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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 1

In Mumbai its 9.00 in the night gayatri is having a baby on the other hand naina is having baby. They are in the same hospital and the hospital is called Mumbai hospital. Dilip and Suryaban are running to get in time for the delivery and they bump into each other

Dilip: sorry

Suryaban: sorry

Now they are waiting outside the delivery room and they see each other

Dilip: didn't I just bump into you downstairs anyways forget that what are you doing here?

Suryaban: my wife is having a baby what about you

Dilip: my wife is having a baby to.

They are talking until the doctors come outside the room.

Doctor: Congratulations Mr. Sharma you have a baby girl
Doctor: Congratulations Mr. Khanna you have a baby boy


The next day the two wives come back to their home with their babies. Suryaban and gayatri name their daughter kripa and Dilip and naina name their son Angad. Now kripa and Angad are ten years old and they go to the same school and are bestfriend. Their houses were opposite each other so they used to play after school.

One day Suryaban and Dilip had a fight over something little. Dilip and his family left Mumbai and they went to Manchester. They left in the night when kripa and Angad were sleeping because Dilip knew that Angad wouldn't leave without kripa.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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i am sorry abt this but my dere is something with computer
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 2

When Angad wakes up he finds himself somewhere and he doesn't know what's happening. He is in a hotel and its December so it's snowing outside and some children are throwing snowballs. Angad gets out of the bed and he is very cold. He goes inside the toilet and brushes his teeth and he wears a vest, 2 t-shirts, a jumper, jeans and 2 pairs of socks. He finds his way to the living room and his mum was there preparing breakfast.

Angad: mum where are we?

Naina: We are in Manchester. What the hell are you wearing?

Angad: Its cold here mum

Naina: you are starting school next month so we need to buy equipment for your school so get ready.

Angad gave a fake smile and went back to his room. He started crying because he was all alone in a place where he doesn't know anyone. One month went past and today his starting school. Everything went very well in school and he already made friends such as pritvi, karan and josh. Every week he used to write letters to kripa but he never got to send them. His letters was about how Manchester looked like, how many new friends he made, how much he missed her. Kripa was very sad and her friends tried to make her laugh but they always failed. Angads jokes always made her laugh and most of times they had fights. Angad always had to ask for forgiveness because he knew that kripa was stubborn.


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Posted: 19 years ago
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i'll continue tommorow or after scool
plz post ur comments and ideas
it will help me write it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Pls cont soonnnn.....ur story is really interesting and u write well too 👏 👏 👏 ...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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woow..continue soon jaan! 😃

YummY 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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will b wait 4 u 2 continue.................................................
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sorry 4 those people who like to read in indian
i dont know how 2 write in indian
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 3

As the sun shone into the city Mumbai, We hear a loud music playing in the mansion. We go up the stairs then right and into room. There a girl came out of the toilet with her towel, checking through her wardrobe, picking a mini skirt with a top. We see someone putting lip gloss on and little bit of make up on and of course it's none than our own kripa.

Gayatri: kripa beta put the music of and come here to pray. (they have a mandir in their mansion)

Kripa: OK mama and kripa goes downstairs

Gayatri: what the heck are you wearing kripa. What kind of clothes is this?

Kripa: Mum these clothes are in fashion now I don't like wearing those salwaar kameez clothes they're for people who don't even now anything about new fashions.

Suryaban: stop use two, don't use have anything better to do the first thing in the morning.

They all go in the mandir and pray. Today kripa is going to Manchester to start college. It's her last day in Mumbai and her family will move to Manchester about a week after.

In Manchester

There is a path which leads us to a big house. A maid opens a door and we see someone under the duvet.

Maid: wake up Mr. Angad its 9: oo and Mr. Pritvi is waiting for you downstairs
Angad: Bella Bella how many times have I told you that you can call me by name?

Bella: every morning sir

Angad gets out of the bed and goes to have a shower. He puts on his clothes quickly and goes downstairs. He bites an apple on his way out the door but his mum sees him

Naina: Angad! Why don't you sit down and eat your breakfast properly.

Angad: mum I'm late. Bye go to go

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz people post ur coments or else i wont be able to cont

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