~Eclipse of the heart ~ PT1 PG1 11/11 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i would say u have fire workers in this ff....with the intro n 1st pt u have hooked us, ur just too good at this anyway...hats off 2 u this ff looks like a mind blasting ff...loved ridz thoughts as she saw armaan...nikita is really sweet....n armaan well he is like always a icing on the cake...cont soon


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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome update KAT!! :) dtz so like abroad desi chickz..really!! ahha
Edited by missypatel - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW another FF!!! im definitely excited to read this one!! please continue soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great update Kat!
Stupid Sumit and his family!! Arghhhh!!!
Armaan sure is ready to kill *faints* LMAO! I liked the inital convo!
I love readind Riddhima's thoughts...They are SOOOOOO Hilarious!
Continue soon!
-Anitaf
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great update kat !!! I was engrossed in the Botanical gardens, the song and the Red 'n' White combination😳 that I didnt realise when the part came to an end 😆 😆 😆

Oh God!! Ridz is sooooooooo hillarious. I love reading her inner thoughts. They so remind me of 'Krazzy'. And is this all pre-planned??😉
Continue soon...
Luv Shivani 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: $h!V@n!

Great update kat !!! I was engrossed in the Botanical gardens, the song and the Red 'n' White combination😳 that I didnt realise when the part came to an end 😆 😆 😆

Oh God!! Ridz is sooooooooo hillarious. I love reading her inner thoughts. They so remind me of 'Krazzy'. And is this all pre-planned??😉
Continue soon...
Luv Shivani 😳

Awwwww Shivani i was scared u like did not like it at all..... thou i did mention like this would be like krazzy inner thoughts and all
Yeah the Red n White combo 😳....like the scene in my Sig 😍😉
Love Kat😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Kat,

Another one of your fab FF's (btwn, when you updating SIN???? haven't seen that in a while)....
This start was superb, though I must admit, I was a little confused with that excessive usage of 'Like' but then it was good
Ridz & Nikki share a great bond, Sumit & his family such cheap people, & sumit being typical mom's boy, sitting mute, when his parents are insluting Ridz & his family
Ridz in red & arman in white...what a deadly combo!!!1 like when they had gone for their 1st & only movie date....awwwhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!
this all being a set up.....hopefully, this wil be be set up which Ridz wouldn't mind
do continue soon
ps: petition to update Kiss & breath!!!
Edited by Jodubai - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Omg dat no gud son of a bun SumIT!!! He's not a man!! Ufff! My poor RIddima!!

What an entry Armaan, already wooed Mrs Gupta~!!

Awesome part Kat!

-Natasha

Edited by Ladoo645 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Catwoman

Awwwww Shivani i was scared u like did not like it at all..... thou i did mention like this would be like krazzy inner thoughts and all
Yeah the Red n White combo 😳....like the scene in my Sig 😍😉
Love Kat😳

No yaar, plz dont say that. I've always liked what u've written so far. You are one brilliant writer whose write ups i've always looked forward to. Btw, when do you plan to update *Kiss*???😛
Yeah, that scene of *Aur pass*. Ghosh, i honestly loved it more than in the movie. Exactlyy that was the same thing in my imagination 😉
Luv Shivani 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome part. Ridz in red and armaan in white...........................tht is so KaSh😍. So she is going ga ga over him already......................
Hate tht summit..........sala

Can't wait for more. Plz update soon

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