Ahista Ahista|STOPPED WRITING-see PG 35| - Page 23

aaaw!! thats such a sweet and nice part!! i liked very much, this Shouryas description.. is he going to come soon?? =P...

veer and vanshika are getting closer and closer day by day, ahista ahista, nice track Shona! =D, everything is going smoothly..

Dharam and Sanvis marriage!! so soon!! wow! thats amazing, waiting for it! =D that means, that veer and vanshika will get more chances to be together, aswell, while we enjoy wid sanvi and dharam romantic scenes... hehe..

and yes, the veer taking vanshika in arms scene, was really matching wid the situation, and everything.

overall, Shona, its perceptible that u are enjoying ur writting too. i hope its true!

Originally posted by: CutieA

awwwwwwwwww bless! that wkd! sooooo cute lol...its a lil short :S...but a pleasant suprise! mwah...cnt wait for nxt update xxx

Originally posted by: hiri

that was brill veer taking vanshi into his arms sooooo romantic...witin for talwarbazy practise...

esha

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

nice update after a long gap dear... I loved the scene where Veer carries vanshika n the precapp... WOW cant wait for next update..

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

aaaw!! thats such a sweet and nice part!! i liked very much, glad u liked it

this Shouryas description.. is he going to come soon?? =P... yup he's here to stay...once the story gets back to aryanagar there'll be his love track wid Deepti-hopefully...i think ur the onli one who noticed him...everyone else onli noticed VV scene😆

veer and vanshika are getting closer and closer day by day, ahista ahista, nice track Shona! =D, everything is going smoothly..glad u liked it...yh they are getting closer ahista ahista

Dharam and Sanvis marriage!! so soon!! wow! thats amazing, waiting for it! =D that means, that veer and vanshika will get more chances to be together, aswell, while we enjoy wid sanvi and dharam romantic scenes... hehe.. yh i want them to get married soon...lots of VV scenes will happen in the wedding, plus the point was to hav there marriage quick n show how sanvi copes with arranged marriage n love after marriage

and yes, the veer taking vanshika in arms scene, was really matching wid the situation, and everything.im glad u liked it...i was making it all up without much thought

overall, Shona, its perceptible that u are enjoying ur writting too. i hope its true! yup i realli like writing this onli i dont hav enuf time!...i with that it would write by itself as soon as i had the idea....it'd be so much easier

thanks for this part and the pm. take care. ur welcum...n thx for reading n commenting!