DharamVeer in 21st Century - Part 23 - Page 67 - Page 19

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dv_freak

hi!

well ihv read all the parts which u have written till know and sotry is realllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyy well!!
keep it up!

Thank you so much. I love your concept and story line even more.🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
^^ thnk u yaar plz post the nxt part
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 9:-

DAYS OF THEIR LIVES

Veer ran to the 4th floor, towards his room. He closed the door behind him. Veer's room's interior decorations were made much against his will. His room was very elegant having a grey colour concept. All the furniture had a tint of grey to it. Even the bed cover was grey. Veer didn't like it at all. But Nivitri had no intention to listen to Veer. She was not ready to ruin the interiors just for Veer. Well at least Veer was grateful that the walls were not grey. It was just plain white. There were a few modern art painting hung up on the wall. Veer never appreciated modern art.😆 He felt that some kid has made a few scribbles and they are just selling that junk for crores. But Nivriti thought different. The only thing that was different in the room was Veer's guitar which was metallic red in colour. His cousin had gifted it to him but he never had the opportunity to learn it.

Veer was smiling as he entered the room. He just loved irritating his mom. It brought such a satisfying smile to his face. Nothing else could ever do that. He was lying on the silky mattress which was on top of the bed and thinking about the entire day.

Veer (To himself):- That stupid Ananya!!!! Because of her my bike is ruined. I will definitely beat her during the challenge. She will repent that she ever challenged me.😡

Veer had a very annoying habit of talking to himself but he only did that when he was alone. He got up and went to the bathroom to take a shower. Veer came out of the shower and wore a towel.☺️😍 He started shaking his head from left to right in order to dry his hair☺️😍. (Ya! Ya! I know that is sexy.☺️ Come on now people. Stop drooling!☺️😍). He was still muttering about defeating Ananya. He came out of the bathroom and closed the door behind him. He looked at his room and gave out a scream.

Dharam was lying on Veer's bed.

Veer:- DHARAM! What are you doing? Can't you knock before you enter?😲

Dharam:- How can I? Your door was open.🤣

Veer:- You know, this is a really bad time to joke.

Dharam:- Look who is talking? By the way, shouldn't you be wearing some clothes?

Veer:- Jee....... Thanks. I didn't know that I was half naked in front of you.🤣 Now go out I have to dress. Don't expect me to do a Saawariya stunt. 🤣

Dharam:- Fine. But I heard you muttering about Ananya.

Veer (Blushes!):- That was nothing.☺️

Dharam:- Oh God! Mujhe pataa nahin tha, that you could like someone so fast. Tu change ho gaya hain re.

Veer:- Thats bullshit! You are saying that so that you can hide your true feelings.

Dharam:- Tera matlab kya hain re? What do you mean by true feelings?

Veer:- Aha! You don't have to be so innocent. I saw the way you were looking at that girl who was sitting beside you during the lecture.

Dharam (Blushes!):- Aisa kuch nahin tha. Hum bas.....☺️

Veer:- Safai dene ki koi zaroorat nahin. Tu ab phas gaya hain. You can't escape out of this.

Dharam:- You have it wrong. Its just that....

Veer wasn't even paying attention.

Veer (Sings):- Dharam ko mirchi lagi to main kya karoon.🤣🤣

Dharam:- VEER! I won't leave you for this.

Veer:- Tune mujhe pakada kahan hain Dharam.🤣🤣

Dharam runs after Veer. After running in circles around the room for a long time Dharam catches hold of Veer by holding his towel.

Veer:- Dharam! Mera towel chod.

Dharam:- Nahin.

Veer:- Arre! What is this? I knew it! I should have never taken you to see Dostana.🤣 You have completely changed after that. What do you think this is? Dostana Part 2?🤣🤣

Dharam lets go of Veer just for a second. Veer takes advantage of this opportunity and runs into the bathroom.

Dharam:- Just wait until you come out Veer. I won't leave you for this.

Veer:- As I said earlier Dharam, tune mujhe pakada he kahan hain?🤣

Hearing this Dharam stomps his way out of the room.

No one in Ananya's apartment had celebrated any festival or had a satisfyingly pleasant moment for the past 10 years. Each day Dharam and Veer would have their fun fights and laugh and giggle and watch Nivriti act out a few scenes from her favourite movies. The giggling and laughing had slowly disappeared from Ananya's face and life years ago.

Ananya lay on her bed. All the tears after shouting at Akshay had dried up. She lay on her bed just gazing out, gazing into the vast nothingness of the sky. She was starving but her mind and ego was refusing to let her eat. Akshay came in her room. She turned back, glanced at him and then stared back to look at the sky.

Ananya:- What do you want?

Akshay:- I brought you some food. I know you like to eat with Mom but you know she has gone to London.

Ananya:- I am not hungry. Just go from here.

Akshay didn't pay attention to her. He sat beside her.

Akshay:- I told you so many times, never punish your stomach. If you are hungry then just eat something.

Ananya:- Maine kaha naa, mujhe bhuk nahin hain. Now just go from here.

Akshay:- Okay. You were right. That was a sensitive topic to discuss. I won't take that issue the next time. Okay? Now will you eat.😊

Ananya was still looking out.

Akshay:- Today's subzi is your favourite, Paneer Makhanwala!!!!!!!

Ananya looked at the plate. She sat up.

Akshay:- Please!!!😊

Ananya smiled.😊

Akshay:- That's such a relief. Now the subzi won't go to waste.😆

Ananya smiled again.😊

Akshay took out a piece of roti, dipped it in the subzi and fed it to her. She did the same for Akshay.😃

Akshay:- How did you know that I didn't eat?

Ananya:- Because you are just like mom. You won't eat if I haven't eaten.😃

After they finished their dinner Akshay wished Ananya goodnight and went out of the room.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome update. Akshay is such a sweet brother😍 Nivriti is a abstract admirer. Poor Veer.😆😆 Loved the interaction between DV. It was😎.
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Posted: 16 years ago
awww sweet akki btw it was fantastic i edit it now i was like wha have i write bte love the movies you mentioned very filmy update
Edited by hiri - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
👏👏Such an awesum update....wel there are sum thing i absolutely luved:
1) Veer thinking of Ananya even afta he arrived and like she left him eventho its jus anger but he did blush so that an improvment😉
2)Veer's room colored in abstract.....OMG.....i feel sorry for him, makes him look very emo.......And the modern art😆......WOW, i guess he didnt like them cuz our Veer already likes the ancient arts from his real time before reincarnation😆
3)Veer talking to himself.😲........guess what, when I m pissed i talk to myself aswell so i kinda understand that😳
4)"Don't expect me to do a Saawariya stunt".......OMG😆......i laughed wen i read this line....U r too gud.
5)Veer:- Arre! What is this? I knew it! I should have never taken you to see Dostana.🤣 You have completely changed after that. What do you think this is? Dostana Part 2?🤣.........I jus luved this part, i was dying....Dostana 2, OMG and that too Dharam 🤣
6)Dharamveer fighting was so hilarius and cute😍
7)the comparison u did wid Ananya and DV was jus amazing, I mean by that u get both feelings: u feel really sorry for anaya and ur heart wants to cry for her, and on the other side u think that every holiday has to b with DV fight cuz its so cute
8) I jus luv the way u showed akshay cuz he is really sweet.....a bro should be like him....man i wish by bro wud b like him but then again if every bro wud b like him then the story wudnt b called a Fiction.😆
9) WOW.......ananya likes Paneer Makhanwala too, wow guess we do share a lot of similarities......J/K😆
well i jus luved it......I hope u didnt mind, neways plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do update as soon as possible. I simply luved ur FF. Lastly, u did make the part longer than the last 1 but i want longer than this cuz ur FF is simply mindblowin and I cant wait to know what happened to our poor ananya. Well I have to go, Plz PM me again wid the link if its not a hassle for u.
thx
Ciao
Jiya
Edited by act12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
so cute
but only the anaya part! =p
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Posted: 16 years ago
thankuuuuuuuuuu so much!!
ill give u full edit on this.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey yr ur whole ff is just tooooooooooooooooogud just wana c the luv track of veer n ananya pleeeeeeeeeeeeeez update asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: asrasrasr

Awesome update. Akshay is such a sweet brother😍 Nivriti is a abstract admirer. Poor Veer.😆😆 Loved the interaction between DV. It was😎.

Thanks. Yup, magar aaj kal aise bhai bahut kam hote hain. Thanks again

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