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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#111

heyy sonu cummon yaar!!!! u were mindblowing dis time 🤗!!!!!!! already told you how much i adore ur romantic endings!!!!! really all of it was sooo cute n adorable 😳😳😳 told u naa ur emotional moments are best described!!!!it was a wonderful journey u shud try more of dis!!!!👏 love u tons aravi

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Sheetal

@er.Sheetal

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#112

Hi Sonia... thanx for d PM.

I m sorry, i m away at d moment... So cant read & reply... But i will definitely comment back once i m back home.

Love

- Sheetal

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#113

Hey I really loved the last part, mind blowing, too good. Keep it up.Begin a new FF soon.

Kashish

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#114

hey sonu
umazing part yaar
truly mesmerizing dear
i felt like floating in the air when i was reading this part
beauttiful dear
update other ffs soon

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Maulik

@patem031

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#115

---------wht can i say, im still shocked by the way yu wrote dis prt
its like, cant explain in words, all the expressions nd all the thinking of ridz, yu described it so perfectlynd it ws mindblowin, wish i cud write like tht so beautifully, tht i kept scrolling down to see nd hope tht the prt is nt ended bt it ws at lst, bt still i ws so happy to read dis prt
dis story ws jst 3 prts nd the storyline wsnt tht big bt yur prts did tht job
wish nd hope yu write another one of dis type of fanfic😃

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#116

hey sonia wow girl that is such a memorizing tale of love adored it completely....great work!

her weakness in his love beoming her strength ..it was all well portrayed nm his unconditional love...great job!

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maryam

@mar-

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#117

woooooooow grt ending really goood

tnx for the pm

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#118

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(sonu i will commetn soon...
u knw i sneaked out of my room n came to my brod room to use d comp to read ur fic as i saw yr pm in d evening bt didnt have tym to read it den...n abhi everyone in my house is sleeping
i jus came to read it
n abhi k liyay aap ne kya mast part likha hai
IT WS BRILLIANT AS ALWAYS
will commetn tomorrow morning
gtg now
luv u loads
soni

CONTINUED!!!
Hey sonu!!!
AND ONCE AGAIN SONU HAS PROVED TO B D BEST FF RITER ON DIS FORUM!!!
CLAPPING!!!
hehehe!
Yaar i think i shud start stealing ur idea from ur mind now!!!
hehe
U have a mind of einstein...hehe
yaar ur ideas ur concepts ur styleS of riting are just soooooooooo original n i mean d concepts r soooooooo awesum!!! n plus ur style of riting is jus so natural k HAYYYEEEEEEE MAR JAWAN!!!
hehe
Yaar ap to CHAAA gayi ho!!! (CHAAA means sumthing lyk being d king or u know RAAJ KARNA!!)
hnmmm
so cumin to this ff!!!
yaar ur last parttttt ws AMAZINGGGGGGGGG!!!!
IT WS JUS SOOOOOOOOO SOOOOOOOOOO SOOOOOOOOOOOO AWESUM!!!
I WS LK SMILING ALL D WAY READING IT....
ITWS JUS SOOOO ROMANTIC!!!!!!!
I AGAIN FELL IN LOVE WID U!!!
HAHA!!!
TOH THIS PART WS AS ALWAYS
AWESUM!!!
BRILLIANT!!!
ANTTTTTT!!!
SET!!!!!
AMAZING!!!
LOVELY!!!
BEUTIFUL!!!
TREMENDOUS!!!
and ONCE AGAIN SONI IS OUT OF WORDS!!!
yaar aap itna acha likhti ho k u jus leave me speechless!!!
I CANT HELP IT!!!
BT SACH KAHOON TOH I FEEL LYK POORE DIN AAPKO PRAISE KARTI RAHOON!!
U R TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!

Hnm cumin to d SHAIR...as my comment will b incomplete widouit!!!

"TU KHUSH RAHE HAMESHA,
DUA YEH HUMARI HAI.
POORI DUNIYA TERI QADAR KARE,
DUA YEH HUMAARI HAI."

MEANING: i will pray tht the whole world cares for u n gives u d due respect u desserve n den i pray tht wid all dis u always stay happy!!!

"YEH ZINDAGI HAI CHOTI SI,
GAWAANA MATT ISSE,
JITNI KHUSHI BAANT HO SAKTI
BAANT LO IS MEIN."

MEANING: well! yf is very short so dun let it go in waste bt keep doing wht u r doing...i.e riting fics n making others happy...jus spread as much happinness as u cn!!!

so i had two shairs for u today!!!
hnmm
soooooooooo i guess d comment is getting longer n longer n if i keep riting it wudnt end n plus u'll get bored
s em gonna stop
n plus u already know k i cant put my feelings in WORDS!!! IT WS THT GOOD!!!
GR8 WORK YAAR
AAP NE ONCE AGAIN KAMAAL KAR DIYA
hehe
BT EK REQUEST HAI...PLSSS IS FF KA EPILOGUE ZAROOR LIKHNA AAP!!!PLSSSSSS
THNKUUUU
LUV U ALWAYSSSSSSSSS
SONI

Edited by nix nd soni - 16 years ago

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Amna Malik

@amna malik

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#119

Thank u so much for ur PM. Was waiting for it for a long time. Hey u said there are 2-3 parts left.....y did u end it so soon?

Anyways it was a FAB part. What makes it even better is tht u posted it on shilpa's bday. As i said in my previous comments i LOVE ur writiing style. The way u describe ridz feelings is amazing.....its like we r in her place n can almost feel wht she is feeling.

Ur angel of my life...........tht was so sweet. He mentioned her in his speech...tht was even sweeter. But the best part came in the end, in the cafe. THeir confession was amazing. 'I love u my angel'........she waited so long to hear tht. Loved the confession, the hug and the kiss.

Thx for such a wonderful story sonu. U did an awesome job👏👏👏