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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi i'am starting a fanfic on samrat/gujan and mayank/nupur and there is one other couple but they will be a suprise...........it's story about life and how the two couples handle their first real relationship(actually for the girls it's their first real relationship not fot the guys). Also handling their friends, classes, teacher,work,and their parents..... will it be just too much for them or will they survive ...

💔 ❤️ Kahin Pyaar Na Ho Jaaye❤️💔
The Bushan sisters
Gunjan Bushan: 21 yrs old a very sweet innocent kept away from the real world girl.she lives in a small town with her sister because her parents died when they were young.Her elder sister has kept her away from the real world because she think gunjan won't be able to handle it .she is amazing in studies very shy and reserved girl but.........(reveal later). hates her chachi because she is mean to her nupur didi.
Nupur Bushan: 22yrs old a girl that is too mature for her age. she had to grow up too much for her when her parents died so dhe take care off her younger sis.she is very sweet and nice but only to her sister outside the house she acts as if she is 30yrs old.she is like a mother/sister/father/best friend to gunjan and very protective of her. she is beautiful and a sensible girl.she smiles from the outside but hides all her pain in the inside.(has a secret that will be reveal in 2-3 parts).her aunt hates her but she still reapects her like mother..
*they both are moving in with heer in dehli to go to collage with her.
The Shama Brothers
Mr Alok Sharma: a excellent dad encourages his sons. he loves his wife and son very much. A great husband/father.
Mrs Shriya sharma: loves her sons very much supports them for everything. she just waiting to bring her bahus home so that she has some females on her side to support her. She is an excellent wife and a triple excellent mother.
Mayank Sharma: The sensible brother in 2nd year of collage he wants to be a business man. he does not believe in love for him love is just an emotion that causes pain. he loves his parents and his younger brother alway helps out smarat when he is in trouble.
Samrat Sharma:The care-free cool dude of the collage all girls are fida on him but he fida on his dream girl just waiting for her to come but, while waiting he does timepass with other girls.He is named the flirt of the collage but is very sweet and caring for people he cares about like his bother and parents and his friends.
Other Characters:
prem: best friend of mayank and smarat like a son to shriya he has no parents so he lives them he like in between of smarat and mayank he is not studiou but he isn't a flirt either he in between somewhere.
heer: best friend of nupur and treats gunjan like little sister. she is the only one that knows how much nupur suffered. she is always there for the sisters. she now invited thme to stay with her in dehli because she came back from london and she doesn't want the sisters to suffer with their chachi.....
Ria Bhushan: chachi of the sister. is their legal gurdian..she hates the sisters because they are a burden on her. she wants them out of her house. she is sending them to collage in dehli so they leave her house
plzz tell if i should continue or not does this story seem a little different from the one we are seeing or the same,because if it seems same i will change it up.......plzz comment if i should continue with it or not....i will post the first part tomrrow.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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First of all HAPPY BDAY 🤗n the FF is gr8..Do continue😊😊😊----------Sameera😊
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Happy Birthday Priya


plz continue ur ff😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear
great concept
do hope to read more
love
tanasha
PS happy belated bdae
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please continue and belated happy birth day
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FIRST OF ALL HAPPY BDAY PRIYA
THE FF WAS GREAT
DO CONTINUE
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Happy belated birthday!
And great fanfic!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Happy Birthday! I like the title you've picked. Do continue with the ff 😊
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Happy Birthdayy!! 🥳
Story and Characters sound really cool. Please continue 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1
" WOH KEHTE HAINA KE KOI SAB KUCH PAA KE BHI KHUSH NAHIN HOTA AUR KOI SAB KUCH NA PAA KE BHI ASSMAN MEIN HOTE HAIN"...............................
15 YEARS AGO
there are people crying and mourning all over the place,there are two dead bodies on floor covered with a white clothe and a one little body sitting beside the bodies crying
the girl =g1
g1:(crying and screaming) mama papa get up we have to go shoppin for gunjan b-day......mama why aren't you getting up we are going to be ,come on we have get a nice present or gunjan will be really mad......papa tell mama to get up...mama get up ...
(runs over to her chachi who is crying in a corner)
g1: chachi why aren't mama and papa getting up...tell them to get up we are getting late..(looks at her chachi crying)chachi why are you crying and why is everyone here crying we should be happy today is gunjan birthday we have to wish now please stop
(chachi irrated by the girls behaviour)
chachi=c
c: chup kar nupur
(we find that little girl is nupur our little cutie)
c: (hold nupur's hands and take her over to the two bodies)dekh nupu your parents are dead they are no more in this world they will never ever get up they left you and gunjan alone in this big world with no one to care of you.your mama and papa will never play,laugh,talk,read you stories or take you to school they are gone..they are going to heaven
nupur=N
N: nahiiiiiiiii.........(screaming and yelling)...chachi my mom and dad are alive they are still alive,they are just sleeping
(chachi getting really angry now slap nupur)
N: (realizes the truth and starts to cry very much).......
while we see a small girl waling through the kitchen coming to nupur ..
(i kno she is krishna from kasam se but she is just toooo cute)
G: didi why are you crying didi don't cry or gunjan will too
N: nahi my jaan mein kahan roh rahi hoon meri ankh mein bas kuch chala gaya tha
now chachi comes over to both of them
c: nupur ise ab kya chupna ise bhi toh bata ke tum manhooso ki wahja se ab mera bhai aur bhabhi nahi rehe tum dono is ghar ke liye manhoos ho.
G:chachi aap kya keh rahi hain...mama papa toh soo rahe hain .haina nupur di
N:(hugs gunjan starts to cry) nahi gunjan didi mama aur papa humein asie chor ke nahi ja sakte
C: ja sakte nahin woh chale gaye hain(really angry)..aur woh tum dono manhooso ki wahja se..
the sisters cry and confort each other, the rituals are performed on the bodies and the chachi becomes the legal guardian of the girls.....
years pass....
6years later
chachi= c
C: nupur where r u why didn't you wash the dishes and gunjan where are me clothes why aren't they pressed yet i have to go shopping
N: chachi i washed the dishes and cleaned the house can i and gunjan go to masterji to study
C:(looks really angry holds nupur's hair) tu parna chahti hai mein tuhje parhati hoon ja mere kapre doh and unhe isteri karke rakhna mere ane tak.aur tere behan kidar hai..
N: she is sleeping she was feeling sick
c: see koi kaam nahin karti ise wahja se bimaar hogayi hain mein use koi kaam deti hoon bhir woh thek hogayegi...warna mujhe dawain lana parein gi aurunke paise bhi muhje dene hongey...thaar mein use udati hoon.......(about to go to wake up gunjan)
N: nahi chachi mein uska kaam bhi karloon gi aap muhje bata dene use mat udaiye use sone dene.
C: kyun.woh koi rani hai kya??
N: nahi woh bimaar hai
C: theek hai kapron ke saath tu market se sabzi lake khana paka lena.theeek hain main chalti hoon
N: chachi woh....paise
C: kal toh diye the kahan gaye woh ghar ki cheezein lani thi
C: kya matlab sare paisa use karliye ...acha yeh le aur is dafa bill sath lana tak mein hisab kar sakoon..theek hai
N: gee chachi..
after a while gunjan wakes up ...
gunjan=G
G:didi mujhe book lagi hai
N: wait karo mein tumhare liye khana lekar ati hoon
(in the kitchen there is only half roti and a little bit of dhai left)
N: yeh lo gunjan khalo aur dawai khake so joa theek hai meri jaan
G: par di aap ne nahi khana
N: nahi gunjan mein kha chuki hoon aur khila ke muhje mota karna kya....
G:(laughs)okie didi......mein kha leti hoon
Just like this their days pass by living with their chachi and not going to school..their chachi kept on treating them like servants,after 2years nupur and gunjan started to educate themselves without the chachi knowing but were very smart and learned very quickbut gunjan would always get it first and then nupur would understand it......nupur alway told gunjan that she was the smart on out the sisters but gunjan in her mind always said that didi no is braver and stronger then you. the sisters were the support for each other nupur would alway protect gunjan from chachi like a mother. She gave gunjan everything she wanted ignoring her own needs because her sisters concerns came after gunjans concern..........just like that 8 years passed by now
8 years later ....today
Gunjan=21 yrs old
Nupur=22 yrs old
we see one girl walking on the train station
girl=g1
G1: didi didi aap kahan ho
(some girl taps her from behind)
G=g2
g2= mein yahan hoon
(who are the two girls???)
next update: the girls introduction and also the boys tooo...........maybe first day of collage
stay tuned for the next update .plz forgive me for any mistakes hofefully next time it will be better...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz comment your comment are important to me even the silent readers plzzplzz commentss😛

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