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kayla

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Posted: 19 years ago

#531

gr8 part... looking forward to the next part...

Kayla~

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**lover**

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Posted: 19 years ago

#532

wonderful part ....love it 👏 👏

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Shilpa Shetty

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Posted: 19 years ago

#533

Do continue yaar u take so much time tumhe kya hamein tadpana aacha lagta hai kya!!!!!!!!!

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nabeeha

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Posted: 19 years ago

#534

just read ur fanfic! and man, it rox!!! continue soon!!!!

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Khushi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#535

wow don't make us wait for long and write a long part soon 😛

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Nausheen Khan

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Posted: 19 years ago

#536

guys i jus finished typing up my fan-fic..n i'm sure u will love it.

lil peak of wht gna happen: i'm sendin back da family(prithvi, dadi n naina!)

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pasaris

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Posted: 19 years ago

#537

the whole fan fic or the part????????

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apocolyse

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Posted: 19 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: pasaris
the whole fan fic or the part????????

i fink she means da part..lolz..btw thanx nausheen 4 such a wicked fan-fic! 😃 cnt wait 2 read da next part 2morrow! 😃 😃

Edited by tania_uk - 19 years ago

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 19 years ago

#539

continue soon............we all have been waiting for a long time just to read yur fan-fic............

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Nausheen Khan

@Veronica4eva

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Posted: 19 years ago

#540

Episode 21:

Continue:

Angad suddenly leaped up when he heard Kripa voice. Kripa was awake. He quickly called the doctor. the doctor came in and checked on Kripa.
Doctor: "How are you feeling now?"
Kripa (lightly): "I'm fine doctor."
Doctor: "You have to rest for a few days o.k.?"
Kripa: "O.k. doctor."
Angad (cheerfully): "Doctor, when can I take her home?"
Doctor: "Well, it depends. If Kripa gets better by the evening, you can take her."
Angad (happy): "O.k. doctor."
After talking to Angad, the doctor left the room.

Once the doctor left the room:
Angad went to Kripa and sat next to her on the bed. Kripa looked up at him and then rested her head on his lap.
Kripa: "I'm sorry Angad."
Angad was shocked why Kripa was saying sorry to him, because it was his fault.
Kripa (continuing): "I'm so silly; I didn't even see the car. I put you in tension for no reason."
Angad: "Hey Kripa, its o.k. I'm the one who is meant to say sorry, because of me all this happened. I'm sorry Kripa."
Kripa: "No Angad, I'm sorry."
Angad: "No Kripa, I'm sorry."
Kripa (screaming): "I'M SORRY!"
Angad :( also screaming): "I'M SORRY!"
Angad and Kripa screamed so loud that the doctor came back in to see what was wrong.
When the doctor came in, he saw that Angad and Kripa were fighting over who was sorry.
Doctor: "Why are you two fighting like kids?"
Angad and Kripa calmed down and stopped shouting.
Angad and Kripa (together): "We're sorry doctor."
Doctor: "It's o.k."
The doctor was about to leave when he turned around to Kripa and told her that he reports were absolutely fine and she could go back home. After saying this, the doctor left the room.
Angad told Kripa to quickly get ready because he was going to take her home and he also told her that he called Prithvi and the rest back. So Kripa quickly got ready. When Kripa was ready, she called Angad in the room (hospital room).
Kripa: "Angad, please help me, I can't walk."
Angad: "Oh yeah, I forgot. Sorry."
As Angad said this, he picked Kripa up in his arms and took her outside the hospital and put her into his car.

On the way back to Khanna house:
Kripa kept fidgeting with the band on her leg. Angad got angry and stopped the car.
Angad: "O.k. Kripa, get out!"
Kripa (confused): "what? Why?"
Angad: "Because you're annoying me by keep on fidgeting."
Kripa: "O.k. o.k. sorry, I won't do it again."
Angad: "Hmmm, that's better."
As Angad started the car, Kripa stuck her tongue out to Angad.

At Khanna house:
When Angad and Kripa arrived at Khanna house, Angad had to help Kripa again by picking her up in his arms. When they got to the doorstep of Khanna house, Angad couldn't open the door as he was holding Kripa. So he told Kripa to get the house keys from this back pocket and open the door. So Kripa got the keys Angad opened the door. When they came into Khanna house, they were shocked to find Prithvi, Dadi and Naina sitting on the sofa.

Hope you like it
Veronica

P.S
Angad and Kripa start caring for each other in the next part and maybe, just maybe Angad tells Kripa that he...

Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago

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