Manzil (AR FF) Discontinued!

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Kiara

@perfectpiscean

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Haha I really enjoyed this part!

Especially the dialogues...U penned them really well! And im totally waiting 4 the next part =D

Please continue soon...And thanks 4 the PM hun!

-Marisha

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#62

simran that was such an awsome part! OMG!!!!!!!! your soooo good girl, fabulous writter! love the way u describe things! very very good! hehehe armaans thoughts are so dirty! the way he was checking her out and wanting to take her right there and then! he is determined to have sex with her! wonder how and what he will do to break ridz!!!!!!

and ridz, like wow the girl sure has will power, to resist him! she definately wants him too, with the way shes attracted to him! and she deserves it too! shes a 27 year old divorced virgin, its time she explores her sexuality...and who better to do it with then armaan! lets see how long she will resist armaan!!!!

omg im sooo excited for the upcoming, he has her for 6 months mwhaha cant wait for more! please continue soon sim!

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Sim lol

nice and easy does it tiger! 🤣

omg six months!! she a goner!! she alread 🤪for him!! Loving the flow and all!!👏👏

Yeah yeah i update mine soon!! lol

OMG Govinda hehe...😆😆

Love Kat

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neha2005

@neha2005

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#64

exciting concept! cant wait for the next part!

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360913

Suspended

Posted: 16 years ago

#65

omg dis part was awesum dont no if its my first time commentin on ur ff or not but got to say ive read the 5 updates n dey r fantastic. the concept is very interesting, arz character are wonderfully portrayed. eagerly waiting for the nxt update. do continue soon

luv iram

ps if u carry on lyk dis its us the readers who will b pretty much in need of cold showers n not oly rids. (lol)

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Hina

@hinz

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#66

hey simmi

i love your writing style,

the storyline and progress in the story are great fun to read

and love the pace you taking this at

pm me when u update next

great work hun

love

Hina

btw l loved rankan too,so double the treat for me

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#67

haha..gosh i love ur fan fic! armaan is sooo funny! lol and riddhima with that namaste thing..dang! that was random!

neways, thanks for the pm! cont soon :)

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#68

MY my waht a ff i realy loved reading it armaan is sooooooooooo sameless i cant belive him but i guess thats the way he is............ i m waiting for ur next part very eagerly..... nruti