Mystery man Part 4B Pg 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys...sorry for not continuing but ive had some personal problems and my exams so double the tension...but to make up for not continuing i am going to post three parts today...im working on them now......

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey jus went thru ur ff
its very interestin
cont soooooooooon............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3

she was in a night club with her friends when she first saw him.He looked hot and handsome even then.

Flashback

A hot guy is sitting at the bar looking around when he see a beautiful girl dancing with her friends.he thinks"she'll be easy" and starts walking towards her and asks the guy dancing with her "May I?"

guy:"Sure why not."

he starts dancing and talking to her."What's your name?"

"Kripa Sharma.urs?"

"Angad Khanna!I'm here on a business trip."

Scene change

Two dead bodies are shown.People are crying.Kripa enters.

Kr:"Whath is going on?"Who are these people and whose dead bodies are these?"

Kripa's mamaji Dillip Khanna comes and tells her

"They are your parents kripa.they had an accident."

Kr:"What?!No way.They can't be my parents.I just talked to them yesterday."

Dillip's wife, Naina comes forward:"Kripa, my child.Please accept it they are ur parents"

Kripa (screaming)"No.Even if they're my parents, they're just sleeping.They'll wake up soon.I'll wake them up"

She goes to the bodies and starts to call them"Mum, Dad!Wake up.Look what mamaji and mamiji are saying.They're saying u're dead.wake up and tell them u're alive and just sleeping."She starts to scream at them."Wake up!Wake up!Mom Dad plz wake up i need u.plz don't leave ur daughter alone.plz wake up."

Naina comes and hugs her.both are crying.

The panditji says it time for the last rites of them and everyone goes to the place where u burn the body.

Afterwards Dillip and Naina take her to their house in Mumbai away from Nanital.

Scene change

Angad is drunk and dirty dancing with some girl.His close friend Prithvi comes and tells him"bad news Angad.Aunty and Uncle are coming back today instead of tomorrow and you need to be in bed before they reach."

Ang:OMG!Let's go man or else......

They leave.

Next day at the breakfast table.Angad was having breakfast when Kripa comes down in a salwar kameez still a bit depressed.He sees her and is shocked."Kripa?"

She looks up and is also shocked."Angad?"

while Naina and Dilip are just looking cofused as though how do they know each other when they haven't ever met.

Ang:What are you doing here?

Kri:I should be asking you the same question.

Di:Wil anyone tell us what's going on here?How do you both know each other?

Both Angad Kripa:We met in nanital.But how do you know her/him?

Naina:Angad is our son and Kripa is our niece.You both are cousins.

Scene change

A wedding mandap is set up and the dulha is lifting the dulhan's veil to put sindoor in her maang.It's Kripa.She's looking very happy as though she's getting married to the love of her life which is true because the dulha is Angad and he is also very happy.

Scene change

Inside a court room, we see Angad standing in the place where the accused stand and Kripa in the witness box pointing at Angad saying"He killed Josh"Naina and Dillip are not there.Aaliyah is looking at Kripa disgusted while Angad is heartbroken.

Scene change

Kripa is talking to Prithvi:Plz let them go.I did as you said plz let them go.I sent Angad to jail for the crime u commited and now u have to let Aunty and uncle go.

Prithvi:Sure love.I'll do anything for u.He calls someone and says "let them go.my work is done"

Scene change

Prithvi is in jail.Kripa says bye to Naina and Dillip and takes a taxi to airport.

Scene change

Kripa goes to a doctor and finds that she is pregnant with a child.

Flashbacks end

Kripa sits up suddenly and finds herself in office with Nishant looking at her worried.

Ni:What happened?

Kr:Woh..woh Angad...Angad agaya hai Nishant but how do i face him...i feel so ashamed...i sent him to jail for something he'd never done.

Ni:Par Kripa tumne woh sab majbori mein kiya tha and where is Angad.All i know is you meet Zaib and you call him Angad and faint.

Kr:Wohi Angad hai.

Ni:Nahin Kripa.Woh Angad nahin Zaib hai Zaib.

Kr:But his face...

Ni:It can be a coincidence, Kripa.For now we have to proceed with the meeting let's go.

Kr:Let's go.

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Part 4a
After the meeting, nishant invites zaib for dinner at his house.Then he leaves for another meeting leaving kripa and zaib alone.
Zaib:So why did you faint and why did you call me Angad, Mrs Sharma.
Kr:Im not mrs sharma.just ms sharma or kripa.nishant is my half-brother.and your face looks exactly like my husband Angad who i am seperated from so i was shocked.sorry.
Zaib:seperated?does this mean you date?
Kr:No.I can't even think about it.I love Angad too much to date anyone else.
Za:Wow.I've never met anyone like you.You are here but your heart is there with him.
Kr:That pretty much sums it up.
Za:Well see you tonight Kripa.
Kr:yeah see you tonight.though i must warn you that my so...i mean cooking is not that good.thinking"what the h*** kripa?Why did you not tell him about prateek?Because my heart says he is Angad though everyone says he's zaib.i wonder why's that.What if he really is Angad?Then will he take Prateek away from me?"
Zaib:Kripa?Kripa?Where are you lost?By the way Im sure your cooking will be excellent and tasty just like you.He mumbles the last part.
Kr:Sorry didn't catch that last bit.
Za:nothing.He leaves after giving her a smile.thinking"Soon babes, you'll be in my bed like i want."
Kripa finishes her work and leaves to pick up prateek from the day care centre.
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Zaib goes to his hotel room to get ready for the second phase of his plan.
He leaves for the Sharma Mansion soon.
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I'll post part 4b tomorrow
Edited by xxlibragurlxx - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
gr8 part
loved it....
nice going...
i just hope Zaib is only Angad... & AK unite forever this time....
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waiting 4 u 2 continue
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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NoTe!!!
Hello after a very long time...sorry i didnt cont but ive been too busy too even think abt a new part...but today i've decided to post a new part no matter what....lol...ill post the next part in 2 hours cos right now im not supposed to be on the computer...wait for the next part...
Coming soon: Zaibs plans phase two...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey...im updating finally...

Part 4B

Nishant's home at night...

Kripa is setting the table for dinner, Nishant and Prateek are playing upstairs when the doorbell rings.

Kr: Coming..."That must be Zaib"to herself.

She opens the door and starts to stare at Zaib because he's looking very hot wearing blue jeans and a red shirt.Zaib on the other hand is smirking at the way she was drooling over him.He coughs and she comes back to reality.

Za:May I come in?

Kr:Oh.Sure why not?

Za:Nice place you got here...thinking"Great!She already is attracted to me. After all im zaib richster.

Kr:Uhmm...thanks..all embarassed at being caught staring after what she said this morning.

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Nishant and Prateek come down after a while...they see zaib and prateek gets excited thinking, one more person to play pranks on.Muahahaha...

Ni:Hey Zaib.What's up?

Za:Hey.and who's this little guy? a bit shocked at seeing a kid

Prateek goes to him puts out is hand and says: Hello Mr whatever.My name is Prateek Sharma.proudly

Za:Zaib Richster at your service sir.

Pr:Hmph.

Kr:Prateek, behave.

Pr:Yes mama.

zaib is even more shocked at hearing this but hides it well while kripa is looking at zaib but seeing no reaction from him confuses her.

Kripa thinking:Is he my angad or not?God im so confused.I hope if he is angad, he's not angry at me for not telling him about prateek but what could i do.The circumstances were such...

Ni:Ok, now that the introductions are over, shall we have lunch...my dear sister has prepared it after all.

Zaib is even more shocked at this.thinking:sister??!!As far as i know, Kripa has no brother or sister.What's going on??

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Dinner table

All are having dinner when zaib's cell rings.

Za: Hello...What?How?...What the h*** was the security doing when this happened?...Im coming now...yes right now...bye...

Nishant and kripa are staring at him with questioning eyes..

Ni:What happened Zaib?Any problems?

Za:Yeah.some girl got in my room and when she was caught said she wanted to meet me.running his hand through his hair.looking frustrated.sorry but i have to go.

Ni:I'll come with you.They leave.

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so how was it?im gna sleep now...have a hell of a headache...bye...will pm later...plz comment...bad or good all are welcome...

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