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Posted: 16 years ago

#691

RECAP!!

Rahul-Muskaan date!!

Raj-Naina plans....

OFF TO FARM HOUSE!!

NOW

PART 39

They were all off to the Farm house next morning..Muskaan forced Megha and little Raj into this ...she told them to take it as a vacation...and somehow she convinced megha..

When megha reached the pick up point....huda and yudi were flat..

Huda-Oyee nayii kudi ....😉

Yudi-Chief she looks hot!!..

Rahul-Guys thoda aaram se........muskaan ki best friend hain..

Yudi-So...tumhe kyun problem hoo rahi hain....tum bhi dekho na!!..😆

MEgha entered..

MEgha-Hello guys...i am megha!!..

Muskaan-Oyee andar aaja intro shintro main karwa dongi...

Muskaan-ALright megha..thats yudi

Yudi-Hey pleased to meet you...😊

Megha smiled!!

Muskaan-Huda..

Huda-Oyee punjab de putar huda ka aapko salam..😉

Meggha--Malikum aslam..😆😆

They all burst out laughing!!

Muskaan-And thats sameera....

Megha-Hey..

Sameera-Umm halo...

Muskaan-And thats rahul...a non army guy lekin mere aur bhai ka best friend..

Megha frowned...why was she introdu...oh like that..

Muskaan gave her a look...she smiled

Megha-Nice to meet you rahul...

Muskaan-Bakki ke log jeep main aa rahey hain....toh we'l have those intro's later....waise Raj(Junior) kahan hain??

Her friends had ever heard her say raj..

Megha-Haan hes coming in another car...he was supposedly attracted to that girl...umm naina or something..!!

Rahul and muskaan burst out laughing!!..😆😆

ALl the others had no clue of whats going on..

Rahul and muskaan could not stop laughing!!

Muskaan-Ok..haha..ok....ok...enough rahul...

Megha-Muskaan???

Huda-TU kabse Captain sir ko unkey naam se bulaney lagi?

Muskaan-Sorry...guys i was refering to another raj....hes 4 years...

Yudi and huda gasped...

Yudi-4 years old..

Muskaan-Ya..

Muskaan gave them both one look clearly saying SHUT UP!! and dont ask any questions!!

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Later Muskaan caught hold of Huda..

Muskaan-Huda dekh woh....mehga na...meri bachpan ki dost hain..uski family nahi...woh sab accident main marr gaye...woh bacha uski behen ka hain.....uska koi nahi hain...aur main usse yahan layyi hoon takki usse change ho jayee...ok....purani baatein ....i dont want her to remmeber that again...usse tum ya yudi kuch mat puchna...please??

Huda-Oyee Muskaan....fikar na kar...hum usse khush rakhney ki puri koshish karengey..

Muskaan-Thanx huda!!..

Huda smiled..

Muskaan-Umm ek aur baat

Huda-Bol na..

Muskaan-Tu thoda uske saath umm..

Huda raised his eyebrow..

Muskaan-Matlab uske saath thoda casual flirt kar sakta hain na?

Huda burst out laughing..

Huda-Oyee kudi....woh tu na bolti toh bhi main karta...khair...tu keh rahi hain toh zaroor karonga..

Muskaan-Mujhe galat mat samjh...i dont want to hook you up with her...jus thoda usse achi achi batein kar....woh tere type ki nahi hian..lekin phir bhi...usse thodi bahut pyaar baatein karega na toh woh purani baatein bhool jayegi....galat mat samjhiyo ..

Huda-SAmjhta hoon main muskaan...sab samjhta hoon...jaisa tu chathi hain waisa hoga..

Muskaan smiled..

Muskaan placed a handon his shoulder and thanked him..

ANd she left..

Huda smiled and then laughed!!..

Muskaan was impossible!!

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Little raj and big raj dint get along quite well....coz little raj would keep figthing with rajveer about their name...as soon as they reached little raj came running out and hugged megha..

Raj-Maa woh uncle keh raha tha ki uska naam bhi raj hain...aisa kaisa hoo sakta hain maa....woh uncle jhotth bol raha hain aur jhooth bolna paap hain na maa..

Megha smiled and ruffled his hair..

Megha-Beta.....unka naam bhi raj hain.......woh jhooth nahi bol rahe hian..

Raj-Par mumaa...aisa kaisey ho sakta hain..😕

Megha-Abb dekho world main itneey saarey logg hain na.....har ek ka ek naam hota hain na......aur uss uncle ko tumhara naam itna pasand aaya ki unhoney apna naam bhi wohi rakh diya..

Megha smiled..

Muskaan smiled... Bachi ke saath kaisey bachi ban gayii hain!!

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Rahul and little raj got along very well though!!..

Rahul would sit and play with little raj.....

AFter a while...everyone went to freshen. up...Aalekh was on the breakfast table waiting for the others

He was sitting down getting bored....when little raj came there..

LR-Uncle.....oh blue shirt waleey uncle

Aalekh looked at his shirt....it was blue..

He looked down at him..

Aalekh-Haan bol...

LR-Aapka naam kya hain??

AAlekh--Aalekh...

LR-Bada ajeeb naam hain..

Aalekh smiled..

Aalekh-Sachi bolo mera naam raj hian..😆😆

Little raj screamed and began to cry..

Rahul came down..

Rahul-Kya hua??

Little raj-Dekho na masaji...(aalekh raised his eyebrow).yeh bol raha hain ki iska naam bhi raj hain..mumma....aaaeyyn!! *fake crying*

He began to make a fuss!!

Rahul-Nahi nahi..unka naam aalekh hain..

LR-Sachi ??

Rahul-Muchi baba!!.....uska naam aalekh hain..

LR-Phir apney jhotth kyun bola??..jhooth bolna paap hain aapki ma ne aapko nahi bola kya....

Aalekh's face fell..🤢

Rahul interupted...

Rahul-Bas bahut ho gaya raj....jaao mumaa bola rahi hain...

Little raj left..

Rahul-Ahh woh....i am sorry..woh raj toh bas bacha hain...bura mat man na..

Aalekh-Nahi apun kahan bura man raha hain..

He placed a hand on his shoulder...

Rahul-I agree hum ek dusre ko nahi jantey but utna toh main tumhara chehra padh sakta hoon na...

Aalekh looked away..

Aalekh-Kya karron...apun ki ma ne apun ko kuch sikhaya hota toh aaj apun idhar nahi hota aur aisey nahi bolta...

Rahul-Hey....dekho...aab purani baatein bhool jao...lets not be sad sad....be happy happy..

Aalekh-Aapkey pass reason hain haapy happy honey ka....smile karney ka...wiasye smile ko hindi main kya boltein hain??😉

Rahul-Mus....

Rahul stopped looked at aalekh griining!!

Rahul ruffled his hair!!

Aalekh patted his shoulder!!

Aalekh-Smile smile!!😉

And he left!..

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Aalekh left...he was upset but dint show...

Rahul smiled for a sec...and then blushed...and then he knew he had to get muskaan to help Aalekh..

He went straight to the room where naina and muskaan were goonna stay...

She was there..

Rahul narrated to her everything...

Muskaan-Ohh god....aalekh will live on it for a hundred years...

She smiled..

Muskaan-Main dekhti hoon dont worry...main usse handle kar dongi..

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By the time Muskaan could get down Aalekh was few others on the table ready for breakfast.. She decided to speak to Aalekh later.

Raj came down and sat next to megha..

LR-Ohh wwoh copy cat aa gaya...

Raj heard that....and then looked to his left..

Raj-Mr.Little Raj....aggar tu mujhe copy cat bula raha tha toh thanku..

LR-Aapko nahi toh kya phir masi ko bulaonga..

Muskaan smiled!!..😛

Raj-Mere baap...main hi tera cat hoon aur main hi tera dog!!....thekhe..!!

LR-Dog nahi.....cat....dog acche hotey hain..😆😆

Raj-Toh main acha nahi hoon kya?

LR began laughing!!...😆😆

LR-Aisa stupid question puch rahey yeh mumma!!..😆😉

Megha-Raj...bas....uncle se theekh see baat karo..

LR-Kyun karo....woh mera naam copy karengey toh phir unko copy cat hi toh bolonga!!..😆😆

Muskaan-Arrey tum bhi toh copy cat ho saktey hoon!!😉

LR-Ayeine.....

He started his fake crying!!

LR-Mausi bhi us copy cat ka side le rahi hain!!..mummmaaa...

LR-Mausaji...aap toh meri side loo..

rahul spat the water he was drinking....

Megha-Raj...chup ho jaa!!..

It was only sameera who was there.....so it was ok...she smiled at muskaan!!

Rahul-Oyee marwayega kya...mere ko mausa mat bol..

LR-Toh kya bolo??😉

Rahul-bhaiya....bhaiya bol..😊

LR-Ok bhaiya...toh ab naya mausa kaun hain ?

Rahul-Oyee raj ka bacha koi naya mausa nahi hain.....😆😆

Raj the hero looked up..

Rahul-Oyee nahi..tereko thodi bol raha tha...woh uss Little Raj ko bol raha tha..

Raj smiled at rahul...

LR scratched his head!!

LR-Mumma..mausa kaun hain??....aur yeh mausa se bhaiya.....i am confused mummma!!....😆😆

Megha smiled!!

Megha-Beta..no mausa ok...only bhaiya!!

LR-Ok Mumma!

They just sat there randomly chatting

Aalekh was rather silent !!.. Muskaan knew it...

Naina came down.....sleepy!!...she had gone to bed after reaching the farm house early morning..

She saw all of them on te breakfast table.

Naina-Utha liya hota mujhe kisi ne...i mean....bas aankh lag gayii.

Raj-Its ok Naina..tum soo rahi thi...humne tumhe disturb karna theekh nahi samjha.

Naina looked at him and their silence spoke volumes....

Naina weakly nodded..

She sat down for breakfast..

After breakfast Rahul walked out into the garden....and he was followed by Muskaan!!

Muskaan went and sat by his side..

Muskaan-Kya baat hain...aaj kal dost ke liye kisi ke pass time nahi hain....

Aalekh wiped his tears..

Aalekh-Barabar boli....aaj kal tere pass time nahi hain apun ke liye..

Muskaan did say anything...he was trying to hide his sorrows..

Muskaan looked ahead..

Muskaan-Kabhi kabhi apna dukh dostoon ke saath batna chahiye..

Aalekh-Acha toh joru ne itni jaldi news pahuncha di..

Muskaan gave him a look..

Aalekh-Oyee apun theekh hain...chodh na..

Muskaan-Haan pata hain tu toh theekh hain..superman hain na!!

There was silence..

Aalekh-Ma ki bahut yaad aa rahi hain..

Muskaan looked at the sky..

Muskaan-Mujhe bhi...

A tear rolled out of her eyes...

Tears flowing freely..

Aalekh saw her...their sorrows were the same..

Aalekh-Apun ka pita har raat ko daru tapka ke aata tha....uske bad meri maa ko marta tha...har raat maa ke chikhein mere kaan main gunjti.....pehle pehle sirf kamre main hota tha..main kamre ke bahar rota tha...

phir apun ka pita toh kidhar bhi chalu ho jata...kitchen main hall main kidhar bhi sala meri maa ko marta tha..uskeey saath zabardasti karta tha....dherey dherey ma ko belt se marney laga...

ek din apun ki ma ko bahut pita saleey ne...bahut pita.....maa ro rahi thi...chiila rahi thi....khoon beh raha tha..

sala bahut ho gaya tha.....nau saal ke umar main yeh sab roz dekh kar apun ka bhej sadak gaya....chaku liya aur apney pita ko mar dala....usko ek baar nahi doo baar nahi apun ne gyarah barr mara. chaku se...

Tears were flowing down both their cheeks!!...

Aalekh-Jail main dal diya apun ko...phir 2 mahiney baad pata chala ma bhi guzar gayyi....uske antim sanskar ke liye usee officer ne apun ko 5 minute diya tha...apun ko yaad hain.....sirf 5 minute diya apun ko....sala 4 minute pachas second main hi udhar se le gaya...usko kya pata apni maa ko akhri baaar ekhna kaisa hota hain...sala 10 second ka value usko nahi pata...

Ek bete ko apni maa ke antim waqt main sirf panch minute diya...sala...

Phir jail se nikal kar idhar KMA bhej diya....sala jail behtar tha.....udhar apun jaisey log toh the...idhar sab badeey logoon ke bich main apun phass gaya...

They heard a sniff from behind...

They turned around to see and were shocked!!..

PRECAP!!

Rahul went close to her..

Rahul-Mujhe dekho muskaan..

She looked upon him...her gaze shifting to his body..

Words cannot describe the feeling which went through muskaans body...in the last few days she was craving for rahul's body..

Muskaan got bold she raised one hand and kept it against his strong bare chest....

Rahul smiled..

Rahul-Do you love me muskaan???

Muskaan nodded..

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Raj got a phone call..

After 5 minutes he gave naina one look...she understood everything..

Raj-Cadet Huda..Cadet yudi...Cadet aalekh...cadet sameera...cadet tanvi...Its action time!!..

They all stood in a line..Raj briefed them..

Raj-Hum 20 minute main nikal rahe hain....get set..

In no time the hall got empty.....megha rahul muskaan and naina stood in front of raj..

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Raj hugged Naina.....

She just stood against his strong chest..

When they broke....their eye contact was still there....she was only looking at him...

He kissed her on her lips...it was a short kiss of his neverending love...he kept it short coz he knew they were people watching him...

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There you go next part....i'l post replies 2mrw...But thanx to all!!

Also i'l send emails in the night...have to go out now!!

Luv

Tina!!

Edited by -Tina- - 16 years ago

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i-love-dr.rahul

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Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#692

hey first one to comment!!!!!!!! and ofc. it was as usual a GREAT part!!!!! loved LR and rajveer's fight!!!! little raj is too funnny..lol!!!!!!! and omg can't wait for next part!!!! RM precap looks AMAZING!!!!!!

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#693

Nice part. Truely the idea of LR worked. I luved readinfg his parts. Specially his convos wid Raj n Rahul wer gr8. He was calling Rahul mausa in front of every1 n when he was 4bidden he was in search of his NEW mausa. That was really funny. And also the dog-cat convo btwn our Hero Raj n LR.

Raj-Naina's small eye-contact was enough to convey everything. That was indeed an awesum one.

Luved Aalekh n Muskaan's convo. Felt really bad 4 him. But I wonder who was behind them?

Anyways, the promos seem very gud. W8ing 2 read the next part.

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 16 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#694

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Muskaan ne accha kiya jo Megha aur little Raj ko bhi farmhouse jaane ke liye mana liya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Yudi aur Huda Muskaan ko dekh ke flat ho jaate hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

When Rahul tried to warn them Yudi se ke usse kyun problem ho rahi hai woh bhi dekhe naa!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣They are too much!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Muskaan introduced Megha to everyone including Raul to which at first Megha is confused but then she understood the reason!!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Muskaan asked Megha about Raj Junior to which the others got confused!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Rahula and Muskaan could not stop laughing at this!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Megha ne toh yeh bhi kaha tha Raj (Junior) is attracted to Naina!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Finally Muskaan explained about little Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊But she prevented further questions with a warning look!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Lagta hai Muskaan se sabhi darte hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Muskaan asks Huda not to ask Megha any questions explaining her situation and Huda promises to try to keep her happy!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

She tells him to casually flirt with Megha and Huda said woh nahi bolti toh bhi woh karta!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Haan Huda akhir Huda hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛Woh apni Hudagiri thode hi naa chhod sakta hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

It was funny to see Little Raj annoyed with Raj for having the same name!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Rahul and Little Raj got along very well and Rahul would play with him!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Little Raj ne Aalekh ke naam ko ajeeb kaha toh Aalekh ne bhi usse chhedne ke liye keh diya ke uska naam Raj hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Jab woh chilaya toh Rahul ne aake chup karwaya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Little Raj ne Rahul ko mausaji bulaya toh Aalekh raised his eyebrow!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Little Raj ne Aalekh se kaha jhoot bolna paap hota hai uski maa ne nahi bola usse!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Usne toh Aalekh ki dukti rath pe haath rakh di!!!!

Rahul Aalekh ko samajhane aaya toh Aalekh first tried to hide his sorrow!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Then Aalekh pulled Rahul's leg!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Aalekh was upset but did not show it!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Rahul went and narrated everything to Muskaan and she knew how to handle Aalekh!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

The convo between our Hero Raj and Little Raj on cat and dog was very funny!!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Little Raj toh Rahul ko sab ke saamne mausa bulane laga and Rahul spat the water he was drinking!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

When Little Raj was forbidden from calling Rahul mausa in front of everyone he was in search of his new mausa!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina came down sleepy as she had gone to sleep after reaching the farmhouse early morning!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj and Naina's small eye contact was enough to convey everything!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳It was awesome!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Muskaan ne sahi kaha ke kabhi kabhi apna dukh doston ke saath batna chahiye!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh ne kaha usse maa ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai and Muskaan said usse bhi!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Their sorrows were the same!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

It is good to see that Aalekh is finally able to share is sorrows with Muskaan!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Uske saath bahut bura huya tha!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Unke peeche kaun tha??😕 😕 😕 😕I think it was Megha!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#695

Yay, another great part, emotional and a little different, but still really good. Can't wait till the next part, RM!!!!!!

~ Sabreena

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lovebapu18

@lovebapu18

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#696

really awesome part!!

do continue soon!!

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#697

Hey tina, I m replying properly after a long time...!!! The story's going on quite well....!!! Now that it's mission time, things are bound to get serious.....and it also means that Fatiny isn't gonna take too long to end....!!!
This part was very nice...Rajveer not taking Muskaan was sensibkle and I liked all the reasons he gave to various people...!!! Good job...keep it up...!!!

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#698

hey..

Sorry for not being able to reply for the past two updates....i forgot that you were going to update during the week as well...but i did enjoy reading the updates together.

Its mission time and raj has chosen his team wisely...he is a true mentor and knows everyone's strengths and weakness. He is right Muskaan is not ready to handle missions like this...but he not able to explain it to her. I am glad that Rahul is able to tell muskaan frankly what raj could not tell her. And muskaan understands that raj is right..she is showing signs of maturity already.

Bringing in Megha and LR has lightened the mood...it was very funny to see LR get annoyed with raj for having the same name.

It is good to see that alekh is finally able to sahre his sorrows and feelings with muskaan. they share a strong bond of friendship.

Naina is very worried and nervous about raj's mission. Raj understands her feelings but is proud to see that she is trying to handle the situation.

Please continue...

take care

Nisha

Edited by dazzling_glory - 16 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#699

that was fantastic part

i love the story of Alekh and Raj and LR's tiff

plz continue soon

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Tina

@-Tina-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#700

RECAP!!

Off to FARM house

LR - Hero Raj fights..

Aleekh - Muskaan emotional scene....somebody behind them..

NOW!!

Muskaan-Megha tu yahan????

Aalekh wiped his tears and sat properly..

Megha sat on the other side of Aalekh...

All three were quiet!!..

Megha-I am sorry..main yun aisey aapki kahani sun na nahi chathi thi..

Aalekh-Kya fark padta hain...apun ki story suno ya na suno..

Megha-Main Little Raj ki taraf se sorry bolney aayi thi......i m really sorry...woh toh bacha hain....

Aalekh-Aap sorry kai(ko)..aap sorry kyun keh rahi hain....ap(un)...ah mujhe koi problem nahi hain..

Muskaan smiled...he was trying not to use his tapori language in front of megha..

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Rahul and little Raj..

LR(Little Raj) -Lekin main sorry kyun bolo??

Rahul-Please...mere liye....ek baar....unko dukh ho raha hain..

LR-Lekin kyun ?

Rahu-Unki aap jaisi mama nahi hian na....aapney unko yaad dila diya...

LR-Unki mumaa nahi hain??

Rahul nodded in the negative..

LR-Aur mere maa kehney se unko unki maa yaad aa gayyi..

Rahul nodded..

LR-Aur woh roo raha hain??

Rahul-Hmm

LR-raj ne galti ki hain toh woh good boy ki tarah sorry bolega

Rahul smiled and took him..

They reached the lawn..

LR-Aalekh bhaiya..

Aalekh was stunned ..he turned around..

LR walked to him...and strecthed his hand indicatiing to pick him..

Aalekh smiled and picked him..

LR-Raj is very sorry.....aisi galti phir nahi hogi.......

Aalekh smiled and pinched his nose..

Aalekh-Tereko...ahh tumko maaf kiya...

LR smiled...😊

He went to his mom

Megha-Godd night guys..

She left with Little Raj..

Aalekh smiled..

He looked at Muskaan..

Aalekh-Sorry..

Muskaan was like for what??

Aalekh-Tere pyaar ko doubt kiya...tere ko bola na ki tere uss se milna hain...dekhna hain woh tere liyee sahi hain ya nahi....uss ke liye....yeh banda toh perfect hain....pata nahi yeh tere saath kaisey atak gayya..

They laughed!!😆😆

Aalekh-Abhi apun ke janeey ka waqt hain....apun..nahi mereko...

Muskaan smiled..

Muskaan-Waisey megha ko impress kar raha tha kya??

Aalekh-Apun kyun karega usko impress?...Woh toh yuhin uskee samney tapori baat nahi karna chatha tha...iss liye..

Muskaan-Aur kyun nahi karna chatha tha??😉

Aalekh-Ayee woh apun ko jaanti nahi hain na........phir mere baarey main wrong expresison padega!!😆😆

Muskaan-Impression!!😆

Aalekh-haan woich!!..abhi apun ...nahi...abhi main jaa raha hoon....kal subah ko miltein hain...shubh ratri!

Aalekh smiled on finishing that sentence..😊

Muskaan-Good night!!

As aalekh was going..muskaan began

Muskaan-PEHLI NAZAR MAIN KAISA JADU KAR DIYA....TAPORI KE BINA HAIN ADHURA MERA JIYA..

Aalekh laughed...turned around and walked off..😆😆

Muskaan looked at rahul..

Muskaan-Rahul..

Rahul-Hmm...

Muskaan-Umm andar chalein...unless youu wana see a froozen ice cube of muskaan!!.....

Rahul-Ahh haan chal..

They were walking..

They entered her room...

Rahul shut the door behind and locked it..

Muskaan saw that....she ignored..

Muskaan-Ahh tum baitho...main change karke aati hoon..

Rahul-Alright...tum chaho toh yahan change kar sakti hoon..

Rahul said naughtily..

Muskaan-Nahi main washroom main change kar longi...

Rahul pulled her by the waist..

Rahul-Kyun mere samne sharm aa rahi hain kya??

Muskaan blushed and looked down..

Rahul-Ok baba...jao...come soon..

Muskaan took her clothes and went into the washroom....few minutes later when she returned she saw rahul standing there half naked....

She stared at his body for a second and then looked away when she saw that he had caught her..

Rahul-kitni dair se wahan khadi hoon??

Muskaan-Ahh;...woh...bas...abhi abhi aayi thi..

Rahul smiled..

Rahul-Mujhe tumharey samney change karney main koi problem nahi hain....so tum relax kar sakti hoon..

Muskaan dint say anything..

Rahul-Muskaan...tumhareey samney itna hot ladka khada hain....kuch toh dekho...kuch toh kaho....mere 5 pack ke baareey main kuch toh kaho....bahut jald 6 ban jayega..

Muskaan smiled..

Rahul went close to her..

Rahul-Mujhe dekho muskaan..

She looked upon him...her gaze shifting to his body..

Words cannot describe the feeling which went through muskaans body...in the last few days she was craving for rahul's body..

Muskaan got bld she raised one hand and kept it against his strong chest....

rahul smiled..

Rahul-Do you love me muskaan???

Muskaan nodded..

Rahul-Kahoo na..

Muskaan-I love you rahul....

Rahul sighed!!..

Rahul-Hayyye!..

Muskaan blushed....

Rahul pined muskaan against the wall and began kissing her.........his passion levels were rising and he was craving for her...

Muskaan just held his hair and gave him a slight push more closer towards her...

Muskaan began moaning soon......rahul placed his lips on the right place...he kissed her all over her face and her neck....he hadnt yet taken her lips into his own...he wanted her to crave..

HE kissed her close to her lips....on her nose everywhere...

Muskaan's lips parted...they were dry....she wanted him now...

Muskaan made the first move...she cupped his face..

And moved her shivering lips towards his....her eyes were closed .....rahul moved his head a little behind...when muskaan dint feel his lips she opened her eyes.....desperation written all over her face....

She licked her tongue...

Rahul made sure she was craving and then gave in.......

He moved towards her....calling her lips..

When she gave in....what they both felt was heaven...muskaan felt pure pleasure!!..

as their tongues mixed with one another....rahul made the next step...

Muskaan was wearing a two piece gown....a inner gown with an overcoat...

He pulled out the string of the over coat....

Muskaan gasped..

Rahul smiled..

When they broke....there was a look in muskaan's face....she wanted more...

Rahul smiled......let her crave..

He went down to her neck...and kissed her all around.....there was passion burning in both of them......

Rahul slowly pushed that overcoat away...he pushed it down and it fell on the floor...

And then when he touched muskaan she shivered....

She stood there in a strapless piece of gown which ended above her knees...

There was a look of horror on her face.....reality had struck her..

Rahul noticed this and smile..

Rahul-Mera aisa koi irada nahi hain muskaan....main bas tere saath thoda sa above the waist romance karna chatha hoon...muskaan i sware main kabhi bhi tere saath aisa kuch nahi karonga jo mujhe nahi karna chahiye..

Muskaan nodded..

Rahul-Aaj raat ke liye i promise i wont go below the waist....thekhe??....

Muskaan nodded..

Rahul-Ab toh relax kar..

Muskaan smiled...

Muskaan instantly hugged him..

Rahul took her and made her sit on the bed...

He cupped her face!!

Rahul-You are so beautiful muskaan!!..

She smiled!!..

Her gaze again shifted to his bare chest!!..

Rahul saw her looking and smiled..

He put her down...and he laid on top of her...

Rahul-Mere 5 pack se pyaar hoo gaya kya???

Muskaan looked at him and smiled..

He kissed her neck...

She increased her grip over the bedsheet!!.....

Rahul smiled....

Muskaan-They are not 5 ok...

Rahul-Hello.....they are 5 and half...gonna be six soon!!😆😆

Muskaan-Rahul its only 4....

Rahul-Muskaan....ok come i'l show you..

He took her hand and placed and made her count one by one..

Muskaan lowered her gaze..

She was blushing!!..

Rahul-And there we go 5...

Muskaan smiled!!..

Rahul removed his hand from above muskaan's hand..

But muskaan's hand was still there..

Rahul-Hmm tum mera fayda utha rahi hoon...meri izzat par haath dal rahi hoon..😆😆

Muskaan smiled at his drama and pulled her hand out..

Rahul-Ab mujhe bhi karna hain..

Muskaan-Kya?

Rahul-Tumne mera tummy touch kiya na...mujhe bhi karna hain........

Rahul began kissing her neck and slowly slid the gown down..

Muskaan-Rahul tum..

Rahul-Shh!!...trust me..nothing below the waist...😊

Slowly rahul increased the pressure over her..

He made her get up and turned her around and kissed her..

Muskaan was sitting with her back facing rahul..

He slid the gown completely down!!...

He ran his hand through her back!!...................it sent shivers running through her body!!..

Muskaan-Rahul..

She said in the most seductive tone ever......she was completely seduced!!..

Rahul smiled!!..

Her back wwas her weak point!!..

He shook his head...

And what he did in the next second bowled muskaan over!!...he actually removed the strap of her inners and pushed it dowwn!!

Muskaan actually shivered......this was going way tooo far!!.

Rahul cupped her pair from behind and began rubbing his hands agianst them..

Rahul-Muskaaaaaan!!..

She was sitting all stiff and scared!!..She wasnt enjoying this anymore!!

Rahul stopped...and slowly tried to turn her around!!..

Muskaan refused to turn!

Rahul sighed!!...Maybe he had gone too far!!..

Rahul-Muskaan...i m sorry baba....i really just meant above the waist..maybe i went too far...sorry!!

She dint say anything!!..

Rahul-Apne kapde le jao....wear them and come....

She without turning back rushed to the washroom!!..

She came back wearing her strapless gown!..

the over coat was liwing somewhere on the ground!!

Rahul smiled seeing her enter..

Rahul-Sorry baba...tumhari khubsurati main itna kho chuka tha ki i lost my senses...😊

Muskaan smiled!!

Rahul-I m really sorry jana..

Muskaan-Its ok Rahul !!

KNOCK KNOCK!!

Muskaan got all nervous!!..

She panicked..

Rahul got up and immediately wore his shirt!!..

He buttoned them up..

Muskaan put on her overcoat..

"Muskaan"

The voice came from outside!!

Muskaan-Bhaiya......... mar gayye!!

Rahul-ohh gawd...Raj....ok relax...aaram se...

Rahul took a deep breath and opened the door..

Raj-Musk.................................................

Rahul was silent..

Raj-ohh Rahul tu....ummm woh..

Muskaan was freaking nervous!!

Raj-Actually woh main bas ek dawai leney aaya tha...actually sameera ko bhukar hain so naina ne kaha ki dawaiyan uske bag main hain ...muskaan ko shayad pata hain...toh bas main wohi leney aaya tha..

Rahul-Haan haan..ofcourse......itni safai kyun dee raha hain...aaja na.

Raj walked in..

Raj-Naina ka bag kahan hain?

Muskaan showed him her bag...

He took out the medicine box from there

Raj-Thanx!!

Muskaan-Haan...its ok..

While leaving raj saw the crumpled bed sheet and rahul cut sleeves lying on the floor....

In a hurry rahul just wore his shirt he forgot about the sleeveless inner lying on the floor..

Rahul hit his head..

Raj dint say anything...he quietly walked out!!..

Rahul- Freak!!....raj kya sochega??

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Naina was busy handling sameera and raj handed her the medicines...definately raj was kind of upset....but then he had crossed those lines himself...there wasnt a question of confronting muskaan...

They all finished dinner that day while Raj was on the phone for a very long time...he was making arrangements....the base was goonna tell him when was the right time to strike..He was fully prepared from his side!!

They all settled in the hall after dinner....to chat for a while..

LR was sitting in Rahul's lap and playing...muskaan couldnt help but gaze at him...

Raj got up to go to the kitchen to get a glass of water...muskaan signalled rahul...he left LR and went to the kitchen..

Rahul was freaking nervous..

Rahul-Umm Raj..

Raj turned around

Raj-Haan rahul kuch chaiye tha??

Rahul-Umm nahi woh..uh main..

Raj was waiting..

Rahul-Raj tune jo bhi dekha...i mean jaisa tu samjh raha hain na waisa kuch nahi hain..

Raj was silent..

Raj-Aggar aisa kuch nahi hain toh acha hoga rahul......

Raj was unusually silent upset or sarcastic...rahul couldnt figure out..

Rahul-Muskaan dikhati nahi hain raj but shes scared too for all of you...i was just trying to keep her distracted by just staying with her for a while..kasam se..

Raj-I trust you Rahul....you know what you're doing...

Rahul-Aur koi baat hian kya Raj?..

Raj-Pata nahi rahul...bahut dino se ek ajeeb feeling hain...i just dont know what it is....kuch toh honeey wala hain...i m just confused with all of it..

Rahul-Raj....jus relax buddy....kuch nahi hoga...baat aggar muskaan aur naina ki hain toh just leave it to me..i m there for both of them...no worries..

Raj nodded and hugged Rahul...rahul figured out that raj was preoccupied with lots of other pressure and he would talk about everything else later...after he returned!!

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Muskaan was sitting with Little Raj and Naina..

Muskaan-Bhabs!!..

Naina-Hmm..

Muskaan-Aap theekh hain na??

Naina-Haan...kyun?

Muskaan-Nahi...aisey hi...sameera kaisi hain?

Naina-Hmm..theekh hain..

Huda came in..

Huda-Umm Muskaan...terese do minute baat kar sakta hoon please??

Muskaan-hmm sure..

She got up and left

Rahul and Raj got back within a while..

They sat and chatted for a while..

Raj kept looking at Naina...it wasnt that flirtatious look that he used to give her...it was just a normal look !!.

Soon they all retired to bed..

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Muskaan caught rahul next morning..

Muskaan-Raat ko bhag kyun gayye?

Rahul-You werent to be seen toh i thought you had slept..

Muskaan-Umm nahi woh....khair....What happened with bhai??

Rahul-He was ok ..i mean..was upset...but then he kinda believed me and said that he trusted me....hes just to preoccupied muskaan...we should leave him...

Muskaan-Hmm !1

Rahul put a hand around her waist..

Rahul-DOnt worry..jab woh wapas aayea..woh kuch bhi puchega toh i'l reply!!

Muskaan smiled..

Aalekh-Ahem....apun idhar hain..

Rahul left muskaan's waist...

Aalekh-Apun toh bas yeh jan na chatha tha ki kya hua..

Aalekh shook his head..

Aalekh-Main jan na chatha tha kya hua....phir main chala jaonga..😆

Muskaan smiled at his atempt to speak shudh hindi!!..

Muskaan-Nothing great..we just sorted out evrything and bhai is normal...

Aalekh smiled!!😊

Aalekh-Bole toh gud!!..

Muskaan smiled..

Muskaan-thanx aalekh....jab jab mujhe teri zarorat rahi hain tab tab tu mere saath rehta hain....thanx man!!..

She hugged him..

Aalekh-Mereko jalney ki smell aa rahi hain..😉

Muskaan laughed and broke from him..

Muskaan-Aaney do....humein kya.??😆

Rahul-Excuse me ...main koi jal wal nahi raha...ok..

Muskaan-Main tumhari baat thodi na kar rahi thi..

Aalekh-Haan muski toh woh ...woh.....huda ke baarey main bol rahi thi..

Huda was the first person aalekh saw entering the hall...

Huda-Kya huda??

Muskaan-Nahi ahh woh kuch nahi!!....Aalekh toh yuhin...

Muskaan-Woh bas aalekh puch raha tha ki huda kahan hain..

Aalekh raised his eyebrows...

Huda-Oh acha theekh hain...main chalta hoon..

He left..

Aalekh-Yeh isko kya hua hain...

Rahul-Who knows...abhi ke liye muskaan coffee ho jaye..

Muskaan nodded and left for the kitchen..

She made coffee and brought.

Huda entered the hall once again..

Aalekh-Oyee huda...aaja coffee le..

Huda-Nahi yaar aalekh ..mujhe nahi chahiye..

Aalekh-Abb yeh aalekh kaun hain....tu toh apun ko sirf kaidi bolta hain.....oyee

He went up to him..

Aalekh-Koi locha hain kya....tu itna dukhi kyun hain?

Huda-Chodh na kaidi....bas yuhin..

He was looking past Aalekh...

Aalekh-Oyee apun idhar khadke terese baat kar raha hain...tu kidhar dekh raha hain..

Huda-Chodh na..

He went off..

Rahul sipped his coffee and read the paper...muskaan was too fidly fidly....she was fidgeting the cup and her hands...she was completely at unrest..

Rahul-Muskaan...kya hua koi problem hain kya..??

Muskaan-Nahi ...nahi toh!!..

Rahul-Oyee...mujhe keh sakti hain na..

Muskaan-Rahul..

Megha-Gud morning love birds!!

Muskaan jumped up..

Muskaan-Oyee meri maa.....dheerey bol...koi sun lega toh..

Megha-Sorry sorry!!..😛

She sat down!!

Megha-I hope i can..

Rahul-Please do!!😉

Muskaan shook her head!!

Muskaan-Rahul..jana....thoda kitchen main aana...kaam hain!!

Rahul laughed!!😆

Muskaan-You want me to say that...forget it i am not gonna say that!!

Megha smiled...her friend wont ever change!!

After abbout 15 minutes little raj came down...rubbing his eyes..

LR-Maaa!!

Megha-Gud morning bacha!!..

LR-Morning mummaa!!..

He sat on her lap...still sleepy!!..

She patted him...

Mumma-Mera bacha..

LR-Mumma... Mujhe Dudho chahiye.. !

Megha smiled..

Megha-Okk..tum yahan baitho..main latti hoon..

Megha left..

Raj and Naina came down.

Naina-Gud morning....rahul muskaan..

Raj greeted them too.

Naina-Morning Raj!!

Our hero Raj turned around but found naina talking to LR..

Naina was pinching his nose....and doing some timepass with him...RAJ smiled...she looked cute!!

Rahul-Naina....Raj main koi confusion toh nahi ho raha..yeh bada wala raj tumhara boyfriend hain chota wala nahi...😆

Naina smiled..

Megha entered with Milk..

And the regular hustle bustle with everyone coming down.

When suddenly Raj got a phone call..

After 5 minutes he kept the phone and he gave naina one look...she understood everything..

Raj-Cadet Huda..Cadet yudi...Cadet aalekh...cadet sameera...cadet tanvi...Its action time!!..

They all stood in a line..Raj briefed them..

Raj-Hum 20 minute main nikal rahe hain....get set..

In no time the hall got empty.....megha rahul muskaan and naina stood in front of raj..

Muskaan rahul and naina stood silently shocked!!....

Abhimanyu had informed from the base that it was time to strike....

Raj went up to naina.......

Raj-Naina....

He sighed!!

Raj hugged her.....

She just stood against his strong chest..

When they broke....their eye contact was still there....she was only looking at him...

He kissed her on her lips...it was a short yet kiss of his neverending love...he kept it short coz he kneww they were people watching him...

A tear rolled out of naina's eyes..

Naina-I'll miss you!!..

Raj nodded!!

Raj-Me too!!

Raj-Take your meals on time.......aur meri tension mat karna....aur muskaan ka dhyan rakhna..

She nodded!!

Naina-Apna dhyan rakhna aur cadets ka bhi....sab log successfully wapas aaney chaiye...ok..

Raj nodded..

All the cadets returned...with their bags all set

All set to go on the mission of their life....not knowing that they were going to fight for someones lost honour...not knowing that they are fighting for the biggest goal of two of their best mentors......but knowing just enough that they are fighting for their country....most importantly fightin along with their CAPTAIN RAJVEER against the enemy.....whether they return succesfully or not is to be seen !!

PRECAP!!

Naina sighed.....he was gone....finally gone for the mission of his life.....

She went back into the hall and sat...

She was obviously sad..

Rahul sat beside her.

She just lay her head on his chest..

He comforted her...

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Rahul-Hmm naina now that raj is not there its the perfect time for me to flirt with you....dance with me ??

Naina was sitting silently..Missing Raj terribly and scared for them all !!..

Naina-Not today

Rahul-Ouch!!