Mini AR - Trace your dreams (completed) - Page 18

Hey Harika. Part 2 was good ... long and satisfying. Armaan is such a nut. He was not ready to tell Ridz about him. Such a ...

hey harika
awesome part
uff finally relieved that rahul is muski's partner
um sure when ridz was staring at him n was curious abt his identity thats why he was talking to her in riddles lolz
nice logic armi
i enjoyed this part
very well written haru dear
update soon

hot hot hot hot.....!!!!!!!!!!!!! d only thng da cmes to ma mind fr the fic..

superb part.please don't forget to pm me.😊

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh, harika....

i am just floored by armaan's last sentence...do u really think u shouldnt have come to meet us???

terrific part, terrific narration...and the connection between two strangers at firsrt glance...the way you haev descried it is fabulous!

amazing part again!! phew armaan is NOT muski's hubby hehe

harika...soooooooo sorry!!! i just read your last two parts...they were too good. Poor Muskaan...but i have to say the wedding story was pretty funny...hehe u and ur creative mindu knew exactly how to..make the story sound muskaanish..hehe.
Aww and Armaan ridz meeting was tooo cute...hehe talking in riddles lol.
I think armaan has already started falling ofr ridz....love at first sight maybe?? Can't wait for next sunday!!
Your doing such a great job yaar!! Rlly loving ur story =]

luv mira

haahha harika...tht was a super update!! lol i luv armaan...wats wit him and his char...ya yaaa armaan effect!! :D
bt it was sooo funny..and realistic!!

will await nxt sunday :)

nij~

oh god harika my grin refuses to go from the second i see ur pm for an update roght upto the end of the part n then for many more mins./....o man....hahahah..i duno how to nsay this but u make such a mix of emotions n they still gell in superbly!...her tension, anticipation irritation n of course atraction all of it n so much more from the existence of that one man in the room lolzzzz....it was a crazye her part n i think thats wats most adoble....the narrative style is a complete fit it gives life to this fic in a very special way hun, n need not have bothered ur sefl abt the flow at all....it was merging from one bit to another really well....

kudos hun, uv been a super rocker with writing since the start of this fic, it keeps getting better with each part....

ps: i had been sertain tjhe guy was armaan last tim n that he wud just know RM...but i had thot he wud be R's brother....frend...hmmm ...:)