HUMTUM (a RagVir story)..FF..Pts 31,32..Uptd..Pg56 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 6




Ranvir aur Ragini ke dil ki khushi ka koi thikana nahi tha''ke yaha Ragini toh neend mein bhi smile kiye jaa rahi thi'aur waha Ranvir toh khush toh tha hi per yeh bhi sonch kar pareshaan hoye jaa raha tha ke abhi Ragini toh Anmol se pyaar karne lagi magar ab voh usse kaise bataye ke sirf Anmol hi nahi magar Ranvir bhi usse pyaar karta hai.

Ranvir ko iss baat se darr tha ke Ragini kya usko accept karegi ya nahi'..kyunki ek time tha jab Ranvir ne Ragini ko accept nahi kiya tha magar jab Ranvir kisi aur se pyaar karta tha'.aur ab Ragini bhi kisi aur se pyaar karti hai magar voh koi aur khud Ranvir hi hai''per yeh usse batay kaise.

Subah Ragini ke liye ek naya hi rang laya'..usse khud yakeen nahi aa raha tha ke Anmol bhi usse pyaar karta hai'.voh khushi khushi apna bistar theek kar rahi thi ke'..waha se Malti guzar rahi thi

Malti ne kamre aate aate kaha'..'maine kisiko itni khushi se bistar theek karte hue pehli baar dekha hai''jhoot toh main bolti nahi Ragini'..kahi uss wrong number wale ke khwaab toh nahi dekhne lag gayi aaj kal.'

Ragini ke chehre se achanak khushi jaise udd si gayi thi'.usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ke voh malti bhabhi se peecha kaise chudaye'..hamesha kyu uski khushi thodi deir mein gayab ho jaati hai.

Ragini yehi sonch kar apne kamre se bahar aayi toh maa aayi waha se aur kehne lagi'..'Ragini aaj dance class jaane se pehle zara yeh ganpati aur yeh Prasad Sadhna ke ghar de aana'..tere bauji ne Alekh babu ke liye prathna ki thi'..aur saath hi mein Sadhna aur alekh babu ki jodi salamat rahe yeh bhi prathna ki thi''bhagwaan ne chaha toh Sadhna aur Alekh babu hamesha khush rahenge.''..Ragini ne smile kiya aur waha se chali gayi.

Ranvir yaha Sahdna bhabhi ko bulaye ja raha tha apne kamre se'..waha thodi deir baat nauker aaya aur usse apna juice dene laga toh Ranvir ne kaha'.'kya bhabhi Alekh bhaiyya ko juice de rahi hai.'

Nauker ne kaha''nahi Ranvir saab'..Sadhna bahu toh apni behen se baatein kar rahi hai'.voh bhi aayi hai na'.isliye.'

Yeh sunte hi Ranvir apni chair se baithte baithte uth kar teher gaya'..usne phir se poocha'..'kya kaha'.bhabhi ki behen aayi hai'..tumhara matlab Raginiji aayi hai??'

Nauker ne sar hila diya toh Ranvir jaldi jaldi shower lene jaate hue kehne laga'.'theek hai tum jaa sakte ho.'''..Ranvir phir shower leke tayyar ho ker neeche aya aur neeche aate hi apni speed ko thodi slow kardi'..kyunki voh upper se neeche pura bhagta hua aaya tha.

Voh slowly Ragini ki taraf aaya aur namaste kaha'..Ragini bhi usse dekh kar teher gayi'..aur yeh sab Sadhna dekh rahi thi.

Ranvir ne Sadhna ke paas wali seat ko chod kar Ragini ke paas wali seat per baith gaya'.aur kehne laga''..'aaj subah subah kaise ??'

Ragini ne smile kiya aur kaha''voh babuji ne Sadhna aur jijaji ke liye prathna ki thi toh main vohi Prasad dene aayi thi''

Ranvir badi hi excited tareeqe se kaha'..'achcha kiya'..sabko prathna karni chahiye'.yehi nahi'..balke prathna ke saath saath'...dusro ke saath Prasad bhi baatna chahiye'..mujhe bahut khushi hui ke aap yaha tak hamein Prasad dene aayi.'

Ragini toh Ragini'..magar Sadhna bhi pareshaan thi'.Ranvir ke iss badle hue bartaaw se.

Edited by starz4me - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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the continuation to part 6 will be posted very soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 6 (cont'd)



Ragini aur Ranvir chup the.....Sadhna unhe dekhe jaa rahi thi....sonch rahi thi ke unki jodi kitni achchi lag rahi hai.....tabhi waha se nauker aaya aur kehne laga ke...."bahuji....apko choti malkin bula rahi hai."
Sadhna ne usse dekh kar sar hila diya phir Ragini ko kaha...."jiji....aap baithiye main abhi aati hoon."
Ragini ne kaha...."nahi nahi Sadhna....tum jaao....mujhe bhi chalna chahiye.....mujhe dance class jaane mein deir ho rahi hai."
Tabhi Ranvir bol pada....."nahi Raginiji.....thodi deir toh baithiye na.....phir main chod doonga."
Ragini ko achcha nahi lag raha tha.....usne kaha....."nahi Ranvirji aap please takleef na karein....main chali jaongi."
Sadhna jab tak chali gayi thi....Ranvir ne mouqa samajh kar.....phir Ragini ka haath thama aur kaha....."aap ne mujhse dosti ki hai.....aap meri baat nahi maanengi."
Ragini ko samajh nahi aa raha th ke voh usse kya kahein.....usne sirf smile karke raazi ho gayi."
Ranvir ko thoda chain mila jab Ragini raazi ho gayi kyunki usse Ragini ko dance class tak chodne ka mouqa mil gaya......voh smile kiye jaa raha tha....tabhi Ragini ne poocha....."kya baat hai Ranvirji....aap bahut khush lag rahe hai aaj."
Ranvir ne Ragini ko dekha toh uski chechre ki smile aur wide ho gayi....phir halki hassi se Ranvir ne kaha...."khushi ki wajah hi mujhse khushi ka sabab pooch rahi hai."
Edited by starz4me - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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(Banner provided by sweet_shagun.................thanks a lot shagun for ur contribution).😊 shagun...............i'm gonna use this banner in each part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG beautiful Part i love Ranvir the way he wanna express tht he loves Ragini and Ragini loves Anmol little does she knws He is only Anmol Another beautiful part!!!!

And am glad u lykd the banner dear this is one of my mst fav ff its beautifully written absolutely rocking!!!!🤗

Waiting for the Next Part!!!

Luv,

Shagun
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ok I seriously don't have any words for this!!!👏 😍 👏 ☺️ 🤗
Just continue soon Will ya.😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ranvir is just soooo cute in this part. Waiting for more 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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The best thing of your FF is we can imagine all the scene happening...!!! Well, undoubtedly, the part was fabulous...!!! 👏 Love Ranveer in your FF...!!! 😃😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
gud job.......very nice story line.👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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kool part dear - keep it up! :)

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