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KAT

@Catwoman

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Posted: 16 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: simran1285

badla jatti da 🤣🤣🤣 That's killer Kat 😆 you gonna make me pee in me pants😆

LMAO Simmi.... bach ke yaar.... OR Accident hoga Rabba Rabba!!😆😆😆

Ok cool yaar u update today😉

Love Kat

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aarora

@aarora

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Posted: 16 years ago

#82

hey sweety..really sorry cudnt comment fr 2 parts..bt something unexpctd turnd up in d family..luvd both d parts..cant blv evn riddhima is attractd 2 him so much dat she s dreaming of dem being togethr..lol..update soon..cant wait 2 read more..n thanx fr PM hun..

luv ya..

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simran1285

@simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#83

I am at work so can't send PM's

but Part 6 is up!!

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KAT

@Catwoman

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Posted: 16 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: simran1285
I am at work so can't send PM's

but Part 6 is up!!

Simi if u get chance can u like update the Title post to reflect the update

Love Kat😳

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KAT

@Catwoman

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Posted: 16 years ago

#85

OMG simi what an update 👏

Armi- Sure would you like to start from the top or bottom?

Omg i was so cracking up at this line....and he like kissed her lol...😳

Simi not far yaar short parts i wanted to see how she reacted to the comments...he just made.

Talk about Lion attacking the prey!! great goin yaar😳

Update soon ...

Love Kat

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Jia

@jia..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#86

Woahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Sim!!!! This was fabulous!! Ok i am still in a daze, he kissed her!!!!! And u described the whole scene so beautifully girl!! Hats off to u!!

Ok and the other details, her nervousness, her plight, her glances at him, and then that disappointment, Sim ur just excellent, superbly excellent!!! Man wasnt the part the part short though??? Haha i want a another one up super soon.

ur taking this fabulously, the way ur building up their chemistry is brilliant!! Will be waiting for more eagerly!!