Pyar ki ek kahaani part 6 pg 149 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY,

PLEASE !!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 2

Armaan:yeh larkiyaan bhi na kitni jaldi naraaz ho jati hain..ab main ais Basket ko kaise manao..
Rahul:hii armaan...abhi abhi shaadi huvi hai aur jagraa.....so bad armaan
Armaan:Rahul tum to chup raho mujhe achi tarah yaad hai ke tum aur muskaaan kitna jagraa karte
Rahul:hain yeh larkiyaan hoti hi aisi hain...har baat pe naraz hona...
Armaan:abb jaldi se koi idea bata jis se main ause manaa sakoo...
Rahul:Armaan very bad tumhe apni biwi ko manane ke liye mujh se idea chaiyee...
Armaan:rahul ure useless..
Armaan thinks to himself ab main kya karo... all all of them are in the cafetaria

Anjali:hii guys aaj doctor keerti ne kuch zayada hi kaam de diya im so tired?

Atul: Main tumhare liye thanda juice le kar aata hoon..tum bilkul thandi ho jao gi..........

All of the others laugh?????..

Armaan:takes Ridhimmas hand in his hand?.

RIdhhimma softly Armaan mera haath choro?.

Armaan:pehle kaho tumne mujhe maaf kardiya

Ridhimma:armaan mera aath choro?and she pushes his hand and walks away??.

Anajali:aise kya hogaya Armaan?

Armaan:kuch nahinn main dekta hoon?

Rahul calls him?

Rahul:armaan tum aitna kaam bhi nahinn kar sakte?.Jao aus se pyaar se maafi mango

Ridhimma:goes to the stairs area and is sitting all sad?

Armaan comes there?.

Armaan:Ridhimma im sorry?. RIdhimma:Armaan har baar tum mujhe tang karte ho aur phir sorry kehte ho?.

Armaan:yeh akhri sorry hain ais ke baaad main tumhe kabhi nahinn tang karo ga?..i promise
Ridz: Armaan yeh tumne pehle bhi kaha tha ke promise Ridhimma main tumhe shaadi ke baad kabhi nahinn satao ga?.
Armaan: ridhimma im sorry promise.....
Then ridhimma gets up and goes to the corner.
Armaan gives her a rose and sings
Musu Musu Hasi Deu
Zara Muskura De, Mukura De
Zara Muskura De, Aye Khushi...
Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu
Zara Muskura De, Mukura De
Zara Muskura De, Aye Khushi
Maana Humse Ho Gayee
Ek Choti Si Khataa
Hans Do Na Tum Zaraa
Do Na Humko Tum Sazaa
Maana Humse Ho Gayee
Ek Choti Si Khataa
Hans Do Na Tum Zaraa
Do Na Humko Tum Sazaa
Tum Jo Hans Pade To
Abh Hum Bhi Muskurayein
Aao Mil Ke Saath Gaayein
Dil Se Dil Bhi Milayein......
They dance to the song......and Armaan kisses her cheek and she kisses him back on the forehead..............

They both are in the car..........
Ridhimma has her head rested on Armaan shoulder and hes holding her hand................
Armaan:Wah Basket aaj tumhe zayada hi pyar aa raha hai......Aur humesha ............
Ridhimma:armaan she hits him on the chest...
Armaan:ow.....
Ridhimma im sorry and she kisses it
Armaan:I Love you doctor Ridhimma.....
Ridhimma:i love you to

Guys im sorry this part is a bit short but i had some important work to do so i couldnt give a detailed update
Edited by hajialiya - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
ill continue my next part as soon as possible.if u wish me to do so
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey its good yaar.. continue soon...also post the link in FF section as well.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3

At Armaan-Ridhimmas house
Armaan:Ridhimma utho na.....nastha kar lo dekho maine khud apne haathon se tumhare liye chai banaye hai...
Ridhimma is all shocked
Ridhimma:Armaan mujhe sone do...pata hai tum ne mera acha khasaa sapna kharaab kar diya.......aus main tum merey liye apne haathon se banaya huva chai layi thay..
Armaan:Wow doctor Ridhimma tumhare sapno main bhi main aata hoon...How romantic.....Par basket Tum koi sapna nahinn dekh rahi sach much main tumhare liye chai laya hoon..
Ridhimma:you must be joking....tum or chai never....
Armaan makes a sad face
Ridhimma:its ok armaan phir bhi main tum se aitna pyar karti hoon....
Ridhimma gets up and is shocked to see a cup of tea in armaans hand
RIdhimma:ais ka matlab tum actually mere liya chai laye thay...
Armaan:yes basket magar tum apne Pati ko kisi cheez kay kabil nahinn samjhti....
Ridhimma:oh dr armaan...Thank you so much....
Armaan:chai piye
Ridhmma:ha
She takes a sip....Umm doctor armaan..yeh chai hai,,,yuck.....
Armaan:achi nahinn hai....im sorry...main kuch sahi se nahinn kar sakta
Ridhimma:armaan main toh mazak kar rahi thi....delicious....
Armaan:ohh doctor ridhimma...... Armaan
getting all romantic..
Armaan:goes and gives her a kiss on the cheek.and hes abt to kiss the nape of neck....
Ridhimma:armaan mujhe chodho mujhe tayaar hona hai....
Armaan:toh jao maine tumhe kaha roka hai....
Not letting her go...
RIdhimma pehle muje aik kiss do aur i love you kaho phir tum jaa sakti ho..
Ridhimma:armaan bache ki tarah mat bano...phir se hum dono late gay..
Armaan:good aur ais baar galti tumhari hogi....
Ridhimma plz armaan....she gives up
Armaan:I love you and she kisses his ear..he kisses her ear and whispers back i love you to...
These two are in the car....
Armaan:Ridhimma aaj raat ki dinner ki tayari hogayi...
Ridz:ha baba

They reach the hospital....
Atul and anjali are arguing
Atul:anjali main aitne payr se yeh pohdha tumhare liye laya tha....ais ak naam bhi maine atul rakha hain ke tumhe hamesha meri yaad rahe....
Anjali:hahahah atul...yeh koi mazaak haii...tum jaante ho mujhe yeh saab nahinn pasand hai....
Atul:anjali mera podha naraaz ho jayi ga...
anji:atul your to much....har baaat pe tumhe podhe ke sojthi hainn
Armaan:Kya ho raha hai guys...
Rahul:kuch nahinn yeh dono phir se....
Armaan take atul to the side...
Armaan whispers atul so disgusting tum larki ko gift mein plants.....yuck
Atul:armaan mere plants ko bura mat kaho...
Muskan:chale dr keerti hamara wait kar rahi ho gi
Anji:Armaan ridhimma kaha hai..aaj nahin aaye...
Armaan:ha aayi to thi...muje lagta hain koi emergency agyi hogi wahi gayi hain
chale
Dr keerti hello guys
ridz walks in...
Keerti:well done dr ridhimma
Dr armaan aap aur Dr muskan path lab
Rahul to muskan kya yeh hamari pyar ki dushman hai
Armaan laughs...and tell ridz Mujhe yakeen hain yeh hum dono ko saath duty de gi...
Ridz:you wish
and she assigns ridz with atul
Ridz:kya huva armaan....soo sad....
Armaan yeh basket bhi naa aaj dekho main ais ko apne pass kaise kheench kay lata hoon...
heheheeh evil laugh....

I hope you enjoy it...thnks for all the wondreful comments



Edited by hajialiya - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Dear...

Just read all yur parts...yu write well...plzz do comt soon..!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 4
Its night time 12 and Armaan-Ridz are having a get together at their house for anjalis birthday.......
Ridhimma is just checking to see if all the arrngements are done...
Ridz:armaan tum room saaf nahinn rakh sakte..aik jhoota wahah aur doosra jhoota waha....tumhare kapre sab jaga pehle huve hai...just bcuz armaan main ghar saaf karne main aur khana pakane main busy thi tum ne kamra ganda kar diya......
Armaan:Madam Ridhimma..Mere kamre main kaun jaane wala hai..
Ridhimma:Armaan woh kamra mera bhi hai aur ause saaf rehna chaiyee
Armaan:toh jao saaf kar lo
Ridhimma:armaan har baat pe mazak(getting irritated)
and she is walking away...
Armaan:main toh mazak kar raha tha...madam aap ke liye kuch bhi...
Ridhimma:really Armaan...
Armaan:really..
And they come close....Ridhimma thinks armaans going to kiss her...
Armaan:doctor Ridhimaa...plz mujhe chore mujhe tayar hona hai....
Ridhimma:yeh armaan bhi na....
She gets ready...
Armaan justs looks at her....
Wow shes gorgeous......
Shes wearing a Pink Sari..
Ridhimma:Armaan...Main kaisi lag rahi hoon...
Armaan:at first he smiles.yeh kya pehna huva hai tum yeh bilkul tumhe suit nahinn karta....
Ridhimma is hurt...
Ridhimma:Armaan tumheeh pasand nahinn aaya..yeh sari toh tumne hi mujhe di thi.....
Armaan:ridhimma maine tumhe shaadi se pehle yeh sari di thi....mera taste badal gya...
Ridhimma makes a face
Armaan gives a evil look
Ridhimma tries on another pair of clothes but armaan says the same thing...
Then the bell rings...
Rahul and muskan walk in
Hii guys
Rahul:abhi tak anjali nahinn aaye..
Ridz:Nahinn guys atul ause pick up karne wala tha....
Muskan:i hope woh bhool na gya ho...
Armaan:Muskan woh kuch bhi karna bhool sakta hain..magar anjali ko authana kabhi nahinn...
They laugh...

Atul is sitting in the car driving to anjalis....
Maine saari dukane dhoond li kuch nahinn mila main anjali ko kya doon ga...
He arrives at anjalis.
Anjali starts shouting at him
Anjali:atul tum kaha thay...time dekh rahe ho...hume armaan kay ghar pe hona chaiyee...
Atul:sorry anjali actually 15 minute main tumhara birthday hain aur main tumhare liye tofah dhoond raha tha....
Anjali:how sweet atul and she pulls his cheeks
Atul is so happy that he smiles and stares at anjali..
Anjali:atul chale....aur mera gift
Atul:12 baje i promise....
Anjali:okay atul..chale...
They reach armaans house
ANjali:rings the bell....
Ridhimma:Armaan lagta hai anjali di agayi....
Armaan:obviously agayi...mujhe batane ki kya zaroorat thi...
Ridz:Armaan
They open the door....
Ridz:Happy birthday Di tum theek 12 baje aayi hoo
Atul:12 baj gaye....Im sorry anjali maine tumhe pehle nahinn wish kya..Happy birthday making a cute face...
Anajli:Thanx Atul....
They all wish her......
Armaan:cake kate
Then they cut the cake
Anjali:my gifts guys
Atul:pehle mera
Armaan:tum apna present last main dena kyunki woh sabse best hog....RIght atul
Ridhimma:Anjali yeh mere aur armaan ki taraf se...
Armaan:actually anjali woh sirf ridhimma ki taraf se hai....main tumhe apna khud ka gift na doon not possible...
Armaan takes out flowers and says these are for u gorgeous..
RIdz:whispers to armaan..di ko phool dene ki kya zarrorat thi...
Armaan:whispers back..basket just because hamari shaadi hogayi...ais ka matlab nahinn mine and anjalis relationship has changed....
RIdhimma:armaan woh tumhari saali hai
Armaan:so laughing
Ridhimma thinks to herself..yeh armaan aaj aitna ajeeb kyun behave kar raha hai...
then rahul give there gifts and then its atuls turn....
Atul:anjali yeh dekho mera sab se special plant tumhare liye...
Anjali:Atul yeh kya hai..getting irritated...mere birthday pe bhi plant...atul what is this
Atul:sorry anjali actually saari shops band hogyai thi...ais liye magar kal i promise...

RahuL:guys kuch maza kare
Muskaan:chalo dum sherades...
Anjali:ya guys girl on one side and guys on the other...
Armaan:thats not fair...
Ridhimma smiles thinking armaan doesnt wanno be away from her
Anjali:Armaan i know tum ridhimma se door nahinn hona chate
Armaan:aisi koi baat nahinn hai...main toh rahul ke liye keh raha tha...i mean ause toh muskaan se alag mat karo
The two smile
Rahul:huh
Ridhimma makes angry faces
Armaan just giggles
Armaan:okay guys so boys and girls...
RIdz:girl he jeete gi...
Armaan:really making an evil look

Watch out for dumsherades in part 5
Guys sorry if it was a bit boring but the next part will ahev lots of funa with armaan and ridhimma romance...and loads of games..i hoped u liked it



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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi
nice parts yaar
armi and ridz relation is sweet
plzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooooon
can u pm me
luv soumya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey very nice......please update soon!!! :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great ff
do contd soon n plz pm me

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