Mini AR - Trace your dreams (completed) - Page 20

Originally posted by: lightening

hot hot hot hot.....!!!!!!!!!!!!! d only thng da cmes to ma mind fr the fic..

thank you

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

superb part.please don't forget to pm me.😊

thank you, was late for pms this time :(

Originally posted by: *tiny*

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh, harika....

i am just floored by armaan's last sentence...do u really think u shouldnt have come to meet us???

terrific part, terrific narration...and the connection between two strangers at firsrt glance...the way you haev descried it is fabulous!

thank you soo much!! i m so happyyy :)

Originally posted by: musicdiva

amazing part again!! phew armaan is NOT muski's hubby hehe

rahul and muski are soo cute!

armaan is such a flirt! in a cute way though! hehe

and "SANGEET PAL SINGH" ahaha i couldnt stop laughing!!!

cant wait till ur next update!!

thanks simi :) hehe, couldnt think of a more silly alliance proposal for muski

Originally posted by: Gotta_luv_KYPH

harika...soooooooo sorry!!! i just read your last two parts...they were too good. Poor Muskaan...but i have to say the wedding story was pretty funny...hehe u and ur creative mindu knew exactly how to..make the story sound muskaanish..hehe.
Aww and Armaan ridz meeting was tooo cute...hehe talking in riddles lol.
I think armaan has already started falling ofr ridz....love at first sight maybe?? Can't wait for next sunday!!
Your doing such a great job yaar!! Rlly loving ur story =]

luv mira

thanks mira....muskaanish!! 😲😃

Originally posted by: missypatel

haahha harika...tht was a super update!! lol i luv armaan...wats wit him and his char...ya yaaa armaan effect!! :D
bt it was sooo funny..and realistic!!

will await nxt sunday :)

nij~

thanks nij

Originally posted by: spln

oh god harika my grin refuses to go from the second i see ur pm for an update roght upto the end of the part n then for many more mins./....o man....hahahah..i duno how to nsay this but u make such a mix of emotions n they still gell in superbly!...her tension, anticipation irritation n of course atraction all of it n so much more from the existence of that one man in the room lolzzzz....it was a crazye her part n i think thats wats most adoble....the narrative style is a complete fit it gives life to this fic in a very special way hun, n need not have bothered ur sefl abt the flow at all....it was merging from one bit to another really well....

kudos hun, uv been a super rocker with writing since the start of this fic, it keeps getting better with each part....

ps: i had been sertain tjhe guy was armaan last tim n that he wud just know RM...but i had thot he wud be R's brother....frend...hmmm ...:)

NJ!!! thanks dear!! its so flattering to read this...me grinning at ur comment :D ya, who else can have those beautiful grey eyes n look incredibly handsome, hai na ;)

Originally posted by: santhideepu

Harika.. it was just superb!!! liked it alot.. loved the friendship talk at their place.Rahul is so understanding.. Mu is her usual self.. now waiting eagerly to know what happens between AR...

thanks prashanti :)

Originally posted by: ABHA_DMG

hey d really nice part i must say u r a fab writer yaar.......

thanks abha :)

Originally posted by: saridena

hi harika

thks for the pm dear

it was excellent part

muski and rahul's marriage was hilarious

updat sooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

thanks soumya

Originally posted by: kvn1983

waoh🤗 its really a superb one⭐️ so armaan is not muskaan's husband😛😛 why he lied to ridhima😆 and muskaan love story is superb😉 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"Kaash aisa ho ki tumko tumse chura loon,
waqt ko rok kar waqt se ek din chura loon,
tum paas ho to is raat se ek raat chura loon,
tum saath ho to is jahan se ye jahan chura loon."

thanks nidha :)

Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey

awwwwwwwwwwwwww...................

dat was relllllllllyyyyyyyyyyy a sweeeeettttttttttttt n cuteeeeeeeeeeeee prt😳

luvedddd it

cont super soooooooonnnnnnnnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru

thanks mahru

Originally posted by: aravi

heyyyyyyyyyy harika!!!!!!!!! am loving d storyline esp armaan hez such a sweetheart naa!!!!!!! gosh he irritated ridzy somuch!!!!!!! i loved d sense of humour!!!!!! why does it has to b a small ff yaar??????? itz soooooooooo GOOD!!!! love ya aravi

thanks aravi :) yaar, i cant write many parts with this concept, but will try hun!!

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

reserved

be back in 5 mins

back edited:

ok
lemme tell u i loved the update
so sorry to be late to comment
i didnt think there was anything missing at all
may be u felt it coz there was less of ridz in here
but then it was essential to get muskaan and her story out
loved your sense of humor Harika
hun,u so remind me of deeps
can't wait for her to dream again,
and u know its gona be armaan who she'd dream of lolz
muski's story was hilarious btw

me totally hooked,waiting for sunday
just love the way u write
flawless and fun👏

thanks for the pm
love
Hina
👏

hey hina, thank a bunch!! ya, that may be the reason, dint realise until u said...who is deeps? hehe, ya u'll read her dreams soon...thanx for the lovely comment n eye opener😉😃

Originally posted by: dmglovernimisha

lovely....

thanx nimisha, will get back soon with a nickname for u😆

Omg Harika hun!! I am in love widur FF. U penned it beautifully i must say!! The crazy ridz and notty Armaan!! LOVELY update<33

ohhh thank goodness hes not muskis hubby!!!! wow i love the chemistry between the 2, flirting and bickering! its very cute! i just love the story so far, and your writting is wonderful! feel bad for muskaan, hope she works it out with her family! and it looks like both armaan and riddhima have fallen for each other in the first meeting! verrrryyyy good! please continue soon!

Hey harika