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Taira Rai

@Taira

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

OMG OMG....Riddz a gori babe....wow....despo to see her reaction wen she lays her eyes on the hot hunk Armaan MAlik....tony will be kicked out in a minute....hehehe....amazing concept...Sumit the jerk... Will wait for your next update which i hope will be soon.

Love ya

Taira

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

OMG Kat! How do you pen these concepts down..I've asked you this question like millions of time yet I don't get satisfied with your answer! LOL...So, this is a UK based story..Has it happened to anyone you know? That's so cool...I love how you bring real occurences to your fics..Makes it more realistic! I could totally relate to Nikky/Padma/ Ridz character in this fic...

LMAO..This line had me cracking up but it is indeed very true

"Gal your suck a coconut". Bloody brown on the outside and gori inside!"

I've seen it in UK girls and even here in the US...Brown people act so modern and white and keep their inner brown selves hidden...lol...I'm not like that though..LOL..I love being brown! LMAO! I loved going to Southall when I was in UK and I love going to the brown street here too..lol..Love hindi songs/movie/dramas too! LOL...

Kat, I LOVE this! I'm hooked...You have that effect on us with all your FF's!

Ridz better leave that scumbag Tony like Nikky says..Im sure Ridz will like this doc Armaan! LOL...

Continue soooooooon!

Love, Anita

P.S- That song is my fav from Spice Girls..lol..I love jamming to it..lmao...

Excuse my late comment too..Been sick for past couple of days and I'm taking medications..feeling much better now though!

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Amna Malik

@amna malik

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Woah this is a very different concept. Coconut ridz.........interesting. Love the intro. Ridz n niki seems to share quite a strong bond. Can't wait for ridz to meet armaan.

Cont soon

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Happy rememberance Day

Part 1 posted

Love Kat

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

wohooo i love the sound of this fic so much....um glad abt u having this up kat, n whoever pestered u into it totally rocked....its coming off like a fantastic one, i have a feeling of this well turning out as one of my favs from ur work already!!!...n red n white...i like combination!!!

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

OMG waht a FF i m in love with u realy the consept is just toooooooooo gud n the story is fantastic the way u have wrot is just mind bowing thnxs nruti

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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

awesome part kat👏 ridz is already falling for him😆

cnt w8 for the next update😳

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Samira

@mishti4maan

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

wow!!!!!!!!! gr8 part. continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#29

wow kat di now datz called a killing start !!!!!!!! dis is def gng to b one of d BEST ff's till date!!!!!!!! okiee as it is am hating dat summit all d more nerd jerk !!!!!!!! she in red n d man in white ohhhoooo !!!!!! awesome work di cant wait for d nexhhttt updateee!!!!! gosh itz all a setup !!!!!! luv ya aravi