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Posted: 16 years ago

RECAP!!

Raj naina's night!!
Abhi's stupidness on thinkin muskaan is two timing aalekh...rahul muskan decide to meet..
NOW!!
Later that night naina went to Rajveer's room..

Raj was on the laptop...

Raj-Aao na..sit down

Naina started talking him..

Naina-Aaj muskaan bahut khush lag rahi thi na..

Raj-Haan she was...subah subah rahul se baat huyi hogi...she was too happy...usne usko propose kiya hoga ya phir kahin lee jaa raha hoga...she wasnt concentrating on my lecture..😉

Naina-Hmmm...

Raj was silent..he was a bit busy..

Naina-Thekhe gud nyt....

Raj looked up

Raj-Naina please 5 minute...sorry jana....thoda important information ko check kar raha tha...dont go yet...😊

Naina smiled and sat down...

Raj picked his phone..

Raj-Haan batao..

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Raj-Ohh.....theekhe main sambhal loonga..

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Raj-Lekin iss baar kuch gadbad nahi honi chahiye..

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Raj-Sab check karna....aur ainda mujhe army communication par contact karna...yeh number tap ho sakta hain

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Raj-Nahi.....iss baar puri sawdhani honi chahiye..

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Raj-Haan official...

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Raj-Thekhe main BC se baat karonga

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Raj-Please pura dhyan rakhna

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Raj-Jai hind!

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Naina looked at him

Raj-Naina.....

He hugged her

Raj-Humein ek dusra mauka mila hain...😃

Naina-Matlab??

Raj-Navin ko phasaney waley loggon tak pahunchney ka....we ev got another chance...aur iss bar main unhe janney nahi donga..

Naina dint say anything..

Raj-Iss bar kuch nahi hoga..i promise..

Naina looked away...

Raj-Naina please....dont do this na...iss bar official hain baba.....20 logg chalengey mere saath....dont worry..iss bar woh logg toh gayye...

Naina was still silent...

Raj-We had to do this one day or the other...iss bar we'l be successful and i'l be back...i promise...ek aur baat we should be leaving in a day or two..

Naina hugged him..

Naina-Nahi aaye toh main aaongi...samjhey na..

Raj smiled and stroked her hair..

Naina went to make coffee...

When she returned she saw Raj serious...

he was staring at the ceiling..

Naina-Raj...

He immediately jerked..

Naina sat beside him..

Naina-Kya hua??

Raj-Nahi kuch nahi..

.He took her hands into his own and kissed them..

Naina-Raj kuch aur gadbad hain kya??...mission ko lekar..??

Naina-Bolo Raj..

Raj-Naina...darr lag raha hain naina...

Naina-Kaisa darr??......tumhe kuch nahi hoga raj...i know it..

Raj-Muhe lekar nahi....tumhara liye darr....Naina...just suppose...Just...suppose mujhe kuch ho jata hain naina....aur yahan...i mean..

Naina-Raj...kya baat hain...please batao.....tumhe kaunsi baat sata rahi hain..

Raj-Naina kal raat ke baad aggar tum...

Naina's face went blank..

Raj-Aur aggar main nahi lauta toh tum kaise manage karogi naina??

Naina dropped her hands which he was catching....

Raj noticed this...

They both were silent ....

Raj-Naina main nahi chatha ki koi bhi tum par ungli uthaye....bas wahi baat khayye jaa rahi hain...we were not careful last night..

what if what he just said happens.....what if she gets pregnant.....

It took her a minute to come out of it...

She looked at Raj..

Naina-Kuch nahi hoga......aisa kuch nahi hoga..dont worry...

Raj sighed....he knew she was just trying to be positive..

Raj-I know naina...aisa kuch nahi hoga..

She laid her head on his chest..

He stroked her hair..

Raj pretended to be normal from outside for naina's sake...but this matter was killing him from inside....he was terribly tensed..

Naina went back to her room...

Raj lay on his bed...so many things together...he had to convince BC as well.........

Raj spoke to Bc....he begged for one chance...just one.......after lot of arguement and discussion bc agreed...

BC-Captain...main aapko sirf apney cadets ko lee janeey ki permission de sakta hoon..

Raj-Magar sir

BC-Captain pehle toh mujhe aapko yeh permission hi nahi deni chahiye thi.....de raha hoon seniors ko main keh donga ki aap cadets ko training ke liye gayye the...iske zyada main nahi kar sakta...i m sorry..

Raj--Thekhe sir...mere cadets bhi kisi se kam nahi....main manage kar longa...

Bc-Lekin aagar kissi bhi cadet ko kuch bhi hua....aap jaantey hain aapka court martial ho sakta hain..

Raj nodded..

Raj-Mere cadets meri zimedari hain sir!!..


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Muskaan reached their normal place by the rocks where they confessed their love.

Muskaan saw Rahul sitting there..

They sat there together..

Rahul-Aur aaj ka din kaisa tha??

Muskaan-Hmm acha tha..highly distractive...😉

Rahul raised his eyebrows..

Muskaan-Sara din main Rahul grewal ke bareey main soch rahi thi..

She thre some stones into the water...looking ahead..Rahul saw her innocnet face...she looked sizzling..

Rahul-Ohh toh aaj kal rahul grewal ne apke din ka chain aur ratton ke neendh cheen lee hain...

Muskaan smiled...

Muskaan-Aisa hi kuch samjh loon..😛

Rahul smiled...

He stood up....

Rahul-Ek walk ho jayee..

Muskaan stood up and they were both walking by the sea shore...when suddenly rahul gripped his hands around hers..he caught hold of her hands firmly..

She looked at him...he was normal looking ahead..

She smiled held onto his hand...

He smiled...

They walked like that for about 20 minutes...

Rahul-Icecream?

Muskaan-Yup..

They both walked and there was a vendor there...they brought their icecreams from there....

And they were eating...and walking..

Rahul-Pata hain aaj apney boss se 3 baar gussa khaya..

Muskaan-Kyun??

Rahul-I was dreaming..

Muskaan-Of??

Rahul-Off..

Muskaan knew what he was going to say..😳

Rahul-Was dreaming of mu...

Muskaan blushed..

Rahul-Dreaming of mu...mo..mother teressa..😆😆

Muskaan was shocked like hell..

Rahul started laughin....

He was holding his stomach and laughing..

Muskaan-Hmpph..

She started walking ....rahul caught up with her..

Rahul-Arrey muskaan....mazak kar raha tha baba....i was dreaming of muskaan shekhwat...khush😊

Muskaan smiled and stopped...he reached her..

Rahul looked at her eyes...he was gazing at her..

Muskaan loked down..

Muskaan-Aisey kya dekh rahe hoon?

Rahul-Bahut khubsuraat ..

Muskaan blushed...

Rahul-Bahut hi zyada khubsurat lag RAHA hain..

Muskaan frowned...she looked at him..

Rahul put his hand on her nose and rubbed..

RAhul showed his finger to her..

Rahul-Bahut khubsurat lag raha hain tumharey chehrey par yeh icecream ka dhaba..😆😆

Rahul started laughing again..

Muskaan hit him ....was constantly hitting him....dhamal dhamal dhamal....rahul was laughing .....he was holding his stomach..

He was running and muskaan the god of terror was behind him.......

He tripped over a small stone and fell down and since she was also in full speed she couldnt apply breaks...lol...she fell on top of him......they both rolled a bit in the sand..😳😳

At the end muskaan was on top of rahul...and there was almost an inch between them.....rahul was gazin at her...she looked beautiful even with the sand all over her face and clother...she looked simply beautiful.....muskaan was also staring at him...she couldnt get her eyes off him....

rahuls gaze shifted a bit lower towards her clevage. not intentionally......her kurti was well umm a bit low....when muskaan looked down and saw that she immediately got up...and had her hand on her kurti....muskaan was feeling akward....rahul wanted to bang his head somewhere...not again...this was happening the second time with them...when she thought that he was trying too...oohh godd..

Rahul-Woh umm i m...muskaan

Muskaan was silent...

Rahul-I dint mean to...i m sorry...

He decided to drop everything here...and send her back to the academy....

Rahul-Chalein?

Muskaan-Hmmm!!..
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At the ground next day

Rajveer-Hum ek mission par jaa rahe hain cadets....ek bahut hi important mission jiske sarrey details main aapko disclose nahi kar sakta....lekin aggar yeh mission succesful hota hain toh aap logg ko bahut sareey honours mil saktein hain....aur dusri taraf fail hua toh bahut problem bhi ho sakti hain.....

maine apney hisab se 5 naam soche hain....main woh naam aab bataonga...lekin aggar aap chathe hain toh aap withdraw kar saktein hain...
aur yeh mission hain woh aapko pata hain..lekinn isee training ka naam diya gaya hain...its a secret mission to be precise....kma ke bahar its called training..

kyunki iss mission main bahut khatra hain....mere mann main jo bhi naam aaye maine likh liye...par aap par kisi prakar ka dabav nahi hoga...jo naam mujhe sahi lage maine likhey hain..

Its your choice!!..

Raj-Cadet Sameera , Cadet Aalekh , Cadet Amardeep huda, Cadet Yadhuvansh sahani aur cadet Tanvi...

All were shocked and surprised...most was muskaan..he hadnt called out her name

Raj-Bakki sab jaa saktein hain..

Every other person left except muskaan....she gave glares to Rajveer..

Raj-Cadet Shekhawat you may leave...main aapse badd main baat karonga...

Muskaan left..

Raj loked at his cadets..

Raj-Maine bada soch samjh kar yeh faisla liya hain....aap sab main koi na koi hunar hain...jisko main bahar duniya ko dikhana chatha hoon ....for an example cadet yudi....woh technologically bahut hi strong hain...dushmaan ko haraney ke liye humein technology ki zaroorat hain..

Main aapki maddad chatha hoon....apke hunar ki madda chatha hoon.....aapko ab haan ya na karni hain..

Huda-Sir kya main kuch puchoon?

Raj-Puchiye..

Huda-Aapney mujhe kyun chuna....aap to mujhse nafrat karte hain..

Raj-Cadet huda...aisa nahi hain ki aapse nafrat karta hoon cadet...shyad main aapko ya aapke behaviour ko pasand nahi karta..haan kahin na kahin koi galat famiya hain aur difference of opinions hain..magar woh sab sirf personally hain....professionally mujhe aapse koi problem nahi hain...

..aur jahan tak bad aapko chunne ki hain toh aap kisi ko bhi ullu bana saktein hain..

Raj smiled..

Raj-Aap main shabdoon ki takkat hain...apney shabdoon se aap dushmaan ka toh band baja dengey....unhe unki bhains yad aa jayegi..

Huda smiled..

Raj-Har ek ko chune ne ka ek karan hian.....ab cadet aalekh hain....galat mat samjhiye cadet appney zindagi dekhi hain.....batar zindagi dekhi hain....escape routes ke waqt aap bahut kaam aayengey....aapkey jail main bitayi huyi zindagi hamarey bahut kaam aayegi...you know choti choti baatein...woh aapka experience hain....aur shayad aap humein marney se bachaye..


Rahe cadet tanvi aur cadet sameera..

Raj-Cadet sameer ke pass sara theoritical knowledge hain...jo kab hamarey kaam aaye hum nahi jantey....its a very safe one..

Everybody nodded..

Raj-Aur last main Cadet Tanvi......

Tanvi looked at him very casually..she had changed over the days...ever since they returned from goa...she never used to speak much,

Raj-Unke pass looks hain....you know enemy ko dhoka deney ke liye...kabhi kabhi war main humein apneey hi aadmi ko enemy camp main bhejna padta hain..aur uss waqt sirf ek khubsurat ladki kaam aati hain...iss liye cadet tanvi..

Under normal circumstances tanvi would have fainted after hearing that from Rajveer..

But today she was very subdued...she jus said thanx,

Raj was surprised!!

Raj-So cadets aapna waqt lee jiye aur apni zindagi ka sabsey bada faisla mujhe bata dena aaj raat tak....dismiss..

Everybody moved while tanvi was slow...Raj called out to her..

Raj-Cadet Tanvi.

Tanvi-Jee sir..

Raj-Kya baat hain..kuch dinoo se aapka mood acha nahi hain...mujhe kaha bhi nahi ki main iss suit main kaisa lag raha hoon..

Raj smiled..he wanted her to feel better...

Tanvi-Ahh achee lag rahe hain sir..

She was terribly upset about somehting..

Raj-Cadet koi aur problem.....you can share it with me..

She looked at him..

Tanvi-Thankyou sir....lekin main theekh hoon....ab tak lad rahi hoon....aur ladti rahongi..

Raj sensed some bitterness there...something was troubling her...

Raj-Jao cadet...aaram karo..

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Raj went back to his room and naina was as usual waiting there for him..

Raj-Zyada dair wait toh nahi karwaya??

Just then Muskaan entered...

Giving glares to him...

Raj-Maine knock nahi suna

Muskaan-Maine knock nahi kiya....😡

Raj-Muskaan...itna gussa kyun hain??

Muskaan-You dont know??

Raj-Muskaan..

Muskaan-Kyun aisa kar rahe hain..

Raj-Ek wajah hain muskaan..

Naina tried to slip out..

Raj-Ruko Naina..iske saath akela chodh kar jaogi toh jab wapas aaogi toh isse akela paogi..mujhe kacha chaba jayegi...😆

Raj-Muskaan aggar main tumhe bhi le jata toh yahan naina akeli kya karti??

Muskaan-Aur log bhi hain...abhimanyu shalu..

Raj-Woh unsa itna close nahi hain muskaan....woh akeli padh jayegi aur aggar humara mission fail ho jata hain ya mujhe kuch ho jata hain toh naina ke saath koi toh hona chahiye....aur rahul...rahul bhi toh yahan hain...tu kya uske rehna nahi chathi..

Muskaan-Bhai thats not the point.....the point is that hum sabko apney desh ki seva karni hain..😡😡

Raj-Muskaan....desh ki sewa karni hain...i agree...magar muskaan...this is not a mission for you......aur yeh dunno toh bahut hi emotional aur sentimental hain....tu hi toh ek strong ladki hain na.

Muskaan-Lekin bhai..

Raj-Muskaan jab baat desh par aati hain toh bahut see chezin dekhni padti hain muskaan....main koi personal decision nahi liya...sachi....

Muskaan dint say anything..

RAj-Naina ka khayal rakhegi na??

Naina just stood and was watching the drama..

Raj-Aur haan bhai nahi hain iska matlab yeh toh nahi hota ki tum sara waqt apney boyfriend ke saath hoon aur lectures ke waqt dhyan na doon....samjhi..

Muskaan-Whatever...main jo chaoon woh karon...😕

Raj-Aur sun apna hath toh dikha..

Raj-Chalo ring nahi hain...mujhe laga usne tujhe propose kar diya hoga isliye toh uss din itni extra khush thi..

Muskaan put that hand down!!..

She left from there in a while..

Naina-SAch batao...muskaan ko kyun nahi chuna

Raj-Naina its not that woh meri behen hain issliye and all....muskaan bahut hi calm hain lekin jab usee gussa aa gaya ya woh frustrate ho gayyi toh sabko dhoo dalegi....aur yeh humarey mission ke liye harmful hoo sakta hain....woh ek aggressive soldier ban sakti hain jiski wajah se sareey group ko nuksaan ho sakta hain....iss missionmain humari patience aur tolerance ka test hota hain....i dint think muskaan iss team main fit hoti hain...iss liye maine usee nahi liya..

Naina-Kab jaa rahe hoon??

Raj-2 din badd..

Naina nodded.

Naina-Kab aaogey?

Raj-Pata nahi naina.

NAina-Base ko apney position ke baarey main inform kartey rahogey na??

Raj nodded..

Raj-Aur chauhan se keh dunga woh tum saari information deta rahega..

Naina nodded..

Naina-BAck-up ke liye koi team banayi hain tumne??

Raj-Mera kaam nahi hain woh...Chauhan ka kaam hain...kuch hua toh woh apney troop ke saath niklega..

Naina nodded..

Raj-Aur koi sawal?

Raj smiled..

Naina nodded in the negative..

They both were visibly upset....the same thing eating both their heads..

After some time naina left and Raj sneaked out and went to Rahul's house..

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Rahul-Raj tu?...kya hua sab theekh??

Raj nodded in negative..

Rahul made him sit down..

Raj-Doo din baad hum official mission par nikal rahe hain rahul...navin ke liye...

Rahul-Yeh toh achi baat hain raj..iss baar unko mat chodhna..

Raj-Nahi chodunga..lekin meri pareshani kuch aur hain..

Rahul-Kya?

Raj-Naina..

Rahul-Main naina ka pura dhyan rakhonga raj...fikar na kar..

Raj-Baat woh nahi hain rahul...kaise bataon...kisi ko bhi nahi bata sakta.....tujhe bata sakta hoon lekin pata nahi kiss mooh se kahoon..

Rahul-Raj bata kya baat hain??

Raj-Mujhe ek darr sata raha hain...rahul....we ...we crossed all our limits that night rahul....we broke all the rules...and i m scared aggar naina..

Rahul was shocked!!..

He had never expected Raj to say something like that to him..

Raj held his head in frustration..

Raj-I m scared rahul...aggar mujhe kuch ho gaya aur naina yahan....i mean she wont be able to handle it rahul...

Rahul just placed a hand on his shoulder..

Raj-I know jo humne kiya galat kiya...but it was just the moment ....we dont regret but we both are very scared..

Rahul-Kuch nahi hoga...dont worry....sab theekh ho jayega...

Raj-I just hope so....main naina par koi aanch nahi aaney de sakta rahul...i cant just cant!!..

Rahul-Kuch nahi hoga!!..

Raj hugged him....rahul noticed that his friend was visibly upset....very very upset..

Rahul-Acha ab yeh sab chodho....coffee??

Rahul made a terrible attempt of changing the topic...

Rahul-Oye yaar itna serious mat ban...i cant handle it.....main keh raha hoon na aisa kuch nahi hoga...dont worry....

Raj nodded..

Rahul couldnt comfort himm this time..because his fears were right....

Rahul-Aur kab kaha tune nikal rahe hoon??

Raj-2 din...bc ne cadets ko le janeey ki permisiion di hain..

Rahul looked at him wanting to ask something..

Raj-Puch lein

Rahul-Huh??

Raj-Puch lein na ki muskaan aa rahi hain ya nahi..😉

Rahul smiled

Rahul-Muskaan ko le jaa raha hain??

Raj-Naa!!..

Rahul smiled again..

Raj-Magar wahan bhi ek problem hain.

Rahul-Kya?

Raj-Muskaan ke saarey dost mere saath hain....aur usse lagta hain ki i m protective about her and all..

Rahul laughed!!

Rahul-Woh toh tu hain..

Raj-Nahi yaar...aisa nahi hain....muskaan is not the right person for this mission.....you take her for a do or die mission and she'l rock....but yeh mission....you know how sensitive it is.....aur toh aur she wont blindly follow what i say....she'l want to know the whole story.....dusre cadets chup chap mere orders follow karengey....

Rahul-Main samjhta hoon....chinta na kar...main muskaan ko samjha longa!!..😊

Raj smiled..

Raj-Thanx!!..

Rahul brought coffee..

Raj was still little sad sad.....rahul couldnt put his fears to rest but he could lighten the situation..

Rahul-Toh mere dost ek sawal puchoon?

RAj-Hmm..

Rahul-Uss raat ka experience kaisa tha??

Raj blushed!!

Rahul smiled..

Rahul-Oyee tu toh sharmata bhi hain..😉

Raj-Rahul..

Rahul-Tu na muskurata reh .....acha lagta hain....aisa ajeeb lagta hain....aur main keh raha hoon na kuch nahi hoga naina ko...samjha?...mujh par vishwas hain na??..tu bas mission par dhyan de...aur successfully laut kar aa..

Raj nodded!!

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PRECAP!!
Rahul-Kyunki meri jana..

He brought her close and was hugging her from behind..

Rahul-Jab bhagwan akal baat rahe the tu mere saath romance karney main busy thi...

He nuzzled her neck...muskaan blushed..

Rahul-Jaisey iss waqt hoon...

Muskaan blushed.

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Muskaan-your a very nice friend you noe!!

Rahul smiled..

Rahul-I am a nice boy and a nice friend....so a very nice boyfriend too!!..

Muskaan blushed!!

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Also entry of two new characters In the next episode of FATINY!!..
Shweta Gulati as MEGHA!!

Along with dhriti bhatia....the cute girl who played krishna on colours....however even in my FF she will play the character of a guy!....who is called RAJ!!.....
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NEXT FATINY UD will be on wednesday...

Yes thats right wednesday.....two uds next week.....i need to quickly
finish this stry..lol....once a week means my fic will go on for ages....so just to fasten things nd da story u guys will hv an xtra ud next week!!..

and the uds myt get slightly loger.....cuz we r gnng to slow!!...so if u find it long take ur tym and reply..no pressure....but yeah they'l get a lil long frm nw on!!...and i'l make sure to keep the intrest going!!...

Luv
Tina!!
Edited by -Tina- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ahh nice part. Finally I can see sum action cuming. Raj-Naina convo was gud. They both must be feeling terrible but then they dont need to think dat much. Coz nothing can happen to Raj (after all ye fic real LRL jaisa nahi hai).
RM scene was so cute n romantic. They r awesum. And I also luved Raj-Rahul convo. Their frndship is so cool. They always share everything.
Raj's talk wid the cadets was nice. I was quite surprised when Huda said Raj Hated him but then Raj managed it well. And yes he is ryt dat Muskaan was not a gud choice 4 this mission.
But I wonder wat happened to Tanvi. And the 2 new characters wid one named RAJ??????? Thats a lil bit confusing.
Now w8ing eagerly 4 Wednesday's UD. I'm glad to hav UDs twice a week again.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Raj is really cool!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊He said Muskaan was too happy toh zaroor Rahul ne usse propose kiya hoga ya phir kahin leja raha hoga!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj phir se ek mission par jaa raha hai taaki Navin ko phasaney waalein logon tak pahuch sake!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina Raj ke jaane se darr rahi hai because its a dangerous mission!!!!!

Raj is assuring Naina that he will be back and they will be successful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina kehti hai Raj nahi aaya toh woh aayegi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ka darna apni jagah sahi ke what if usse kuch ho gaya aur Naina pregnant ho gayi toh kya hoga!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina is trying to be positive and Raj pretended to be normal from outside for Naina's sake but the matter was killing him from inside!!!!!!

Raj ne Naina se toh kaha tha uske saath log jayenge magar yahan toh usse bas apne cadets ko saath le jaane ki permission mili hai!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Muskaan ne Rahul se kaha ke woh saara din ussi ke baare mein soch rahi thi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Rahul bhi kehna waala tha that he was dreaming of Muskaan par kaha nahi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛He is so naughty!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Muskaan was shocked but finally usne kaha he was dreaming of her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab Rahul is again pulling her leg aur uski jagah uske chehre pe ice-cream ke dhabbe ki tareef kar raha hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Muskaan hit him and then ran after him!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆But Rahul tripped and fell and she fell over him!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

They were very close!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️But Rahul's gaze again shifted to her cleavage!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Muskaan got awkward and he had to send her back to the academy!!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ne apne mission ke liye cadets ko chose karta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Magar usne Muskaan ko nahi liya isilye she is really angry!!!!

Raj's talk with the cadets was very nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda ne kaha ke Raj toh usse nafrat karta hai toh Raj handled that very well!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj stated the reason for choosing each of them aur kaha ke unmein kya hunar hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Tanvi has really changed and just said thanks when Raj praised her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj wanted her to feel better but she is upset about something!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔I wonder what happened to Tanvi!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Muskaan came to Raj's room very angry!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Ab uske saare friends jaa rahe hai aur woh nahi toh yeh natural hai ke usse accha toh nahi lagega naa!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

When Naina tried to slip out Raj stopped her saying ke Muskaan ke saath usse akela chhod kar jayegi toh woh usse kaccha chaba jayegi!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj Muskaan ko samjhata hai that she needs to be here to take care of Naina in case something happens to him!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is now pulling Muskaan's leg about spending time with Rahul while he is away and his thinking Rahul has proposed!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ne reason sahi diya hai ke Muskaan ke gusse aur dimag ka vakai mein koi bharosa nahi hai!!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj Naina ko toh assure kar raha hai magar kahin na kahin woh khud bhi samajh nahi paa raha hai ke aage kya hoga??😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Hota hai aisa jab aap kisi se judte ho toh usko chhod kar jana accha nahi lagta hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj and Naina are both visibly upset and the same thing is eating both their heads!!!!!!!

Raj told Rahul that he and Naina had crossed all their limits that night and he is scared agar usse kuch ho gaya toh Naina won't be able to handle it!!!!!

Rahul is shocked!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲But he assured Raj ke kuch nahi hoga and tried to change the topic!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rahul couldn't comfort him this time because his fears were right!!!!!!

Raj explained the problem about Muskaan and Rahul said that Raj is protective about her!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is right that you take Muskaan for a do or die mission and she will rock!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rahul tried to lighten the situation and asked Raj ke ush raat ka experience kaisa tha??😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj blushed!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️How cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Rahul is now teasing him ke woh toh sharmata bhi hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rahul is telling Raj to keep smiling and assuring him ke kuch nahi hoga!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Woh kehta hai ke woh mission par dhyan se aur successfully laut ke aaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

I am sure Rahul ek acche dost ka farz nibhayega aur Naina aur Muskaan ka khayal rakhega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I hope Raj's mission is successful aur woh safely laut aaye!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

One of the two characters is called Raj!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Iska yeh matlab toh nahi ke Raj ko mission mein kuch ho jayega??😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

And Naina will have the baby and will name it Raj and your story will take a leap!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

O no!!!! Raj nahi aaya toh Naina toh bilkul akeli ho jayegi uska kya hoga??😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Hi Tina,
I'm Sabz, a new member here, and I really like yur ff.
I'm a die hard fan of RM, and yur story is pretty unique and different , with them being soldiers, and Rahul working with a boss. But I like, how Rahul and Muskaan's personality is still very similar.
I can't believe yur going to end it soon, but then I guess you want to finish the story. It's just the thing is, yur ff is just sooo awesome, and you update pretty frequently, which makes me not want this story to end anytime soon, lol. Wow, 2 updates next week, yay, something to look forward to, lol. Can't wait.
~Saby
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as usual another rocking update tina!!!!! loved each and every bit of it...hope mission goes successful and everything solves out...and love hom raj is so concerned abt naina..and finallyyy got see some bonding of raj and rahul...awww raj was sooo cute when when he blushed on the question of that night..lol...and yeaaa sooo happy that it will be 2 updates in the a week...loved the precape...waiting for wednesday tooo ASAP..lol!!!!
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nice update yaar...rahul z sooo sweet....well i luv ur 2 gud newz-update 2 dayz in a week n long updatez....i luv 4 dat....thanx 4 da mail..waiting 4 ur next ud.....tk cre
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that was really great
plz continue soon
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Good ud.
Raj ka darna apni jagah sahi hai par i don't think ye itne major problem hai vo bhi aaj k time me. Naina abhi bhi na jaane kyoun Raj k jaane se dar rahi hai shayad itne dangerous mission ki vajah se. Raj Naina ko assure to kar raha hai par kahin na kahin vo khud bhi nahi samajh paa raha hai ki aage kya hoga? Hota hai aisa jab aap kisi se judte ho to us ko chod kar jaana accha nahi lagta hai.
RM r as usual sweet n i like Rahul's sense of humour vo jis tarah se Muskaan ki leg pulling karta hai.Muskaan bechari Raj us ko nahi le jaa raha hai to us ka gussa fat raha hai. Natural hai ki us k saare frnds jaa rahe hain aur vo nahi to accha to nahi lagega na. Vaise Raj ne reason solid diya. Muskaan k gusse aur dimaag ka vakai me koi bharosa nahi hai. Rahul bhi i hope ek acche dost ka farz nibhayega aur Naina n Muski ka khayal rakehga.
continue soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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awesome part!!
will definitely wait for your next update!!
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RECAP!!
Rahul muskaan roamance!!....Mission - Raj's tension!!
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Before we move on
I had mentioned of two new characters..A lot of speculation about The second character Raj..
Well its for pure comedy ....you'l understand from the precap....and i have realized that kids always add that extra zing to da fic......even with shona (for thos of u who hv read strange feeling) i think the fun increased for me as a writer and i m sure you guys luvd reading shonas parts too....so here goes a new kid who is also called RAj.....precisely LIttle RAj or LR
NOW
PART 38!! ~~
The next morning muskaan woke up very early....she got ready and sneaked out..

She reached the parking lot..

Muskaan-Kya baat hain?...itni subah subah kyun bulaya??

Rahul-Muskaan main mandir jana chatha hoon...

Muskaan-Kya main sapna dekh rahi hoon??

She did little nautanki and fell on him..

He put her on her legs...

Rahul-Muskaan...mazak na udha....mere saath chalegi na?

Muskaan-Main toh chali jaongi magar tu kyun jana chatha hain??

Rahul-Uffo...chal na.

Muskaan realized that rahul was serious and pissed!!
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They reached the temple in some time..

Muskaan-Rahul sab theekh hain na?....tu achanak mandir?

Rahul-Haan baba...sab theekh hain...bas i felt like coming....sab ke liye prarthana karne ke liye...

Muskaan-Rahul...baat kuch aur hain...batao please jana...koi aur takleef hain kya?

Rahul was clearly frustrated..

Rahul-Pehle andar chalien??

They entered...Rahul came to the temple after years together...after sana he had never gone...but today he came for raj's sake...he needed to pray for his safety and for naina.......he needed to..

After about half an hour....they left and went and sat by the rocks..

Rahul-Muskaan...kahani bahut lambi hain.....aur..

Muskaan-Aur tum mujhe bata nahi saktey..

Rahul looked helpless..

Muskaan-Thekhe rahul its ok....

Rahul took her hands into his..

Rahul-Main tumhe sab batata hoon lekin tumhe mujhse wada karna hoga ki tum kisi ko nahi bataogi..

Muskaan-Wada rahul..

Rahul-Dhyan se suno muskaan...aggar mujhe kuch ho jata hain toh jo bhi tumhe abb keh raha hoon woh bahut zyada important hain...

Muskaan-Tumhe kuch hoga?..matlab...kya ho raha hain?...batao

After she heard the whole story..about navin -naina... and raj killing navin....she was in tears...

She rested her head on his shoulders....

Rahul-Muskaan aggar yeh baat tune kisi ko bhi batayi na toh raj aur naina bahut badi musibaat main padh jayengey...unka court martial ho jayega...yeh baat ke baarey main kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalna chaiye!!....samjhi

Muskaan nodded...

Rahul-Aur haan aggar raj ko mission par kisi bhi tarah ki problems hoti hain toh phir i need to go to him...kyunki besides him yeh kahani sirf mujhe pata hain....abhi ko bhi pata hain lekin woh apni duty se....you know what i mean..issliye its important ke yahan koi hoon jo sab kuch janta hoon....and i trust you..

Muskaan nodded..
Rahul-Aur tu janti hain na ki raj tujhe iss mission par kyun nahi le jana chatha...

Muskaan-He is just protective...aur kuch nahi.. aur woh chathe hain ki naina ke saath koi hoon...thats his reason..

Rahul-No muskaan....hes is not..........ok umm lets see let me try and explain....lets suppose tumhari yeh beautiful dress phat jati hain....toh tum kya karogi??

Muskaan-Silaa dongi..

Rahul-Kisse??

Muskaan-Suiye se aur kis se??

Rahul-Aggar needle na hoon aur main talwar doon toh??

Muskaan-Rahul pagal ho kya??....talwar kaise chalegi??😆

Rahul smiled..

Rahul-Aur ab samjhi na...tu woh talwar hain muskaan...jo kisi ko bhi jaan se marr sakti hain apne desh ke liye....lekin yahan sab bahut sensitive hain....aur rajveer ko ek needle ki zarorat hain..

Muskaan was looking at him silently..

Rahul-Ab dekh needle aur talwar main aisa nahi keh sakta na ki koi acha hain aur koi bura....duno apna apna kaam karte hain...waisey hi tu buri nahi hain...lekin bas yeh tera kaam nahi hain..

Muskaan nodded..

Rahul-Aur muskaan....ek baat main tujhe bataoon...yaad rakhiyo.. "It better not to do anything that do something you dont like or your not made for "

Muskaan smiled..

Muskaan-Yehi baat mujhe samjh main kyun nahi ayyi jab bhai ne samjhaya..😊

Rahul-Kyunki meri jana..

He brought her close and was hugging her from behind..

Rahul-Jab bhagwan akal baat rahe the tu mere saath romance karney main busy thi...😳

He nuzzled her neck...muskaan blushed..

Rahul-Jaisey iss waqt hoon...

Muskaan blushed.

Muskaan-Ab yeh bhi bata doon ki temple kyun ayye the???

Rahul-Raj ke liye pray karney ke liye..hes going thru a lot muskaan....i just want ki sab theekh ho jayye...

Muskaan smiled..

Muskaan-your a very nice friend you noe!!

Rahul smiled..😊

Rahul-I am a nice boy and a nice friend....so a very nice boyfriend too!!..

Muskaan blushed!!

Muskaan-Bhai is very lucky!!

Rahul smiled..

Rahul-Khair Raj ko kuch mat kehna...behave normally....yeh baat please apney tummy main theekh se rakho..

Muskaan nooded!!

Rahul-You know raj ko ek aur darr tha....ki aggar woh tujhe mission par le jayee toh phir tu blindly kuch follow nahi karegi....aur woh tujhe kuch reveal nahi kar pata...kya bata ta tujhe bechara....kaisey bata ta...so he just dint want you to be there...

Muskaan nodded..

Rahul-Dont misunderstand him please!!

Muskaan-I m not dont worry sweetheart!!

Rahul smiled and gave her one look..

Rahul-Repeat the last word..

Muskaan smiled..

Muskaan-Sweetheart!!😛

Rahul-Awee....i love you muskaan!!

Muskaan blushed and kept walking!!

Whilst rahul kept looking at her..

And suddenly banged into a kid...the kid fell down and started crying..

A young girl came running from somewhere..

She looked at Rahul

Girl-Dekh ke nahi chal saktey.....bachee ko gira diya..

Rahul-I m sorry..

He bent down and patted the kid..

Rahul-Mainey dekha nahi... sorry...

The girl saw Muskaan..

Girl-Ohh ladki ka chakkar...usse dekhney main apney iss bachee ko dekha nahi..

Rahul ruffled his hair..

The girl laughed!!

But Muskaan was having a confused look..

Rahul-Kya hua??

Muskaan(whispiring)- Isko jantey hian kya?.....dekhi huyi lagti hain..

Rahul shrugged..

Rahul-Main toh sirf ek ladki ko janta hoon..

Muskaan hit him..

Muskaan-Ahh hi I am muskaan!!

She shook hands with the girl..

Girl-.Megha Banerjee..

Muskaan jumped up with joy...and hugged her

Rahul and megha were blank..

Muskaan-Oyee nahi pehchana..

Megha was confused..

Muskaan-Muskaan Chadha..

Megha-Muski!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They hugged again..

Muskaan-Rahul yeh meri bachpan ki dost hain...my best bud megha!!...we just lost touch out of school

Rahul-Ohh hey megha!!

The two ladies were chit chattin

Meanwhile Rahul picked up the kid and started playing with him

Rahul-Aapka naam kya hain??

Boy-Raj!!..

Rahul smiled..

Rahul-Duniya main raj ki kami nahi hain!!😊

Little Raj-Aapka kya naam hain uncle??

Rahul-Oyee uncle kisee bula??

LR-Hehehe....aapko!!😆😆

Rahul-Oyee mera naam Rahul hain samjha,...uncle nahi hoon main!!

The kid started laughing!!

LR-Rahul uncle ....rahul uncle!!😆😆

Rahul-Raj chup ho jaa saley..

Rahul thought...iss raj ko toh kuch bhi keh sakte hain!!😆😆

HE laughed!!

LR-Icecream..mujhe icecream khana hian...uncle please..😛

He started pulling rahul's collar!!...

Rahul took him to the icecream vendor..

Muskaan and Megha

Muskaan-Maine na KMA join ki hain...

Megha-Ohh thats super!!..

Muskaan-Aur you know...

Muskaan fell silent on seeing the sight...she smiled...no actually blushed!!

Megha turned around and saw..

Rahul was playing with kid...they both were enjoyin their icecream!!

Megha-Ahem ahem..

Muskaan jerked..

Megha-Boyfriend??

Muskaan smiled..

Megha-wow muskaan...bahut hi hot hian!!

Muskaan-Oyee keep your eyes off!!😉

MEgha smiled..

Megha-Veer ko pata hain??

Muskaan--Hmm!!😊

Megha-Aur tu zinda bhi hain!!

Megha started laughing!!😆😆

Muskaan-Bhai ka dost hain...bahut sweet hain..

Megha-Hayee!!

Muskaan-Sun woh bacha tera hain kya?......hay ram!!

Megha-Nahi yaar.....mansi di ka hain..

Muskaan-Ohh...kaisi hain woh...aur ghar par sab kaisey hain??

MEgha-Ghar par koi nahi hian muskaan..

Muskaan-Huh??

Megha-Doo saal pehle mansi di jiju ma aur baba sab ek shadi par gayee the...main aur raj ghar par hi the...woh sab kabhi wapas nahi aaye!!..

Muskaan looked up shocked,...😲😲

Megha-Bahut bada accident ho gaya...aur koi bhi nahi bacha.....tabse its only me and Raj..

Muskaan-Kya???

Megha had tears in her eyes!!

She hugged muskaan!!
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Rahul went to her..

Rahul-Muskaan kya hua??

Muskaan wiped her tears.....

Megha-Bahut lucky hain tu muskaan....tujhe itna pyaar karney wala mila hain..

Muskaan broke down in rahul's arms.

Megha-Muskaan...chup ho jaa...

Rahul-Lekin hua kya???

Half an hour later they were all in a cafe...muskaan better now and they told rahul everything.

Rahul-Megha...dont worry your not alone...we are all with you...

Megha just nodded..

Muskaan-Acha sun....tu rehti kahan hain??

Megha-Iss bandar ka koi permanent adress nahi hain...par permanent number zarror hain..

Muskaan-Rahul woh mehtas khali kar kar chale gayye na.....

Rahul nodded..

Muskaan-Woh ghar megha ko mil sakta hain kya?

Rahul-Main baat karke dekhonga!!

Muskaan-Done phir...tera toh permanent adress bhi ban gaya..

Megha-Nahi muskaan....iski koi zarorat nahi hain...tujhe kya lagta hain..i cant do it.....yeh log mujhe zyada dair tikney nahi dete...coz they think that raj mera beta hain aur meri bina shadi bacha hain.....aisi ladki ko kaun rakhega??

Muskaan-Jus shut up megha....tu jo kar rahi hain woh kisi ki baap ki takat nahi hain karne ki....sirf baat kar saktey hain!!

Megha was silent..

Muskaan-Yahan koi bhi problem huyi na toh bas rahul ke ghar main pahunch jana...its next door..

Megha-Kaisi baat kar rahi hain muskaan??

Muskaan-Megha....bhadak kyun rahi hain....main toh bas keh rahi thi....rahul bahut sweet hain aur tujhe help kar dega..😊

Megha-Woh tera boyfriend hain..😉

Muskaan laughed!!😆

Muskaan-toh?.....koi rule hain kya...muskaan ke boyfriend se baat mat karo..😆

Megha smiled..and sighed...her friend was just the same..

Muskaan-You noe hum woh typical couple nahi hain....we are just different....aur tum mere boyfriend se baat karo mujhe koi preoblme nahi hogi..i m not going to give you lectures on "jus stay away from my boyfriend ok "😆😆😆

Muskaan was laughing!

Rahul-Bas muskaan...bas....public main hamari kyun fadh rahi hoon??

Muskaan-okok baba...sorry!!

They all laughed!!..

Muskaan- acha Oyee toh hotel main kyun reh rahi hain jabki humara ghar yahin hain....

Megha-Humara.??....tu toh aisey baat kar rahi hain jaisey tune rahul se shaadi kar li hoon..😛

Rahul pulled muskaan by her waist...

Rahul-Nahi ki toh abhi kar legi..😉

Muskaan pushed him...

Muskaan-Rahul thodi thand rakh..😉😛

He smiled...😊

Muskaan-Tu rahul ke ghar kyun nahi rehti megha..

Megha-Tujhe insecure feel nahi hoga ki main tere boyfriend ke saath...correction tere handsome boyfriend ke saath ek hi ghar main ek raat betaongi..😆😆

Muskaan smiled..

Muskaan-Jaa maine ek raat ke liye apna boyfriend tujhe becha..!!

Rahul-Abbey baat toh aise kar rahi hoon jaise mai koi khicdi dal hoon....becha!!

He made a monkey face!!

Muskaan-Rahul tumhe lagta hain main aisa kuch karongi.....tumhe ek hot ladki ke saath akele ek raat betaney dongi...no ways....main bhi aa rahi hoon!!😆😆

Rahul whispered into muskaan's ears..

Rahul-Aggar wahi karna tha toh hum dunoo bhi kaafi the na...😉

But loud enough for megha to hear....she cleared her throat!!..

Megha-I am staying at the hotel...but muskaan your always welcome to go stay in rahuls house for one night!😆

Megha smiled..

Megha-Sab kuch wahin hain....so i am going back to the hotel..

After lot of discussions megha decided to leave with raj..

LR-Bye uncle bye aunty..

Muskaan knelt down..

Muskaan-Oyeeee aunty kisko bola??

LR poked his finger on her forehead!!

LR-Aapko..😊

Muskaan-Oyee main koi aunty wanty nahi hoon...samjha..

LR-Aunty aunty aunty!!..😆😆

Muskaan-Oyee....ek baar bola na aunty nahi bol..

LR-Toh phir kya boloon...

Muskaan looked at megha..

Muskaan-Main teri ma jaissi hoon na....masi !!...

LR-Masi.....main aapko masi bulaoon??

Muski nodded...

LR-Ok masi!!....aur phir woh uncle unko kya bolon??

Muskaan looked at rahul...

Muskaan whispered into little raj's ears..

LR-Wow!!...

He turned to megha

Raj-Maa aaj maine do nayee words sikhey maa...yeh dekho masi.....(poinitng to muskaan)....aur woh masa ji....(pointing to rahul)

Rahul was amazed..

Megha smiled..

She nodded and caressed little raj's face..

LR-Maa ab chalein.....bacha ko bahut neend aa rahi hain..

Megha-Ok bacha chalo!!..

Megha called Little Raj bacha... and so sometimes little raj would say maa bacha ko neend aa rahi hain..
Megha-Bye muskaan bye rahul....thanx for everything..

They both just smiled..

Megha hugged muskaan...when she moved to rahul....she looked at Muskaan

Muskaan burst out laughing!!...

Megha looked at her....oh god!!...her friend was unbelievable!!..

Megha sighed

Megha-Bye guys!!..

After walking a bit she turned around..

Megha-Muskaan....rahul....both of you keep smiling....you guys look really good together!!.....your really lucky!!...

They smiled

And she left!..

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Muskaan-Its really sad Rahul....acche loggon ke saath itna bura kyun hota hain....you know shes feeling so guilty for Raj....aur uske zindagi main she needs someone to understand her...kash jaisey tum mujhe miley gayye mujhe samajhney ke liye aur more importantly samjhaney ke liye waisey hi megha ko tum jaisa koi samjhney wala mil jayye....

Rahul-Kya karein muskaan ....its all writen...

Muskaan nodded!!

Muskaan-She was a really nice person but...i mean she is..uske andar bahut dukh hain..but she doesnt show it........humey dekh kar she was feeling bad rahul...i could see it in her eyes.........she wanted somebody like you to understand her...

Rahul-Lekin kya karein muskaan...mera jaisey log toh sirf tum jaisey idiots par fida hian..😆

Muskaan smiled..

Rahul-I love you muskaan!!

Muskaan smiled..

She just loved his random i love you's...

Muskaan-Its late..

Rahul-I know......meri class le lega raj..

Muskaan-Bada wala..😉

They both laughed!!..
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Naina-But why raj??

Raj-Naina we have to extra careful this time...so hum casually ek trip par jaa rahe hain alright....phir yeh log relax ho jayengey....and then we will start working!!..

Naina-Is that safe raj??

Raj-Thats the only option!!..

Naina nodded!!

Naina-I'll make arrangements..

Raj-Yaad rakhna news barabar fail jaayee ki Captain Rajveer ek bahut badi party throw kar rahe hain....apney farm house par!!


Naina nodded!!

Raj--You fine na??
Naina nodded..
He hugged her..
Raj-Bas naina.....kuch waqt ki baat hain...socho hum navin ko innocent prove kar dengey and then zindagi bhar tum aur main...saath saath!.......and they lived happily ever after..
Naina-Raj...woh sab sirf fairy tales main hota hain......humari zindagi main jitney bhi problems aaye aggar hum saath hain na toh har problem par kar dengey....
Raj nodded..
Raj-Bas kuch waqt naina....ek baar meri navin ki taraf apni duty khatam ho jayye....phir meri saari zindagi mere dost ki behen ke naam!!.
Naina smiled..
Naina-Raj.....I love you!!
He smiled..
Raj-I love you too Naina......
Just then there was a knock...
Raj-Come in..
Aalekh entered..
Raj-Yes cadet sharma...
Aalekh-Sir iss time par aapko disturb kiya uss ke liye sorry!!....lekin apun aapse kuch kehney ko mangta hain..
Raj-Bolo Cadet..
Aalekh-Sir apun uss mission par aa raha hain sir..bakki ke log iss waqt canteen main baithey hain...aur baat kar rahe hain....woh sab bole toh confuse hain.....lekin sir apun ke dimag main sab kanch ki tarah saaf hain.....sir aur koi hoo na hoon apun aapke saath hain sir.....aap bas orders doon!!..
Raj smiled...He was proud of Aalekh and he hoped that all the others followed!!...
Raj-Cadet Aalekh...thankyou so much....iss waqt apke liye orders yahi hain ki ap jao aur so jao.....aaj raat ache se soo jao.....kal ek bahut bada din hain.....jao!!
Aalekh moved out.......
Naina-Baaki sab bhi haan kar dengey na?
Raj-Lets see....unki maarzi...jahan tak main apney cadets ko jantey hoon woh zarror haan kahengey..
Not long before rajs words came true.....a few hours later 4 of them entered..
Huda Yudi Sameer and Tanvi..
Yudi-Sir....humey apna faisla le liye hain....hum iss mission ka part ban na chathey hain sir....iss main jitna bhi risk hoon....we are in this..
Raj smiled..
Raj-Kya main jaan sakta hoon kyun??
Yudi-Kyunki sir aap iss mission ka part hain.....hum sab aggar is academy main kisiko apna sabse bada mentor mantey hain toh aap hoon sir...aapke liyee hum kuch bhi kar saktey hain..😛
Raj was proud of them all.
Raj-Thankyou cadets...go and take a good nights sleep....tommorow is a big day..
THey all noddded..
Raj-Cadet sameera ko chodh kar aap sab jaa saktein hain..
After they left...
Raj-Sameera...mujhe batao kaun kaun iss mission ke liye confused tha??ya sabney react kaisey kiya? main jana na chatha hoon ki kaun kya mehssos karta hain??
Sameera-Actually aalekh was bent on this mission....usko toh janey hi tha..uskey dimag main koi doubt nahi tha...
Yudi ko bhi apney aap ko sabit karney ka ek chance chaiye ha par usse appney aap par vishwas nahi tha.....woh aana chatha tha par usse apney capabalities par shak tha..
Tanvi bahut hi chup thi...usse jab pucha gaya tha toh usney bhi haan kaha..
Bas hum sab ek unanimous decision lena chathey the..
Raj-Aur cadet huda?
Sameera-Sir sabko convince aur woh final push toh huda ne hi diya...
Raj-Really?
Sameera-Haan .....lekin huda ki aankhein bhi muskaan ne kholi..muskaan ne sab par bahut chilaya jab hum baith kar soch rahe the..
Raj-Kya??
Sameera-Haan woh keh rahi thi ki humein aapney desh ke liye ek chance mil raha hain......we should grab it....she was more shocked ki hum Captain Rajveer ka saath deney main itna soch rahe hain..
Raj smiled..
Raj-Muskaan bhi pagal hain...anyways thanx cadet....mujhe bahut zarrori tha yeh jan na ki kaun kya sochta hain..
Sameera-Your welcome sir..
Raj-Ek aakhri baat.....cadet Tanvi ko kya hua hain aaj kal?...bahut chup si rahti hain..
Sameera-Pata nahi sir.......uska koi personal problem hoga..
Raj-ALright...thanx again cadet..
Sameera-ITs ok Sir..
Raj-Jab tum room main jao toh please muskaan se keh dena ki main usse milna chatha hoon.....toh woh yahan aa jaye..
Sameera-Jee sir..
And sameera left..
Naina returned
Naina and Raj sat and had cofffee..
Raj-Kal subah farm house ke liye sab niklengey....aur phir i guess raat tak mission ke liye..
Naina nodded..
Raj-Everything is set na..
Naina-Hmm...
Raj-Aur please Rahul ko bol dena..i need to meet him as well..
Naina-Ok
**********
PRECAP!!
OFF TO THE FARM HOUSE!!
Little raj and big raj dint get along quite well....coz little raj would keep figthing with rajveer about their name...as soon as they reached little raj came running out and hugged megha..

Raj-Maa woh uncle keh raha tha ki uska naam bhi raj hain...aisa kaisa hoo sakta hain maa....woh uncle jhotth bol raha hain aur jhooth bolna paap hain na maa..

*******
Slowly all of them came down..
Raj sat next to megha..

Little Raj (LR)-Ohh woh mera naam copy karney wala copy cat aa gaya...😆😆

Raj heard that....and then looked to his left..

Raj-Mr.Little Raj....aggar tu mujhe copy cat bula raha tha toh thanku..

LR-Aapko nahi toh kya phir masi ko bulaonga..😆😆

Muskaan smiled!!..

Raj-Mere baap...main hi tera cat hoon aur main hi tera dog!!....thekhe..!!

LR-Dog nahi.....cat....dog acche hotey hain..😆😆

Raj-Toh main acha nahi hoon kya?

LR began laughing!!...😆😆

LR-Kaisa stupid question puch rahey yeh mumma!!.😆😆

_________________________
Just a little comedy and fun in their lives for few hours.....after that they'l be off for a big mission......a mission of their lives...from where they might or might not return...but what i can assure you is that I'l return on Saturday to give you another UD!!..lol!!.....tak care...hope you like the part!!..Seeyou guys on saturday!!...

Tina!


Edited by -Tina- - 16 years ago

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