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Posted: 19 years ago

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👏 👏 really ur story is great 😛

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when ru going to continue plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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please write more sone i cant wait

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plzzzzz continueeeeee soooooon!!!!

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#515

yesssss.........tmr is friday, so u are going to continue rite?????

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#516

it was great 👏
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#517

please continue soon realy good fan fic keep up the good work and please continue soon

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Posted: 19 years ago

#518

just read the latest partz...man gotta say they were awesome😊...i absolutely loved them all... this fan-fic is wonderful...and i'm gonna miss it...yay tomorrow is friday😃...ur gonna cont. u better cont. or else....😡j/k...but plz cont. soon...i can't wait...i shd go study....but i think i'll be thinkin wht happened to kripa rather than concentratin on my test😆...lol....u got sum gr8 skillz girl👍🏼...a big hug4 ya for writin such a sw8 story🤗...me gotta ga...so tc...and cont. very very soon....👏

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plzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!
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Nausheen Khan

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Episode 20:

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Angad ran to Kripa. He put Kripa head on his lap. Kripa slowly opened her eyes. She put her bloody hands on Angad's face. Suddenly, Kripa slowly closed her eyes. Angad got scared and quickly picked Kripa up in his arms and takes her to the hospital.

At the hospital:
As soon as Angad got to the hospital, he quickly got a doctor for Kripa. While Kripa was in the room, Angad went outside and phoned Prithvi. Angad told him about Kripa's accident. Prithvi told him that they would be back as soon as possible. After talking to Prithvi, Angad went back inside the hospital to check on Kripa.

Inside the hospital:
The doctor was still checking Kripa. Angad looked at Kripa from her window of her hospital room. A tear dropped from his eye. But he quickly wiped it. Suddenly the doctor came out of Kripa's room and talked towards Angad.
Angad: "Doctor, is Kripa alright?"
Doctor: "Yes she is perfectly fine now, but she has to be really careful when she is walking from now on because her shin has been fractured."
Angad: "O.k. I will take care of Kripa. Can I meet her now?"
Doctor: "Yes of course."
The doctor left from there. Angad went inside Kripa's hospital room. Kripa was asleep on the bed. Angad came and sat next to her on a chair near the bed. He looked at Kripa and slowly put his hand on her cheek.
Angad: "Kripa, I'm really sorry. Today, because of me, you're in this state. I'm just so sorry. Please forgive me."
There was silence.
Angad (continuing): "Do you know, in this past week I've realised what a sweet person you are. But I have to say- you do get moody sometimes for no reason (Angad gave a little smile). I like the way you fight with me. Whenever you smile, it brings happiness onto my face as well..."
Suddenly Angad put his hand on Kripa's hand. He kissed it and put his head on it waiting for Kripa to wake up. All of a sudden, Kripa slowly slowly opened her eyes.
Kripa (in a soft tone): "Angad..."

Hope you like it
Veronica

P.S
That's it guys, I've thought of not finishing it because you guys have been such good readers. Thanks for that. btw I'm sorry this part was short. I've only done this because there will be BIG twists coming up. This part was too soft for those twists. So just keep reading!!!

Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago

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