Teri Bandagi AR ff upd pg 38 part 14

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NEHA KASHYAP

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Posted: 16 years ago

#81

ahem ahem☺️
it was fantastic aishah
keep it up sweety
continue soon

neha...

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KaSh_4_eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#82

that was a very romantic part aishah

the lengha choli was very pretty

plz continue soon and thanx for the pm

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Kanzy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#83

really sexy edning! i loved dis prt! bt it was really shrt dear and anyways ure gettin there1 thank u so much 4d pm! cntd sn!

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Ankita chadha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#84

Hey..it was simply awesum..!!

y did u leave it incomplete...😉

twas rilli gud...

plz continue soon..!!

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Mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#85

hey.....that was an awesome part!!! but u forgot to pm me!! its kk.....but please remember next time!! :)..........plz continue soon!

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mohini_agarwal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#86

that was wonderful! please continue soon.... and pm me when you do.

thank you for the pm.

-mona :]

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Sneha Desai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#87

It was really great... plz continue...what a part to stop man... but am sure someone's gonna enter that room or cry out to either of them.... oh please don't let anyone interrupt...lol... marvellous writing... i was mesmerised when that suspension pts "...." at the end took me out of my dream....plz update soon

Cheers!!!

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.driftingaway

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Posted: 16 years ago

#88

riddhima wasnt feeling cold anymore his touch was enough to set her entire body on fire ............

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Riddhima: *slowly coming to her senses* armaan yeh tum ... hum .... she quickly pushes herself away from armaan

Armaan : * also coming to his senses* riddhima i'm really sorry .. main yaha par tumhe * however much he tried to make sure that he and riddhima didnt get caught in awkward moments it always seemed to happen* .... riddhima, who has now turned beetroot is blushing like hell and looking down at the floor

Armaan quickly snatches the duppata from the bed and covers riddhima with it

Armaan : riddhima i'm really sorry pata nahi mujhe kya hogaya tha ... main toh yaha par tumhe sirf yeh dene kiliye aaya tha * he takes a beautiful mang tikka out from his pockets*

Riddhima : * to herself iss main armaan ki kya lagti hai riddhima, voh toh bas yaha par tumhe gift dene ki liye aaya tha .. uske tumhe hurt karne ki koi irada nahi tha*

Armaan : main chalta hoon * puts the mang tikka on the dressing table* tumhe neeche pooja main milta hoon * gutted that everything went wrong, whenever he thinks of doing something for riddhima, that 'll make her happy something or the other goes wrong * he turns around and is leaving when riddhima stops him by holding his hand

Riddhima: armaan, agar gift laye ho toh usse pehna bhi do na

* armaan turns around in shock *

armaan: kya ?

R: gives him a small smile its okay armaan main janti hoon ki tum mere liye kabhi bhi bura nahi soch sakte .... teh sab toh bas.... * she starts blushing again* tum mujhe yeh mangtika pehnao ge ?

without saying anything armaan takes the mangtika from her hand and places it on riddhima's forehead * riddhima blushing and smiling at the same time*

A: riddhima tum aaj bohot aachi lag rahi ho * gently kisses her forehead*

Riddhima: tum bhi * armaan had never looked so nice in riddhima's eyes before ... the while shervani really suited him *

armaan hugs riddhima *sideways* and they both stay like this for a few minutes

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Muskaan: ridzi mujhe earrings milgaye * barges the door open* huhhhhh!!!! armaan .... tu yaha par ... esse * she has her hands over her eye* maine kuch nahi dekha

armaan and riddhima quickly break apart ... riddhima is blushing and armaan cant help but smile * he ruffles his hair * woh muskaan main yaha par

Muskaan: dekh armaan tu abhi yaha se bhag ... nani aur padma aunty upar aah rahi, tum dono aapne is romance ki chakar main mujhe bhi paasa do ge

Armaan : ha ... main chalta hoon *smiles at riddhima and quickly leaves*

Muskaan: ridzi aab tu bhi jaldi se tayyar hoja ... maine abhi aayi .... aur haa fikar mat kar armaan yaha par aaya tha main kisiko nahi bataunga * she leaves *

riddhima sits down infront of her dressing table and starts thinking of what happened a few minutes ago, she looks at her reflection in the mirror and admires the mangtika that armaan gifted to her * as much as she denied it ... inside she really couldnt wait till her and armaan got married ... she already knew that armaan would be the best husband in the world .... and as far as being a good father was concerned * well only time would tell * she laughed to herself and carried on getting dressed.

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nani : aare muskaan, anjali, riddhima jaldi aoo pooja shuru hone vala hai

Padma : offo yeh ladkiyaan bhi na anjali, muskaan yeh riddhima kaha rehgayi

muskaan : padma aunty voh abhi aa rahi hai

Just then riddhima walks down the stairs looking like a dulhann, as soon as she started walking down the stairs, she quickly rushes down and takes her place next to armaan,

anjie : wow ridzi meri choti behen aaj kitni beautiful lag rahi hai *hugging*

Muskaan: haa yaar tu toh aaj belkul parion ki tarah dikh rahi hai

Riddhima: thanks di, and thanks muskaan, aap dono bhi bohot ache lag rahe ho

* the pooja starts* everyone closes their eyes to pray but armaan keeps staring at riddhima

R: armaan ... kya kar rahe ho uddhar dekho iddhar nahi

A: * gives her a cheeky grin* and then starts throwing the phool at her

R: armaan *giving him a angry look * koi dekh lega ... tum bhi na kabhi nahi sudroge ... atleast pooja main to apni yeh harkate shuru mat karo

A: *goes really close to her and whispers in her ears* Dr riddhima maine already bhagvan se maafi mang li hai

R: *gives him a confused look* kiss bare main

A: maine unse keh dia hai, ki main sirf aapki ibadaat karunga

R: riddhima looks really touched, and gives him a big smile * closes her eyes, and thanks god for sending armaan into her life .... she was the luckiest girl on earth to have someone like armaan in her life*

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after the pooja everyone is sitting down on the terrace

anjali: kiya yaar mujse kyu vrat rakvaya ... bhook ki mare meri jaan nikal jaa rahi hai

padma : practise beta ...

Atul: brings a glass of water, yeh lo anjali pani pii lo

Anjali : atul tumhe pata hai na ki main ...

Atul : *cuts her in between* pata hai anjali par main tumhe iss halat main nahi dekh sakhta isliye tum pii lo aur vaise bhi, maine toh tumhare lambi umar ki liye rakhi hai na

Anjali: aww atul ... how sweet of u ... she refuses .. agar saare din ki liye already rakh dia hai toh kuch aur ghante hi saahi

Muskaan: oye anjali in ladko ke baato main mat aana ... yeh humare vrat todva ke yeh prove karna chaahte hai ki hum kamzor hai

Armaan: abbey yaar chup kar muskaan... * to rahul * oye tu isse yaha par kyun le aaya jaha bhi jaati hai sirf bhak bhak karti rehti hai

Rahul: main tori na isse yaha par laya ... yeh mujhe yaha par ghasit le ayi

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riddhima and armaan are standing in a corner

Riddhima: she suddenly starts feeling giddy * oww, holding onto the wall*

Armaan: kya hua riddhima tum teek toh hona

Riddhima: haa bas vrat ki vaje se tohri kamzor feel ho raha hai

Armaan: tum yaha par ruko main abhi aaya * he comes back with a glass of juice * ye lo riddhima pii lo

Riddhima: (nahi armaan pushes the glass away) main teek hu, aur vaisi bhi yeh vrat maine tumhare lambi umar kiliye rakhi hai

Armaan: riddhima iss vrat se zyada tumari taabiyat mere liye importance rakta hai aab yeh juice jaldi se peelo

Riddhima: armaaan plzzz ... aab main teek hu ...

Armaan: are you sure riddhima

Riddhima: sachi baba .. !

armaan bends down and gives a biiig kiss on riddhima's cheek making her blush

R: armaan ... yaha sab log hai ... tum bhi na ...she quickly runs away

Anjali : guys main toh bohot bore ho rahi hun chalo kuch game kelte hai

Muskaan: Antakshari !!!

Atul : good idea muskaan chal main shuru karta hoon yeh dosti hum nahi chorenge muskaan joins in

Rahul : arrey koi indono ko chup karau yaar, essa lagta hai jaise koi in dono ka gala daba raha ho

* they both shut up *

muskaan: oye chipku toh tu hi koi game bata na

Atul : haa bol bol ....

anjali : girls mere pass ek idea hai follow me

all the girls including ridzi get up and leave

Rahul: abbe yeh sab ladkiyaan kya karne vaali hai yaar

Armaan: pata nahi yaar ... dekhna parega

suddenly some music starts ....

Bole Chudiyan Bole Kangana..... riddhima comes near armaan .. he's a little taken aback

Haay Main Ho Gayi Teri Saajna
Tere Bin Jiyo Naiyyo Lagda Main Te Margaiyaan

anjali, muskaan, Dr keerti riddhima, : Lehja Lehja Dil Lehja Lehja Soniye Lehja Lehja
Lehja Lehja Dil Lehja Lehja Soniye Lehja Lehja

All the girls : Bole Chudiyan Bole Kangana
Haay Main Ho Gayi Teri Saajna
Bole Chudiyan Bole Kangana
Haay Main Ho Gayi Teri Saajna
Tere Bin Jiyo Naiyyo Lagda Main Te Margaiyaan
Lehja Lehja Dil Lehja Lehja Soniye Lehja Lehja
Bole Chudiyan Bole Kangana
Haay Main Ho Gaya Tera Saajna
Tere Bin Jiyo Naiyyo Lagda Main Te Mar Jaava
Lehja Lehja Soniye Lehja Lehja Dil Lehja Lehja

armaan tries to leave from there but riddhima comes and holds his hand trying to stop him 😳: Haay Haay Main Mar Jaava Mar Jaava Tere Bin
Ab To Meri Raatein Kati Taare Gin Gin * blushing*
Bas Tujhko Pukara Kare Meri Bindiya Ishaara Kare

she tries to run away but armaan stops her

armaan: Lashkara Lashkara Teri Bindiya Ka Lashkara
Aise Chamke Jaise Chamke Chand Ke Pass Sitaara

muskaan to rahul : Meri Payal Bole Tujhe Jo Roothe Manaye Tuhje
Oh Sajan Ji Haan Sajan Ji
Kuch Socho Kuch Samjho Meri Baat Ko

all girls : Bole Chudiyan Bole Kangana
Haay Main Ho Gaya Tera Saajna
Tere Bin Jiyo Naiyyo Lagda Main Te Mar Jaava
Lehja Lehja Soniye Lehja Lehja Dil Lehja Lehja

* Apni Maang Suhaagan Ho Sang Hameshaa Sajan Ho*

the chand shows and everyone starts to break their fasts

: armaan does all the rituals for riddhima and breaks her fast, he then kisses her on the forehead * she blushes* and goes down to touch his feet

Armaan: riddhima yeh tum kya kar rahi ho .... tumhari jaagay yaahan par nahi hai * he hugs her * yaha par hai

( rahul breaks muskaan's fast, anjali and atul and shashank and paddi also break their fast)

riddhima to armaan again : * pulling him towards the wall* Aake Meri Duniya Mein Wapas Na Jaana
Sehra Baand Ke Maahi Tu Mere Ghar Aana

Armaan to ridz : Soni Kithi Soni Aaj Tu Lagdi Weh
Bas Mera Saath Yeh Jodi Teri Sajdi Weh

rahul to muskaan: Roop Aisa Suhana Tera Chand Bhi Deewaana Tera

all girls to the boys : Ja Re Oh Ja Joothe Teri Gala Hum Na Mane
Kyon Taarife Karta Hai Tu Humto Sab Kuch Jaane

shashank and paddy to armaan ridz: Meri Dil Ki Dua Yeh Kahe Teri Jodi Salamat Rahe
Oh Sajan Ji Oh Sajanji Yunhi Bite Saara Jeevan Saath Mein
* they share a sweet family moment*

all girls : Bole Chudiyan Bole Kangana
Haay Main Ho Gaya Tera Saajna
Tere Bin Jiyo Naiyyo Lagda Main Te Mar Jaava
Lehja Lehja Soniye Lehja Lehja Dil Lehja Lehja
Lehja Lehja Soniye Lehja Lehja Dil Lehja Lehja

all boys & girls : Aaja Hiriye Ja Ja Ranjhda
Aaja Hiriye Ja Ja Ranjhda Lehja Lehja Soniye Lehja Lehja Dil Lehja Lehja
Lehja Lehja Soniye Lehja Lehja Dil Lehja Lehja
everyone does masti !!!!!

loong part 😳

hope u guys enjoyed... sorry for any mistakes ... i cant pm any body now ... because im soo sleepy 🥱.. will do it tommorow

thnx

luv

aishah

Edited by aishah02 - 16 years ago

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princess4120

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Posted: 16 years ago

#89

no need for pm here.. already read it.. hehe..

that was such a cute part.. loved the fun.. the dhamaal.. the romance.. the puja.. and the.. "mein toh apki ibaadat karunga line" SOOOO SWEET!!!

a lil confused.. atul broke anji's fast? or just they both broke their own fast?

hope you continue soon! take care.. thanks in advance for pm..

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.driftingaway

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Posted: 16 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: princess4120
no need for pm here.. already read it.. hehe..

that was such a cute part.. loved the fun.. the dhamaal.. the romance.. the puja.. and the.. "mein toh apki ibaadat karunga line" SOOOO SWEET!!!

a lil confused.. atul broke anji's fast? or just they both broke their own fast?

hope you continue soon! take care.. thanks in advance for pm..

ermm i'm confused with these two as well .. lets keep it to your imagination lol .. na atul broke anjie's fast .... thanks for reading without the pm

luv

aishah 😳