~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010 - Page 74

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Posted: 16 years ago
Very Nice update...full of action..
I cannot believe that BC told Naina that she would have to lie if the situation demanded it...i always thought that BC was a man of principles...
But Naian answer's him properly, saying that she will always support the truth.
It was good that Yudi was able to contact Abhi and call for backup....otherwise abhi would have waited even longer to send help.
I am glad that Rahul ahs joined the others in the back-up mission...and he does prove important...
Raj has been captured...i hope that he will be safe and the enemy does not trap or totture him too much. I am glad that the others have gone to rescue raj...
Huda has been shot...hope that he gets the necessary treatment soon and that he would recover quickly...
Please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was good
but plz save Huda and every one else
i hope u r not planning for some sad ending
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Very short...!!! Anyways I m surprised abt Huda...!!😲 Lekin wat else can we expect from ppl going on a mission...!! 😕
This is getting quite interesting...!!
!pls update soon..!!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Yaar ye to kuch jyada hi short tha. Abhi tak maine fatiny ka koi itna short ud nahi padha.
Anyways good one full of action. Raj was captured that was a shocking news for me. But naina n muski took a right decision to bring Rahul alongwith them.
ud soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
ohk again a RN fic! I think i must have to do more work soon on IF. But i really love them so i can do that.
keep on uding.
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Posted: 16 years ago
PRECAP!!
Backup team leaves to handle the situation.......
Huda is shot..
NOW!
BC- Are you sure??
Shalini- Yes sir I am..
BC- Captain Abhimanyu itna iresponsible kaisey ho gayye?
Shalini-Sir....unhoney jaan bhujkar nahi kiya hoga..
BC gave her a look...
She put her head down...
BC-Mere jankari ke bina pata nahi kya kya ho raha hain iss academy main?...Jab academy ke faculty aisa behave karegi aur aisey kaam karegi toh phir cadets kya sikhengey?
Shalini-Sir ......
BC-Please...rehney de jiye doc...
Shalini put her head down....
BC- Aap wapas kaam par lag jayiye...main dekh longa..
Shalini-Jee sir...
BC- Aur woh Navin Singh ke file?
Shalini nodded and gave it to him...she was praying he wouldnt ask about it .....
She kept the file and left the room....
BC-Ek baat kahoon....ek senior honey ke naatey nahi aapse bade hooney ke natey.....jab pyaar aur kaam ek hi jagah main hoon na toh sab gadbad ho jati hain.....aur tab toh bahut gadbadi ho jati hain jab ek insaan dunnoo ko ek jagah par sambhal nahi paaye.....yeh baat KMA ke faculty ko samjhna chahiye....
Shalini-Sir...aap...
BC-Sab jaanta hoon main Doc.....sab .....Captain Rajveer ne aaj woh kiya jo aaj tak maine kabhi socha nahi tha woh karengey....unhoney apni zindagi ke sabse badi sachai sabse bada raaz Naina singh ko bata diya....jo ki bator unhey kuch 6 mahinoon se janti hain....kyun ??? .kyunki woh bhi apney pyaar aur apney desh ko alag nahi rakh sakey.....
Shalini-Sir...chota mooh badi baat.....bina sachai jaaney aapko comment nahi karna chahiye..
BC-Sachai tum bhi jaanti hoon Doctor Shalini....aur kuch dair main iss file ko padhkar main bhi.......mujhe bahut pehle se shak tha ......aur aapka chehra saaf keh raha hain ki main sahi tha......Captain Rajveer ne bahut galat kiya....mujhe unse yeh ummed nahi thi....
Pause....
Naina Singh Ahluwaliya.....
BC- Yahi hain na uska naam...
Shalini stood silent......she just got to know naina's reality after studying the file before giving it to BC.....
BC-CAptain Rajveer ne unhye itna bada dhoka diya.....unhoney Navin singh ahluwaliya ki behen ko itna bada dhoka.....aaj subah baat huyi thi meri usse....bichari kuch nahi jaanti...woh toh bas captain se mohabat karti hain.....jab unhey sachai ka pata lagega...toh woh tutth jayegi bechari......
Bc-Pata hain maine usse pucha ki kya woh raj ke khilaf gawai degi if it comes to it...usney mujhe apne so called senior ko mana kar diya.....aur kaha ki woh sirf sach ka saath degi..
Shalini-Sir....humein unki personal life main dhakal nahi dena chahiye...
BC-Shalini....tum jaanti hoon ki mere liye navin aur raj kaisey the...mere favourite students the....aur phir sab kuch....sab kuch badal gaya
Shalini looked up for the first time he had heard him refer to them informallly...she could see glimpses of her real uncle.....yes uncle...Brigadier Chandok was her dad's brother.....he was always good to them...but when they passed out from KMA they saw a new side to him...strict stern and like he never knew them....during their years as cadets he was very good to them....precisely he changed after navins death..when raj confessed evrything to him...he just changed...
BC-Mujhe kuch waqt akela chodh doon beta...
Shalini nodded and left .....She never heard beta in the last few years from him....he was really disturbed
After a while BC examined the file..he closed it and sighed..
BC- Mera shak sahi nikla.....pata tha...aur aaj subah naina se baat ke baad toh i was so sure aur ab toh iss file ne bhi.......
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Naina got the first aid from the jeep...
Naina-I dunno if this is gonna help...but its temporary...we need him to see a doctor..
She just did whatever basic she could..she helped him without any risk factor involved..
Muskaan-Bullet nikal toh sakti hian na aap ??
Naina-Bahut risk involved hain muskaan...we cant...
Muskaan-Magar ma'am..
Naina-No muskaan...he needs proper medical care alright...we need to rush him back to the academy....koi transport arrange karo....kisi soldier ko bol kar....huda ko wahan le jana chahiye
Muskaan was frustrated..
Abhi-I need to rush to the enemy base....cadets bina instructions ke kaisey manage karengey?
Rahul-Hmm..abhi.....you leave for the enemy base....we'l follow in a while...
Naina-But how can he go alone?..Rahul go with him..i and muskaan will stay here till we send huda back...
Rahul dint reply..
Naina-Rahul.....I cant believe this...damn 😡😡... i'l go with him..chalo abhi
Abhi and Naina left immediately.
Rahul muskaan and huda..
Muskaan gave huda some water..
Muskaan-Tu theekh hain??
Huda nodded...Huda saw a faraway look in Rahul's eyes...
Huda-Tum loggon ko unkey saath jana chaiye..they need help..
Muskaan-Shut up huda...puri troop hian unkey pass...tujhe yahan akela chodh kar main nahi jaa sakti...
Huda-Tu samjh nahi rahi hain..udhar captain rajveer ki jaan khatrey main hain muskaan....tere bhai ki jaan..
Tears fell from her face..
Muskaan-bhaiya..
Rahul went by her side and consoled her..
Muskaan broke down in his arms..
Rahul just held her ...he dint speak a word...
She wiped her tears ...
Muskaan-Rahul...hum huda ko kisi safe place main chodh kar enemy base par jayengey..
Rahul nodded.
Muskaan-Par kahan?...yahan uski jaan ko khatra hain...aur naina ne bhi kaha...he needs to see a doctor..wapas janey ke arrangements tum kar saktey hoon kya...huda ke liye??
Rahul remained silent..
Muskaan-Aggar bullet nikal diya jayee...then its fine na...toh hum hi nikal dete hian bullet..
Rahul-Muskaan pagal hain kya??
Muskaan-Rahul...huda ko goli uske paer(leg) main lagi hain.....so its safe but painful....woh goli ...infact we are trained...main kar sakti hoon..
Rahul-Risk involved? ....naina ne kaha tha na
Muskaan-40%....
Muskaan looked at huda..
Muskaan-Karoon kya?...mujh par bharosa hain???
Huda Just gave her a look say " i trust you and you know that"
Muskaan nodded...
She rolled up his pants...
And with whatever training she had...
She began....a quick prayer..
And some luck she could pull the bullet out...huda growled in pain....but atleast he was safe now...she bandaged his leg..
He was in mad pain..
Muskaan-Huda....tu theekh toh hain na?......bahut dard ho raha hain ??
Huda-Nahi....zyada nahi.....thanx muskaan...
Muskaan-Ek lagaongi.....thanku wanku bola hain toh ..
She gave him a hug...
Tears rolling out of her eyes...
Huda tried to detach her.....but she would clung to him..
Huda--- Muskaan....
She left him and gave him a look....but huda's eyes were fixed on rahul's questioning gaze...
Muskaan saw that.....she got up and went out...
Huda dint know what to tell Rahul....
Rahul-Main doo minute main aata hoon....
Huda nodded..
Rahul followed muskaan..
Rahul- Muskaan..
Muskaan- Haan..
Rahul-Kya baat hain Muskaan?.... Tu mujhse kuch chupa rahi hain...jabse yahan aaye hain huda ki nazar sirf mujh par hain.....kuch problem hain kya?🤢
Muskaan-Nahi toh..
Rahul-Muskaan...na batana hoon toh theekh hain...yun jhooth toh mat bola kar...itna toh main tujhe janta hoon na.😕
Muskaan was frustrated..
Muskaan-Rahul please...iss waqt humarey pass inn baaton ke liye time nahi hain...samjha.....yeh sab baatein hum badd main kar saktey hain......😡
Rahul- theekh hain muskaan...😕😭
He was hurt..
Muskaan realized she had over done it...
Muskaan-I am sorry...i dint mean to be rude....
Rahul just dint say anything..
Muskaan-Rahul....i m handling too many things at a time...i want you to be by my side baby...not against me...
Tears filled her eyes..
Muskaan-Rahul ek taraf bhai ke jaan dusri tarad itni sarri cheezein...i cant handle it rahul...i cant.....dam ghuth raha hain mera.....darr lag raha hain...😭
Rahul softened seein her like that....
Muskaan-I love you rahul...aur isse bada aur koi sach nahi hain......tu mujhe samjh nahi raha hain...
Rahul's eyes were filled..
He kissed her forehead..
Rahul-Main....tujhe ...main tujhe kaisey samjhaaon muskaan....tu mere liye kya hain tu nahi janti...tujhe pareshaan dekh kar mujhe pareshani hoti hain..i cant muskaan....i just cant...iss liye tujhse pucha.....
Muskaan-Rahul...phir se wahi baat....main tujhse wada karti hoon...yahan se aggar hum zinda nikley toh main tujhe puri baat batongi ....thekhe??
Rahul-Yahan se hum sab zinda niklengey muskaan....dont worry !!
She hugged him....
Muskaan-Bear with me...Pagala gayyi hoon...i just cant handle soo many things at one time...just be with me rahul....you my strength and my weakness both......tum nahi hogey mere saath toh main marr jaongi..
He just stroked her hair...
Rahul-Main hoon tumharey saath...
They broke and he wiped her tears!!
Muskaan turned to see huda coming from there
Huda-Lets leave now..i am fine...main bhi chalonga..
Muskaan-Pagal ho gaya
Huda cut her..
Huda-I'l fight till my last breath muskaan...lets go.....tere bhai ke liye..mere captain sir ke liye..
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Muskaan communicated with abhimanyu....she told her that the 3 of them were coming..
Abhi agreed...and waited for them..
Once they all were together...Abhimanyu divided them into teams.....All the soldiers were divided into 3 teams...
Along with them..in TEAM 1 was naina and Huda and in TEAM 2 was abhimanyu......and in TEAM 3 were rahul and muskaan...
They all were behind some tress and bushes..enemy camp was few kms away..
Abhi-Alright guys....now for the plan....
Team 2 distract some of the security....while team 1 takes your position at the backside of the camp..once the security moves from there you have to enter.....
Team 3 ...aap sab bhi piche key rastey se andar jayengey....lekin.....piche se ek ladder lagakar sidhe upar......right......ussi waqt team 1 bhi andar jayegi ...darwazey se...aur tum log upar...
Panch minute ke andar unhe pata chalega ki some action has happend.....aur ussi waqqt woh front se hilengey......thats when team 1 gets in....right from the front...
So one team from the back...one right from the front...and one from the top .....covering all sides...you have to be freaking alert....log kab kahan se war karein we dont know....jo bhi aapke rastey main aaye usse mar girana.....no mercy....humara mission hain apney ace soldier Rajveer singh shekhawat ko yahan se nikalna....aur unke saath jo troop aayi hain unke bhi humein locate karna hain.......
Once you enter you have to find your way in....We dunt know how many people are there and where....its all on you guys......you have to fight your way in...kill whoever comes your way..dont care.....right???
Yahan tak ka plan fixed hain aur planned hain...isskey baadh kya kaise kab kahan...its all yours guys!!.
We need to do this...sab log wapas aaney chaiye..sahi salamat...
Abhi-Naina....take care...aur dont get emotional with anything......rahul-muskaan...just be together and go by your instinct......they might blackmail you if caught with something guys....just dont get into it..they will talk about your fellow soldiers life..and killing them if you dont listen to them and rubbish...its all reverse psycology...jus dont listen to them...all the best...jai hind!!..
They all turned to go..
Abhi-Listen up..
Abhi-Sabke silencers hain na??
They all nodded..
Abhi-Jahan tak ho sake no noise only killings.....rock it guys!!....we need our team back.....iss waqt humarey mission hain humarey logon ko yahan se nikalna....lets go for it ....
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A mission all set...do or die !!.......what will happen?...whats their fatiny?... we'l see next saturday!!
Thanx for the lovely replies...havent gone thru a few......but glanced thru sme new readers as well....thnx fer replyin guys!!......
Hope that da update was understandable...the Bc-Shalini part in my opinion wasnt too clear..i dunno....i said na i m nt too gud in this plannin and action part.....sorry if u guys dunt lyk it.....and i m still open for any suggestion or advice!!....
thnx
luv
tina!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

BC is angry at Abhimayu!!!!!!! He asks Shalini for Navin's file!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

BC is disapproving of Raj telling Naina the biggest secret of his life when he knows her for 6 months only!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

He said Raj apne desh ko apne pyaar se alag nahi rakh paya!!!!!!

BC comes to know that Naina is Navin's sister and is thinking ke Raj ne Naina ko dhoka diya hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

He need not worry as Naina knows the truth!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It was nice to see BC's soft side!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊BC is Shalini's uncle!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

BC was very good to them when they were cadets and he changed after Navin's death!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Thats sad!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

I hope BC will support them as they will truly need his help now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina helped Huda but she said he needed to be rushed back to the academy!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Why did Rahul not go when Naina asked him to go with Abhi??😕 😕 😕 😕

Accha huya Naina khud Abhi ke saath chali gayi!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊They needed to rush to the enemy base!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Rahul kya soch raha hai??😕 😕 😕 😕 😕Muskaan started crying when Huda said Raj ki jaan khatre mein hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Muskaan pulled out Huda's bullet!!!!! Huda trusted her!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar yeh tension kya hai??😕 😕 😕 😕 😕Is Huda in love with Muskaan??😔 😔 😔 😔

Muskaan And Rahul are getting too distracted by other things!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡

Muskaan needs to keep her emotions at bay and focus on the mission!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔She has to be strong!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Usne sahi kaha ke ish waqt in sab baaton ke liye unke paas time nahi hai!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Muskaan said she loves Rahul aur isse bada aur koi sach nahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Do they have to discuss these things now??😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Huda is also going with them and he said he will fight till his last breath!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼He is very brave!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

He has proved that he is a brave soldier and Rajveer's true cadet!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The mission is on roll!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina, Abhi and the others are determined to save Rajveer and the other cadets!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

I hope they are successful and Raj is fine!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice part. The mission is on roll. I just hope Raj is f9 n they win it soon. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing part...i hope everything will be fyne soon and also raj is ok...will be waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was really nice
i hope all goes well
ans Are u not going to update it on Wednesday
plz continue soon

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