !!!!
Armaan - kya ? kya ? hotel mil gaya kya ??
Atul - Nahi...dustbin mil gaya..
Ridzi - DUSTBIN ??
Atul - Haah Ridzi...main kabse yeh paper cup ko phenkna chanhta tha...lekin mujhe dustbin hi nahi mil rahi thi...
* The rest of them roll their eyes *
Precap - They all soon reach the hotel.....and Rahul finally tells Muskaan that he was her childhood lover....Will Muskaan accept him now ?? Would she leave Jai for Rahul ??
Edited by I-luv-Mayank - 16 years ago
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as always the best plz
make a longer part and update really really soooooooooooooon :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wonderful update 👏👏 i wanna read more now plzzzzz uppdate soon and long partsss 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome update!! please continue soon and pm me again
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AWESOME!!!!
MINDBLOWING!!!!
SUPERB!!!!
GOOD TREAT AFTER A VERY LONG TIME
THNKS 4 THE PM

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