Kismet ya Chamatkar Promo part 3(a)pg 13 - Page 5

PART 2(c)

It seems they have judged her quite lightly thought the royal party after seeing her balance on the thin line of stick. Because either she is well practiced aerial ropearstist or some cotton ball toy as she can hang with such expertise that only a Weightless cotton ball can justify her place. initially after her first step shera did falters backward and forward but then quickly regain her confidence after analyzing the trade she managed brilliantly as it's not only the weight but her quick thinking by which she had used the veer's heavy weighted sword to steady her balance she had succeeded till the end of the Thick wooden stick.

These 6 steps when shera was performing this dangerous stunt other royal was totally numb with fear at least for bhalla u can name it fear judging form the sudden panic scream he was about to deliver when shera was swaying in air if veer had not Silenced him by firmly holding his hand and quickly hissed him for disturbing the concentration which can result in an fatal Accident. While for dharam he has successfully blocked all the negative thoughts and was just concentrating on the task in hand .i.e. dropping the fruit on the correct time to ensure that all the devious creatures in the murky water do come on surface For any kind on day trip adventure. and last but not the least veer when all that can be said for his state is till now he hasn't release bhalla's wrist from his firm grip in fear that he would do something like his earlier action to divert her Attention, also can it be ignored he hadn't blinked his eyes in fear of missing some minute action in that spilt second or He simply haven't breathed in past few moments but was just standing there completely stiff holding his breath for this Disaster to be finally over feeling completing nauseated and ready to puke whatever he has eaten in the early morning breakfast. There at that instant he had decided never in his life he is going to support this stubborn girl again.

after completing her stint on hard wooden stick now shera reached the main dangerous task of walking on the thin metallic String which has made her quite anxious from start. Will the string can handle her light but still measurable weight OR in How much steps can she reach at the end which is the center portion of the lake were the only questions revolving in her Mind. Quietly leaving her fate in kanhaji hands while trusting her steps shera step on the metallic string just after dharam dropped the fruit right in front .for a moment she thought she is goanna meet her end as her very first foot almost slipped on the string due to her shaky start but she regained her grip on sword which helped her upper body from complete swaying in air giving her enough time to stabilize her footing & then placing second foot forward.

after that in next 4 quick steps shera had reached the end of string quite successfully till at the last step when her right foot got stuck with something hard taking her by surprise and it turn haltered her balance completely throwing her downwards.

aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh maaaaaaaaaaaa ...................................................................................

shera's horror stricken cry can be heard by long distance species while the curious onlookers had paled by the after effect only. While on an impulse dharam had thrown the entire bag of fruits on ground and was ready to jump in water , veer had dropped bhalla's hand and reached at bridge end to go same way as shera when something out of blue happened. at one moment she was falling downwards and in another second she had placed the sword vertically on the below hard surface of the thick green bushes on which the string was hooked successfully haltering her fall. shera jumped on hard base completing her mission Contently and rested her restless heart thumping with anticipation and sudden close encounter with death. The first thing she did after regaining her breath was to thank kahnaji for saving her & then heaving painful sigh resulted from her Tense muscles she turned back and waved to the royal party informing them of her safe arrival.

even on a distance she can hear bhalla excited shriek while dharam gave a more calm reaction as expected by smiling weakly And just slumping his completely stiff shoulders which has now dropped with relieved sigh only veer was standing there Completely blank or flat face as she can say from his thin pursed lips and thick busy eyebrows pursed together in concentration over something she can't understand.

While bhalla had given his most excited shrieking reaction on seeing his companion reaching safely. seconds before this shriek was going to transformed into a painful cry on encountering shera's sudden fall but all well that's ends well or it is in case bhalla who was too happy to notice anything even those dangerous creatures can't demean his joy on his Companion victory over this small yet important task looking impossible before .dharam smiled weakly on bhalla childish enthusiasm & sighed heavily after seeing shera's successful attempt while mentally thanking above lord for preventing any kind of mishaps. for him surprised would be an understatement for this girl's courage as she is someone so unique that can turn entire scenario in an exactly differently direction. never in his life he had met someone brave as far as this girl is concerned so spontaneous yet firmly balanced ,believing in actions than words and her whatever happens never give up personality had amazed him to no bounds but in a way reminding him of his younger brother who posses these same qualities in exactly same fashion yet differentiating with this unique specimen in terms of his impatience and anger which this girl has till now successfully controlled. thinking of his brother he darted his glance towards the impatient lad who had successfully wiped his brows and upper chin from the small beads of perspiration and sweaty hands on his waist sides hiding his inner anxiety behind his blank expression but dharam knows him too well to be fooled by this fake portrayal and just placed his hand on his shoulder to assure that everything is fine .for a person who is so strong headed his brother had such tender heart that in itself is a miracle and this mere stunt had effected him so much , he is amazed no doubt.

whereas bhalla shriek had invoked veer of the end of the dreadful nightmare which was about to turn into reality just few moments back. Quickly wiping the small beads of perspiration he turned towards his brother on feeling his presence by his Strong hand on his shoulder. Quickly hiding his anticipation under his confident posture he turned only to meet his equally anxious eyes and giving him a knowing look realizing him his secret is out. His lovely brother had sensed his feelings even Before he can accept it and had as usual given him his assurance of nothing wrong would be happening afterward s. well that he Can guarantee because as earlier decided never is he going to allow anything like this happens again. He still can't understand How can he allowed such drastic measures, what's there with this girl that he had trusted her so completely to undergo such Daredevil stunt, what would had happened if she met with that fatal fall .he still shuddered with aftereffects of that Particular moment when she screamed for her mother. It was as if his heart had entirely stopped beating well he wasn't breathing in first place from the time she had stepped on that stupid thick bow bridge but that moment had just crossed all Boundaries. For the very first time in his life he had encountered stark fear, a fear so intense and painful that he can't even breathe. those few moments were life or death not only for her but for him also as if she wouldn't have survived nether he would able to forgive himself nor he would be alive as after foolishly jumping in that death well even he can imagine himself as snakes latest food feast.

while royal party was busy in their train of thoughts or more so joyous celebration for bhalla shera on the other side had removed all the dirty green leaves and broken branch blanket from her landing space revealing a big rock solid base hidden beneath those greenly coating.

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arre yeh to ratsa khudbe khus ban gaya. dekho to

bhalla surprised tone caught fancy with the emotional brothers also who now by guided by bhalla's excited tone started looking towards his latest fancy. on finding the hard rock even they were surprised on shera's knowledge and intelligence on how accurately she had analyzed its position even in its invisible or hidden form.

just when veer was ready to go on the bridge shera very meaningfully retrieved the metallic string from entangled bushes causing the temporary bridge to completely lose from her end alarming veer who thought she was again being naughty but his illusion soon ended as shera held the string in her right hand while trying to catch the above bent branch of the nearest tree on the lakeside by jumping in air. at first confused by her actions he suddenly got her idea of making their journey more easy by tying the string end to the branch and making the temporary bridge high enough to crawl on it instead of walking reducing the involved danger by several folds. appreciating her effort veer silently waited till she completes the task in hand while glancing towards his brother he can sense that he too have guessed her intensions and no doubt he was pleased by this stranger who is going to such great length to ensure their safety. well all veer can see is his clan safety above everything so even to his amazement he find it very pleasant and in a way soothing to his angered mind and before he can guess his hatred is already melting something he can't realize courtesy to his stubbornness.

After tying the string successfully shera turned towards the royal and waved her hands indicating them to start their journey. getting her signal veer started first as he can't risk to miss action anymore .already its hard for his big ego to accept that he is being led by someone else as opposed to other circumstances when he was the leading one .quietly hanging himself upside down on the bridge veer started crawling on the wooden stick first than slowly reaching the string part and then finally to end of the string completing the tedious job as crawling upside in quite difficult and since their no permanent and strong ankle on the other side only a small branch which can fall on encountering heavy weight complicacy of the task becomes high and doing it in such quick span of time makes it appreciable at least that's what shera thinks when veer landed safely besides her on the hard rock and broken her reverie by simply taking over the string end she was holding earlier as safety precaution. shera take two minute step backwards providing him enough space for continuing the job. in those few seconds when dharam and bhalla was continuing the task with bhalla in the middle and dharam at last nobody said anything only silence prevails which got broken by bhalla's enthusiastic voice. as soon as dharam reached to the party bhalla started speaking as he guessed now they have completed the dangerous task which freed them from all difficulties.

shera aapne to kamal hi kar diya. hum to darr hi gaye the aapki cheekh sunkar par waah apne to baazi hi palat di.

bhalla looked completely bowled over by shera's daring act and stated admiringly but soon that admiration faded and he complained in a cute manner

par shera agar hume pata hota ki aap itni achi tarah hawaa main chal sakti hain to hum itni chitna nahin karte na.hum to huhi parehan ho rahe the.

then cutily pouting he whined

appko hume batana chiaye the na.

shera smiled at his cute antics and was about to satisfy his query when veer interrupted

bhalla tum apni shilkattoon ka pitare baad main bhi khol sakte ho. aur rahe baat is kaam ki to dekhkar acha lage ki kuch logon ka dimaag hi nahin wo khud bhi hawaa main udane ka nahin to kam se kam chalne ka paryatn karte hain.

giving a sly side glance to shera he got the his desired reaction in form the of irritating frown forming on her lovely face replacing the smile earlier pastured . After encountering his small win on irritating her veer continued his charade

waise aisa to koi bhi kalabaaz kar sakta hai. lagta hai kaafi jagah yeh kartab dikha chooka hai koi bas baatein chupa kar apna mahatav dikta hai. ab kya kareein kuch log hote hi aise hain.

kaise hote hain haaan.

instead of shera bhalla replied in an angry quite offended by veer's mockful tone and also for making fun of his lovely companion whom he adored for her courage. for the first time in his life neither he is not sacred of veer angry reaction nor he bothered about his loyalty towards his friends but only he can see that veer unjustified comments that would hurt a pure and sweet soul which he can't tolerate.

waise tum kehna kya chate ho ki yeh assan kaam tha par tumhara batraaav to kuch aur hi keh raha tha?.. kuch der pahele jab main daar gaya tha ki woh gir jayegi tab tumne kitni jor se muhje daatana ki main uska dhyaan na bhang karo . ab bada sher ban rahe ho darr to tum bhi gaye the na???? tabhi to agar ek pal main shera nahin sambhalti to tum bhi khoodne wale the islle jharne main wo bhi bina yeh soche ki kya haal hote.

indicating the poisonous lake bhalla muttered quite audibly

ab bade aaye baatein karne wale.

kyunki woh mera farz tha aur main darra nahin bas thodi dera ki liye parehsan ho gaya tha is bewkoofi ke chaal se.aur rahi baat meri baaton ki muhje baatein chupane ki adaat nahin hai. main sach sabke mooh par bolta hoon. tareef pane ke liye dikhawa nahin karta aur na battein chupta hoon.

veer replied haughtily not used to this type of behavior from bhalla he was quite taken aback by bhalla's angry reply and but more than angry he was surprised by his affection towards this girl . first dharam's respectful stance and now bhalla's compassion what's there in this girl that in only two meetings she turned everyone he known so well his life into different persons and behave out of ordinarily . What he can't see and ignored in his anger is the clear sincerity and courage of this girl portrayed from her every action commanding everyone's respect and compassion was due to her sweet behavior which had won bhalla's kind heart and gain his confidence in no amount of time. its his own stubbornness which has blinded him from letting go of all earlier malice towards her. while others were just reacting according to present circumstances he is still stuck up in the past making him unable to listen to his own heart for the first time in his life which at least his brother can guess very well. as soon he interrupted the ordeal and commanded

quietly indicating him to stop his childish behavior right now. and then facing shera he said

aur waise bhi shera apna kaam puar kar chooki hain ab hume age badana chiaye kyun theek hain na shera.

kahan ji inhe kya bich majgdhaar main paide kiya tha ki kabhi bhi kuch bhi seedhti tarkie se nahin bol sakte.

then realizing dharam is still waiting for her reaction she replied

ji sarkar.

her monosyllabic reply satisfy dharam half heartedly as he can till see the aftereffects of the harsh comments on her face. quickly fetching her knives shera aimed the knot tied to the wooden end of the bridge with thick bushes and in one sharp hit cut them thus making the bow made bridge freely suspending in the air with one end while the other one firmly struck on the tree branch.

catching the new hanging swing in one hand veer indicated others to line up so that using that they can reach other side safely. this time bhalla got first chance though he was willing to give this opportunity to shera but she politely requested him to continue . even without saying a single word they can understand each other such was their sweet relation.

so first bhalla reared up for his journey to the final destination across the river. Holding the wooden stick tightly in his hand, bending a little to accelerate his momentum he take a large swing towards the river bank. at first everyone thought that he would be coming back as the due to low momentum his swing fall short and was about to retrieve back any second but bhalla at last charged up by all the action jumped on the last moment.

the fall was not quite big but yes he was thrown at least few meters away securing him to a safe potion. at first he fall flat on his front but then rolled down a few turns just to ensure safety and finally restraining himself from going further. After few moments passed and bhalla didn't got up dharam panicked. even veer become anxious as bhalla was not a quite person even a small action successfully done is big achievement for him and here after such high action he was laying still that means either way he is not well.

at last dharam couldn't control any more so he shouted

bhallllllllllllllllaaaaaaaaaaaa

while on the other side bhalla got up with a sudden jerk and started looking here and there just to accustom himself with the surroundings as he still can't believe he made it on his own without any help.

bhallllllllllllllllaaaaaaaaaaaa

once bhalla heard dharm anxious call he turned so suddenly that it must have broken some of his neck veins, slowly realizing his achievement he at first smiled then started waving so enthusiastically that others on the rock find it hard to believe whether he was acknowledging his safety or is he gravely hurt.

bhalla tum theek to ho na.

this time veer shouted quite annoyed with bhalla silly antics but in his heart he knows he couldn't bear to lose his friend , silly he maybe but he is rare gem of friend and he is proud to have him.

on hearing veer's question firstly bhalla got confused as why he is asking such silly questions at this hour, then realizing he is still in his sitting position and giving others wrong signals making them doubtful of his well being. so charged up with his achievement he at once jumped up to stand showing some of his heroic antics to his friends to ensure them that he is alright to which shera bite back his giggle , dharam only sighed to his beaming friend while veer muttered

kya uchal raha . bewajh jaan nikaal di.

on hearing veer annoyed muttering dharam simply smiled to him now assured that his friend is safe he much relived. it was dharam to go next as veer indicated by handing over the stick to him while dharam hesitated looking at shera who even he wants to go first but shera on encountering his awkwardness just gave him a half smile showing that its fine with her and he should lead first .so at last while shera was standing at the back of veer dharam started the his preparation for the swing. what others didn't notice was veer protective posture and glances towards shera though he won't admit but even he wants shera to reach at the other end safely and that was the sole reason he wants dharam to go first so that when shera would follow him next he could be there on the other end to hold her safely if that swing again reacted unexpectedly same as in bhall's turn. no he can't bear to take anymore risk not that he cared but yes he still can't trust this crazy specimen anymore god knows what kind daredevil act she will perform in midair. although no matter how much he disliked her he wants her safe . so while he stayed back to watch dharam reached other quite effortlessly as this time the swing was more clean after acquiring the necessary momentum after first trip mentally he was preparing for the battle ahead with this stubborn creature edging her to go first as he know she is bound to defy. quietly thinking in his mind he said.

kya ladki hai . har baat par ladti hai. dharam ki baat to aise manti hai jaise wo bahagwann ho aur yeh uski pujarin aur agar main kahoon to main shaitaan aur yeh uska kaal. har baat par zidd.

as dharam successfully made to other end and left the stick hanging in air to reach back towards them veer catch it in mid way. now as only veer and shera left on the rock he indicated the young girl behind his back to step further .confused by his reactions at first shera thought to defy but then her curiosity got better and she abide the command of the youngest royal. at last coming face to face the feisty duo firstly stare each other obviously not eye to eye while shera was staring at veer's stubborn face silently analyzing his puzzling attitude veer was contemplating as how to break the news of next traveler to this hard headed creature.

at last when veer remain silently staring even after few moments passed away shera couldn't hold her curiosity anymore so cleared her throat and catch veer's attention.

ji sarkar.

she asked in flat tone quickly hiding her curious thoughts and waited for his reply.

chalo ab tumhari baari hai.

veer replied at last throwing over the stick little forcefully towards her whom he was sure was about to revert back. damn why can't this girl be a little sensible can't this stunt was enough for day adventure. what was she trying to prove. aggressive he may but he do respects women and forceful behavior towards them was highly unacceptable in his opinion also but here he had no choice.

ji par main confused would be shortest word to shera's shock.

Hello Everyone
Well thanks for replying.
i am updating right now of course minus the eye lock session. as i want this scene to be perfect call it my ideal or die hard romantic heart but this eye lock session will be VS first intimate scenes not in terms of physicality but in terms of spiritual reasons. they should feel the the special connection they have made by the superior forces and also they could search their souls within their eyes in this scene. so i guess u all have to wait a little more. i want to write it prefectly. but i am updating the other part right now. okkk .My special thanks to Shruja and nims23 who have motivated me to post and all my lovely readers who r kind enough to wait and then reply also.

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

beautiful updates.. I adore ur bhalla n shera is soo lovable.. GREAT FF .. update soon :)

Originally posted by: act12

👏very nice update, such an awe sum twist....Thanks a lot dear will be waiting for more so plzzz update asap.yup i have already done that also do read my note on the page and try to answer my question its really important

Plz PM me the link as well will do that

thanks

ciao

Originally posted by: ashah030

heyyy!!

i am just posting this message so that u know that i m ashah... (the one who is bothering u and sending u 10000000 pms.... actually my account got deleted for some reason... so yea...

anywaysssssss pls pls plssssssssssss update soon... will be waiting

love ya

ashah

p.s. plsssss pm me when u update next...

Originally posted by: CutieA

woow huni...wah a cum bak! reali good...onces again i reali liked the dia's. n also Veera's nok jkes lol thanks Madhu for the heads up xxx

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

aww sumi di...it was jus awesum..thanks alot dera i was thinking of ur reactions when writing this. u didn't answer for the question on the note aare yaar answer that na.its really important.

I mean the way VEER was ashamed at last..n also Shera..I loved it..

n the last dia by dharam..JIDDI..!!! AWW THEY BOTH R LIKE ME.. ME TOO quite ziddi but i now i think i am quite mature in that manner .

ZIDDI!!! Hum bhi boooohhhhoootttttt ziddi hai..

I rilli love it yaar...

Bhalla's jus amzin..he was so sweet when syin thanx naagdevta wala scene.. i noe even i like him lot wait for later parts he will be quite a main character in veer and shera unision as veer will be quite jealous of him as shera really adored quite from beginning . he will be filling in gap of the best freind for shera while dharam is the ultimate brother and companion which veer knew yet will be sturbbon as he is will not accept it. thoda jealoues bhi to hona chiye. i tell u shera will be a big tease as seen in first episodes.

then the start was just way too gd...wht is tis gal doin..Gosh so much physics...momentum n all... yup yaar class main to physics se nafrat thi socha yahan hi thoda concepts revise kar loon. lollllllzzzz

btw yaar di..apko kahan se milte hai yeh ideas..I mean ki how to cross the jharna n all.. arre yaar pichele janam main pakka trazan ki sister thi thats how i don't noe but i guess i like rural life also i have quite a wild streak in me. so then the result is in front of u.

Rilli loving it...

Abb plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi update karo..I want to read the most b4 I leave..... okkk miss ur wish is my command.

Love ya loads.Same here ....t.cccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳 bye dear

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi