~Eclipse of the heart ~ PT1 PG1 11/11 - Page 5

Originally posted by: $h!V@n!

No yaar, plz dont say that. I've always liked what u've written so far. You are one brilliant writer whose write ups i've always looked forward to. Btw, when do you plan to update *Kiss*???😛

Yeah, that scene of *Aur pass*. Ghosh, i honestly loved it more than in the movie. Exactlyy that was the same thing in my imagination 😉

Luv Shivani 😳

Originally posted by: $h!V@n!

@Kat - Oh! I was sure that this is going to be different. Well i would love to read different, where there's going to be Total eclipse of the heart 😳

And i'm waiting desperately for a nice Karva Chauth of the evil ninja queen 😆 Its a request, plz make it nice, as in. . . *ahem*😳

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Hi Kat,

Another one of your fab FF's (btwn, when you updating SIN???? haven't seen that in a while)....

This start was superb, though I must admit, I was a little confused with that excessive usage of 'Like' but then it was good

Ridz & Nikki share a great bond, Sumit & his family such cheap people, & sumit being typical mom's boy, sitting mute, when his parents are insluting Ridz & his family

Ridz in red & arman in white...what a deadly combo!!!1 like when they had gone for their 1st & only movie date....awwwhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!

this all being a set up.....hopefully, this wil be be set up which Ridz wouldn't mind

do continue soon

ps: petition to update Kiss & breath!!!

Originally posted by: krati.mehra

Yeyyyy!!!! you finally updated....gr8.

The part was actually fun to read....the way Riddz wanted to avoid going out with him and than her reaction wen she saw him and unconciously liked the way he look and all...it was fabulously done. But its sad how her dad is towards her...i hated how he didn't beleive her and instead sided with that good for nothing idiot Sumit...gosh the guy was disgusting...her behavior towards him is justified in every way and bi is aorable...why did she die...it was an emotional scene...riddz remembering her...hopefully Armi will bring her smile back...,looking forward to the next part...

And ya Nikki is a sweetheart here....

Gr8 work (as usual)..

Love ya

Krati

Originally posted by: Robin_M

ohh wow kat, this is really awosme! its a lot of fun, thanks sooo much for the good laugh! really too good! hehe indians and their mangoes!
continue soooon!