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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: anushababli

okk here cums my 2nd edit
uff..........
dosti main kya kya karna padta hain
ek to padho phir uspe comment karo
bura bhi nahin bol sakte aakhir dosti ka sawaal hain
jus kidding
u knw me
na
nowadays i behave like an insane person..............
PART 3:-

Dharam drove his car to his new college. He was very excited about his first day of BA and also about the girl.exicted about the girl????????/wat do u mean huh......

anu kya sochke ye sentence likha tune???? 😆😆😆Dharam and Veer had just shifted to Bombay and they has already missed 2 months of their new course. Dharam was looking for parking space which again is difficult to find when he saw Veer and Ananya arguing.waah wat a first day of coll
btw do u remember our first day of coll
kya majja aaya
okk chuck i forgot that other ppl will also read this
He parked his car and went towards them.

D:- Veer yeh kya ho raha hain? Maine tumhe rukhne ke liya kaha aur tum ho ki aise he mujhe choker chale gaye........

Dharam say Ananya in a very angry mood.

D:- Veer yeh kaun hain?

V:- Hain ek ghamandi ladki...................😆kya introduction hain............😆😆

Anaya came closer to Veer but not at all in a romantic way.thnx 4 mentioning the NOT word hum to kya kya sochne lage......................😆😆😆

A:- Dekh, tu ab tak mujhe jaanta nahin hain. Ek ulte haat ki dungi toh tera akal thikane pe aayega Samajha......😡uff is gusse main bhi pyaar jhalakta hian............😆😆

Veer went towards Anaya in an angry mood but Dharam stopped him from getting any closer.kya yaar dharam jane deta usse ghamandi ladki ke paas..........

D:- Veer hosh main toh ho? Aisa swabhav accha nahin hain......

V:- Chodo mujha Dharam. Main is ladki ko abhi thek karta ho.😡

Ananya let out a very sarcastic laugh.😆

A:- Dharam aur Veer!!!!!!!! Accha hain. Aisa lagta hain ki main history ki kitab padh rahi hoon. Jethne puraane tumhare naam hain, utne puraane tum dono ki soch hain. Tu ek baar mujse muqabla kar😉 kya annaya BA ker rahin hain to history sub aayega hi na.......

Veer went for another attack but Dharam stopped him.phirse

ye dharam sudhrega nahin😆😆
D:- Dekho Ananya, Veer ko baar baar lalkaarna bandh karo.

A:- Kyun darr jaaega kya. Main chunaunti se peche nahin hat thi.

D:- Agar aise baat hain to theke. Veer tumse dobaara muqabla karega issi jagaha pe.............

A:- Mujha manzoor hain. (Looking at Veer she said.........) Haarne ke liye tayaar ho jao.😆kya ananya future dekh leti hain

usse pata nahin ki veer kya cheese hian
Dharam and Veer entered their new college. Dharam was quiet nervous but Veer was very chilled out.

They entered their classroom with everyone staring at them. Dharam got very nervous but Veer just looked back at them and smiled back.superstar ko to aadat ho jati hain Looking at his smile and gorgeous looks many girls in the class started blushing.ye to hona hi tha The bell rang. Many people came inside the classroom while a few who didn't want to attend the lecture left the room. Veer sat beside another guy. He introduced himself as Akshay. They automatically clicked as they had some common interests. Dharam sat in front of Veer and Akshay. He wanted to sit with Veer but Veer wanted him to stay alone and meet new people.nice bro huh.......... That the only way he wont get nervous.

Ananya entered the room and acted as though she owned it. Veer saw and his mood completely changed.

V:- Hey bhagwan yeh ladki yahan pe bhi.........😆

Ak(Akshay):- Kaun, Ananya?i guess she is popular??////

V:- Yaar, tum jaante nahin ho. Yeh ladki bahut ajeeb hain. Har baath pe jhagada karti hain aur bahut ghamandi hain.

Ak:- Main usko jaanta hoon. Vo itni bhi buri nahin hain.......

Veer said jokingly........

V:- Taarif kyun kar rahe ho? Tum usko pasand karte ho kya?😆😆😆secret admirer huh.......

Akshay gave a very weird expression.kyon bhai pyar karne main burai kya hain???

Ak:- She is my sister.................🤣omg sister hain?maine socha ki love triangle hoga.......

shyaan anu mere sapno per tune water daaal diya Veer was rather embarrassed. Before Veer could apologise the lecturer came in. Everyone stood up, reluctantly ofcourse. 5 minutes after the lecture started, Sia entered the room. She apologised for being late.late comer r lucky ppl they r saved 4m torturtous proff by @leat 5-10 mins She saw that the room was full and there was no place to sit.room was full????😲😲😲 She saw that only one space was empty ie besides Dharam. veer bhi smart hainjaan bhuke kisi aur ke saath baith gaya taki vo mirror wali ladki dharam ke baju main baith sake antar yami VEER😆😆😆She went and sat there. Dharam lost it completely. He was staring at her and remembered the first time he saw her. She looked at Dharam and smiled but kept her distance.BUT OBVIUS @ A DISTANCE CHIPPKE...... Dharam realised she was getting uncomfortable and stopped staring and tried to concentrate in the lecture.TRIED IS VERY BIG WORD.............

NICE ONE
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: anushababli

my 2d edit............
PART 3:-

Dharam drove his car to his new college.He was very excited about his first day of BA and also about the girl.wat do you mean by this.............??????Dharam and Veer had just shifted to Bombay and they has already missed 2 months of their new course. Dharam was looking for parking space which again is difficult to find when he saw Veer and Ananya arguing. idhar bhi ghamandi ladki......He parked his car and went towards them.

D:- Veer yeh kya ho raha hain? Maine tumhe rukhne ke liya kaha aur tum ho ki aise he mujhe choker chale gaye........😆

Dharam say Ananya in a very angry mood.

D:- Veer yeh kaun hain?

V:- Hain ek ghamandi ladki...................😆wat an introduction yaar😆😆

Anaya came closer to Veer but not at all in a romantic way.kya yaar anu i thought so many stuff 4 a sec wen i read first 5 words.........

A:- Dekh, tu ab tak mujhe jaanta nahin hain. Ek ulte haat ki dungi toh tera akal thikane pe aayega Samajha......😡

Veer went towards Anaya in an angry mood but Dharam stopped him from getting any closer.dharamm bhi na jane deta V ko A ke paas uska kya jaa rahn tha

D:- Veer hosh main toh ho? Aisa swabhav accha nahin hain......

V:- Chodo mujha Dharam. Main is ladki ko abhi thek karta ho.😡

Ananya let out a very sarcastic laugh.

A:- Dharam aur Veer!!!!!!!! Accha hain. Aisa lagta hain ki main history ki kitab padh rahi hoon. Jethne puraane tumhare naam hain, utne puraane tum dono ki soch hain. Tu ek baar mujse muqabla kar😉 nice line

Veer went for another attack but Dharam stopped him.

D:- Dekho Ananya, Veer ko baar baar lalkaarna bandh karo.lalkaarna n all hh..........

A:- Kyun darr jaaega kya. Main chunaunti se peche nahin hat thi.

D:- Agar aise baat hain to theke. Veer tumse dobaara muqabla karega issi jagaha pe.............

A:- Mujha manzoor hain. (Looking at Veer she said.........) Haarne ke liye tayaar ho jao.😆

Dharam and Veer entered their new college. veer ko kam mat samjho A Dharam was quiet nervous but Veer was very chilled out.

They entered their classroom with everyone staring at them. Dharam got very nervous but Veer just looked back at them and smiled back.superstar ko to aadat hi hoti haim Looking at his smile and gorgeous looks many girls in the class started blushing. The bell rang. Many people came inside the classroom while a few who didn't want to attend the lecture left the room. Veer sat beside another guy. He introduced himself as Akshay. They automatically clicked as they had some common interests. Dharam sat in front of Veer and Akshay. He wanted to sit with Veer but Veer wanted him to stay alone and meet new people. That the only way he wont get nervous.

Ananya entered the room and acted as though she owned it. Veer saw and his mood completely changed.

V:- Hey bhagwan yeh ladki yahan pe bhi.........😲

Ak(Akshay):- Kaun, Ananya?

V:- Yaar, tum jaante nahin ho. Yeh ladki bahut ajeeb hain. Har baath pe jhagada karti hain aur bahut ghamandi hain.

Ak:- Main usko jaanta hoon. Vo itni bhi buri nahin hain.......

Veer said jokingly........

V:- Taarif kyun kar rahe ho? Tum usko pasand karte ho kya?😆😆😆veer kabhi nahi sudherega 😆😆

Akshay gave a very weird expression.

Ak:- She is my sister.................🤣

Veer was rather embarrassed. 😆Before Veer could apologise the lecturer came in. Everyone stood up, reluctantly ofcourse. 5 minutes after the lecture started, Sia entered the room. She apologised for being late. lucky girl She saw that the room was full and there was no place to sit. She saw that only one space was empty ie besides Dharam. She went and sat there. Dharam lost it completely. He was staring at her and remembered the first time he saw her. She looked at Dharam and smiled but kept her distance. Dharam realised she was getting uncomfortable and stopped staring and tried to concentrate in the lecture.jab siya bajume baithi hoto dhyan kasie jaayega prof per????????😆😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
😉😉

Originally posted by: anushababli

my 3rd edit..............
ser speaking m tired of writing but phise bol rahin hu dosti ke liye kya kyakarna padta hain..................
Part 4:-

The professor was busy explaining Economics.i luv eco.. Some paid attention while many snored🥱.snoring........huh....... Anyone would guess that they were attending just for attendance.me too Dharam tried hard to concentrate but couldn't. He had the constant urge of looking at Sia.😆 stare karna hain to karna na.....Sia on the other hand was actually paying attention and also making notes which is very rare for any college going student.😆 Its a miracle if you are even listening to the professor. miracle its the 8th wonder of world Dharam kept glancing at her. While writing a small strand of hair fell on her face. She placed it back in it original position. Dharam blushed.☺️ab blush karneki kya zaroorat hain.... Suddenly a small ball of paper was thrown towards Dharam from behind. He picked it up and opened it. It said, "LAGE RAHO!"😆omg its hilarious........LAGE RAHO KEWL HUH......do u remember we used to hrow chits @ each otherduring lec....😆Dharam looked behind and saw Veer laughing mischievously.🤣 Dharam threw the paper back at him. ...........

Veer was just too bored to pay attention. nothing new....He was monitoring the entire class and seeing if anyone was doing any mischief.His mood became a little off when he saw Ananya.😡 She too was least bothered and was texting someone through her cellphone while chewing gum.yeah jus like me.i use to talk to you thru sms during my phys lec... Veer was just about to look towards the board until he saw what happened next.

Ananya was sitting with a girl named Simran.kuch aur naam nahin mila kya..... She was pretty but not as much as Ananya. But her beauty showed because she was taking care of herself. padhai ke alava kuch TIMEPAAS to chahiye na yar Ananya was least bothered about most things especially about the way she looked.she is more bothered about irriating veer.Someone threw a paper ball at Simran. She picked it up. It was a very cheesy love letter. Simran turned back to see who threw it. A guy sitting on Simran's right and two benches behind was smiling devilishly. He was none other than Agastya the self proclaimed playboy.(He is Agni. His hair this time is trimmed. Changed the name as Agni sounds very ancient. Hope you like it)yeah i did like it....... Simran got worried.y worried yaar???? Anaya took the paper from her and read it. She looked back and saw that Agastya was winking at her. Without a second thought, Ananya removed a crazy ball (A small but hard rubber ball) from her pocket pocket main kya kya rakhti hain yaar....... and threw it towards Agastya. He wasn't ready and it hit him directly on the head. ohh wow.awesum.......The ball returned back to Anaya's hand. Agastya was writhing in pain. He looked at Ananya angrily. Ananya told Simran not to worry.how sweet😆 Looking at this Veer let out a little smirk. He had to admit it, this girl has got guts.

Ananya heard Veer's smirk and looked at him. He stopped smirking. oooooooooooooo

veer to darr gaya kya?????She pointed her finger at him and gave him a thumbs down signal.😆 nice i liked it.Looking at this Veer got irritated and pulled out his tongue to her. Dharam desperately wanted to talk to Sia but was feeling to shy.shy baby life main kuch nahin hoga agar ye shy bana rahega......😛

The lecture got over. Sia packed her handbag and left. Dharam just stared. Veer got up with his new friend Akshay and told Dharam to come along. Ananya was also moving out at the same time. She didn't look at Veer. Agastya caught hold of Ananya's hand. Everyone stopped in their tracks. Anaya look behind.

Ag(Agastya):- Ananya tera problem kya hain? Vo letter tere liya nahin tha. Toh tujhe gussa hone ki koi zaroorat nahin thi.

A:- Pehle haath chod.😡

Ag:- Kyun sharam aa rahi hain? Tumhe bura lag raha hain ki maine tumhe vo letter nahin diya? Thek hain, agli baar tere liye ek letter likh dunga.

He gave another evil smile.

Again without warning Ananya gave one punch to Agastya in the stomach. He was writhing in pain again and let go of Ananya's hand. Looking at this everyone gave out an"OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" sound which usually happens before a fight is to occur.

A:- Dobaara bola toh meri maar isse jyada hoga. Apna shakal aaine main dekh. Gadha kahika. I would rather kiss a toilet seat than to be with you.🤣 Get lost!!

Veer started smirking again. Agastya looked at him. Veer didn't care and was still laughing. Agastya left.

D:- Veer, pehlese dushman kyun banaa rahe ho?

V:- Arre yaar, he deserved it. Usko aur bhi sharmindagi ki baath hain kyunki vo ek ladki se haar gaya.

Ak(Akshay):- Arre tum dono jaante nahin ho. Ananya aur Agastya ek dusre se nafrat karte hain. Agastya har muqable main Ananya se haar jaata hain.

V:- Toh vo Ananya ko love letter kyun dena chahata hain?

Ak:- Reputation yaar, reputation. Agastya bahut bada flirt hain. Har ladki aaasaani se ya mushkil se usse patt jaati hain. Ananya usko bhav he nahin deti. She cares a damn. Agastya ko aur challenging lagta hain. That why he keeps trying again and again and also gets beaten again and again. Now let go. Its lunch time. Canteen jaate hain.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dhanno10

KYA YAAR ANU I MEAN MALLIKA-E-RAJT TU TO BADI CHUUPI RUSTUM NIKLI
WAISE THIK THAK LIKH LETI HAIN..................AUR BAHOT AAGE TAK JAAN AHIN JI AAPKO.................
JUS KIDDING IT WAS REALY NICE
M REALY SORRY I CULDINT COMMENT B4..................................
MUAAF KAR DO
DHANNO-E-MAU

YUP. I AM A CHUPPI RUSTAM.
DONT WORRY. MY EDITS WILL KEEP GOING. NO CHANNEL WILL SHUT IT DOWN.
JAAEYE. HUMNE AAPKO MUAF KAR DIYA.
TAKLIA.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: anushababli

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment Jiya🤗. Kya kare yaar? Dont have enough time to make it too lengthy. Will do my best to keep it long the next time.

awwww.....hun u dont need to worry abt dat......jus try ur best....always m here wen u need sunthin.....u r jus too gud, waht can I say.......ppl jus get addicted to ur FF and so they want more😳.....ur Cho Chweet.
Ciao
Jiya
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Posted: 16 years ago
THANKU. WAITING FOR YOU NEXT EDIT. MAKE IT QUICK.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: act12

awwww.....hun u dont need to worry abt dat......jus try ur best....always m here wen u need sunthin.....u r jus too gud, waht can I say.......ppl jus get addicted to ur FF and so they want more😳.....ur Cho Chweet.
Ciao
Jiya

THANKU. I THINK THAT THIS ADDICTION IS AT LEAST HEALTHY. YOU ALSO VERY CHWEET. LOVE READING YOUR REPLIES.
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Posted: 16 years ago
anu no comments this time...
just me rolfing
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

dostana 😕
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 cncored..thogut i have not seen d movie 😆🤣🤣🤣 n don't feel like ewwwwwww🤢🤣🤣

but veer teasing...dharam..n dharam toh
🤣🤣🤣🤣

i liked veer and dharam's ched khani..
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

but Akshay.is such a sweet brother......😳 i would love to have one brother like him 😭😭😭

kya yaar emotional kar diya 😆

waise..i know u won't b happy with my edit this time..
u must b carving for my running comentary...lekin....
🤣🤣🤣i think its ok..for now..
ab toh dhanno ki comentary tu enjoy kar....
🤣🤣🤣me enjoyed reading dat🤣🤣🤣

dhanno i loved ur quote in second edit
ek toh ff padho upar secomment karo..
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

anu sweety dil pe mat lena hu me jk 😳😉😆 u know na me n dhanno...
🤣🤣

waise..here is my quota..
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Edited by Rash2cool - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
somewhere..
i felt that u were describing me !!😆
that teasing mom is biggest entertainment..
and coming out of bathroom in towel..and talking all the time to myself..
just like dharam..my sister always comes in my room.......
i order to prevent it....i switch on TV.then go for bath.......so that if channel changes ..i get to knoe that she is out there...
and akashy feeding his sister....always it's me who bring food for maharani....
cool yaar!!
completely practical update!!!

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