~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#721

Very sad indeed...!!! Rahul is too good at taking care of everyone...!!! I hope this mission ends soon and things are back to normal...n yeah it wud be nice if u continued wid the fic but u can end it if u think it to be better for the story...!!!

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#722

This is the reply for pg. 98.

This was senti n hot both.

Muskaan n Rahul k view se dekhein to ud kaafi hot tha n i liked their romance but jahan pe Raj ki entry hue the that was horrible i didn't expect ki achanak se vo aa jaayega aur Muski n Rahul ko is tarah se dekh lega.

Alekh n LR were so sweet n i just love their bonding now i don't know y but i feel that ki Meghna n Alekh will b together. Raj se baat kar k Rahul ne accha kiya aur Raj ko bharosa hai Rahul pe mujhe is baat se khushi hue.

Tabhi to itne badi responsibility de kar jaa raha hai na Rahul ko Raj Naina n Muskaan ka khayal rakhne ki. Sach me Naina k paas bus ek Raj hi to hai na ab jis k sahare vo jee sakti hai.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#723

Sorry yaar mai kuch jyada hi late ho gayi hoon but one thing i would like to say ki mai itne jaldi jaldi ud's pe reply nahi de paaongi so u have to wait . Fihaal abhi mai 2 ud's ka reply de rahi hoon.
Raj ka tensed hona natural hai aur so as Naina par depressed hona kuch ajeeb hai as i think ki unhone koi bahut badi galti nahi ki hai. Rahul se baat kar k Raj ne apna man halka kar liya hai aur ab us k mission pe jaane k baad Rahul Naina n Muski ko acche se dekh lega.
Raj ka Muskaan ko na le jaana saath samajh me aata hai. Kuch had tak Raj ka sochna bhi sahi tha ki agar vo Muski ko le jaayega to pata nahi Muski gusse me kya kya kar daale? Raj bhi nahi rok paayega us ko.
Humesha k jaise Muski ne ek baar me Raj ka view nahi samjha us ko samjhna pada. Sab ko ready karne me Muski ne accha kaam kiya n Naina is still worried about Raj.

Edited by varshita - 16 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#724

Now this is the time for reply of pg. 100.

Kaafi senti ud tha. Naina ka Raj ko yaad karna aur Muskaan ka Raj ko yaad karna. Poor Rahul sab ko khush rakhne ki koshish kar raha hai. Akele 3 ladies ko samhaalna so tuff na. Thank god ki Megha hai is baar ud k saath varna na jaane Rahul ka kya hota.

Dance vaala scene bahut accha tha. One by one sab k saath dance kar raha tha Rahul. Accha hua LR mil gaya varna sab pareshaan hote. Naina ab pareshaan hai kyounki Raj ki koi khabar nahi mili hai.

Hope so ki Raj jaldi se Abhi se contact kare.

continue karo na.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Pinka

@pinka28

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#725

tina
the upfdate was totally brilliant
seriously i never like this kind of emotional drama but thsi is the only update where i actually like it ..
all the stuff what muskan to everybody was totally appropriate , and also so nice..
i like the part of huda... with muskan... he is hurt... but he need to come back which he should know.. that whatever it is he should come back with al to all...
and RAJ and muskan no bhai kind of stuff but love the part..
and RAHUl i guess this update is stolen by him. totally...
that was best way naina- muskan opn both hand.. no one is less or more...

and yes our fearfull reassurance passinate loving kiss between RN...
oh that was like amazing.. i mean it must have been so difficult for him to left her in this state when he fear if didn't come back may be there can be some bad happen like what happen earlier what they did ... and if he didn't come back he will not able to see her again leaving her for her must be very difficult for him ... but thats what call duty...

and than RAHUl oh he is really good ... dono ko same story suna di and both are strong for each other....
he is really good haan... but he is scared to but can't show for sake of both girls..... atleast megha is there who atleast listening his pain to whome atleast he can say yes he is worring too is scared too...
lr is really cute in so less time he understood so much and also love them all...
hope they all get back soon and fit and fgine ALLL
to jaldi upadte ker de plz plz

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Tina

@-Tina-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#726

RECAP

OFF FOR THE MISSION

RAHUL HANDLING MUSKAAN AND NAINA

LR MISSES THE GANG !

NOW!!

BACK TO KMA!!

Naina reported to BC..

Naina-Sir Cadet Muskaan aur main wapas aa chuke hain...bakki ke log mission ke liye nikal chuke hain sir !!

Bc nodded..

BC-Aap janti hain ki yeh ek mission hain....lekin yeh aur kisi ko nahi pata lagna chaiye....aap janti hain....

Naina-Jee sir..

BC-Aggar Captain Rajveer ne aapko iss trip ki sachai ke baarey main bataya hain toh matlab woh aap par bahut barosa kartey hain.....mujhe asha hain ki aap unkey yakeen ko nahi todengi..

Naina-Nahi sir....nahi todungi !!

Bc-Dismiss..

Naina turned around to go..

Bc-Ek aur baat..

Naina-Jee sir..

BC- Main nahi janta ki Captain Rajveer aur aapke bich professional relationship ke alwa aur kya hain.......lekin aggar situation demand karein toh aapko bahut sarri cheezein karni hogi.....shayad kahin na kahin jhuth bhi bolna hoga...Captain Rajveer ke khilaf......kya main aapse woh umeed rakh sakta hoon??

Naina-Aap kehna chathe hain ki kal ko agar Captain Rajveer ki sachai samney aa jayee toh aapke carrier ko main bacha loon....hain na sir?

BC-Mera galat matlab mat nikalo.....main toh bas..

Naina-Nahi sir...its ok..main samjhti hoon....waqt aaney par dekha jayega..lekin main sirf woh karongi jo sahi hoon.....chahey woh duniya ko sun na hoon ya na hoon..

BC nodded and naina left...

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The next day..

She went to Abhimanyu...

Naina-Ahh kya main andar aa sakti hoon??

Abhi-please aao na..

Naina-Umm abhimanyu woh unn loggon ki koi khabar...

Abhi-Naina main aapse jhutth toh bolonga nahi...lekin abhi tak koi contact nahi ho paya.....maine raj ko kaha tha ki base pahuncthe hi khabar karey...but 2 din se koi khabar nahi..

Naina-Hum aur kitna wait kar saktey hain??.....dont you think back-up team ko..

Abhi cut her..

Abhi-Kuch waqt aur naina...Bc ke orders ke bina kuch nahi ho sakta...maine unse kal 3 ghantey tak baat ki....main puri koshish kar raha hoon Naina...mera yakeen mano....apney dost ko kuch nahi honey dunga....

Naina nodded..

Naina-Aap par bharosa hain mujhko...

Abhi nodded..

She left..she was tensed....2 days and no information...why the hell ??

naina was very restless...there was no question of going to sleep....same with muskaan...both of them dint sleep all night....they looked up to abhimanyu immediately next morning for any news...he shrugged...he hadnt receieved any news!!

Muskaan and naina sat all day in front of the communication channel...suddenly muskaan could hear faint noises..

Abhi did the required settings and then whatever broken words they could hear shocked him..

Yudi-We need help...backup team.........asap............

Naina and muskaan got all upset...

Abimanyu decided to get a back up team and rush..

Naina-I am in..

Muskaan-Me too..

Abhi-Dekhiye aap dono

Naina-Please abhimanyu..we both are coming...thats final..

Abhi-fine..

Muskaan-hum teen aur rahul.....Rahul humarey saath hona chaiye aggar kuch ho jatta hian toh....woh bahut zyada important hain...case ke baarey main bahut kuch janta hain....usse sarri kahani pata hain navin singh ahluwaliya ki...aur bhaiya ke harr move ki..

Naina looked shocked........she looked at muskaan...and so was abhimanyu..

Naina-Tumhe kaisey??

Muskaan-Sorry bhabs...mujhe sab pata hain...rahul ne bataya tha..

Abhi-Ek minute ek minute...tum dono ko navin ke baarey main kaise aur kya pata hain??

Muskaan-Uss sab ke liye waqt nahi hain...lets rush....

Abhi-Lekin rahul is a non-army guy..

Muskaan-We'l dress him like a cadet.....fine?....woh hona bahut important hain Abhi...please!!....understand..

Abhi-Fine..

Naina-Then lets move it quickly

Abhi--Ok tum Rahul ko inform karo aur main bakki soldiers ke liye call bhejta hoon..

Muskaan-Jaldi..

They all quickly packed up the required stuff...and yes they were gonna be off too......perhaps thats what destiny wanted for them....all of them together......do or die.....sail or sink together!!

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Within 2 hours they left !!..

It was a drive for about 6 hours....everyone was silent...wondering what next.....6 hours passed by silently..

Rahul was supposedly dressed as a senior cadet....along with many other trained soldiers....

Naina kept trying to get in contact with someone from the team...but to no avail..

Abhi-Since we cant get to communicate with anyone we'l go to the base camp....maybe we'l find some clues there..

Rahul-All of us shouldnt go there....it could be a trap also there...since the enemies know a backup team will come..

They all gave him looks..

Rahul--Excuse me Raj told me that..

Muskaan smiled amongst the tension...rahul was not so intelligent..

Abhi-But we need to go...there could be clues..

Rahul-Well yes but...

Abhi interupted

Abhi-Fine then....we'l go in search around the base...and send some of the soldiers into the base camp..

Rahul-No...we ourselves must go check the base....there might be risk involved but at the same time there can be clues which we need to pick....you are right..

Rahul-What about the ladies??

Abhi looked at them....they were not going to sit quietly ..

Muskaan gave rahul one glare.

Muskaan-To the base with you guys...

Rahul sat silent..

Abhi instructed their troop to move in all directions form the camp...and on any information they must contact him immediately..

Rajveer had set up a base in a small hut behind in the forest...

They stopped outside that cottage..

Abhi-Ok everyone on your guard..

He gave a gun to each and entered the cottage....silently..

As they entered theyr wasnt any sign of any trap.....it was empty..

They went in 4 different directions..

There was pindrop silence...

Suddenly rahul called out to them

They all rushed there....huda laid on the floor...groaning..he was bleeding..he was shot..

Muskaan-Huda!!!!!!!!!!

Huda was still alive but in mad pain..

She fell beside him and held his hand..

Muskaan-Huda yeh sab....tu...

Huda-Shh!!..

Huda was finding it tough to breath..

Huda-Sir.......humein maddad ki zarrorat hain....sab log enemy base par hain....captain rajveer ko.....pause..

He was unable to breath..

Huda-Captain rajveer ko capture kar liye gaya tha......pu --- puri troop unkey pichee gayyi hain..enemy base...unke saath koi expert nahi hain....aap jao.

He struggled to speak this much....but he had to tell them....they were all shocked......raj was captured...how.....so fast how was he captured??

Abhi-Cadet..aap ghayal kaisey huye??

Huda-Woh yahan par 2 log aaye the ...trap...aahhhhh..

He was in pain..

Huda-Maine unko gira diya...lekin...goli......

He took a heavy breath..

Muskaan-Huda...

Muskaan was literallly in tears...

Muskaan-Get the damn first aid box !!

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Well this is just the begining of what fatiny had in store for them....maybe it was a very dark gloomy mission.....maybe there would never be together in KMA again.....was this just the begining of their fate?......would huda survive??.......would any of them survive?...or meet the same fate as huda??.....

LETS SEE ON FATINY!!

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Thnx fer da wonderful replies guys.....most of them are so nice nd long...luvd da feedback !!

Forgot to ud on wednesday....sounds lame but yeah i realized only on thursday and then din wnt to confuse u ppl...so left it....completley forgot bout the wednesday thingi....sry guys!!...nxt ud on saturday....since i m busy till next thursday....have to submit a report......so if i have to submit on thursday i'l be dng final touches on wednesday ;)..... lolz !!....

i noe this myt be little chota u.d.......thoda busy !!...sry !!.....and lets keep the action in pieces nd small ...since its nt all that gr8 !!... lol !!..

tc nd seeu nxt saturday!!

luv

tina!

Edited by -Tina- - 16 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#727

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

BC told Naina ke usse Raj ke khilaaf jhooth bolna padega if the situation demanded it!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

I cannot believe BC said that!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲I always thought he was a man of principles!!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

I loved the way Naina said ke woh wahi karegi jo sahi ho!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina ne Abhi se baat ki magar do din se unki koi khabar nahi hai!!!!!!

Naina thinks ab back-up team ko bhej dena chahiye magar Abhi abhi bhi wait karna chahta hai!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Naina is really tensed and so was Muskaan!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Both of them did not sleep all night!!!!!!

Yeh accha huya that Yudi was able to contact them and call for backup!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Otherwise Abhi would have waited even longer to send help!!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina and Muskaan got upset!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔They both told Abhi that they were also coming!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Muskaan ne sahi kaha ke Rahul ko bhi saath hona chahiye as he knows a lot about the case and the whole story of Navin Singh Ahluwalia!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina was shocked to know that Muskaan knows the whole story if Navin!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Abhi is also shocked aur ish waqt usse jaana hai ke undono ko kya pata hai!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Naina and Muskaan took the right decision to bring Rahul along with them!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊He does prove important!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina and Muskaan also went with them to the base!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Huda has been shot!!!!!! I hope he gets the necessary treatment soon and survives!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj has been captured!!!!!! Thats really shocking!!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲I hope he is alright!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I am glad that the remaining ones have gone to rescue Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#728

Chotu sa part hai but its gud. I liked the convo btwn Naina n BC. Liked the way she said to be always by the truth.

Gud that the remaining ones r on their way to help out Raj. But I'm really tensed 4 Raj as He is captured. Hope he is alryt.

And poor Huda is shot. Hope he survives n gets well soon.

Anyways, will be w8ing 4 next Saturday's UD.

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i-love-dr.rahul

@i-love-dr.rahul

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#729

as usual a great part...even though it was small, it was reallly goood.. loved BC and naina's conversation and naina's confidence of saying only the truth..i hope raj is alright and huda survives.. eagerly waiting for next update...