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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

interesting gr8 part cont soon

Wow it was so emotional. Yash aur Chah dono ki hi kahani bahut touching hai. I'd love to read the next part. Pls UD soon coz I'm dying to knw wats gonna happen next.

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wow it was so emotional. Yash aur Chah dono ki hi kahani bahut touching hai. I'd love to read the next part. Pls UD soon coz I'm dying to knw wats gonna happen next.

hi surili...........i hope tumhe mera comment achcha lage waise tumhari tarah khass nahi hoga lekin likhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon..............to kahani shuru hoti hai mere janam se pehle se....kafi interstring plot hai story ka..................gulshan aur preeto ne bina kuch jane pehchane lalit ki shaadi veena se tai kar di lekin i am not surpirized kyunki pehle ke jamane me aisa hota tha lekin main anurag ki baat se bilkul sehmat hoon ki ek taraf mandira hai jise woh janta bhi nahi ki woh use pyaar karti hai aur ek tarah uska parivar hai jo sirf lalit ki khushi chahta hai...........i am sure ki maa baap apne bacho ko best dena chahte hai lekin kabhi kabhi bache hi nahi samaj pate.......lekin kehte hai jo hota hai usme upperwali ki marzi hoti hai.......aakhir kar veena aur lalit ki shaadi ho hi jati hai lekin saath me anurag aur chetan ki bhi........lagta hai dono ghar me shaadi apne saath toofan leke aa rahi hai......ek taraf lalit hai jo phir se mandira ke saath............pata nahi lekin main bhi pyaar ki aad me chupa yeh labz affair ko sabse jyada nafart karti hoon...........shayad itna ki koi andaza bhi nahi laga sakta.........lalit ne sirf veena ko hi nahi balke apne bete yash aur apne pure parivar ko dhoka diya........sharam aati hai lalit ko yash ka dad kehte muje..........and i am sure ki whu yash hates lalit.........aur ab to aafat ki jad swayam bhi saath rehne laga hai...........kehte hai ki shaitan ka dimaag chote se hi bahot shatir hota hai..........aur yaha to swayam yash ki her khushi ko chinne me laga hai.......lekin agar usne aage kuch bhi aisa kiya to mujse bura koi nahi hoga lekin i am sure ki akshat and rishi will take care of everything..............aur dusri aur hai chetan ki biwi trishna....how loose character.............i mean koi maa kaise apni beti se nafrat kar sakti hai.........khaas karke ek aurat ka dil to kisi bhi bache ki rone ki aahat se pigal jata hai lekin kehte hai ki dayan to apne hi bache ko nigal jati hai to yeh kya hai..........lekin i am so glad ki anurag aur prerna gave love that chah needed when she was child........i am glad ki trishna aur mandira jaise bala hamesha ke liye tal gayi lekin muje darr hai ki kahi trishna wapas na aaye............i can understand now ki why chah hates the word love bcoz her mother hated her............i hope to see some fun and romance in the college kyunki ab ki kahani 13 saal aage janewali hai to...............lekin muje darr hai ki yeh swayam college me kuch karne wala hai...kahi yash aur chah ke beech...........agar usne aisa kiya to i swear main use bhi uski maa ke pass pahuncha dungi.............ple ple ple jaldi se next part likho........kyunki ab chah aur yash ki mulaqat ka beshabri se intzaar hai.........ab jab tak yeh dono mil nahi jate muje neend nahi aayegi............is liye ple ab meri raato ki neend muje wapas lauta do.............now coming to the next part guess......i think chah and yash will meet in the college but swayam had his eyes on chah...........yash and chah had a rough friendship and swayam uska faiyda lega......swayam chah ke samne achcha banne ki aur yash ko neecha dikhane ki koshish karega..........ple tell me how much right i am......thank u so much for this wonderful starting of this story...........it is mind blowing..............

amazing part

gr8 yr bht acha part tha yr.i was busy due 2 exams bt phr b mene perha.plz continue soon.