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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: anusha_123

Wow i like the arrival of new members!

Good update😉

glad u liked it
thanks!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

lubly update shona.......thanks rashi
loved it glad u did
finally all met ...hashhhhhh yup...cudnt drag that any further
plz do update soon dear 🤗 will try within a couple of weeks

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Posted: 16 years ago
Sorry for late comment. Read all part before like all so much and waiting for next exciting talwarbaji part 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
🤗🤗🤗awww....such a lovely update dear......m so sorry that i cudnt reply to any previus updt but i was very busy as i had finals but now i m free and happy dat it is updated...........*whew*, i finally read this FF, was searching forever...........neways, a very luvely updt,👏👏 VV scenes were so cute😳....jus luved it, i hope Veer falls for Vinishka soon, neways plzz cont. soon and Plzzzzz do PM me wen u update.😉.....thx
Ciao
Jiya
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: act12

🤗🤗🤗awww....such a lovely update dear......m so sorry that i cudnt reply to any previus updt but i was very busy as i had finals its ok dear...im glad u liked the update! but now i m free and happy dat it is updated...........*whew*, i finally read this FF, was searching forever...........neways, a very luvely updt,👏👏 VV scenes were so cute😳....jus luved it, i hope Veer falls for Vinishka soon pleased to know that u liked it...hopefully it will happen soon enuf....😳...., neways plzz cont. soon and Plzzzzz do PM me wen u update.😉.....thx yh will pm u wen i update next....thanks jiya for ur comments, i realli appreciate it😊

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Jiya

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shruja

Sorry for late comment. Read all part before like all so much and waiting for next exciting talwarbaji part 👏

thx shruja...lolz everyones waiting for the next talwarbaji part n i dont even know how its gonna happen...i made precap up without planning...😳...i hope i can update it soon wen i think of a scene to fit it into....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi everyone,
firstly my apologys for not updating for so long....secondly i dont have a clue when i'll update next...im too busy with skool these days ....will try to update wenever i can...umm that cud be til around april time... but until then ur gonna hav to wait😳sowie
Shona
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Posted: 16 years ago
don be sowwie shona studies cum first na so....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hiriforRajat

don be sowwie shona studies cum first na so....

thx esha for understanding...yup studies do....wich is unfair
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ahista Ahista Part 15
Hi guys...its been ages since i wrote anything for this fanfic...n today i got sum time as its my easter vacations so im gonna update
one more thing, i know i havent wrote in a long time and i understand if people are no longer interested in reading, if thats the case then tell me n i'll stop writing.
Moving on heres part 15...
Recap: veer and vanshika have been missing for a few days but are on their way back. they meet Veer's best friend Shourya. Veer and Vanshika back in Amargardh where they are united with Sanvi n Dharam...
Sanvi: Vanshika tumne toh meri jaan hi nikal di thi
Vanshika: humari koi galti nahin thi...aur agar Veer na hote toh shayad hum khabhi wapas na ah pate...arre didi ye sab baatein choodiye...humme ye bataye kya Rajkumari Dharam ko pasand ayi...kyunki hum jante hai woh toh apko pasand ahgaye hoge
Sanvi blushes a lil and for a few seconds is lost in a web of Dharam's thoughts
Vanshika: haye! apji in ankhon mein apka aur unka jawab saaf dikh raha hai...bas ab hum Rajmahel ponch jaye...maa se baat karke apki shaadi ki tareekh jald hi paki kara dete hai...
The 2 sisters continue their teaseing....
on the other hand Veer is eating his meal quite greedily...he did miss his food in the last 3 days...Dharam is sitting opposite him...staring at his younger brother thinking "no matter what Veer will be Veer"....
Veer looks up at his brother with a raised eyebrow....
Dharam: toh Veer baatao kya hua
Veer: kya hua....sari kahaani Vanshika ne batah toh di
Dharam: hum tumare badle tewar ki kahaani ke bare mein poonch rahe hai...
Veer: kya kya kya!?
Dharam: ab ziyada bano maat...pehli bar tum jo na jane kyun Rajkumariyon se itni nafrat karta hai...ek rajkumari ke saath pure teen din aur teen raate guzar ke aye ho...aur zara bhi gusa nahin kiya...aur toh aur aaj lotne ke badh Rajkumari Vanshika ki na khatam hone wali baaton se bhi nahin gusa hue....Aryanagar mein mein aur Shourya itni baatein karte toh kab ka chup kara diya hota
Veer quickly interjects: Arre Dharam Shourya mujhe mila tha...woh apni Nani ke ghar aya hua hai
Dharam: acha...par hum tumhari baat kar rahe hai...baato na....
Veer: Dharam tum kyun aisi bakwaas baatein kar rahe ho...aisa kuch nahin...aur meri jo rai hai Rajkumariyon ke bare mein woh bilkul sach sabit hui...Vanshika ek bilkul bewakuf aur badimagi Rajkumari hai...teewaron wali
Veer smiles to himself thinking what a big lie he's telling, just then Vanshika comes in...Veer's roti falls out of his hand...he thinks Vanshika heard him
Vanshika: Mahel jane ki liya rath tayar hai...didi apka bahar intazar kar rahi hai...(she looks at Veer) kya rotion pe ziyad ghee laga dia hai...jo pisal gayi....
Veer smiles and picks it up from his plate and starts eating again....Vanshika and Dharam leave the room
Back in Amargardh's main Palace everyone is ready to welcome the 2 princes and princesses....Maharani Prateeksha is delighted to know even Sanvi agrees to the proposal whole heartedly and Vanshika also approves.
Later that evening while Sanvi is showing Dharam around Veer decides to explore the palace himself....
He ends up in Vanshika's practise arena....he sees her practising archery yet again and with the same undescrible reason he cant help but watch her....Vanshika's eyes fall on him and she puts he bow and arrow down
Veer walks forward
Veer: dhanurdari ap achi karleti hai
Vanshika: jante hai, pitahji bhi ye hi kehte hai...waise ap bhi talwar bazi achi kar lete hai
Veer: apko shatra(weoponery) vidya mein bohat dilchaspi hai
Vanshika: humme bachpan se hi shatravidya sikni thi...par koi humme talwarbaazi sikha ta hi nahin...kya...kya ap humme sikhayenge.....
Veer blurted out without think: ek shart pe
Vanshika: shart...kaisi shart
Veer: app humme dhanurdhari sikhayengi
Vanshika: hum....apko....app kunver hai...ab ye maat kahiye ga ke apko dhanurdari nahin ati
Veer: ati hai par apke jaisi nahin
Vanshika: kya...kya ap sach mein humse sikhna chahte hai ya humari tang kheech rahe hai
Veer: hum sach keh rahe hai....
Vanshika: teekh hai hum sikhayenge....
Vanshika goes to put her bow and arrow away and get 2 swords....
Veer looks around thinking about his convo with Vanshika
Veer: veer ye kya kar rahe ho...tum isse sikho ge...aur usse sikhao ge...
Vanshika: apne kuch kaha
Veer: haan....mera matlab nahin...nahin toh
Vanshika: ye lijiye talwar....shuru kare
Veer: haan....acha samne khadi ho jao....
Vanshika obeys
Veer: talwarbazi mein ek baat hamesha yaad rakni chahiye...khabhi bhi ek pal ke liye bhi dushmaan se nazar nahin hat ni chahiye...agar hiti toh nitija parajay ya mrityu....acha...pehle ap talwar pakad nah sikiye....
He takes her hand and places in the correct spot...he eyes instantly slash on his face and she feels a stange heat where he touched her hand.....
Their lesson continues as Veer teaches Vanshika how to attack
Veer: acha ab tum mujhe pe var karo
Vanshika comes to attack...veer reflexively counter attacks it...Vanshika trips and falls....only to land in Veer arms....
Veers analyetical eyes take every detail of her face down...as though he had to remember it off by heart....he also realises the colour was rapidly turning pink....Vanshika also noticed this change of colour in her face but she also heard the acceleration of Veer's heart....she finally looks away from Veer's mezmerizing eyes....
Veer puts her back on her feet....
Veer: baki ka kal kare
Vanshika: hmm
Veer: ahh...maharani shayad dhoond rahi hogi....woh....bhojan ka waqt ho gaya hai na....
Vanshika: hmm...umm toh chaleh
They walk out only to run into Sanvi and Dharam
Dharam: Veer tum yahan kya kar rahe ho...Rajkumari Vanshika ke saath
Veer: woh Dharam kuch nahin...bas aisa hi mahel dekh raha tha...aur Rajkumari Vanshika humme yahan mil gayi
Sanvi: acha baatein badh mein kar na...Maa sabko bula rahi hai bhojan ke liye...
All leave to have dinner
Guys please let me know if u want me to carry on or not
Thanks
Shona
Edited by **Shona** - 16 years ago

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