Teri Bandagi AR ff upd pg 38 part 14 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Muskaan : oye anjie, ridz meri maddat karo na main kaunsa saree pehnu yeh pink vali ya phir ye red vaali, mujhe toh kuch samaj me hi nahi araa ek toh uss rahul kiliye vrat rako aur uper se yeh saab ...
Riddhima: (while drying her hair) muskaan tum yeh red wali pehen lo tumpe bahot accha lage ka
Angie : (while trying to put a earring in) ha muskaan, the red saree is nice
Muskaan : ... par mujhe toh yeh pink vali zyada achi lag rahi hai ...
riddhima and anjali rolled their eyes, muskaan had been sitting on the bed since the last half an hour trying to pick her clothes one moment she was wearing the red saree and the next moment the pink one,
they all had locked themselves inside the room since the last 3 hours to get ready for their first official karva chaut. anjali finally had gotten somewhere and was nearly ready, muskaan was still choosing the saree and riddhima had only gotten out the lehenga's from the cupboard
Riddhima : *to herself* kash armaan yaha par hota, kapre choose karne mein meri paddat kar le tha, mujhe toh kuch samaj me hi nahi araha ...
Muskaan: oye anjie ek baat bata aaj tu kisliye Karva chaut rak rahi hai, dekh mein toh uss kankajure kiliye rak rahi hu, riddhima, armaan kiliye vrat rakh rahi hai, par tu karva chaut kiskiliye rakh rahi hai ?
Riddhima : di kahi aap atul kiliye toh ....
Anjie : what rubbish ! tum dono bhi na, mujhe toh padma mom aur nani ne force karke rak vaya hai, kehte hai ki agar main ne vrat nahi rakha toh meri shaadi kabhi nahi hogi, .... main bala atul kiliye kyu rakhu
* Muskaan and riddhima look at each other and sab samaj jaathi hai*
anjali and atul were complete oppostites, yet after a lot of hard work atul's adorable nature had managed to win anjali over, they had been out on a date a few days ago, and now everyone thought that atul and anjie were a *unofficial couple*
anjali : anywayz main to tayyar hogayi, tum dono bhi jaldi karke niche aaja na, pooja jaldi hi shuru hone vali hai
Riddhima and muskaan : teek hai
Muskaan: arre riddhima tune meri earrings kahi dekhe kya
Riddhima: nahi toh, shayed guest room main hoga
Muskaan: main abhi check karke ayi * muskaan gets up and leaves shutting the door behind her*
riddhima finally decides to wear the maroon coloured lehenga choli that armaan had gifted to her and had gone in the bathroom to change. (heres the link ) http://www.khaasboutique.com/khaasboutique/product.asp?pid=605&total=48
Armaan : *climbing up one of the pipes* pyaar main insaan ko na jaane kya kya karna parta hai dekho aapne aapko Dr armaan malik tum... Mr supercool aaj uss basket se milne kiliye tumhe yeh saab karna par raha hai * he climbes through the window and is about call out to riddhima when he is bowled over by what he sees ..... riddhima, is standing with her back towards him, and is trying to tie the dori of her blouse, her entire back and waist being visible, even though armaan wanted to look away, he couldnt , to him she had never looked so beautiful, the maroon lehenga was fitted perfectly onto her petite body, her bare flesh was striking in contrast to the maroon. Riddhima had barely anymake up on, and was still half dressed, but to armaan she looked divine in that very pose, he stood there, his mouth half opened, gazing at her in awe.
Riddhima : riddhima streched her ams up a final time huh !!! * giving up with the dori* offo ab yeh dori kyun nahi bandrahi, armaan meriliye niche intezaar kar raha hoga par yeh dori ...... she stopped halfway through her sentence .... someone very softy had put their arms around her waist she shuddered ... and turned her head around instantly to find armaan's eyes staring back at hers with immense love in them
Riddhima: ... armaan yeh tum .... armaan very slowly trailed his fingers upto her blouse and tied the dori for her, but his fingers didnt stop there, they snaked below, further down .... riddhima felt a strange sensation chill down her back, everytime armaan moved his fingers on her body she felt like a electric spark had been sent through her.
Riddhima : armaan ... she could feel his warm breath on her skin * she wanted to say more but somehow everytime she opened her mouth nothing came out * the silence between them was speaking more than a thousand words. he was making her blush so badly ...
armaan very slowly bent down and showered her milky flesh with soft kisses, they started growing more passionate as his lips trailed up and down her back, through her neck, her forehead, her cheeks, he kissed ridhima beneath her ear lobe and started biting at them, forcing riddhima to gasp .... slowly her arms went around armaan's neck and into his hair, she could feel the same electric spark being sent through armaan's body .... they were both losing control, not knowing where they were, forgetting the world around them .... armaan slowly pinned her to the wall, feeling her panicky breaths, listening to her heart beating vigirously, ...with riddhima's hands still in his hair, he embraced her into a passionate hug, his arms moved tightly around her waist, riddhima wasnt feeling cold anymore his touch was enough to set her entire body on fire ............
to be continiued
sorry guys leaving the part incomplete ... have some work to do ... will update later
i tried to write a romantic part ... even though im not used to them and this is my first attempt ... so do tell me what u think sorry for any mistakes
hope u'll like it
luv
aishah
Edited by aishah02 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

👏rrally beautifully written..reaally sweet part..😊😳

love
piya..
Edited by piya2025 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
very romantic, keep up the writing!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

very romantic, keep up the writing!

thanks 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
WOW!!! i love this ff.. the concept is awesome.. and the last part was soooooo romantic.. this time no interruption!! except that you stopped.. hahaha.. well hope you continue soon! take care
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
how could u do that?????
when the story pick up the best part.....u just leave us like that....very sad😭
anyway just joking.....will be waiting for next part
plzzz continue soon.....
u hv done an excellent job in writing AR romantic part!!👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: piya2025

👏rrally beautifully written..reaally sweet part..😊😳

love
piya..

thanks a lot piya 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: princess4120

WOW!!! i love this ff.. the concept is awesome.. and the last part was soooooo romantic.. this time no interruption!! except that you stopped.. hahaha.. well hope you continue soon! take care

lol thanks for replying 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Craze_naina

how could u do that?????

when the story pick up the best part.....u just leave us like that....very sad😭
anyway just joking.....will be waiting for next part
plzzz continue soon.....
u hv done an excellent job in writing AR romantic part!!👍🏼

sorry naina ... i will update soon 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80

Haye wht a part.!!!! Loved it n Muski toh na.....N the dress is too nice.!!!

Awesum part, luved it. Continue soon.!

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