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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thats really good! 😃
Please continue! I cant wait to read more!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow....amazing part.....please continue soon...if u can then pm me when u update.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice yaar amazing i will be waiting for the next so do cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
thank-you for the sweet comments😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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no comments😭😭😭

Edited by kelly789 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

8 years later ....today

Gunjan=21 yrs old

Nupur=22 yrs old

we see one girl walking on the train station

girl=g1

G1: didi didi aap kahan ho

(some girl taps her from behind)

G=g2

g2= mein yahan hoon

g1 turns and itsgunjan and the other girl is nupur

gunjan=G nupur= N

G: di where did you go i was so worried

N: my pari i just went to get snacks for the train ride

G:di where is chachi isn't she going to say bye to us

N:(stammers) woh...woh pari chachi already said bye to me when we were leaving home she had a doctor appiontment which she could'nt miss or she would have drropped us to the station(hopes gunjan will believe her)

G: oh (in her mind she knows nupur is lying) okie di lets go the train is about to leave

N: haan lets go

Dehli Station

samrat= s mayank= m prem = p

we see two guys walking around furiously...the camera zooms in and we see it's samrat and mayank

S: bro i thought you said prem is coming today

M: yea sammy he is coming his train is not here yet

S: bro you know i could gone on a date if i had known the train was going to be late

M: sammy do you think about anything else except dates

S: yea bro

M: what?

S: hot girls!!!

M: (slaps his head) oh ofcourse how stupid of me what r dates with out hot girls

S: rite bro

(horn rings indicating train is here)

M: lets go train is here

S: bhai you go get prem and all get us a taxi since my car is in the garage because of somone!!

M: ok i get it and i said sorry a million times.anyways go get the taxi we'll come outside

S: okie

The Train

(prem gunjan.and nuour were travelling on the same train)

The girls come out to see heer waving to them

Heer= h gunjan =g nupur=n

n: pari chal woh rahi heer

g: jee di aap chaliye mein luggage lekar ati hoon

n:ok

(gunjan goes to get the luggage)

(nupur while gettin of the train her duppata gets stuck in sandal and she trips)

n: ahhhhhhhhhhh

*lands in mascular arms

m:open your eyes your safe now

n: (opens her eyes to see dark brown glistering eyes staring at her like they were searching for the truth which she was hiding suddenly get out his grip and runs away)

m: weird girl instead of saying thank-you she ran away (laughs and sees prem and waves to him)

m: hey bro wats up?how was the ride no problem rite

p: no mayank everthing was fine lets get the luggage i can't wait to meet maa

m: sure lets go

while nupur runs to heer hugs her starts to cry

h: nupur what happened why are you crying?

N:(tells her what happened with mayank)

h: nupur don't cry everthing will okie and look gunjan is coming she will be upset seeing you cry now smile please

n:(cleans her face and smiles seeing gunjan)

g: hi heer di(hugs heer)

h: pari how are you have grown so much

g: that exactly what di says before she starts to cry...r u going to cry like her please don't i hate tears

h:(laughs) no i won't cry...now lets go get a taxi

The taxi stand

The girls come ouside and gunjan sees a guy standing near a taxi with the door open thinks the guy owns the taxi

g: di let go there is a taxi

n: okie lets go

the girls walk over to the taxi the guy is reading a newspaper so his face is covered

h: excuse me we need a to go to banjalo no5 at glushan street can you take us there

(the guy hearing the noise closes the newspaper and looks at the girls angrily)

guy= g1

g1: excuse me what did you say

g: r u deaf we said can you take us to bangalo no5 at glushan

g1: hey you chasmish don't show me attitude

g: don't you dare call me chasmish mr taxi wale

g1:(laughs at her anger) taxi wale? oh hello miss chasmish this is not my taxi and do i look like a taxi driver to you

(nupur and heer watch the scene and have never seen ganjan this argry at anyone )

g: oh yea sorry (batting her eyelashes) noooo...ofcourse not you can't be a taxi driver

g1:(fixes his collar) see i knew it i am to hot

g: ofcourse you can't be a taxi driver because you look like a beggar

g1: hey chasmish watch it you don't know who i am

g: omg and i don't want to even know who are!!!!!!!

g: heer di and nupr di lets go and get a taxi somewhere else

n:pari we will have to carry the stuff around with us while looking for a taxi and this stuff is heavy

h: pari nupur is rite

g: no di lets go

the girls are about to go when the guy calls them

g1= umm miss chasmish you can use this taxi i'll get another one

g: no than...(looking at nupur and heer who are angry at her) awww thank-you so much

g1: ur welcome

gunjan and heer sit in the taxi and nupur is about to sit when she calls the guy...

n: ummm mister thank-you sorry i don't know your name

g1: ur welcome and my name is samrat

n: thank-you samrat ur really sweet bye

s: bye hope to see you around

the girls leave

s: hmmmmm.......nupur sounds old fashioned but she looks to hot
and sammy waits for prem and mayank to come
Next update: the guys leave for home,the girls settle in, samrat thinks about nupur/pari, mayank meets gunjan&prem meets heer.
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz comment and you silent readers too plzz comment your comments are really
important to me. i am very thank-ful to all those ppl who comment. thank-you very much😛😛😛

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Posted: 16 years ago
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great update. can you pm me the next time you update?
thank you.
-mona
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

Grt FF..........

do continue soon.........
Raee.😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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are the pairs nupur and samrat?

btw really good update soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
its really good.........but pairs r nupur and samarat or mayank and gunjan?..... can u pm me when u update it.......

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