Mini AR - Trace your dreams (completed) - Page 19

hey d really nice part i must say u r a fab writer yaar.......

hi harika

thks for the pm dear

it was excellent part

muski and rahul's marriage was hilarious

updat sooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

thanks a lot for the lovely comments guys, will get back to reply later..love u all🤗

hey

awwwwwwwwwwwwww...................

dat was relllllllllyyyyyyyyyyy a sweeeeettttttttttttt n cuteeeeeeeeeeeee prt😳

luvedddd it

cont super soooooooonnnnnnnnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru

luvly prt.. thnxx 4 d pm.. update ssoon

Originally posted by: rakshi_sweety

Cute Part... loved the concept...
Rakshita

thanks rakshita

Originally posted by: arvanu

hey harika,

awesome..awesome..awesome,dear.........this is was better than the first.......i loved it......the last scene was too funny.......but the last dialogue was ahem...too cute!!!!!😳

do continue soon....and will check ur update next sunday then!!!

-surbhi😊

thanks surbhi

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg

hi da!!

such a kool part....awsum part

luvd ma heroes jhatkas style of talking in riddles.......

i luvd de wy armi is porteayed in ur ff..naughty 2 de core

oh mann!!i cnt wait 4 sunday...

bt hav 2...hmm..nywyz wel done..

lukin 4wd 2 ur nxt update

luv u lts

ashu

thank ashu

Originally posted by: Sterva

nice one.

i know this part was long but can u make d nxt part longer

as u update once a week.

thanks, will def try to write a longer one next time

Originally posted by: ArmiandRidz4eva

hey Harika was waiting for this to be updated

now theres another long wait!!

loved the cliff you put at the end waiting eagerly to know Ridz response

seriously love your writing style for this one

Sania

thanks sania

Originally posted by: nyla_193

amazinggg part
love the way you write this one
armi sounds soo mysterious talkin in riddles n all
so sweet the way he kept on looking at ridz over the table
so they are both noticing eachother.... great !!
awesome part
cnt wait til nxt sunday...

thank you

Originally posted by: suv.patki

Hey Harika. Part 2 was good ... long and satisfying. Armaan is such a nut. He was not ready to tell Ridz about him. Such a ...

Well, not sure where all this leading to. Was the dream just a way to reach Armaan or something else hidden in that? Waiting for you to reveal further. And loved the part.

Cheers,
Suvarna

thanks suvarna, hehe armaan such a ??? hmm?? hehe

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey harika
awesome part
uff finally relieved that rahul is muski's partner
um sure when ridz was staring at him n was curious abt his identity thats why he was talking to her in riddles lolz
nice logic armi
i enjoyed this part
very well written haru dear
update soon

thanks a lot prerna

Originally posted by: meow23

brilliant prtttttttttttttt

thanks lakshmi

reserved

be back in 5 mins

back edited:

ok
lemme tell u i loved the update
so sorry to be late to comment
i didnt think there was anything missing at all
may be u felt it coz there was less of ridz in here
but then it was essential to get muskaan and her story out
loved your sense of humor Harika
hun,u so remind me of deeps
can't wait for her to dream again,
and u know its gona be armaan who she'd dream of lolz
muski's story was hilarious btw

me totally hooked,waiting for sunday
just love the way u write
flawless and fun👏

thanks for the pm
love
Hina
👏