Pyar ki ek kahaani part 6 pg 149 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
Sorry Guys I know my last update was really small...anyways guys before moving to their honeymoon i am going to give you the past about how they told everyone and their engagement ceremony and Their wedding and all their functions this is just going to be 3-4 parts after that ill continue with their honeymoon....

Part 6
Armaan and Ridhimma Have just had a huge fight.its because Armaan wants to tell Shashank everything but Ridhimma wants to wait a little more..

Its late at night around 2
Ridhimma cant sleep because its been more then two days she hasnt spoken to armaan.She decides since its her fault she should call him to apologise...
She dials his number
Armaan is fast asleep since he had been extremly upset for the past two days and hadnt slept..
Armaan is half asleep while answering the phone so he doesnt look at the number(otherwise he wouldnt have spoken to her)...
Armaan:Hello
Theres no reply
Ridhimma is so happy hes safe and shes been dying to speak to him
by now Armaan has figured out its her he really isnt in the mood to talk to her because he knows their going to fight...However hes worried why is she calling right now
Armaan:Ridhimma..Tum ne ais waqt kyun phone kya hai.mujh par aur chillana ke liye that i dont understand your feelings..
Ridhimma:Nahinn Armaan
Armaan is about to close the phone when Ridhimma says
Ridhimma:Aik minute Armaan meri aik baar baat toh sun lo
Armaan:Hurry up Mere pass time nahinn hai
Ridhimma:Armaan im sorry i know i've hurt you......Agar tum chate ho then lets tell papa
Armaan:Ridhimma just because main chatha hoon..that means u dont wanno tell nyone
Ridhimma:armaan maine aisa nahinn bola..
Armaan:ridhimma then what....raat bohot hogayi well talk tomorrow

AT Sanjeevani
Armaan walks in and he finds a i am sorry card inside...and when he opens it he finds i love you written and im sorry.(its by Ridhimma)
Armaan smiles for a second but throws it back inside..........
All other interns come in.........
ALL say hii
Ridhimma:walks in looking tense
Saare Interns apne duties par report kare.
ANji:Ridhimma chale
Ridz:haan di main apni file le kar aati hoon
Anji:ok ridzi come fast....
all other interns have gone.
armaan is just about to walk out when ridhimma stops him.....
Ridhimma:aik minute armaan........Plz aik baar meri baat sun lo
Armaan:Kaho
Ridhimma:armaan im sorry....mujhe pata hain ke pehle maine kaha tha ke we should wait a few das..par abhi mujhe lagta hai ke hume papa ko bata dena chaiyee..
Armaan:Ridhimma main jant ho ke tum yeh kyun keh rahi ho
Ridhimma:armaan
Armaan:Ridhimma main tum se aur fight nahinn karna chatha agar tum papa ko abhi nahinn batana chathi its ok well wait....ANd im sorry to RIdhimma mujhe aise nahinn react karna chayee tha...(I LOVE YOU)
They hug.....

Ridhimma:Armaan Tum papa ko bataane ke liye tayaar ho........
Armaan looks frightened...

Guys part 6 hasnt finished as yet ill continue it later bcuz i have to go out.....Part 6 continuation will be armaan telling shashank.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
hey hmmm coool yaar we wntd 2 know how thy tlold evry1 wowwwwwwww yaar fght finishd gud wowwwww ridz said srry by gvng him cards wowwwwwwwwww how cute yaar plzzzzzz cont sooooooooooon yaar cnt wait ar nd ridz gonna tll shanky grt .....

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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
Part 6 contd
Ridhimma:are u sure ure ready Armaan.
Armaan:mujh par barosa hain.
RIdhimma:haan baba.....papa maan toh jayenge........
Armaan:ridhimma hamari shaadi hogi
Ridz:Acha Armaan Paanch baje mere ghar pe ok.papa hates late comers.
Armaan:As you say....

Armaan is very tense its 10 minutes to 5 and hes driving his car to come to ridhimmas
He calls up Ridhimma
Ridhimma:Kya huva Armaan darr lag raha
Armaan:haan agar tumhare papa ne mana kar diya
Ridhimma:tum baat toh kar lo.....abb jaoaur jaldi aao..i love you best of luck
Armaan:ove u to basket
He walks into the Gupta house
Dr shanshank opens the door
Shanshak:aaye doctor Armaan aap mujh se koi zaroori baat karna chate thay.
Armaan:Ji
Shanshank:bole
Armaan:i dont know main kaha se shuru karo......but main aap se shaadi karna chatha hoon
Shanshank:what
Armaan:i mean up ki beti ridhimma se...
Shanshank:app kehna kya chate hain
Armaan:Actually Dr Shanshank Main aap ke beti se bohot pyar karta hoon..and she also loves me.......
Shashank:yeh kab se chal raha hain...
Armaan:kuch time se.but i reall love her...
Shanshank:Padma Padma
Padma:chila kyun rahe hain
Shanshank:kyuinky doctor armaan keh rahe hai ke aus ke aur ridhimma ke beech main..aur woh dono aik doosre se pyar karte hain.....
Padma:Main janti thi...
Shanshank:Agar tum janti thi toh tum ne mujhe kyun nahinn bataya..he screams out ridhimmas name
Padma:Actually kisi nee mujhe bataya nahinn.magar ain dono ki aankhon main likha tha....Armaan ka blast ke doran ridhimma ke saath hi rehna aisa koi nahinn karta...yeh sabit karta hain they love each other
Shanshank:yeh sach hain...
Ridhimma:Ji papa....
Shanshank:agar aap yehi chate hain toh phir theek hain aap ki shaadi se mujhe aur padma ko koi aitraaz nahinn hai
Armaan:thanks Dr shanshank.
Armaan goes hapilly...

Shanshank:Ridhimma are you sure ke tum Dr armaan se SHaadi karna chathi ho
Ridz:yes papa
Shanshank:toh theek hain main engagement ki date fix kar deta hoon

End
Guys the next part will be Ridhimmas birthday and Their engagemtnt i hope u like it



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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
superbbbbbb fantastix parts again sweety
keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
great ff! cant wait for the next part! can u please PM me when the you update next! thanks!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
Part 7
Anjali: Tum ne Ridhimma ko dekha hai
Atul:Nahinn...Armaan bhi nahinn dekh raha hai...
Anjali:again there probably together
Rahul:phir se tum shak kar raho...
Muskan:Rahul tum chup raho...
Ridhimma and Armaan walk in together
Anjali:phir se tum dono saath.....
Armaan:anjali hum tumhe kuch bataana chate hain...
Anjali:bolo.....
Ridhimma:yes di
Muskan:kya
Armaan:that we love each other
Keerti wlaks in from behind
Keerti:what.
Armaan:haan hum sach keh rahe..
Anjali: Armaan are u sure these arent one of your other plans
Shanshank:Plans Dr armaan.....
Armaan:no sir
shanshak:No anjali no plans to fool you .... Main ain dono ki engagement bhi karwane wala hoon
All are like what
Shanshank:toh kal raat at 8 ain dono ki saagai....
Armaan:Has a huge smile on her face....
Anjali:tum ne apni behen se aitni bari baat chupaye
Atul:aur tu armaan nikama nikla apne champ se
Shubhanker and keerti:congrats guys....
Ridhimma:sorry di and they hug

All go away
Armaan:wait Ridhimma
Ridz:kya hain armaan.....mujhe jaana hai tayaari bhi karni hain.shopping etc....
Armaan:woh baad main aaj main tumhe 6 baje lene aao ga and no excuses
Ridz:yes jaan
Armaan:bye....
Ridhimma:kiss nahinn chayee
Armaan:dont mind one.but madam aap dene wali toh nahinn hain...
Ridhimma:Armaan shaadi ke baad i promise..jeetni bhi tum chaho.
Armaan:promise
Ridhimma:paka and she runs away blushing

Ill complete there engagement and birthday part later i have to study now...Part 7 to eb contd later


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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
hey wowwwwwwwww yaar d prts wre mindblowng specially whn he wnt 2 shanky nd ask him tht min apse shaasdi karna chahtu hu omgggggggggggggggg yaar poor nervusness mein kya kehgaya it ws superb nw vry1 knows nd nw their engangmnt wowwwwwwwwwww yaar jaldi se flashbck khtam kro wthr omantic or fir honeymoooon wowwwwwwwwwwww cnt wait
cont sooooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 7 contd

Its time and armaan has come to pick up Ridhimma....
Ridhimma tried calling armaan to tell him she wont be able to come but he dint answer the phone
Armaan rings the bell of Ridhimma house.....
Padma:Armaan tum yahaan
Armaan:Ji aunty main aap ki permision lene aaya hoon...kya main please Ridhimma ko thore time ke liye bahar le jaa sakta hoon.
Shanshank:hello Dr Armaan.....Aap yahaan
Padma:actually beta Ridhimma aur main kal ki shopping karne ke liye jaane wale thay.....
Shanshank:Kyun na Armaan ause le jaye waise bhi hume gahr main bohot kaam hai
Armaan:hain uncle sahi keh rahe hain
Nani and Ridhimma comes
Armaan:namaste nahin.
Nani:Badmash tum ne nani se bhi chupaya
Armaan:sorry and he holds his ear.....
Shanshank:Ridhimma tum Armaan ke saath shopping chali jao......
Ridhimma she smiles

Armaan and her sit in Armaans car
Armaan:Ridhimma tumhara kal birthday hain aur ausi din hamari engagement......Youre a lucky girl.....
Ridhimma:yes Armaan im lucky to have u
Armaan:oye hoye bari romantic mood main ho........
Ridhimma:acha Armaan tum ne mujhe propose bhi nahinn kya
Armaan:toh abb tak kya chal raha tha
Ridz:Armaan shadhi ka proposal
Armaan:oh.....But Dr Ridhimma agar maine aap ko propose bhi kya hota toh jawaab toh aap ke papa deta
RIdz:armaan
Armaan:Acha Madam kal aap ka birthday hain aap gift main kya chathi hain
RIdz:jo tum dena chao
Armaan:mujhe toh kiss dena hain
Ridz:armaan
They arrive at the shopping mall.....
They do the shopping Ridhimma buys two saris and one lengha

Then they go for Coffee........
Suddenly a girl comes up
Armaan looks at her and says shit...
Girl:Armaan tum yahaan.....
Armaan:yeah do i know u
Girl:ofcourse Armaan collage main u know main tumhari aik girlfirend thee
Ridhimma justs looks at him angirly..
Armaan:Really i dont remember
Girl:OF course Armaan tumhari kitni girlfriends hoti thi har aik toh nahinn yaad rakh sakte right......SInce your girlfriends change faster then you change your toothbrush....
Ridhimma looks reaaly angry now and has a tear in her eye...
Girl:oh doosri larki........She turns to Ridhimma(Hes a player u dont know him hell dump u)
Armaan:enough
Ridhimma just walks away crying
Armaan runs after her

Armaan:ridhimma listen to me
Ridhimma:mujhe tum se koi baat nahinn karni....i dont believe it....
Armaan:Ridhimma mere dil main sirf tum ho......I love u RIdhimma
Ridhimma:Really Armaan
Armaan:Ridhimma i can give my life for u....Im incomplete without u
Ridhimma:Armaan then what was all that.
Armaan:ridhimma tab aur aaj main bohot faraq hain
Ridhimma:Armaan...
Armaan:Ridhimma i love u only u
Ridhimma:im sorry Armaan.maine tumhe galat samjha..
Armaan:its ok
They hug
Armaan kisses Ridhimma on the forehead........

It ennds.....sorry guys i know i said this part would have the birthdaya and engagement...i promise the next aprt will be that..........There just two-3 parts left until i return to the honeymoon


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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
wowwwwwwwwww yaar i thought fir se koi fght bt thnk god warna armaan ko to kuch armaan hi ho jata hehehehe......wow yaar nxt wll be her bdy enganmnt wowwwwwwww nd ridz said 2 him abt shaadi proposal wowwwwwwwww cnt wait plzzz nxt prt long update krna
cont sooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
thanks ill probbaly update the next part at night..

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