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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothilakshmi

I am a new reader of ur FF. Believe me it is simply amazing. i just enjoyed it. Looking forward to the next update.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

thank u for reading it
thank u
i'll ud today itself
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Posted: 16 years ago
just read some parts of ur fanfic ,its really gud,specially the concept of the fan fic completely different. i really liked the friendship between sana and raj.and the way raj convinces sana to be the part of the show.
ud soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi! Guys. Sorry for the delay of the ud

My exams are off now,

I got 92.77% and I'm really happy with ma result

Next ud

(sana and rk were goint out of the office after completeting the 2 hrs in office )

rk-sana

sana-hmmm

rk-I think night club abhi kula hota hai to''''..

sana-kya? U mean hum abhi club jaa sakte haiπŸ˜›

rk-(smiles)😳

sana-rk u know wat I luv uπŸ˜›πŸ˜³πŸ˜›

rk-really? Tumne mujhe pehele kyun nahin bataya?πŸ˜†

Sana-rk shut up

Rk- ok chalo ab

(they reached the club)

rk-wanna hav drink?

Sana-ya one takila

Rk-two takila's plzz

(seeing rk there sum of his fans came to him asked for autograph)

sana-tumne itne fans bana liye not bad

rk-thank u

w-sir ur drinks

sana-thanks

rk-let's go for dance

sana-ya

voice- humse bina puche

rk-hey arjun kunal u two here

kunal ya kyun nahin aa sakte

sana- c'mon let's move to the dance floor

(the dranked their drink)

(sana was out of control by now)(she removed her jacket and was looking really sexy in her halter top😳)

(kunal rk and arjun were standing with their eyes and mouth wide openπŸ˜‰πŸ˜²πŸ˜‰)

this song was at the backgroug

dil hai mera diwana kya

keheta hai ab ghabrana kya

taal pe jab jhoome badan

hichkichana sharmana kya

khul ke jhoomo khul ke gaao

aao aao ye khul ke kahooo

it's the time to disco-2

kon mile dekho kiskoo

it's the time to disco

(sana was dancing with full josh)

dil haimera'''''''''''''''''''''''''''.(arjun kunal and rk joined her)

Balkhata hai badam aisi jo taal hai

(after sum time rk noticed sana and arjun dancing really close, a kind of jealousy raised in his body he goes to sana to stop her but sana was not the one to stop😑πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜‘)

sanso me chalti hai andhiyaan

behkatta hai ye man ab to ye haal hai

masti me khoe hai hum yahaan

ooo tum bhi kho k mast hoke koi toke to khul k kaho

It's the time to disco-2

Kehedo milo jis jisko

It's the time to disco

(rk again started dancing with sum girl to show off to sana but he was very much druk that he even can't see with whom he was dancing,

sana saw him and the girl too, she felt jelous don't know why and drunked even more😑πŸ₯Ί)(but rk was avoiding it)

Josh me jhoomti rageen sham hai

Phir bhi ye jhoomta hai sama

Hosh ka ab yaahan bolo kya kaam hai

Tez hai dhadkane dil javan

Yoon hi rehena

Jite rehena or hai kehena to khul ke kaho

I'ts the time to disco-2

Samjho zara tum jisko

It's the time to disko-2

Dil hai mera ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''..

(firstly he was enjoying this condition of her but then he felt bad and goes too herπŸ˜•)

(both totally drunked)

rk-sana sana

sana-kya hai? Tuumhe dikh nahin raha I'm busy

rk-sana tumne drink ki

sana-tumne hi to di thi

rk-ooooooo acha chalo ghar chale

sana-nahin tum jao apni dancer k sath me me arjun k sath jaoongi samjhe

rk-nahin tum uske sath nahin jaogi

sana-kyun?

Rk-kyunki vo mohomad ali hai vo tumhe gana sunaegaπŸ˜†

(arjun was jus standing behind them)

arjun-rk mohomad ali boxer tha singer nahinπŸ˜†

rk-tu tu chup kar tujhe kuch nahin pataπŸ˜†

arjun-rk u r drunk chal chal tu mere sath

rk-nahin tu mohomad ali hai or mujhe gana nahin sunnaπŸ˜†

sana-mujhe dance karna hai bye

arjun-sana no more dance chalo ab

sana-mujhe dance karna hai

(arjun holds her hand)

rk-uska hath chor

arjun-rk chal

rk-nahin pehele tu uska hath chor

arjun-kyun?

Rk-kyun?

Rk-kyunki kyunki tu mohomad ali hai tu trees k aas paas ghoom k uske sath gane gaegaπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Arjun-me mohomad ali nahin hoon

Rk-tu hai

Sana-mujhe dance karna hai

Rk-tu mahomat ali hai

Sana-mujhe dance karna hai

Rk-nahiin'''''''''''..

Sana and arjun-kya hua?

Rk-nahin sana tum is mohomad ali k samne mat nachna(in dharmendr style)πŸ˜†

Sana-nahin main nachungi(in mema malini style)πŸ˜†

Rk-nahinn'''''

Arjun-(shouted)shut up shut up shuuuutttttt uuuppp

Rk and sana-sorry(innocently)πŸ˜‰

Arjun-chalo ab

Next morning

(rk was sleeping with arjun rk's house)

(rk woke up)

rk-aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa''''''''''..

arjun-aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa'''''''''''''''

arjun-kya hua

rk-tune raat bhar aese mere kamre me kya kiya?πŸ˜•πŸ˜†

Arjun-abe gade dimag me tujhe kal chorne aya kal tune kuch jyada hi pi lit hi islie raat kafi raat ho gai thi islie aunty ne kaha me tere sath tere kamre me hi soo jau stupid

Rk-oh sorry

Arjun-zamana really badal gaya hai

or logon ke dimaag bhi
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: springsign29

just read some parts of ur fanfic ,its really gud,specially the concept of the fan fic completely different. i really liked the friendship between sana and raj.and the way raj convinces sana to be the part of the show.
ud soon

thank u for reading
thanku
i'm glad that u liked the concept and the friendshinp between sana and rk.
keep reading
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Night club jaane ke naam se hi Sana khush ho gayi aur Rajeev ko I love you kaha!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajeev bhi naa!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›He is teasing her ke usne usse pehle kyun nahi bataya!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Rajeev ko dekhte hi uske fans aa gaye autograph ke liye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Kunal aur Arjun bhi waha hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Great!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sana is out of control aur jacket utar diya and is looking really sexy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

This reminds me of Preity in Kal Ho Na Ho!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

All three boys are just staring with their eyes and mouths wide open!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

The song is very nice and just perfect!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sana toh poore josh ke saath nach rahi hai and the boys joined her!!!!
Sana aur Arjun ko ek saath dance karte dekh kar Rajeev jealous ho gaya!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Wow!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sana toh rukh hi nahi rahi hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›And Rajeev is so drunk that he can't even see with whom he is dancing!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Rajeev ko kisi aur ladki ke saath dance karte dekh kar Sana jealous ho gayi and she drank even more!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Lagta hai aag dono taraf barabar laagi huyi hai!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajeev pehle enjoy kar raha tha Sana ki condition but then he felt bad!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Both of them are totally drunk and don't know what they are talking!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›They are so funny!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Arjun is really having a hard time controling them!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Finally he lost his patience and told them to shut up!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Kitne innocently woh dono sorry bol rahe hai!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

This sequence reminded me of Shahrukh, Saif and Preity in Kal Ho Na Ho!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The way Rajeev asked Arjun ke tune raat bhar mere kamre mein kya kiya was just too good!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Rajeev and Arjun are too funny!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣Arjun's last dialogue was awesome!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
The part was really very funny. I felt sorry 4 Arjun. No doubt he was mad at the 2 drunkards.πŸ˜† But the best thing was Raj n Sana's jealousy. Mind blowing!!!!!!! PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
the update was really good , u potrayed jealousy in rit manner, and last dialogue between arjun and rk was real gud,i was laughin my head off ,the way rk asked arjun wat was he doing in his roomπŸ˜†πŸ˜† the update was cool and by the way congratulations fr getting good marks in xams.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was so funny
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
this part was good, very funny. I think sana and RK love each other, but yet to realize. But really feel soorry for Arjun. Kahaan dono ke beech phas gaya woh.
please update the next part soon, cant wait now.

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