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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Sonia great finish to the ff
loved reading it
Sania
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Posted: 16 years ago
sexy wrap up sonia....:D it was a bit of a surprise..niceee one ter!!
feel lke hvin sum coffee nw..(hate coffee!)

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Posted: 16 years ago
hi sonia
thks for the pm dear
awesome ending
superb writing
write more
and do pm me
luv soumya
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks for pm. sorry for late reply. i was busy with my clases.
great ending. lovely confessing. you endes it beautifully. dedicating the book to her was soo sweet. confessing in her cafe was soo cute. i loved it.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Sonia... first of all i m soooooooooo sorry for d late reply...

So Riddima & Muskaan r sisters... & Riddima had a crush over Rahul... dat was so sweet of Riddima to wait for her secret love…😳 & she keeps waiting for eight months… very nice… d way u wrote d introduction was very different & nice... & I loved d poem/ song "Ocean apart day after day…" 😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

Now for d Part 1...

In part 1… d way u've described Riddima's response on Armaan's arrival was very sweet… so Armaan love cricket… me too… though I don't get much time to watch it these days…😕 but I love it… Hmm… he invited her to his book launch…😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sonia!
this was wonderful!
loved the way that u have penned the story!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi again Sonia... Part 2...

Sorry I got stuck wid my guests on SUNDAY as well… he I go…

Wow... Muskaan is pregnant... so sweet...😊 Riddima had to bribe Anji wid shopping... oops... I enjoyed dat stalking bit of their convo... Armaan is very charming... like always... d line where Armaan said - "This beautiful smile is the dress code for you"...😍 it showed all his charms at work... Hmm… I m thinking wat cud b d surprise…???❓

I guess I shud read d next part right away…😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

I m back again wid my reply on part 3... Sorry was caught by another set of guests...

It was sooooooo smooth starter... d whole scene of Riddima entering d party hall... staring at his books... den him... & den Armaan's entry leaving her into daze...😍 it was all so practically romantic... I mean she is really 'love stoned' as u stated her...😳 Armaan's confession was very nice put up..."Your the one angel he has sent for me"... dis line took it all away... superb... I enjoyed reading d scene where d unspoken words flew b/w d two lovers... D ending was more dan just romantic...😳 I cud feel d emotions flowing between dem... It was fantastic...👏 👏 👏 but I was surprised by d fact dat it was such a short story... I was expecting it to b a bit longer...😕

Thanx for d PMs Sonia... & i m sorry again for d delayed comments...

Love
- Sheetal
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Sonu!
What a part! I loved it...Like seriously, the ambiance you created...the descriptions you expressed, the thoughts--everything was just out of this world...You did a brilliant job with this fic! Why can't your Armaan be real? LOL.
Love, Anita

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