Mystery man Part 4B Pg 6

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Kinza

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ShelDev
Hey there:

Just read your FF....it's awesome...love it already..can't wait for Zaib's entry..I am sure he is going to rock!!..😆..

Can you pls PM me when you update??

thanks a million

continue soon

thanks a lot

Zaib always rock

of course i can pm you

i'm will cont soon

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Kinza

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: deeya123
thanks for the pm
nice start

by the way is seharish the one who use to write fics as well?

you're welcome

thanks

and no my cousin never wrote a ff in her life though she did help me win a writing competition...

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Kinza

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Shafoo
heyy cool part plzz contuied soon

thks i will

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Kinza

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: shivgauri
hey great start!😊
Nishant and Prateek are so cute... but are Nishant and Kripa married?😕
pls continue soon

thanks

that'll be clear in the next or the next next part

i will

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Kinza

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: kelly789
hey hun great start!😊
Nishant and Prateek are so cute.. &kripa did the right thing by throwing water on them😆😆😆
Also thank-you for the pm😛

pls continue soon👏

Love,

Priya

thanks priya

kripa always pays them back😆😆

you're welcome

i will after i continue Apne

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Kinza

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

hey this is nida...sorry for not continuing for so long but ive been far too busy too even think about making a part...this part is pure imagination and could be really boring...only the start was made, the rest is made up right now...here it is...

Part 2

Kripa had just finished the housework when the telephone rang.

Kr:Hello

Ni:hi ,kripa.Can you come to the office we have a meeting with the Kripang company this afternoon at 4.

Kripa is shown a bit shocked at the name.

Ni:Kripa?Kripa?Hello?are u there?

Kr:Yeah sorry.

Ni:So will you be there?

Kr:Yes yes sure i'll be there.at 4 right?

Ni:yeah.Okay, i'll hang up now.Bye

Kr:Bye.(They hang up.)
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Later in the afternoon at the Sharma Company.

Kripa enters the meeting room and feels strange.

Kr:Why am i feeling like this?What is going to happen today?Whenever I felt like this something happened?First i met An......No i will not go there.Now is not the time.I have to think about Nishant and Prateek.

She sees Nishant and goes to him.He was talking to a guy who's back was to her but theway the man was standing was familiar to Kripa.

Ni:Kripa this is Mr Zaib Richster and Mr Zaib meet Kripa Sharma.

The man turns and Kripa is shocked.

"Angad"Kripa whispered.She felt weak suddenly.Suddenly she held her head and fainted.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- sorry for the short post but my mum's after me to sleep cos it's already 9:30 here in HK and i have to go to school tmr.But I'lltry to post another much loooooooooooooonger part tmr or day after tmr.then on Friday it's my school's Christmas party and then it's the holidays and i'll start updating faster.plz comment and sorry once again for not continuing before...
Cheers,

Nida

Edited by xxlibragurlxx - 16 years ago