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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan
helllllllllooo diiiiii..!!! >:D< >:D< ..
dii me showwiee for commenting late actually yest i came back as gone out of town.. den raat ko read the part but as it was too late soo was not able to comment .. now me here.. !!😃😃

First part was awesuumm..!! 👏
Five star.:⭐️
had lil bit confusion 😕in recalling characters but den i lookeed back to intro.. smart na😛.. hehehe 😛

part dii!!! keep rocking..!! loved the chutku yash part...!!😳😳😃

pleeeejjj..!! update soonn..!!! will b waiting.. n jaldi jaldi ..how abt sat or sunday..!!😃😃

nehu yaar pehli baat dosti mein no thank you, no sorry hotha hai.. tho chalo take your sorry back...i completely understand... 😊 and dear now no thankooo so much for such a cute comment.. nehu yaar i just love the emotion icons you post.. they are sweet, just like you.. yaar mujhe khushi hui hai kii tumhe yeh first part achcha laga.... i hope tumko agge kii yeh kahani agge bhi pasand aaye... and dear the next part is coming soon..😊

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: goodkashish
hi surili...........i hope tumhe mera comment achcha lage waise tumhari tarah khass nahi hoga lekin likhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon..............to kahani shuru hoti hai mere janam se pehle se....kafi interstring plot hai story ka..................gulshan aur preeto ne bina kuch jane pehchane lalit ki shaadi veena se tai kar di lekin i am not surpirized kyunki pehle ke jamane me aisa hota tha lekin main anurag ki baat se bilkul sehmat hoon ki ek taraf mandira hai jise woh janta bhi nahi ki woh use pyaar karti hai aur ek tarah uska parivar hai jo sirf lalit ki khushi chahta hai...........i am sure ki maa baap apne bacho ko best dena chahte hai lekin kabhi kabhi bache hi nahi samaj pate.......lekin kehte hai jo hota hai usme upperwali ki marzi hoti hai.......aakhir kar veena aur lalit ki shaadi ho hi jati hai lekin saath me anurag aur chetan ki bhi........lagta hai dono ghar me shaadi apne saath toofan leke aa rahi hai......ek taraf lalit hai jo phir se mandira ke saath............pata nahi lekin main bhi pyaar ki aad me chupa yeh labz affair ko sabse jyada nafart karti hoon...........shayad itna ki koi andaza bhi nahi laga sakta.........lalit ne sirf veena ko hi nahi balke apne bete yash aur apne pure parivar ko dhoka diya........sharam aati hai lalit ko yash ka dad kehte muje..........and i am sure ki whu yash hates lalit.........aur ab to aafat ki jad swayam bhi saath rehne laga hai...........kehte hai ki shaitan ka dimaag chote se hi bahot shatir hota hai..........aur yaha to swayam yash ki her khushi ko chinne me laga hai.......lekin agar usne aage kuch bhi aisa kiya to mujse bura koi nahi hoga lekin i am sure ki akshat and rishi will take care of everything..............aur dusri aur hai chetan ki biwi trishna....how loose character.............i mean koi maa kaise apni beti se nafrat kar sakti hai.........khaas karke ek aurat ka dil to kisi bhi bache ki rone ki aahat se pigal jata hai lekin kehte hai ki dayan to apne hi bache ko nigal jati hai to yeh kya hai..........lekin i am so glad ki anurag aur prerna gave love that chah needed when she was child........i am glad ki trishna aur mandira jaise bala hamesha ke liye tal gayi lekin muje darr hai ki kahi trishna wapas na aaye............i can understand now ki why chah hates the word love bcoz her mother hated her............i hope to see some fun and romance in the college kyunki ab ki kahani 13 saal aage janewali hai to...............lekin muje darr hai ki yeh swayam college me kuch karne wala hai...kahi yash aur chah ke beech...........agar usne aisa kiya to i swear main use bhi uski maa ke pass pahuncha dungi.............ple ple ple jaldi se next part likho........kyunki ab chah aur yash ki mulaqat ka beshabri se intzaar hai.........ab jab tak yeh dono mil nahi jate muje neend nahi aayegi............is liye ple ab meri raato ki neend muje wapas lauta do.............now coming to the next part guess......i think chah and yash will meet in the college but swayam had his eyes on chah...........yash and chah had a rough friendship and swayam uska faiyda lega......swayam chah ke samne achcha banne ki aur yash ko neecha dikhane ki koshish karega..........ple tell me how much right i am......thank u so much for this wonderful starting of this story...........it is mind blowing.............. love kashish

kashish yaar pehli baat no thankoo dear.. tumhara itna bada comment dekhkar main poori tarah se khush hogayi.. i'am feeling so good after reading your comment... no thankoo yaar..and dear tumne part ke har pehlu par likha hai and you are right.. lalit and trishna are the biggest losers.... don't worry yaar main swayam ko sambhal loongi.. agar usne koi natak kiya na tho main usse ek kheench kar laga doongi.. don't worry... dear yash aur chah kii mulaqat tho zaroor hogi.. jab unki mulaqat hogi, tab hii tho kahani agge badegi na.. lekin unke mulaqat ke liye tumhe thoda sa intezaar karna hoga... unki mulaqat mostly 4th part mein hogi... woh mulaqat bhi mulaqat nahii hogi, i mean aamne-saamne kii mulaqat nahii hogi.. lekin bas woh dono ek baar mil jaye tho kahani fulltoo speed mein chaalu ho jaayegi.. hehehe... dear tumhara guess is good... tum kuch hadh thak sahii bhi ho.. lekin dekhthe hai kya hotha hai... yaar next part jaldi post karoongi.. pukka..😊

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Guys sorry that i have not continued the fanfic from such a long time.. actually i was caught up with my personal life.. & exams.... sorry.. i hope all of you understand... i'll post the next part soon..😊

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Next Part is coming up in five minutes..😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hello guys… how are all of you doing…. I'am back after a long , long time…. Actually my elder sister had come home from the US, and she just left today[jan 20th].. aur aaj after she left I started feeling lonely & sad.. and then I thought why don't I write my fanfic… aur issi bahane mera mann bhi behal jayega… I'am really very sorry that I have not posted the story from such a long time.. I know you all have been waiting, but I hope all of you understand…. Now I'll stop my non-stop talking and start with the recap & continue with my fanfic…… Hope all of you enjoy the pary.. & the part is worth the wait…..

Isse pehle kii hum agge bade, chaliye dekhthe hai kii pichle part mein aakhir kya hua tha.. I know many of you might have forgotten it, sach baat bolun tho main bhi bhool gayi hoon.. issi liye ek chota sa Recap:- well in the last part, that is the first part of "Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet", we saw the intro of the Garewals, the Mehras & The Chopras… aur us part mein I gave you a insight of what happened in their lives twenty years back.. and what made their lives better & worse… and we saw our hero, heroine as kids their life & their beliefs about life, love etc… now moving on here is "Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet", next part…..

*********"Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet- Part 2" *********

It is the year of 2006… hum dekh sakthe hai kii Delhi ka seher hai, yahaan sadkon par bohat si chehel-pehel hai… yahaan par sab log subaah , subaah apne kaam ke liye jaa rahe hothe hai… is seher mein sab log bohat hii vyast hai.. they are busy in their own life.. lekin iska matlab yeh nahii kii wahaan ke log apne khuud ke liye, apne pariwaar ke liye waqt nahii nikalthe… yahaan log rishton ko utni hii eniyath dethe hai jitni woh apne kaam ko dethe hai… ek taraf yeh log apne kaam ko poojthe hai, aur is baat ka bhi dhayan rakhthe hai kii kaam karthe karthe unke rishthe bhi qayam rahe… kehthe hai Delhi Dilwaalon ka seher hai.. maana jaatha hai kii joh log pyaar par yakeen nab hi kare, Delhi kii hawa unhe pyaar ka ehsaas dila hii jaathi hai.. Aisa hai Delhi seher, Joh sach mein Dilwaalon ka seher hai…
Is seher mein bohat saare respected, jaane-maane log rehthe hai.. aur inhi logon mein se ek pariwaar hai, aur woh parivaar "Mehras" ka hai.. Delhi mein aaj Mehras ka naam unchayi par hai… joh Mehras ne bees saal pehle khoya tha, aaj use kayi, kayi zyada Mehras ne paa liya hai… aur is naam, is ruthbbe kii wajah hai Mr. Anuurag Mehra auur unki patni Prerna Mehra… yahii woh do log hai, jinhone is parivaar ko tab sambhala, jab yeh parivaar tootne ke kagaar par tha bees saal pehle… aaj bhi yahii dono hai joh is ghar ke pillar ko strength banne hue hai…. Anurag aur prerna ka saath diya gayatri mehra ne, gayatri mehra anurag kii maa hai aur prerna kii saas hai.. lekin unhone kabhi prerna ko apni bahu nahii maana, balki hamesha usse apni beti maana.. aur tho aur gayatri mehra apne bte se bhi pehle agar kissi kii baat ko maanthi hai tho woh hai prerna kii baat…
The mehras have had no contact with the garewals for the past 20 years… life has been totally different for both the families kii un logon ko kabhi waqt hii nahii mila kii the familes take notice of each other….
We see a big mansion, jis ke gate par likha hai, "The Mehras", as we go inside the house we can see a very beautiful garden, jahaan par gardeners kaam karr rahe hothe hai… we can hear some voices which are coming from inside the house…. As we enter the door we see a lady facing the other side & talking to a person….
The lady:- kaka, kya aap mujhe bata sakthe hai yeh ladki kahaan gayi hai….
A old looking man says:- bitiya woh main nahii jaantha…
The lady:- kaka kya matlab hai aapka, aap nahii jaanthe… aur yeh ladki tho roz chali jaathi hai, aur suubaah subaah huum sab ko pareshaan karthi hai…
The man:- prerna bitiya woh jab main yahaan aaya tha kuch dher pehle tho woh yahaan nahii thi, aur maine jab uske kamre mein jaakar dekha woh wahaan bhi nahii thi… [yes the lady is none other than prerna]
Prerna:- harihar kaka maine aapse kaha tha na kii yeh aapki zimedaari hai kii aap yeh dekhiye kii woh aise roz subaah-subaah bahar na jaye…..
Now before harihar could answer one more lady walks in the room and says:- prerna tum tho aise keh rahii ho jaise harihar ke kehne se woh shaitaan rukh jaathi…
Prerna:- lekin maa, woh roz subaah aise chali jaathi hai phir late aathi hai aur kaam mein busy ho jaathi hai aur apne university ko nikal jaathi hai… aap hii batayiye maa, woh aise roz kaise kar sakthi hai, aur is wajah se woh apni sehat ka zara sa bhi khayal nahii rakhthi, lekin ek doctor hone ko train ho rahii hai.. lekin usmein ek prathishat bhi zimedaari kii cheez nahii hai…
Gayatri:- prerna beta main samajthi hoon, lekin huum sab jaanthe hai na kii hum mein se usse koi nahii rokh saktha, aur woh bhi khaaskar is kaam ke liye… dekh prerna, woh ladki meri, tumhari aur anurag kii ek bhi baat nahii taalthi, bas yeh ek hii baat hai jis par hum usse rokh nahii sakthe, aur nah ii woh rukhegi, ya apna badlegi, tho isse behtar yeh hoga kii woh joh karr rahii hai hum usse karne de…
Prerna:- shayad aap theek keh rahii hai maa… harihar kaka aap jaiye aur bahar garden mein kaam dekhiye… dekhiye kii koi phool murjayena, nahii tho aap jaanthe hai na kya hoga…
Harihar:- jee bitiya main bas abhi jaatha hoon, aur bitiya main jaantha hoon kii agar phool murja gaye tho bachchi ke chehre se muskaan chali jaayegi aur woh udaas ho jayegi…
Gayatri:- harihar jab tum yeh jaanthe ho tho jaakar dekho kya kaam ho raha hai….
Harihar:- jee memsaab main bas abhi gaya…
[harihar leaves the place & heads towards the garden..]
Now prerna & gayatri sit on the dining table… gayatri dekhthi hai kii prerna aaj bohat chup chup si lag rahii hai…. So gayatri decides to ask her about it…
Gayatri:- prerna beta…
Prerna:- jee maa..
Gayatri:- kya baat hai beta koi soch mein uljhi hui ho kya…
Prerna:- nahii tho maa, aisi koi baat nahii….
Gayatri:- prerna , agar main tumhe sirf apni anurag kii patni maanthi, meri bahu maanthi, tho shayad main tumhari is baat ko ek saas kii tarah maan bhi lethi, lekin tum yeh baat bhool rahii ho kii main tumhari saas nahii…
Prerna makes a confused expression on her face & says:- jiii…
Gayatri:- arre beta itna hairaan hone kii zaroorat nahii, mere kehne ka matlab bas itna hii tha kii main tumhari saas nahii balki tumhari maa hoon.. samjhii…
Prerna:- jee maa…..
Gayatri:- tho ab mujhe batao, kya baat hogayi, mujhe tho lag raha hai kii tum pareshaan ho…
Prerna:- nahii maa, main pareshaan nahii hoon, balki main tho kuch soch rahii hoon….
Gayatri:- tho yeh hii bata do kii kya soch rahii ho…
Prerna:- maa main kuch khaas nahii soch rahii thi, bas do chaar dino se mujhe yeh baat sata rahii hai kii ab jab bachchi badi hogayi hai, tho humein uski shaddiu tho karni hii hogi na… aur agar woh shaddi kar legi tho woh hum sab se durr, is ghar se durr, naye logon ke beech, ek naye ghar mein, ek naye mahol mein jaayegi… aur humara yeh ghar itna soona ho jayega na maa…
Gayatri smiles & says:- prerna pehle tub hi mujhe bata tuujhe kis baat kii chinta ho rahi hai , kya tumhe is baat kii chinta hai kii bachchi humein chod kar chali jayegi, ya phir tumhe is baat kii chinta hai kii hum logon ko bachchi ke liye ek achcha sa ghar, aur ek achcha ladka dhoonda na.. batao tumhe kaunsi chinta hai..
Prerna:- maa main tho chahthi hoon kii humari bachchi jis bhi ghar mein jaye us ghar ko khushiyon se bhar de aur usse bhi woh pyaar, woh apnapann , woh khushi mile jiski woh haqdaar hai.. lekin maa mere mann mein yeh dukh bhi hai kii bachchi kii shaddi ke baad woh huum sabse durr chali jayegi.. hum kaise reh paayenge maa uske bina…
Yeh baat sunkar aur sochkar gayatri kea ankh mein name aa jaathi hai and she does not give any reply…
Anurag joins the both of them in the dining table & he sees that both prerna & his mom are unusually quiet, aur dono ke aankhon mein he could sense sadness…
Anuurag:- good morning…
Both gayatri & prerna wish anurag in a low tone..
Anurag:- kya baat hai, aaj suraj kidar se uga hai…
Prerna:- kya matlab? Hum kuch samjhe nahii…
Anurag:- arre simple si baat hai roz tho suraj east se ugtha hai na,
Gayatri:- haan, lekin is mein nayi baat kya hai, tu paheliyaan bhujaana bund kar aur bol…
Anurag:- haan maa bol raha hoon, mujhe aaj aisa lagtha hai kii suraj aaj west se ug gaya hai.. dekho na aise chamatkar tabhi dekhne ko miltha hai..
Prerna:- anurag tum kya bol rahe ho, saaf saaf bolo.. kya chamatkar hogaya.. aur yeh suraj ka west se ugne se kya matlab hai tumhara…
Anurag:- dekhiye roz aap dono, yaani ki meri maata jii aur meri patni yahaan roz subaah issi dinning table par baitkar baatein karne se nahii thakthe the, lekin aaj meri wohii purani maa aur meri wahii purani patni baat nahii karr rahe hai, balki dono tho chup hai…
Gayatri & prerna start hitting anurag, listening to the purani waali baat.. and then prerna says:- waise anurag purane tho tum bhi ho gaye ho…. Actually tum puraane nahii balki bohat purane ho gaye ho… bilkul woh purani black & white tv kii tarah, joh purana hothe hothe kaam karna chod dethi hai, waise hi tum puraanme hothe hothe akal ka istamaal karna chod rahe ho…
Anurag:- [mazaak mein kehtha hai] prerna main tumhara pati hoon, tum mujhse aise kaise keh sakthi ho… woh bhi maa ke saamne… prerna mujhe lagtha hai kii tum badon kii izzat karna bhool gayi ho…
Prerna ko anuurag kii yeh baat thodi si bura lag jaathi hai aur woh wahaan se chali jaani lagthi hai.. tab gayatri usse rokhthi hai…. Aur anurag se kehthi hai….
Gayatri:- [she holds anurag's ears & says] kyun re, kya keh raha hai meri beti ko….
Anurag:- aahh…maa..aa..hh… please chodiye…
Gayatri:- pehle meri beti ko sorry bol.. warna main nahii chodoongi…
Anurag:- prerna mujhe maaf kar do.. I'am sorry.. main bas mazaak karr raha tha..
Prerna:- maaf kiya….
Gayatri leaves anurag ears & then says:- anurag tu itna bada hogaya hai, tere chaar bachche hai, jis mein se ek ki shaddi kii umar ho rahii hai, aur tu abhi bhi aise mazaak aur shaitaani kartha hai…
Prerna:- maa yeh tho shaitaani karthe hai, lekin saath saath bachchi ko bhi shaitaaniyaan sikhathe hai…
Gayatri:- haan prerna beta tune sahii kaha.. yeh anurag haii hii aisa…
Anurag:- ab aap maa beti ka mujh bechare par complaints ho gaye ho, tho kya aap log bologe kii kya problem hogayi kii aap dono chup the…
Gayatri:- woh anurag beta hum, bachchi kii shaddi ke bare mein soch rahe the….
Anurag:- maa, bachchi kii shaddi , maa aap khud usse bachchi kehthi hai, tho hum uski shaddi kaise kar sakthe hai… ajur waise bhi maa kanoon ke mutabiq bachon kii shaddi karna gair-kanooni maana jaatha hai..
Prerna:-anurag tum kabhi tho serious ho jao… main aur maa bachchi kii shaddi ke bare mein rahe the…
Anurag:- nahii prerna tum log kuch bhi kaho, lekin bachchi abhi chotti hai, aur uski shaddi…
Prerna:- aap ke liye tho woh hamesha hii bachchi hii rahegi, chahe woh jitni bhi badi hii kyun na ho jaye…
Anurag:- maa aap samaj nahii rahii hai…
Gayatri:- dekh anurag samaj tho tu nahii raha hai.. waise bhi hum thodi na keh rahe hai kii aaj hii uska rishtha tay kar de aur kal hii uski shaddi karke usse vida kar de.. main tho bas itna hii keh rahii hoon kii huum logon ko ab uski shaddi ke bare mein bhi sochna hoga…
Anuurag:- theek hai maa. Lekin shaddi ke bare mein pehle humein bachchi se baat karni hogi, aur uski rai jaan ni hogi.. kyunke yeh uski zindagi ka sawaal hai, aur hum aisa koi faisla nahii lenge jisse ki bachchi ko agge chalkar takleef ho..
Prerna:- theek hai.. humein aapki yeh baat manzor hai.. lekin aap pehle usse ek baar shaddi kii baat karke tho dekhiye..
Anurag:- theek hai main try karoonga. Lekin main usse force nahii kar saktha shaddi ke liye…
Gayatri & prerna together say:- theek hai.. done….
At this point a girl enters slowly , she is wearing a black track pants & a red tee-shirt… woh dheere se gayatri ke peeche aa kar khadi ho jaathi hai aur zor se chillathi hai:- daaaaaannnnnnnnnnnniiiii……
Gayatri aur prerna darr jaathe hai , while anurag laughs…
Now gayatri says:- bachchiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…………..
The girl:- uuffooooooooooooo dinaaaaaaaaaaa , main bachchii nahii hoon.. main ab badi hogayi hoon.. tho aap please mujhe bachchi bulana band kijiye.. aur ghar se baahar kissi ko patah chal gaya kii aap log mujhe bachchi bulathe hai tho sab milkar mera mazaak udayenge…
Prerna:- dekh tu humare liye bachchi hai tho hum sab tho tujhe bachchi hii bulayenge na….
The girl:- badi maa aap bhi.. this is not fair.. please aap log mujhe bachchi bulana band kijiye…
Prerna:- achcha tu mujhe ek aisi point bol jiske bina par hum tujhe bachchi naa bulaye..
The girl:- dekhiye main medicine ka aakhri saal karr rahii hoon.. abhi bas kuch hii mahino mein ek practicing intern ho jaaungi.. aur uske baad ek doctor bhi ban jaaungi.. aur tab bhi aap mujhe bachchi kehkar bulayenge tho achcha nahii lagega na… tho issi liye aaj se final mujhe is ghar mein bachchi koi nahii bulayega.. koi nahii matlab koi bhi nahii…. Aur agar aap mein se kissi ne mujhe bachchi bulaya tho main unse baat nahii karoongi…
Anurag:- lekin bachchiii….
The girl makes a irritated face & says:- phir bachchi.. dekhiye main sach keh rahii hoon agar agli baar aap mein se kisasi ne bhi mujhe bachchi bulaya tho main naraaz ho jaaungi.. aur khana bhi nahii khaaungi..
Prerna:- yeh tho black mail hua…
The girl:- joh bhi ho… lekin mera faisla aakhri hai…
Gayatri:- tu jaanthi hum tujhe bachchi kyun bulathe hai…
The girl:- nahii jaanthi main… aur main jaan nab hi nahii chahthi , main bas yahii chahthi hoon kii aap mujhe bachchi bulana chod de…
Prerna:- dekh agar tu nab hi jaan na chahe na, phir bhi hum tujhe bathathe hai kii hum tumhe bachchi kyun bulathe hai, hum tujhe bachchi teri issi nadani, teri dil kii sachchayi kii wajah se bulathe hai.. shayad tu badi hogayi hogi, lekin tera bachpana tho waisa hii hai na, aur chahe tu kitni bhi badi kyun na ho jaye hum sabke tho tu hamesha se bachchi rahii hai aur bachchi hii rahegi.. tu humare liye wahii bachchi hai jisse hum, humare saath le aaye the duniyaan kii mushkhilo se durr.. pyaar kii , apnepann kii duniyaan mein… tut ho aaj bhi wahii bachchi hai humare liye… [prerna ke aankhon mein yeh sab kehthe hue, aasoo aa jaathe hai..]
The girl:- kya badi-maa aap tho emotional hogayi.. achcha baba aap log mujhe bachchi bulao ya kuch aur mujhe koi problem nahii hai… ab aap yeh aankhon kii name pohanch dijiye… aap jaanthe hai na mujhe aapki aankhon mein aasoo achche nahii lagthe…
Prerna:- achcha baba yeh le pohanch liya aasoo….. ab khush..
The girl smiles & nods in a yes…
Gayatri:- wais eek baat bata tut ho doosron ko bolthi phirthi hai kii mujhe bachchi matt bulao, mujhe bachchi matt bulao, lekin tu mujhe dina kyun bulathi hai…
The girl:- woh kya hai na dina, main aapko dina issliye bulathi hoon kyunke aap meri dadi bhi hai aur aap meri nani bhi hai..
Gayatri:- woh kaise..
The girl:- woh aise dina, dekho aap mere bade papa jinhe main apna pitaah maanthi hoon , yaani Mr. Anurag Mehra kii maa hai, is naathe se aap meri dadi hui right..
Gayatri:- haan right…
The girl:- aur doosri taraf se dekha jaye tho aap meri badi maa jinhe main apni maa maanthi hoon , yaani Ms. Prerna Mehra kii maa hai, is naathe se aap meri nani hui right..
Gayatri:- haan yeh dono points tho sahii hai, lekin yeh dina shabd kahaan se beech mein aagaya….
The girl:- arre simple sa logic hai dadi, main dadi se da nikal liya aur nani se main ni nikal liya aur is dfa aur ni ko jodh diya, aur woh hogaya dina, jis naa se main aapko pukaartha hoon…. Samjhiiiii…
Gayatri:- haan baba samaj gayi.. mujhe maloom nahii tha kii mera naam ke peeche itna bada history chupa hua hai…
The girl:- kya dadi aap bhi.. aise hii kuch nahii kuch kehthi rehthi hai… ab yeh sab baatein chodiye aur yeh batayiye badi maa nhastha milega… bohat bhook lagi hai badi maa……
Prerna:- haan tujhe nhastha tho zaroor milega, lekin uske liye tumhe mere ek sawaal ka jawaab dena hoga…
The girl:- poochiye…..
Prerna:- tu itni subaah- subaah kahaan gayi thi…. Main tumse kitni baar tumse kaha hai kii jab bhi tum baahar jao tho mujhe bolkar jao…
The girl:- woh badi maa, main who physically challenged rehab mein gayi thi.. agar main ek din bhi unko nahii milthi hoon tho mujhe aise lagtha hai kii meri subaah kii shuruwaat hii nahii hui..
Prerna:- haan chahhhhhhhhhh, [yes the girl is our heroine sahiba..] theek hai main jaanthi hoon, lekin tu mujhe bata kart ho jaa hii sakthi hai na… hum sabko pareshaani hothi hai… tujhe kya bohat mazaa aatha hai hum sabko tension dene mein….
Chah:- badi-maa yeh baat tho ghar ke sab log jaanthe hai kii main roz subaah jogging par jaathi hoon aur aathe waqt un bachon se milkar aathi hoon.. tho main nab hi bataun tho aap jaanthi hai na..
Prerna:- shaitan bachchi, ek tho kissi ko batake nahii jaayegi.. aur phi raise kahegi…
Chah:- common badi maa, waise bhi main us jagah ke alawa aur kahaan jaaungi.. main kahiin nahii jaaungi tho aapko meri fikar karne kii zaroorat nahii.. main aap sab ko chod kar kabhi nahii jaaungi..
Gayatri:- jaana tho tujhe hai…
Chah:- mujhe kahaan jaana hai dina…
Gayatri:- arre kal ko teri shaddi hogi, tu apna yeh ghar chod kar apne sasural jayegi….
Chah:- whatttttttttttttttttttttttt… shaddiiiiii… sasuralllllll… yeh kya bol rahii hai dina aap…
Prerna:- arre teri dina sahii hii tho bol rahii hai, tu shock kyun ho rahii hai… teri shaddi tho karwani hii hai, aur waise bhi teri shaddi kii umar joh hogayi hai…
Chah:- badi maa please main abhi padh rahii hoon, mujhe shaddi-vaadi nahii karni hai.. main aise hii khush hoon…
Gayatri:- tho tujhse kisne keh diya kii tu shaddi ke baad khush nahii rahegi…. Tu aur bhi khush rahegi.. jitna tu abhi khush hai na, usse kayi zyada khush hogi wahaan apne pati ke saath….
Chah:- dadi woh sab main nahii jaanthi, main shaddi nahii karna chahthi…
Gayatri:- kyun nahii karna chahthi tu shaddi… bol.. kya tujhe koi ladka pasand hai… kyat u kissi se pyaar karthi hai…
Chah:- dina aap jaanthi hai pyaar shabd ka meri zindagi mein koi mayina nahii hai.. mere liye pyaar bas ek tarah ka dikhawa hotha hai… [chah jab yeh kehthi haiu thou ski aankhon mein woh dard dikh jaatha hai, which she is under going because of her parents…]
Prerna:- dekh bachchiiii aise nahii kehthe… aur tujhe kya lagtha kya mere aur tere bade papa ka pyaar bhi ek dikhawa hai.. bol…
Chah:- badi maa, woh baat nahii hai…
Prerna:- tho phir bata mujhe kya baat hai..
Chah:- aap jaanthi hai badi maa, phir bhi aap pooch rahii hai… aap jaanthi hai kii mujhe pyaar shabd se nafrat meri so called maa kii wajah se hai… trishna kii wajah se.. us aurat kii wajah se jiski wajah se maine apne papa ko khoya.. apna bachpann rothe hue, bilakthe hue guzaara.. agar tab aap aur bade papa mujhe nahii apnathe tho pata nahii main aaj kahaan hothi… aur rahii baat aapki aur bade papa ke pyaar kii tho woh alag baat hai…
Prerna:- kyun alag hai bata mujhe…
Chah:- bas alag hai badi maa.. yeh matt pooch kyun, lekin kuch alag hai…
Prerna:- tujhe patah hai chah, tujhe jis din pyaar hoga na us din tujhe apne aur apne pyaar ke beech bhii kuch alag hii nazar aa hii jaayega…
Chah:- lekin badi maa mujhe pyaar kabhii nahii hoga..
Prerna:- chah pyaar kab , kyun , kahaan , kaise aur kisse ho jayega tumhe khud patah hii nahii chalega… chah pyaar ek aisa ehsaas hai joh bin kahe hii dastak dethi hai aur hamesha ke liye dil ko apna ghar bana lethi hai…
Chah:- main in baaton ko nahii maanthi badi maa..
Prerna:- chah mujhe vishwaas hai, tu khud mujhe ek na ek din zaroor aake kehegi kii pyaar se khoobsurat ehsaas is duniyaan mein aur koi nahii…
Chah:- badi maa mujhe nahii lagtha kii aisa kabhi hoga, lekin main aapka bhram nahii thodna nahii chahthi… theek hai ab main taiyaar hone jaa rahii hoon, mujhe university jaana hai dher ho rahii hai…
Chah yeh kehkar upar apne kamre mein chali jaathi hai..
Yahaan gayatri, prerna aur anurag bas usse jaatha hua dekhthe hai… aur phir gayatri kehthi hai:- humari yeh chotti si baat kahaan se kahaan thak pohanch gayi..
Prerna:- aap sahii keh rahii hai maa, hum hamesha se jaanthe the kii chah pyaar ke riston mein khud ko bhaand ne se durr bhaagthi hai… lekin aaj humse yeh ghalthi kaise ho gayi…
Anurag:- prerna chah pyar ke rishton se durr nahii bhaagthi, balki woh tho pyaar ke rishthe se darrthi hai..
Gayatri:- darr kaisa anurag… pyaar se bhi bhala koi kyun darega…
Anurag:- darr thi hai woh pyaar se, kyunke usse darr hai kii kahiin koi uska dil na thod de, usse beech majdaar chod na jaye… aur issi wajah se woh pyaar ke rishthe mein nahii daalna chahthi khud ko… usse darr hai kii kahiin joh kal tha woh aaj mein na badal jaye.. joh bachpan usne sunapann aur akelepann mein kata hai, yeh bartaav ussi wajah se hai… mujhe lagtha hai humein chah ko thoda waqt dena chahiye.. jis din woh khud pyaar par yakeen karne lagegi us din woh zindagi kii sahii mayine samaj jayegi….
Prerna:- darr kyun anurag…. woh bachchi hai.. uske is darr kii wajah se woh andar hii andar ghut rahii hai….. aur main usse aise nahii dekh sakthi.. meri woh bachchi jisko bas phool ke murjaane se takleef hotha hai agar woh khud murja gayi tho kya hoga…
Anurag:- prerna main samajtha hoon tumhare dil ke jazbaat ko.. lekin hum yahaan kuch nahii kar sakthe.. chah ne maano jaise khud ko ek band kamre mein band kar liya ho, aur us band kamre mein na koi khidki hai aur na koi darwaza… lekin phir bhi mujhe yaheen hai kii aisa koi tho hoga joh chah ko apne shell se bahar laayega… lekin in sab ke liye humein bas chah ko kuch waqt dena hoga…
Gayatri:- tu theek keh raha hai……
Prerna:- achcha ab baatein bohat hogayi, anurag aap zara jaiye aur dekhiye kii kya chah theek hai… aur usse keh dena agar uske liye rishthe bhi aaye na tab bhi hum usse itni jaldi yahaan se vida nahii karenge..
Anurag:- theek hai main dekhtha hoon…
Anurag chah kii kamre kii taraf jaatha hai, prerna aur gayatri baaki kaam mein lag jaathe hai…
Anurag enters chah's room & he sees that chah window ke pass khadi hui hai aur khayalon mein khoyi hui hai….
Anurah chah ke pass jaakar uske khande par apna haath rakhtha hai.. chah comes out of her thoughts.. and she gives anurag a half hearted smile…
Chah:- kya hua bade papa… koi kaam that ho mujhe bula liya hotha…
Anurag:- kyun chah main tumhare is kamre mein nahii aa saktha kya…
Chah:- nahii bade papa, aap jab bhi chahe mere kamre mein aa sakthe hai.. aap ko meri ijazat kii bhi zaroorat nahii…
Anurag:- hmm…gooddd… chal ab tu mujhe bata aaj tujhe kya hua… mood kyun kharab hai tera…
Chah:-[chah has a distant look in her eyes & she says] nahii kuch nahii…
Anurag:- dekh chah tune kuch nahii keh diya aur maine maan liya kuch nahii hai.. cha lab sach bol kya hua hai….
Chah:- kuch nahiibadi papa aaj rehab mein main ek aise ladki se mili joh wahaan is liye thi kyunke uske pyaar ne usse dhoka diya.. us pyaar ne jisse us ladki ne dil se chaha.. bade papa aap hii batayiye us ladki ko pyaar karke kya mila.. rehabilitation center mein zindagi har ka treatment… papa ko kya mila pyaar karke.. unki maut… kissi ko kya mila bade papa, pyaar karke.. jab pyaar dukh detha hai, jab pyaar aasoo detha hai tho kyun log pyaar karthe hai… kyun…. [chah starts crying telling all this.. and then she composes herself & says] bas inhi khayalon mein thi aaj, aur issi wajah se jab badi maa aur dine ne pyaar ke shabd ka istamal kiya tho main apna ghussa, apna sara frustration un par nikal baiti…. I'am sorry bade papa.. I'am really sorry.. mera koi irada nahii tha aapko, badi maa aur dina ko takleef pohanchane ka.. woh tho bas… I'am very sorry…. Sorry….
Jab khushi yeh baatein bolthi rehthi hai jab peeche se prerna aur gayatri kii awaaz aathi hai:- waise chah sorry ko tujhe hum dono se bhi kehna hai na… aakhir tune hum par bhi tho apna ghussa nikala…
Chah rushes to the both of them & holds both their hands & says:- I'am sorry.. ho sake tho mujhe maaf kar dijiye.. woh bas main kissi aur baat ka ghussa aap logon par nikal baiti…. Sorry….
Gayatri:- tujhe maafi chahiye…
Chah nods her head sweetly in a yes……
Gayatri:- agar tu chahthi hai kii main tujhe maaf kar doon tho meri ek shart hai.. agar tu meri woh shart maan jayegi tho main tujhe maaf kar doongi….
Chah:- batayiye na dina kya shart hai.. mujhe aapki har shart manzoor hai….
Gayatri:- achcha theek hai tho phir sunn meri shart yeh hai kii agar agge chalkar kabhi bhi, kahiin bhi , kissi se bhi tujhe…..[she pausing without continuing]
Chah:- mujhe kya dina batayiye na…
Gayatrri:- tujhe agar pyaar hotha hai tho tu woh baat humse kahe ya na kahe khud se kahe ya na kahe lekin tu us insaan se zaroor kehna jisse tu pyaar karthi hai.. aur phir dekhna teri zindagi mein tera woh pyaar kya bahaar laatha hai, kitni saari khushiyaan laatha hai…. Bol waada kiya kii tu jisse pyaar karegi uske saamne bolegi kii tujhe usse mohabbat hai… bol chah…
Chah thinks for a second and then says:- waada.. dina main waada karthi hoon agar agge chal kar zindagi mein mujhe kissi se pyaar ho tho main woh pyaar ka izhaar karrongi na kii usse chupakar , apne hii andar marr doongi…
Gayatri:- theek hai tho chal maine tujhe maaf kiya…
Chah:- thank you dina…
Prerna:- lekin maine abhi tujhe maaf nahii kiya chah… aur agar tujhe meri maafi chahiye tho tujhe meri bhi ek shart poori karni hogi…
Chah:- boliye badi maa, kya shart hai aap kii…
Prerna:- meri shart yeh hai kii main tujhe tab maaf karoongi, jab tu woh dp kumbkarniyon aur ek kumkaran ko jaakar neend se jagayegi..
Chah:- kyaaaaaa…
Prerna:- haan abhi tujhe jaakar sneha, kasjal aur armaan ko jagana hoga…. Main tho tabse koshish karke thak chuki hoon tho ab teri bari.. agar tu unhe jaga degi tho meri taraf se tujhe maafi granted… ab yahaan khadi khadi kya karr rahii hai, jaldi jaa jaga unhe.. unhe bhi university jaana hai air tujhe bhi late ho raha hai na.. tho jaldi karr…
Chah:- badi maa aapki shart tho bohat hii simple hai… main abhi jaathi hoon aur un theeno ko jagathi hoon.. aur waise bhi un teeno ko jagane ke liye mere pass ek tareeka hai.. tho badi maa aap apni maafi ready rakhiye, main yun gayi aur main yun aayi….
Prerna:- haann jaldi jaa…. Aur haan all the best un theeno ko uttana, itna aasan nahii hai tu jaanthi hai na….
Chah:- haan badi maa, main jaanthi hoon… lekin yeh baat aap bhi jaanthi hai na kii mujhe shart haarna pasand nahii.. tho main yun gayi aur yun aayi…
Chah apne kamre se baahar chali jaathi hai.. aur yahaan gayatri, anurag aur prerna smile seeing chah leave…
Prerna:- chah ki chehre kii muskaan humare liye bohat mayine rakhthe hai na maa…
Gayatri:- haan prerna chah kii muskaan hai tho hum sab khush hai… is ghar kii khushiyaan chah kii muskaan se hii hai…

Now we see what chah is doing, chah enters a room, the rooms walls are painted pink… we see that there are some photo frames on the walls… things are neatly organized.. and on the other side, we see a bastket ball lying on the ground….
Chah moves towards the other side where we see two beds, chah walks to one of them.. and sits beside her and pulls her blanket, which is covering her head..…
Chah:- sneha utto, dekho late ho raha hai.. tujhe university bhi tho jaana hai na…..
Sneha turns to the other side & says:- sone do na chah, neend aa rahii hai.. waise bhi aaj Sunday hai….
Chah:- sneha uth jao, dekho dair ho rahii hai.. aur aaj Sunday nahii Friday hai… chalo uttoo…..
Sneha:- chah please…
Chah:- sneha dekh mujhe teri zaroorat hai, tumse kuch kehna chahthi hoon main… dekh mujhe mere dost kii zaroorat hai.. chal uth jaana…
Chah se yeh baatein sunn kar sneha foran uth kar bait jaathi hai..
Sneha:- chah kya hua, bata kya kehna chahthi ho tum mujhse…
Chah:- main tumse kya kehna chahthi hoon.. nahii main tho tumse kuch nahii kehna chahthi…
Sneha:- chah abhi abhi tho tumne kaha kii tumhe meri zaroorat hai kuch kehna chahthi ho mujhse… bolo na chah…
Chah:- sneha woh kya hai na tum uth nahiirahii thi, issi wajah se maine tumse kaha kii main tumse kuch kehna chahthi hoon.. kyunke main jaanthi thi kii agar main aisa bolungi tho tu foran uth jayegi…
Sneha:- this is not fair..[sneha makes a face & then says] waise tumhe yeh baat kaise patah chali kii agar tum mujhse aisa kahogi tho main foran uth jaaungi…
Chah:- woh kya hai na madam, tu joh hai na bilkul apne naam ke jaisi hai… sneha matlab snehh, snehh ka matlab dosti, aur tu tho hamesha mera saath dethi hai na… main jabki dukhi hothi hoon.. jab bhi mere dil mein koi baat hothi hai, main woh baatein bas tumse hii karthi hoon na, aur tu hamesha meri baatein sunthi hai… aur issi wajah se main jaanthi thi kii agar main tumse kahoongi tho main tumse kuch kehna chahthi hoon tho tu foran uth jayegi, mera saath dene ke liye… aur maine wohii tareeka apnaya hai…. Achcha hai na….
Sneha:- how mean….
Chah:- chal tu abhi yeh mean-vean chod aur chal un dono ko bhi neend se jagana hai… chal na… [saying this chah nudges sneha]
Sneha:- haan chalo….
Sneha & chah head to the next bed.. wahaan ek aur ladki so rahii hothi hai… she is none other than kajal….
Sneha aur chah kajal ko uta ne kii koshish tho karthe hai lekin kajal nahii uththi hai… ab sneha aur chah ko ek idea soojtha hai… they both walk to the cd player aur wahaan se ek cd nikal kar play karthe hai… and the cd starts playing… & the cd is about Michael Jordan & his basket ball…
Kajal joh kii neend mein hothi hai, woh cd kii awaaz sunkar uth jaathi hai, she sits on the bed and makes a irritated face & says:- aap dono ne yeh cd kyun play kiya.. main itna achcha sapna dekh rahii thi.. aur aapne yeh cd play karke mujhe jaga diya…
Sneha:- hum ne tho bas cd play kiya tujhse kis ne keh diya kii tu jag jaye.. [sneha says this with a cheeky smile on her face]
Kajal:- snehaa tum jaanthi ho na kii Michael Jordan, mera favorite basket ball player hai aur jab main uski cd sunthi ya dekhthi hoon tho main kissi aur kaam par concentrate nahii kar sakthi… aur issi liye main so bhi nahii paayi… lekin kyat um log mujhe do min late nahii utta sakthe the…
Sneha:- kyun do minute mein kaunsa pahaad toot padtha…
Kajal:- agar aap log mujhe bas do minute late utathe tho main apna sapna tho poora kar lethi na….
Chah:- kyun kajal kya sapna dekh rahii thi, joh itna khaas hai kii aaj tu Michael Jordan ka cd bhi daal ne par chidchidi ho rahii hai….
Kajal:- diiii main dekh rahii thi kii Michael Jordan, Michael Jordan, hyeeeee.. kya game hai uski.. kya kheltha tha…
Sneha:- tu agge bolegi kii tune sapne mein Michael Jordan, ko kya karthe dekha..
Kajal:- haan tho Michael Jordan, mujhe basket ball sikhane hii waala tha, aur aapne mujhe jaga diya… kitna achcha sapna tha…
Chah:- kajal tub hi na.. chal yeh sapna tu aaj raat poori kar lena.. theek hai.. ab dair ho rahii hai jaldi kar… tum logon ko utane mein hi mera waqt beet jaayega… ab mujhe woh mr.great ko utane jaana hai..
Sneha & kajal say:- hum bhi aayenge usse jagane ke liye…
Chah:- theek hai chalo…
Now the three of them walk to the next room.. us room ka colour yellow hotha hai.. karma poori tarah se bikhra pada hai.. kahiin kitaabein hai, tho kahiin shirt, socks, shoes… aur tho aur computer bhi on hii hotha hai…
Chah, sneha aur kajal room kii haalat dekhthe hai aur kehthe hai:- ufffffffffffffff… yeh armaan bhi na… kuch bhi sambhal ke nahii rakh saktha…… sneha and kajal start setting right the room…. Aur chah armaan ko uttane jaathi hai….
Yahaan armaan joh neend mein hotha hai, woh neend mein bol raha hotha hai:- main tumse kiti baar sorry bolun jaan… maaf kar do na.. I really love you.. agli baar aisi galti nahii karoonga.. sorryyy….love… sorry ridsyy…. Sorry…… I love you ridsy…..
Yahaan chah, sneha aur kajal are surprised to hear this…. They look at each other and smile… ab jab armaan ko woh log utane kii koshish karthe hai, woh kamiyaab nahii hothe… and all the three get tired of trying to wake armaan up…
Tab kajal kehthi hai:- waise hum logon ne bohat din hogaye koi prank nahii khela, tho kyun na aaj ek prank khele….
Chah:- kaisa prank kajal.. mujhe aise kyun lagtha hai kii tere dimaak mein koi shaitaani karne ka irada hai..
Kajal:- dii aap ne bilkul sahii pehchana… mere dimaak mein armaan ko jagane ke liye ek plan hai….
Sneha:- tho bata na, hum kya kare..
Ab kajal dheemi si awaaz mein kajal aur chah se kuch kehthi hai.. aur kajal kii baat sunkar chah aur sneha ke chehre par ek badi si smile aa jaathi hai.. and they nod their heads in a yes…. Now the three of them get a tape recorder and record what ever armaan is blabbering in his sleep… and then the three of them walk to the washroom, and then after two minutes we can see the three of them walking out with a bucket in their hands… they go stand by armaan… and then chah says:- guys yeh karne se pehle hum ek baar isse utane kii koshish karthe hai..
Sneha:- okie, bas ek aakhri try.. nahii tho phir yeh paaniiii….
Kajal:- bilkul sahii…
Chah:- theek hai, ek baar koshish karthe hai….
Chah tries to wake armaan up, par koi asar nahii padtha armaan par… armaan keeps on telling ridsy..ridsy….
Now the three girls look at each other.. & then they together say:- nowwwww… aur yeh kehkar the put the bucket full of water on armaan…. Aur yahaan armaan gets up with the jolt and then he shouts:- what the hell……
Aur phir he hears chah, kajal & sneha giggling loudly….
Armaan gets off the bed and walks towards the three of them, and chah, sneha, kajal start running all around the room…
Armaan:- main tum logon ko nahii chodoonga….
Kajal:- pehle humein pakad ke tho dikhao na….
They keep running and finally all the four get tired of the running and they plonk themselves on the sofa…. Still laughing.. and armaan dikhawe ke liye ghussa tha, but even he could not stop himself from laughing…
Now armaan says:- aap logon ko bohat mazaa aatha hai na mujhe tung karne mein.. main itna achcha so raha tha aur tum logon ne saara neend kharab kar diya… aap logon ko tho apne apne university jaana hai, lekin main tho yahaan chutiyon ke liye aaya hoon na, aur dekhiye tab bhi sone nahii dethe aap mujhe…
Kajal:- achcha jii, hum log subaah uthkar apne university jaye aur tum yahaan aaraam se soothe raho…
Armaan:- haan aur woh is liye kyunke main jab Shimla mein hotha hoon tho main padayi kartha hoon… bohat mehnat kartha hoon…. Mujhe sone ke waqt bhi nahii miltha… issi liye abhi sona chahtha tha main…. Aur aap logon se yeh dekha nahii gaya…. Armaan makes a face…
Chah:- waise armaan hum jaanthe hai kii tu wahaan Shimla mein kya kartha hai…
Armaan:- kya kartha hoon ka kya matlab, main wahaan padne hii gaya hoon na.. tho zahiir si baat hai main wahiin tho karoonga na wahaan…
Sneha:- achcha tho hum bhi tho jaane tu wahaan kya padhtha hai…
Armaan:- yeh kaisa sawaal hai.. main wahaan medicine kii padayi karr raha hoon na.. tho wahii karoonga na main…
Chah:- armaan tu wahaan medicine kii padayi karr raha hai ya phir tumhare ridsy kii chehre kii…
Armaan:- whattttttttttttttttt… ridsyy….. kya ridsy…. kaun ridsy….. main kissi ridsy ko nahii jaantha…
Chah:- tho humne kab kaha kii tu ridsy ko jaantha hai.. tut ho pehli hii explanation dene lag gaya.. kyun armaan kuch pakh raha hai kya…
Armaan:- pakh raha hai.. kya pakh raha hai…
Sneha:- yeh tho tu hume batayega kii kya pakh raha hai..
Armaan:- kuch bhi tho nahii pakh raha hai…
Kajal:- ohhh.. tho main aaj samjhi agar kuch bhi pakh bhi na raha ho na, tab hii neend mein log ridsy , ridsy kehthe rehthe hai…. Theek hai tho aaj se hum bhi neend mein ridsy, ridsy kehthe rahenge…… theek hai na dii , sneha…
Chah & sneha say yes…
Armaan:- neend mein ridsy… kya main neend mein kuch bol raha tha….
Chah:- my dear brother tum neend mein kuch nahii bohat kuch bol rahe the…..
Armaan:- bohat kuch matlab… kya keh raha tha main…
Sneha:- nahii hum tujhe kyun bataye kii tu neend mein kya bol raha hai… tut ho kissi bh ridhimma ko nahii jaantha hai na.. tho hum nahii batayenge….
Armaan:- of fine… main ridsy ko jaantha hoon… woh meri dost hai..
Kajal:- dost as in….
Armaan:- dost as in ka kya matlab, dost matlab friend…
Chah:- armaan sach sach bata, friend ya friend se zyada…
Armaan:- friend se zyada ka matlab…..
Kajal:- friend se zyada ka matlab friend in inverted commas…
Sneha:- dekh armaan sach bol de… warna hum maa, papa ko sab bata denge…
Chah:- soch lo armaan agar humse koi baat chupaoge tho bohat pachthaoge…
Armaan:- uff…. Tum theeno bas mujhe pareshaan karne aaye ho na.. patah nahii Bhagwaan jii mujhse kaunsa badla lena chah rahe the kii unhone mujhse tum jaisi then behene dii….
Chah:- dekh armaan tu agar aisi baatein bolege, tho hum badi maa, bade papa se sab baatein ke denge woh bhi proof ke saath..
Arman:- proof ke saath.. kya proof hai aapke pass batayiye..
Sneha:- pehle tu hum sirf sach bata..
Armaan:- theek hai.. tho suniye ridsy meri class mate hai Shimla mein.. main usse chaar saal se jantha hoon… woh meri dost hai.. dost as in kajal kii baasha mein dost in inverted commas…
Chah, sneha & kajal together say rather shout:- whattttttttttttttttt… aur tu yeh humein ab bata raha hai…
Armaan:- shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.. meri jaan nikalogi kya… chillao matt… woh main usse abhi last mahine hii propose kiya tha… aur main tum logon se is baar yeh baat karne hii waala tha… lekin usse pehle hii aapko patah chal gaya..
Chah:- hmmm…. Tho kya tu usse pyaar kartha hai…
Armaan:- haan chah main usse bohat pyaar kartha hoon.. woh meri dost bhi hai aur pyaar bhi.. agar kissi insaan ko apna dost aur pyaar ek hii shaks mein mil jaye tho bohat achcha hotha hai…
Chah:- armaan you are sure of it right…
Armaan:- haan chah.. jab tum bhi ridsy se milogi tho tumhe bhi woh bohat achchi lagegi.. uski simplicity.. uski maasoomiyath.. sab kuch.. bohat axhchi hai woh..[saying this armaan has a dreamy look on his face..]
Chah:- agar aisi baat hai tho armaan , main tere liye bohat khush hoon… congrats brother your in love….
Armaan thoda sa sharmatha hai.. aur yeh dekh kar chah, sneha aur kajal usse chidathe hai…
Now chah says:- tho ab yeh ridsy ka poora naam kya hai…
Sneha:- let me guess rida…
Kajal:- nahii , nahii sneha yeh rida kaisa naam hua, mere khayal se ridsy ka naam hoga rudali…
Chah:- rudali kajal yahaan koi movie nahii bann rahii hai kii tune ridsy ka naam rudali rakh diya… chal armaan tu hi bata de ridsy ka naam kya hai….
Armaan:- uska naam hai ridhimma…
Kajal:- wowww… nice name…..
Sneha:- I agree….
Chah just gives a smile….
Armaan blush karr raha hotha hai.. tab chah kehthi hai:- waise armaan hum logon ne ridhimma ke naam kii tareef kii.. tere naam kii nahii… tho tu kyun itna khush ho raha hai.. tut ho aise blush karr raha hai jaise kissi nayi naveli dulhan kii kissi ne tareef kar di ho.. kyun armaan agar tu chahe tho hum teri ridsy ko badi maa, bade papa aur dina se kehkar ghar par laa sakthe hai.. kyun armaan bataye hum unhein..
Armaan:- hahaha.. very funny.. marwane ka irada hai kya.. aur waise ridhimma aur main abhi shaddi nahii karna chahthe.. hum humari padayi ke baad.. zindagi mein thoda settle hoke shaddi karenge… abhi tho bas hum ek doosre ke saath maximum time bitana chahthe hai….
Chah:- yeh idea bhi achcha hai.. issi bahane tum aur ridhimma ek doosre ko aur bhi achchi tarah se samaj loge.. aur jaan bhi loge… achcha theek hai ab tum yahaan baite raho, hum chalthe hai, humein dair ho rahii ho…
Chah, sneha aur kajal baahar jaane lagthe hai jab chah rukh kar armaan se poochthi hai:- armaan waise ridhimma tumse naraaz kyun hai…
Armaan:- naraaz.. ohh.. tho maine neend mein yeh bhi kaha….
Sneha:- haan tune yeh bhi kaha aur tho tune aur bohat kuch kaha… agar jaan na hai kii tune kya kya bole, kitni baar ridhimma ki I love you bola, kitni baar usse sorry bola, uske liye tu yeh tape sunn, [sneha throws the tape for armaan to catch.. armaan catches it…]
Armaan:- iska matlab main joh bhi neend mein bol raha tha aap logon ne usko record kiya, lekin kyun…
Kajal:- aise hii humara mann kiya.. lekin pehle aap yeh batayiye kii aap ne aisa kya kiya jisse ridhimma aapse naraaz hai…
Armaam:- woh darasal maine ridsy, I mean ridhimma.. [isse pehle kii armaan could continue further, sneha kehthi hai..]
Sneha:- dekh tu usse ridsy bula ya ridhimma bula ya phir jaan bula le lekin humein wajah bata..
Armaan is embarrassed & he says:- actually maine usse waada kiya tha kii main usse kal raat dus baje phone karoonga .. lekin kal raat main apne dosto ke saath tha, aur jab thak main raat mein aaya mujhe dair hogayi.. raat ke do baj gaye the.. aur tab mujhe usne phone kiya tho mujhe patah chala kii woh abhi thak mere phone ka intezaar karr rahii thi, aur usse jab patah chala kii main apne doston ka saath party karke main usse phone karna bhool gaya tho woh mujhse naraaz hogayi.. aur mujhse baat bhi nahii karrna chahthi thi.. aur usne phone cut kar diya… aur phir jab maine uska number try kiya tho uska number switched off aa raha tha….
Kajal:- serves you right brother…
Armaan:- shut up kajal….
Chah:- armaan kajal sahii hai.. ridhimma ne joh kiya sahii kiya… tumhe bas tumhari ghalthi kii sazaa mili hai… ab chalo manao usse…
Arman:- chah tumhare pass koi idea hai kaise manaun usse…
Isse pehle kii chah jawaab dethi Sneha kehthi hai:- ghalthi kya tune humse pooch ke kii thi… ab ghalthi tumne kii hai tho tum hii manao use.. hum teri koi madat nahii karenge…
Chah:- armaan phone kar usse aur dil se ek baar sorry bol kar dekh, I'am sure woh tujhse naraaz nahii hogi….
Armaan:- theek hai try kartha hoon….
Now the three girls start going out, when armaan stops them again..& says:- waise tum logon ka aaj university jaana zaroori hai kya..
Kajal:- kyun??
Armaan:- nahii woh main soch raha tha kii kyun na hum aaj thodi masti kare… waise bhi main parsu tho jaa hii raha hoon wapas Shimla…
Sneha:- baat tho teri sahi hai.. lekin phir humare classes…
Armaan:- sneha tut ho aise naatak kar rahii hai, jaise tu roz jaathi hai apne university ko, kabhi bunk nahii karthi tu kya apne classes ko..
Sneha:- bumk tho karthi hoon baba, lekin main bas yahii soch rahii hoon kii agar main tere liye apne classes ko bunk karoon tho kya it is worth it..
Kajal giggles listening to what sneha has said…
Armaan:- tum logon ko meri qadar hii kahaan hai… aaj mujhe is ghar mein meri value ka patah chal gaya hai… [he makes a drame baaz sad face..]
Chah:- armaan tujhe itni nautanki karne kii zaroorat nahi.. agar tu chahtha hai kii hum ghar par rahe tho theek hai, aaj hum theeno university nahii jaayenge.. khush…
Armaan:- haan…
Chah:- achcha ab hum chalthe hai.. jaldi se neeche aa jaana tu bhi…
Chah then goes down stairs, sneha aur kajal apne kamre mein jaathe hai taiyaar hone ke liye…
Chah comes down she goes and sits on the dining table, with anurag, gayatri & prerna.. they were having their breakfast…
Chah:- badi maa ab aapko mujhe maaf karna hii padega… maine aapki shart poori kar li hai…
Prerna:- tho woh theeno jag gaye.. chal theek hai.. maine tujhe maaf kiya…
Chah:- thank you badi maa…
Ab dining table par aise hii baatein chalthi rehthi hai when armaan, sneha and kajal join them.. aur phir the whole family sits together and talking.. jab armaan, kajal, sneha, chah mazaak- mazaak mein ladne lagthe hai…
Tab gayatri kehthi hai:- tum log aise kyun lad rahe ho… itne bade hogaye ho.. phir bhi bachon jaisi harkatein karthe ho.. yeh tumhare ghar mein yeh bachpana theek hai, lekin kyat um log shaddi ke baad bhi aise hii karoge…
All the four say:- shaddi nooooo…
Gayatri:- kyun nahii… bachche bade ho rahe hai tho shaddi kyun nahii….
Sneha:- dadii hum sab abhi bade nahii hue hai.. humare khud ke liye tho hum bachche the aur bachche hii rahenge.. aur baachon kii shaddi nahii karwathe dadi…
Gayatri:- haan, haan mujhe patah hai.. theek hai aaj nahii tho kabhi tho hogi na tum logon kii shaddi, tab bhi kya aise rahoge tum log…
Kajal:- haan dadi why not, aur waise bhi dadi hum kissi aur ke liye khud ko kyun badle.. sabki apni ek zindagi hothi hai..
Gayatri:- tum logon se baaton mein koi nahii jeet saktha…
Chah:- dina ab aap yeh sab baatein chodiye… sochna kya joh bhi hoga dekha jayega dina… abhi ke liye hum sab nhasthe karthe hai phir baahar sab milkar baahar jaayenge ghoom ne.. aur bade papa aaj hum office nahii jaa rahe hai…
Anurag:- theek hai.. joh hokum..
Chah:- good…. Aur armaan…
Chah mudhkar armaan kii chair kii taraf dekhthi hai, lekin armaan wahaan nahii hotha…
Chah:- armaan kahaan chala gaya…
All are wondering kii armaan kidar gaya, jab mouth organ kii awaaz aathi hai.. armaan starts singing……

Song:-

"Sochna kyaa jo bhi hogaa dekhaa jaayega…
Sochna kyaa jo bhi hogaa dekhaa jaayega…
kal ke liye aaj ko na khona…
aaj yeh na kal Aayega…
sochna kyaa jo bhi hogaa dekhaa jaayega…
jo hona hoga…
hogaa vahii soch ke tu kya payegaa…
Sochna kyaa jo bhi hogaa dekhaa jaayega…
Sochna kyaa jo bhi hogaa dekhaa jaayega…
kal ke liye aaj ko na khona…
aaj yeh na kal Aayega…
saath hai hum sab, is se badi kya khushi….
saath hai hum sab, is se badi kya khushi….
thoda muskurao, thoda gungunaao…
is hi ka toh naam zindagi…
saath ho hum sab, is se badi kya khushi….
koi naa jaane, kab aajaaye, ghadi bichad jaane ki…
sochana kyaa jo Bhi hogaa dekhaa jaayega…
sochana kyaa jo Bhi hogaa dekhaa jaayega…
kal ke liye aaj ko na khona…
aaj yeh na kal Aayega…
woh hai insaan haske, gaathe joh jiye..
zindagi salamat pyaar ki hai neemat…
aur humein kya chahiye….
woh hai insaan haske, gaathe joh jiye..
sehra mein chaman patjad mein bahaar…
hoti hai uske liye…
Sochna kyaa jo bhi hogaa dekhaa jaayega…
Sochna kyaa jo bhi hogaa dekhaa jaayega…
kal ke liye aaj ko na khona…
aaj yeh na kal Aayega…
sochna kyaa jo bhi hogaa dekhaa jaayega…
jo hona hoga…
hogaa vahii soch ke tu kya payegaa…
sochna kyaa jo bhi hogaa dekhaa jaayega…"

gayatri, anurag, prerna, chah, sneha, kajal aur armaan saara din baahar jaathe hai.. khoob masti karthe hai.. return back home late in the evening.. and end their day.. with smiles on their faces….

So guys this is the end of the second part of "Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet", I hope kii aap sabko yeh part achcha laga ho.. I hope this part was worth the wait.. and was upto your expections.. please do tell me if you find this part boring… and guys shayad aapko yeh lage kii is part mein zyada kuch nahii hua hai, woh darasal I wanted to show kii mehras ke ghar mein sabke beech kaisa rishtha hai.. issi liye I wrote the whole part only for the mehras.. next part mein I'll write only about the garewals & their life.. guys hope you don't mind kii maine heroine kii family ka pehle intro diya, woh actually I always write about our hero first na issi wajah se I wanted to try something different… hope aap sab ko meri yeh koshish pasand aayi ho…

Preview for the next part:- The Garewals.. & our hero's entry….

Ab guys yeh jaan ne ke liye kii yeh kahani agge kaise badegi.. kya modh legi.. yash aur chah kaise milenge.. ridhimma aur armaan ka kya hoga.. kya yeh do pariwaar kabhi ek ho paayenge.. etc etc sawaalon ke liye padthe rahiye "Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet…"

I'll be waiting for your comments & compliments… agar aapke pass mere liye koi suggestion ho tho please feel free and tell me… and if you don't like anything in the part then you can even criticize…. Please do comment, as your comments help me improve as a writer….

I'll post the next part soon.. once again I'am really very sorry for the delay… hope you understand….. I have written about 47 kb on the notepad, 8650 words hope it compensates the delay…

Take care…
Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Love Forever
Rajeev 😳😳😳

Surya… 😊

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

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sanjana25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

it is really gud plz contd

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Samina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#77

mind blowing part

it was defiantly worth the wait.I really liked the way u introduced the mehra family and the way u potrayed each charachter was truly amazing because you gave details about all the charachters in detail that i could actually imagine them.

The scene at the beginning were u showed prerna and gayatri's conversation was good beacuse the way they were talking to each other showed how close they were and how strong their relationship was.

I hope soon chah changes her opinion about love and full fills her promise of telling the the guy that she falls in love with how much he means to her.The scenes between Armaan and the girls was very cute the way u showed how much they cared for each other was intresting.Cant wait 2 read if ridz has forgiven armaan or not.

The way u described chah's relationship with every person in the house was really good beacuse it helped to imagine how much chah means to every one.

Cant wait 4 our heros entry.

👏

Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 16 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: sanjana25
it is really gud plz contd

thanku so much.. i'll surely continue soon...😊

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
mind blowing part
it was defiantly worth the wait.I really liked the way u introduced the mehra family and the way u potrayed each charachter was truly amazing because you gave details about all the charachters in detail that i could actually imagine them.

The scene at the beginning were u showed prerna and gayatri's conversation was good beacuse the way they were talking to each other showed how close they were and how strong their relationship was.

I hope soon chah changes her opinion about love and full fills her promise of telling the the guy that she falls in love with how much he means to her.The scenes between Armaan and the girls was very cute the way u showed how much they cared for each other was intresting.Cant wait 2 read if ridz has forgiven armaan or not.

The way u described chah's relationship with every person in the house was really good beacuse it helped to imagine how much chah means to every one.

Cant wait 4 our heros entry.

👏

thank you so much... me glad that you liked the way i introduced the heroine's family.... this part was necessary because i wanted to show chah's bonding with her family.. this will help the story in the future..... i'll surely continue soon.. thank you once again....😊