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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hey nice part. Actually I was kinda laughing in 1st scene when Yash was all around Chah's mind or may be heart, but poor girl was trying hard to deny it n convince herself dat she doesnt luv Yash. Uski lagadar koshish se mujhe bara maja aa raha tha. I hope woh jaldi hi samajh jaye k Yash se pyaar na karna namumkin hai......hehehe.

And on this side, Yash was superb. Maine socha tha he wud be sad sad but he is very happy imagining abt his lovely future. And i'm truly happy 4 him. Achha plan banaya janab ne aur to aur chand se thumbs up bhi le li....lol. I luved the convo of Yash n Akshat. Akshat is really a gr8 frnd.

Btw I luv the song. Its one of my favs. Aur Yash aur Chah dono ek dusre ko imagine kar rahe the-ye dekh kar mai bahut khush hu. I just hope sab jaldi se thik ho jaye.

Liked the family scene also. Specially Anurag-Prerna's scene.

Anyways, me w8ing eagerly 2 knw abt Yash-Chah past. But next part me uss Idiot ko bhi jhelna padega. But never mind. Yash k ate hi sari chir durr ho jayegi.

Pls continue soon. N congrats that ur internship is over.



thanku so much dear.... haan right chah ke dil-dimaak par yash chah gaya woh bhii poori tarah se... aur humara joh hero hai he is different, issi liye udaas hone ke bajaye woh khush hoke apne aur chah ke beautiful future kii planning karr raha hai... you even i love the song soniyo, it is just so beautiful... swayam ko bas thoda sa jhelna padega.... i'll surely try & continue soon....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow suri awesome part happy that chah has realised her love 4 yash gr8 part cont soon



thanku so much jyothi...yaa chah realized her love.. par abhi ikraar durr hai... i'll surely try & continue soon...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

woowww superb part surya😛............................buhat he acha part tha.....................finally yash chah ki dil o dimaag per chah he gaya👏............................chah yash ko kitna yad karti hai aur yeh admit bhi karle thi hai ky woh uss se pyaar karti hai..........................so nice yar😳.......................lekin apne past ki wajah se pyaar nai kar sakhti😭.............................yash ka plan tu buhat he acha hai...............................lkin agar chah ko sab kuch pata chal gaya yeh yash hai.............................tu woh aur bhi gussa ho jaye gi...............................yash ki imagination tu haqeeqat lag rahi thi................................last part buhat he acha tha.........................loving anurag and prena👏.......................con't sooon



thanku so much dear... yes chah ke dil par yash ka jadoo chal gaya....chah ko thoda waqt lagega to come out of everything... but all will be fine.. & don't worry yash sambhal lega he wont goof up his plan... i'll sutely continue soon...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah dear🤗 its really rocking one⭐️ superb😍 so cute😊 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"I want some who will never leave my side,
I want someone who will say 'I love you' and mean it,
I want someone who will watch a Friday night movie with me,
I want someone who will put me in a happy mood when I'm in a bad one,
I want someone who will hold me when I'm scared,
I want someone who will give me there jacket when I'm cold,
I want...............you "

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Nidha



nidha thanku so much..i'am glad you liked it..& the lines you write are too good.. i'll try & continue soon...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part

i really liked the way u potrayed chah and yash's emotions and the way u showed chah's state of mind.The scene in the plane were chah is only thinking about yash and was trying to convince her self that she doesn't love yash was amazingly described.The scene were yash talks about chah to the moon was an really intresting scene and i really liked the plan that yash made in order to make chah realise of her love and also to make his presence felt in chah's life. Akshat is really an intresting charachter i really liked the way he always makes yash happy and gives him good advice.The scenes between chah and her family were really nice, cant wait 2 read the next part.👏


thanku so much dear... i'am glad you liked it.. even i like yash & the moon's scenes..they are so sweet.. don't worry just give chah some time... i'll surely try & continue soon..😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

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surya dear atlast u updated................. was waiting for the update for many days............. and congrats for completing ur internship and ur project getting approved................ and ya me too saw the promo................. my god hes damn handsome as always............. just waiting for the telecast time to be announced.................
nice part............... thought u will start with the flashback but it didnt................ the curiosity and the wait is adding more spice to the flashback now to me............... chah oh god when will she accept the truth abt her love for yash.......... i feel like me going to her and shaking her too bad and make her to accept it.............. and yash is dreaming with open eyes.............wah................ but the dream sequence was really very beautiful....... ek pal ke liye laga thaki as like in the serials chah came back and told her true feelings to him..................... ha ha ha......... but yash when talking to the moon was really cute and is like a kid doing all these.............. aki and yash convo was really nice.............. their relationship is very clearly shown in every part............ the mehra family is like a happy family just like yash's family........ full of life and happiness and enjoyment................. just to exclude lalit and swayam in yash family..............the dream sequence in the rain was romantic............ chah also in reality dreams abt yash and her dancing and in each others arms................... but doesnt accept it...........
this time u delayed dear hope next time u dont but post the next part and the remaining very quickly.......... oh god in the next part lalit and swayam will be there..... really have to tolerate this swayam idiot...............and better u soon start with the flashback dear................aur der mat kar.............cont soon..........



deepa i agree Rajeev looks very good in the promo.... dear thanku so much for comments... actually the flashback had to start but as i started typing woh thoda badal gaya..don't worry yash aur chah milenge zaroor milenge...thanku..i'll surely post the next part soon..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: goodkashish

hi surili....first i m so happy as i m the first one to comment on ur ff.........OMG...Fantastic....beautiful n wonderful part....i just loved it....ab comment karna kaha se shuru karoon woh samaj me nahi aata kyunki tumne part itni gehrai se likha hai ki kuch samaj me hi nahi aata....bas padhti gayi aur chah aur yash ki kahani me khoti gayi main to.....ab to muje bhi yakeen hone laga ki barso kiya hua intzaar bhi kahi na kahi pyaar me badal jata hai......kyunki pyaar to kuch ek waqt ki tarah hai...jo apni marzi se kahi pe bhi tham jata hai....kya kare yeh pyaar pe jo bas nahi rehta aur yeh pyaar hai jo apni hi aur se kuch na kuch humse karvata hai..........lekin yeh pyaar bhi uski tarah hai na hoke bhi hota hai aur hokar bhi nahi hota................khiar ab baat karte hai kuch chah ki.......chah tum teen saal yash se durr rehne ke bad bhi yash ko bhul nahi payi to phir yeh shimla wali mulaqat ke bina to yash ko bhulna namumkin sa hai kyunki is bar tumhara yakeen sach me badal gaya hai ki yash aaj bhi tumhara intzarr kar raha hai.......chah mere khayal se bahot hi ziddi kisam ki ladki hai...kyunki koi dusman bhi itna pyaar karnewale insaan ko dekhke badal jata aur chah to uski dost hoke hi use samaj nahi rahi to phit dusro ka kya kehna................main chah ko khusnaseeb kahoon ki badnaseeb yeh samaj me nahi aa raha kyunki khusnaseeb woh isliye ki aaj bhi yash jaisa dost use deewano ki tarah pyaar karta hai aur badnaseeb is liye kyunki woh apne pyaar ko dubara thokar marke chali aaye..........kehte hai ki dusra moka aasani se nahi milata aur milne ke bad gawane pe to aap ko teesra moka koi nahi deta.......lekin hamara yash hai jo aaj bhi itna kuch hone ke bad bhi uske pyaar me koi kami nahi aayi.............lekin is bar kuch alag hua to woh yeh ki aakhir kar chah ne apne aap se yeh keh diya ki woh yash se pyaar karti hai aur nahi kabhi yash ki bhul sakti hai..........pata nahi ki kaise chah apne andar itne sare jasbat ko kaid karke rakh sakti hai jab ki woh to janti hai ki samne yash apni baahein felaye uska intzaar kar raha hai.....woh to khud jan bujke apni feeling ko mar rahi hai............pata nahi chah ke mann me kya chal raha hai lekin woh yash ko leke hamesha se hi koi na koi galat faisla karti hai..............kabhi kabhi sochti hoon ki shayad kabhi chah yash ki dost hi na bani hoti to achcha hota...kamse kam dono itna tadapte to nahi............lekin yeh yash hai na jo her namumkin ko mumkin me badalne wala hai......aur uski baatein jitni confidant hai ki ab to akshat bhi chah ko bhabhi kehne laga..........by the way i just love the idea of yash...lekin muje darr hai ki kahi yeh baat chah ko pata chal gayi to iska result kuch ulta hi na aaye ......kyunki chah ko dhoka aur jooth bolnewale logo se nafrat jo hai..........pata nahi yeh yash kis tarah se chah ko tang karega taki chah yash ke pass wapas chali jaye...........kyunki woh bhi bahot se tarike hai.......lekin yash ka tarika to bahot hi alag hi hoga...........i still cant believe ki aaj bhi yash jaise insaan hote hai lekin dusre hi pal yakeen hota hai ki yash to sirf kahani ka hissa ho sakta hai.............yash ki woh chand se baat karna usse vaada karna ....kitna achcha lagta hai lekin darr bhi hai ki kya yeh vaada pura bhi hoga kabhi.........kya yash ke sapne sapne hi rehnewale hai..........kya kabhi yash ko woh labzo haqeeqat me nahi sunke ko milenge..........kitna khush dikhai deta tha jab woh chah ko apni baahoin me mehsoos karta hai aur phir kitna bawla ho gaya jab use yeh pata chala ki waha pe to koi chah thi hi nahi.............tab main janti hoon ki uska dil yahi keh raha hoga ki kash uski zindagi si sapne me thehar jati to kitna sukoon milta use..................lekin ab intzaar hai uski pichli zindagi ka..........ple is bar to zaroor bata na ki kya hua tha.............it was a very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very beautiful partttt....👏......pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continueeeeeeeeeee soonnnnnnnnnn...........thanks for pm..

love
Kashish

kashu dear no thankoo for your comments.. tumhare comments hamesha bade hii mastt hothe hai.. mujhe tumhare comments padhne mein bohat zyada mazaa aatha hai... aur tum jab comment karti ho tho har aspect ko dekhthi ho & i really love that.. sahii kaha tumne intezaar bhii pyaar mein badal jaatha hai.. don't worry chah aur yash ka milna tho likha hai.. lekin shayad uske liye thoda waqt lag jaye... and yash ka plan backfire hoga ya nahii.. yeh tho waqt hii batayega..hehehe...i'll surely try & continue soon..😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
grt part once again
yaar..!
it was amazing lol...! keep on goin...!
waitin 2 c de nct prt...!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: .x.Shilky.x.

grt part once again
yaar..!
it was amazing lol...! keep on goin...!
waitin 2 c de nct prt...!


thanku so much...i'am glad you like it.. will try & continue soon...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Lovely part.. really liked it.. Plzz continue soon...

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