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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice update plz write more soon :D
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Originally posted by: sejal719

nice update plz write more soon :D

Thanks will do soon!
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Kaisa yeh Pyar hai?



Part 8
Mahi and Angad

Finally she gets out of her dreamland and enters AK studios, there she sees angad standing with his back facing her, her heart starts pumping harder then ever, she nervous, shocked, surprised, and happy all at once.

Mahi stands there for a while? then she hears angad speak but not to her to the girl in his arms.

An: Sonia, come on you know me, true love is just not for angad khanna, love is a game and im one of the playboys, who loves to play a different game everyday! [laughs]

Mahi stands there hearing the person who she thought believed in true love and who she stupidly started loving, for him it was a game. But then she thought she didn't love him expecting him to love her back and he didn't tell her to believe him, kanya and amber were always right. Its not his fault that she took his words to be true. Mahi finally gets out of her thoughts when someone clicks there hands in front of her, its angad, Before he can say anything his phone rings and he goes out of the studio.

Mahi is confused as what to do, while everyone looks her down to up, and prithvi comes to her rescue.

Pr: aao kripa, okay everyone this is kripa, she wll be singing with angad!

Everyone gets shocked and come and greet her. Then prithvi's mom comes.

Kamini: hello, kripa

Kr: namaste aunty

Ka: prithvi tumhari bohot baatein karte hai

Kr: I hope all good ones!

Ka: oh definitely, chalo ab mujhe tumhari aawaz live suni hai, come on everyone lets hear kripa sing.

Mahi gets a little nervous, and someone comes and gives her a mike. And prithvi sticks his thumb out at her and she smiles and starts singing:

Yeh do dilon ki alag si kahaani hai,

Ek hai deewana aur ek deewani hai,

Jis din se dono milein hain, kaise ajab silsile hain, ek pal muhabbat hai, ek pal?. [she opens her eyes and stops singing, he was standing right in front of her, they both look at eachother for a while]

Everyone starts clapping and angad gives her a grin.

Ka: very good, I'll just be back.

Kr: okay [smiling]

An: so whos this? [he asks prithvi]

Prithvi: angad, yeh kripa hai! The girl I was telling you about!

Angad turns and looks at her from down to up and starts laughing?. Everyone on the sets also starts laughing.

An: prithvi, you must be kidding, yeh behenji mere saath, yane ANGAD KHANA ke saath stage share karegi? Prithvi what were you thinking??

Mahi feels insulted and she curses herself for coming here to make a fool of herself!

An: Prithvi people die to even stand with angad khanna, I can get thousands of girls then why should I choose her [he says in a mocking style]

Pr: angad we needed a new girl, and I cant get one in such a short notice, she's very good, trust me!

An: I've tried that haven't I?

Prithvi feels bad, before angad can say anything he takes angad to the room.

Pr: angad, ek to woh tumhari madad karne keliye tayar ho gayi aur tum ho ke use insult kiye jaa rahe ho! Whats wrong with you?

An: Madad? Hello, you're talking to THE ANGAD KHANNA, nobody would refuse to sing with me! prithvi tumne soch kaise liya ke yeh behenji mere saath gaana gaye gi?

Pr: woh hamesha aise kapde nahi pehenti, she usually dresses in casual clothes I don't know why she wore this and came, but trust me she is too good.

Mahi stands there looking down while the rest of the crew pass comments on her clothing in english.

M: apne Indian culture follow nahi karsakte to uska mazak to mat urao, wearing Indian clothes doesn't make one small! Tum sab Indian ho, bhool mat jao, western kapde pehen lene se tum firangi nahi ho jaoge! Im proud to be an Indian, that's why I don't mind wearing these clothes or speaking in hindi! You want the country to go further but you going far from your own country how will the country go further??? Anyways I pity you guys to have such a low thinking!

She says in disgust and walks out of there, leaving all the crew members to feel ashamed.

Kamini comes back with the contract papers and finds out what happened.

Angad argues for a while with kamini.

Ka: ANgad! How dare you?? Itni achi ladki ka dil dukhaya tumne, she was singing so well, I want that girl back now! Agar koi tumhare saath gaye gi to woh sirf kripa hogi warna show cancelled! Don't forget I'm sponsoring the show! And all your shows!

Angad gets shocked, this is the first time kamini aunty spoke to him like that and made him feel so bad. Now that he is a rockstar he can afford his own shows but he takes kamini as his mother and never disrespects her, how could she say that?

Ka: yeh lo contract aur jaa ke uss ladki ko wapis le ke aao! Samjhe tum!

Pr: mom, kripa contract sign kar chooki hai, I've made her sign it!

Ka: that's great! Now angad make your way to kripas house!

Angad is fuming with rage and anger: Okay fine! Where the hell does that behenji live??

Kamini smiles. prithvi and angad go out of the studio and see that the car is still there and she gave the cell phone to the driver as well, he tells angad to go alone and fix up his mess, as the driver knows the house. Angad angrily goes.

While mahi reaches home and is really angry.

M: samajta kya hai apne aap ko? Bloody stupid, so what if I liked him at one time doesn't mean I will allow him to insult me, bloody womanizer, Lier, Idiot! Ugggghhh, I cant believe I can hate angad so much! I never want to see him again!

She goes and opens her draw takes the tickets for the show and tears them!

She goes in for a shower to calm down; her head is bursting with anger! She never expected angad to love her but she never thought he would be so rude! She would cry but she doesn't want to waste her tears for a person who doesn't care about someones feelings and can easily insult them, how cheap can he get, she just went to help him!

She has a shower and feels so much better, she comes out in her bath gown, while she was going to get dressed she heard the phone ring.

M: hello,

Sh: hey mahi!

M: [shes very happy] SHABD! Kaise ho tum? Kahan ho? Hows your course going? Are you okay? Hows life out there? Do you miss me? Oh my god, I cant believe its you!

Sh: ab main baat karoon? [laughs] main theekh hoon, enjoying my studies, lifes okay, missing India! How are you? And I miss you loads!

M: im okay! Carrying on!

Sh: so how was the big break with angad? Hun? How come you're back already? I just thought I'd try!

M: nothing, angad is not what I thought anyways lets not talk about him!

Sh: [happy but worried the girl who was crazy for angad doesn't want to talk about him? Why?] what happened?

M: nothing I went there today an? before she can continue her sentence the door bell rings. Oh no, ab kaun aya hai, shabd koi darwaze pe hai!

Sh: go open I'll hold!

M: but im wearing a bath gown, I wonder who it is!

Sh: oooh sexy? [laughs] okay, I'll speak to you later! Bye!

M: [smiles] bye!

She puts the phone down and goes to see who it is!

M: kaun hai? Kaun ho sakhta hai? Pooja di ke paas to chawi hai, shayad kanya ho gi, but why doesn't she answer?

She looks through the hole but she cant see anyone, so she opens the door a little to see angad standing there, she looks at him with narrowed eyes and angrily shuts the door.

An: what the f***!

Mahi feels really angry and embarrassed, she decides she doesn't have to hide from him, who is he to her? She will face him and talk back, she cant let him put her down and keep quite. And maybe he came to say sorry. She goes to her room and puts on a blue tracksuit and goes back to open the door, and to her surprise angad is still there. He was too busy thinking that how a girl can bang the door at angad khanna!

M: ji, koi kaam tha? [she says arrogantly]

He looks up at her and keeps staring at her, she looks simply beautiful with wet hair.

An: look I just want to say, that jo bhi abhi hua just forget it and lets practice we don't have time!

M: oh yeh bolne aaye the? Well, im not interested! [she says stubbornly]

He looks up at her confused and angry.

M: suna nahi? Mujhe tumhare saath stage share [she emphasizes the words] nahi karna hai, jaake kisi aur ko dhoond ke lao, samjhe! I am simply not interested in singing or dancing with THE ANGAD KHANNA! [she says angrily and bangs the door on his face]

Now angad is really frustrated, how can some stupid girl insult him like that? He has to get back at her, he can get anyone to sing and dance with him or he doesn't even have to he's enough alone for his fans, but he plans to make her do the show so he can insult her, torture her, and make her feel sorry for what she just done! He goes to the radio station and gets the contract, gets his lawyer to go to mahi's house.

Mahi is sitting in her room thinking about angad, she's still angry she has to break something; she takes all his photos and tears them to get some peace! She hears a knock on the door again.

M: oh no, phir se agaya!

She goes angrily to the door and after she opens it she gets a shock. It's a lawyer and a police inspector.

M: ji kahiye, koi problem hai?

L: miss mahi

M: main hi hoon!

L: Miss Mahi humare paas aapke khilaf court ka order hai!

M: JI??
L: ji haan, aapne Mr Angad Khanna aur Mrs Kamini ke saath ek contract sign kiya hai, jisse aap ab follow nahi karma chahti to unh one aapke khilaaf ek court order darj kiya hai, humein aapko arrest karma hoga!

M: kya?? [worried and scared just then kanya enters and hears the whole issue]

K: mahi, pagal mat ban just go and do it sirf do din ki hi to baat hai! Just go for it!

M: par kanya, main angad ke saath [tears in her eyes]

K: come on mahi, you don't have to talk to him just do your job and ignore that idiot! Okay! Chal..

K: mahi angad ke saath show karegi! Theekhe! Aap mr angad ko bata dijiye!

L: thank you ma'am! Have a nice day!

He leaves and they see angad standing there and grinning at mahi.

Mahi gets really upset, she rubs her tears and goes in her room, she explains to herself that she'll be very strong! Makes an arrogant face and takes her bag and goes out!

Angad is still waiting there, he grins at his success of making her bend for the first time!

Kanya feels bad for Mahi and wonders if she'll be okay! They sit in the car and mahi just looks out of the window while angad puts his silly rap songs full blast and grins.

Ranbir and Ridhima

Ranbir and malika are sitting in the balcony and waiting for the guide to come, its already 10:30. they had breakfast and now just waiting.

R: mom, kis idiot ko hire kiya hai aapne?? Aath (8:00) baje aane ka promise kiya tha its already 10:30 what the hell! Jo insaan time ki kadar na kare woh trustworthy nahi hota!

M: ranbir, tum over react kar rahe ho!

Before he can place he's argument there is a knock at the door.

Malika gets up and opens the door, it's a girl!

M: ji, aap kaun?

R: main Ridhima hoon, Aapki escourt!

M: Oh okay, humein to kaha tha ke koi mr karan aane wale the!
R: ji lekin karan ki tabiyat kuch theekh nahi thi that's why they sent me!

M: oh acha, aao main tumhe mere bete se milati hoon!

She goes and sticks her hand out saying " Hi Im Ridhima" he turns and sees her, she gets a shock and swallows her spit, and pulls her hand back, feeling really embarrassed.

R: oh, princess of pritampur, [grins] nice to meet you!

Ridz is shocked and worried now, she knows wat that grin meant!

They leave for they first day, ridz takes them to different beaches. And ranbir finds every opportunity to insult her, she cant say anything!

At night ridz tells riya everything and wonders how she'll spend the next 6 days with that idiot!

Okay now let me tell you more about ridhima:

Ridhima is sweet, naughty, adorable and very beautiful, she was orphaned when she was a small child and grew up in a orphanage along with her two best friends riya and karan. Ridz always loved sciences and wanted to be a doctor but her dream couldn't be fulfilled because she didn't have money, she studied doctory for about four years [there was a matron in her orphanage who was really fond of her and took her as a daughter, when she died she left her house on her name and told ridhima that she wants her to be a doctor and she must sell her house for her studies} so ridhima done that but soon the money was finished but then for her internship she couldn't complete because everyone wanted something to allow her to do her internship in the hospitals and finally she gave up on it! To get her degree also they wanted bribery so she left hope and became a head nurse, where riya was a nurse and karan was a doctor {karan was poor but he was lucky he married a rich girl and the influence got him his degree} ridz loved kids and so she would work in the kids section, but soon she developed a new dream; Acting [she always loved acting] she started modeling and dreamed of becoming an actress, she also wanted money, fame, name everything! So that she could get back at all the people who insulted her and never saw her talent!

Okay guys that's all for now, next update will be really soon!

Please comment/criticize!

Nadz

Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh i love it angad is so mean with mahi .thank you for pm .
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Posted: 16 years ago
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finally u updated!!!!! awesum part!!!!
cont soooooon n thanx 4 d pm😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey cont soon n thnx 4 tha PM/update!
❤️twinkle!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

oh i love it angad is so mean with mahi .thank you for pm .

Thanks for the comment and yeah i know but next update he'll be nice and mean a mixture lolz, almost done with it so will update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehasfan

finally u updated!!!!! awesum part!!!!

cont soooooon n thanx 4 d pm😊

Hey im glad u liked it! thanks for the comment! almost done with next part so will update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: twinkle94

hey cont soon n thnx 4 tha PM/update!

❤️twinkle!

Thanx for the comment, im glad u like it! will update reli soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey dear,
I just caught up.
And the story is going fabulous. Brilliant.
Continue soon.
Thnx a lot for the PM, keep PMing.

Kashish

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