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mahi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part 27:

At The Dance Center:

Jasmeet: ok guys we'll take short break then we continue...

All are sitting haveing a break suddenly there is someone on door

JasmeeT: lemmen c.... ahh master g! u? what a plesent surprise!!! plz come in

Saroj khan: hi dear, hru? what's going on?

Jasmeet. well have just take a break we are finished lolz

Vikrant: namaste master g, ur here 2day'?

Saroj khan: yes i want 2 c how much far u and JAsmeet are lol

Jasmeet: wayeee guru....

Rajat: hey maaa =p ,know jasmeet di is in a toruble hehehe....

Mugdha: ahhaan! quit! we know that Jasmeet will pass 100%

Rajat: oh hello that's not a school exam that she wont pass

Priyanka: it is like a exam right master g?

Saro Khan: yes it is!

Rajat: all the best di!

Jasmeet: hahahahaha, ur so... hahaha... well u will perform and then i'll pass i wont perform ur performens will be my test! right?

Rajat: NO! u cant do this me!!! master g?

Saroj Khan: ahhhan she is right!

Harsh: ohhhhhhhhh goooooooood!!!! im dead...

Sarj Khan: lolz, so Jasmeet are u ready?

Jasmeet: im ready but we are not that far!

Saroj Khan: it doesnt matter, u just show !

All stand up and showing Saroj Khan The steps and all... After this Saroj Khan sees 2 Jasmeet and claps. all are veyr shocked and even Jasmeet is.

saroj Khan: well done Jasmeet well done! after this im 100% sure u will get more offers for choreography on Tv and bollywood... im sure

Jasmeet: ihv seen so many mistakes but if u say then...

Saroj: u saw mistakes? where tell me!

Jasmeet.: i cant if u say its ok then its ok

Saroj Kahan: NO! ur are the teacher here! u should say what is right what's wrong, thats the exam abt what im taking from u! so go ahead!

Jasmeet: OK!!! thennnn first i'll come 2 Vikrant: very well done dacne moves but ur expression still... when u do ishq hua ur expression r naugthy not lovely so , u should look 2 priyanka like as DHARAM LOVES SIA! so i need LOVE! nothing naughty! ya right?

Virkant: ok ill try my best

Jasmeet: i know u can do it! but plz we have 2 win!!! u all have 2 win! so keep practise dont mind what im saying but there was really missing something!

Vikrant: no no i really dont mind ur my teacher and ill do best nxt time thnx for telling me my mistake!

Jasmeet: ok... priyanka: i love ur expressions... but ur dance moves has 2 be still very neat... ok practise

Priyanak: ya sure!

Jasmeer: MUGDHAAAAAAAA.....!!! what u do? ur the best: ur expressions ur dancing ur acting ur everythinfgis perfect! what do u eat?

All clapping!

Mugdha: i dont eat anything! lol

Jasmeet: well done! Rajat..... ohhhhh....

rajat: im dead!!!

Jasmeet: naaa, ur really have done a good work but there is still something is missing, ur improoving in giving expressions, ur dance movements are very clean and neat, but ... i dont know! practise! Master g, have u seen something missing? i mean i feel like so im saying it...

saroj Khan: hmm i saw something, rajat ur dance movement are not serios ther are a lil naguhty so keep concentrate u can do it very well but i feel u dont take the dancemoves seriosly ur always like jumpy and naughty type... its good i mean u should have fun in doing this and i c u do, but the actuall thing is that the performens should look a lil realistic! understand?

Rajjat: i know, thnx for telling me this, ill keep my best thnx =)

Jasmeet: Harsh! everything perfect... i dont have 2 say anything! qauz u were all the time the perfect dancer so keep it up!

Harsh thnx di! im really glad 2 hear this! thnk u di thnk u!

Jasmeet well that was it what ihv noted in all of u! and plz plz plz keep prcatise we really have less time so... plzzzzzzz

Saroj khan: very good jassu, i also have seen the same mistakes which u told but i wanted 2 hear this from ur passed but only 90%! after u will finished it before the stage show i want 2 c the whole performens and then i'll pass u... ok?

Jasmeet : yes master g, thnk u!

JAsmeet feels happy....

2 be continue...

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Part 28:

After 2 week all are practising the performens very hard

Jasmeet gets more tensed when ever she seees a mistake by anyone

JasmeeT: rajat rajat rajat.... stop stop! the music!!! ur are doing a big mistake... im sorry but its a must that i tell u

its 1 2 3 4 5 6 and at 7 u put her on arms... got it! its not 6 its 7 ok come one try again come on!!! ... 1 2 3 4 5 6 and 7!!! ya good! keep practise!

Ahhh Priyanka: hold on hold on hold on! ur 2 much fast! ehmmm try this '* shows the step slowly'* 1... 2 ... 3 weee! like this ok?

Try try try try!

Ahh Harssh! listen listen stop stop! i ... listen its very easy why u make it so difficult! try this * show him the step* .. right'? know try

suddenly Jasmeet look at the watch : OH SHIT!!! guys we dont have much time we have 2 finish it come get ur position! ill start the music!

Vikrant and rajat, come get ready fast fast fast fast faaasst!

ok readdy guys: * turns the music*

everything is wrong and wrong and wasting of time and Jasmeet sees all this and gets crazy... and show again and again and all get very tensed that what's wrong with Jasmeet so Mugdha sees this laugh and sits Jasmeet down

Mugdha: Relax sweety just relax take a chill pill !! calm down take a deep breath everything will be ok, we know we dont have much time! we need 2 go home 2 its ok, but sweety still we are not perfect we wont go home we'll stay here and do it right guys??! ok? calm down!

Jasmeet starts 2 cry: we dont have much time its getting 2 much suddenly everyone r doing mistakes.... no i see mistakes! its aaaaahhh!!!! waye guru!!!!

Rajat: DI!! ahhhh!!! its ok we will stay here and practise practise pratise till well are broken! ok? guys what u say

Vikrant: awww seeety calm down i hate tears and ur my frnd so i dont want 2 c my frnd like this come on!!

Priyanka: ya cheer up come on!

Harsh: u need a warm coffe with a sweet hug from me!

Rajat: oye no ill give her the hug she is my girlfriend yaar!

Harrsh: oye! she is mine!

Rajat: u go 2 aditi! =p

Harsh: aah JAsmeet u decide who is urs?

Jasmeet: mine is VEER

Rajat: yesssssss i knew it! thnk u yesssssss yesssssss

Mugdha: no no no no no, she is talking abt Her Veer not u!!

Rajat: oh so sad but one time she will say it also 2 me !! i know her hhaha

Harsh: take this coffe and just calm down!!! come on cheer up!

Jasmeet: i think we should go home know! we just finish the day today here ok guys pack up! oh i mean its off im dead!

Mugdha: are u sure?

Jasmeet: yaaa 100%, plz go home c ya 2morrow! guys im so sorry for 2day, for my rudeness when i get tensed then i.. sorry guys sorry!

Rajat: NOOO its ok sister! i think u need rest! ok guys let's go home! she really needs rest right?

Vikrant: ya right

Jasmeet goes home. everyone leave 2 go home !

At Dvians they talk abt Jasmeet's behavour today!

Mugdha: poor girl she has 2 do this all alone and and infact its her first time thats really mean dont u think?

Vikrant: ya ur right! its her first time there should be something someone who or what can support her

Harsh: poor girl!

priyanka: i dont know what Sarog Khan has thaught and put her doing such a big thing alone and at the first time?

Mugdha: ya right i mean ihv heard that she is very strict abt teaching dancing and all... what we c on her show.. its nothing i guess!

Harsh: publicity!

Priyanka: hmmmm

Rajat: guys there is ntohing wrong with Saroj G and Jasmeet di! u look flashback:

Jasmeet, big fan of saroj khan wanna become like her! and she has shown it

Saroj khan thinks: she can do it, she is doing it! so what wrong?

i think .. that look at m1 ihv done everything, till know but i also get sometimes tensed and nooo kiddi u cant do it and i also get crazy like Jasmeet di ? u know that come guys be honest dont that happen 2 u? mugdha u tell? priyanka di harsh u? vikky! oh come on guys??

mugdha: he is absolutly right!! i agree with u? i mean i c someting but when ever i start i get confused! its right! ur right

the beginning is always difficult and so its for her

VIkrant: look we already have some experience in things and that REALLY her FIRST TIME so...

Priyanka: ya... but nobosy is pefect and the master! u always leanr something and that u do ur whole life

Harsh: i think we should 2 Saroj g no?

Mugdha: wrong! bad option!

Aditi: ya dont do this i disagree with it!

Mugdha: hey guys just wait on 2morrow and then ill think we will change our mind.. so take a chill pill come on... =)

At JAsmeet's Home:

Jasmeet's mom: wht happend tell me something

Jasmeet: today was the badest day of my life! i was so confused that i even could die ... waye guru!

JAsmeet's mom: i know u have big tension qauz the days are comeing near so,.. i can understand u really have 2 be strong till there!

Geet: here ur my sis ur fav vanille cap made by me! drink it and u will fell better!

Jasmeet: ya fine where is ranbir?

Geet: dont know!!

Veer: Jasmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!!! there u r i have 2 show u someting!!!

Jasmeet: what? veer im tired

Veer. i know but after this u'll get fresh! come on!!!

Jasmeet's mom: ya go!

Veer takes Jasmeet to his room its balcony and show her the beautiful moment! the moon was shining so pure, the wind were so soft, everything was so romatic and relaxed!

JAsmeed: its so romatic i love it thnx!

Veer: I love u

Jasmeet i love u

Veer. kisses her chicks....

2 be continue...

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Part 29

All Dvians: good morning!!!!

Jasmeet: good morning!

Mugdha: how ya feel today?

Jasmeet: im fine thnx hru?

Mugdha: Bindaas! well yesterday u were really finished but today u look much better

Jasmeet: i dont know what happened to me yesterday!

Mugdha: it happens 2 everyone when the exams staying in front of the door

Harsh: ya let's begin!! what u say?

JAsmeet: ya sure =)

All start 2 dance and everyone enjoying it, even Jasmeet fells much better today.

Aditi whispers something in Harsh's ear and Harsh says thnx and blushes. Jasmeet watching all this, and thinking that there is something special today. Vikrant sits nxt 2 Jasmeet for a lil break.

Vikrant: hey frnd? what's up?

Jasmeet: nothing, well im watching Harsh and Aditi, she says something in his ears and he blushes ... hmmm and yeah even he says thnx 2 her! do u know something?

Vikrant: haiin u dont know? today is Harsh's bday!! haha

JAsmeet: what? why didnt someone tell me? thats unfair!!! Harsh... come here...

Harsh: did i again do a mistake?

Jasmeet. the biggest one!!!

Harsh: haiin? oh no ...

Jasmeet hug him says: happy bday why didnt u tell me? that's not fair! i thaught we r frnds ;-), hm?

Harsh: well ... thnk u

Jasmeet: ur welcome... know look, if u have told me before then i could give u a present today! naaa... look i dont have anything 2 give know, i feel very bad

Harsh: u hv!

Jasmeet: what?

Harsh: thnx for being my frnd! =),

Jasmeet: awwwwwww.... * hugs him again*

Harsh: didi, im really happy 2 have a frnd like u that's my biggest present which god gimme yeah true

Jasmeet: awww thnk u so much =)

Aditi: c?

Harsh: ya...

Aditi: we are always there for u right guys?

Mugdha: yup!

VIkrant: happy bday 2 u!!!!!!!!!

Harsh: thnx!!!

Vikrant:: lets celebrate!!!!!

Jasmeet: yeahhhh! yahooooooooooo!!!!!

Priyanka: happy bday happy bday!!!! ahaaaa!!!

After The long and awsome day all are tired and sitting down and talking abt the day

Rajat: what an awsome day na?

Mugdha: ya right! today no one was confused nothing was going wrong right Jasmeet?

Jasmeet: ya thnx 2 waye guru g!

Rajat is calling: ya m... nooooooooooo..... dont do this 2 me!!! plzzzz ... nooo.... ahhhhh ..... papa? really? when?...... he is.... no comments... who? bua?... oh oh very bad, i mean that could be really become a lil less no?... well its disgusting... ya ... take care... bye!

Vikrant: mom?

Rajat: yup!

Mughda: hey guys have u heard after this Stage show Sagars wants 2 give us 2 months break?

Rajat: woow, i was looking forward to it, i miss dehli

Vikrant: ya when u hv heard?

Mugdha: Aditi! u didn't tell? what yaar

Aditi: well i was looking forward 2 tell u all but u all were so bz in dancing stuff so i m sorry

Harsh: wooow, i miss my family im gujrat i have 2 meet them

Mugdha: ya well i think ill stay forward here in mumbai with my family after the show!

Rajat: ok then get ready for dehli man!! mom dad im coming! get ready!!

Jasmeet: woow, well i wish u all a lot of fun in those 2 months... let's c what i will do.. maybe going 2 back 2 the dance classes...

VIkrant: awwwww, why dont u teach kiddies .. or ... something like this?'

Jasmeet: teaching? and me? i mean i still get 2 teached by someone, i cant imagine to teach someone else...

Harsh: wrong i think u are able 2 teach know i mean look how u work with us and it really works

Mughda: well we were really thinking last night abt ur day yesterday, i mean u were that much confused, and i mean its ur first time and Saroj g, even doesnt give u any support to work with us i mean ur are totally alone...

Harsh: yeah why did she does this 2 u? i mean ur not a master in choreography... i mean its ur FIRST TIME! i mean she really did mean 2 u no guys?

Rajat: ahh come on guys! the beginning is always difficult even when ever we do somthing new we also get norvouse... so?

Vikrant: but yeah i wanted 2 give u the answer abt it but it was not the right time! know ill answer u u know its not that difficult for us, we already have some ideas how 2 do and how 2 handle, Jasmeet didnt has any idea how 2 handle that was her FIRST TIME! u know what i mean?

Rajat: ya i do... but listen bro... u right... but listen i mean that we get ideas by someone that we get supported by someone and she even didnt got that chance! u know?

Jasmeet: wel guys ur really right that im doing it FIRST TIME and i really had no idea.. how 2 begin how 2 handle how solve the porblems etc but u know what im lucky abt ? qauz ihv got nice teamworkes like u who always supporting me in everything, the main thing is that how ever someone do it first time or many times i mean the main thing is understanding, coperate and compromise... and that i got from u all from the first day. i was also very shocked that why mster g is giviing me this work to do it totally alone! but after meeting u realized that what ever u do, do it alone! that gives much confident as u expect it by urself no?

Rajat: hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm lol

Mugdha: hahaha... well i think ur absolutly right

Harsh: ya but... i dont and i cant agree witht hsi i dont know why

Vikrant: qauz its our mind set... we get always support by directors producers co stars frnds family etc... we neva have done something ALONE actually we hv never try!!! think guys!? she is right!!! i agree with u Jassu =D

Jasmeet: thnx

Mugdha: ya right!

All Agree with Jasmeet.

They Day went good and everyone goes happy 2 their homes...

2 b continue

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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Rhea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

hey....i read ur comment on how no one was reading ur fanfic 😒

hardly anyone is commenting on mine too..

so i decided to read urs :)

i've read the 1st 3 parts..

i think its an awesome start :)

and i will read the rest soon..

please continue.

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mahi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part 30

JAsmeet on fon: ya... hmmm... yes sir! sure sir... ya.. fine... im really glad 2 lolz... ya ill inform them... ya?... ahan.... ok thnk u.... bbye!

Geet: who was it?

Jasmeet: Mr. Sagar he is coming this week 2 mumbai to watch our performens and after friday we will go one week to the stage 2 practise on it...

Geet: woow! are u excited?

Jasmeet: yes! very! but i know it will be a very good performens we are already finished.

Again Jasmeet's Fon belling: Jasmeet singh. Masterg? namaste... yes... just a few mints ago... ya... sure why not... hahaha... yeah ur right ... bbye

Veer: Jasssuuuuuu.... hmm love u * hugs her tightly*

Jasmeet: hmmm Veer! plz lemme go... im getting late

Veer: nooooo dont go!

Veer's dad: Veeeeeeeeeerrrr!!!!

Veer: ahh shit! yes bau ji

Veer's dad: ready shall we go?

Veer: ya... where is chacha?

Veer's he is gone! we are getting late ok beta bye

Jasmeet: bye! ... im going 2 geet, bbye!

At DVians:

MUgdha: wooow next week is the show im soo exicted... yahooo

Priyanka: same here

Vikrant: that will be fun

Harsh: yup

Rajat: Aditi? what abt the dresses? are they ready?

Adtiti: they will come on saturday...

Rajat;: ahhh fine!

Mugdha: come on guys stand up we are getting late Jasmeet is surely already there lets go...

All arrive 2 the dance center!

Harsh: good morning di

Jasmeet: morning hru?

Harsh: fine!

Jasmeet: guys i hv a news for u

mugdha: and that is?

Jasmeet: well this friday Mr. Sagar and Saroj g will come 2 c our peformens.. here at the center and on saturday we will go to the stage place where we are going 2 perform then. we will practise there! i was yesterday there and its big place. so guys we really hve 2 give everything till next week saturday! so guys are u ready? Aditi, what abt the dresses?

Aditi: well they will arrive on saturday and they are complete know but u have 2 wait

Jasmeet: ok then take some snacks and we will start in 15 mints.

after 15 mints they start.

Hum tumpe marte hain hum tumpe marte haiiin ...

Mugdha feels down. rajat laughs!

Jasmeet: ahhh what happed 2 u?

Mugdha: nothing!!! grrr...

Rajat: oh sorry actually ihv left her hand so... hihih

Jasmeet: lolz well mugdha there was a mistake well u had 2 turn on 4 not on 6

Mugdha: aika!!!! lolz ok show me ...

Jasmeet: gimme ur hand ... 1 2 3 and turn! there are 4 beats u have 2 follow thw 4 beats ok? try

Priyanka: lolzzzzz......

Vikrant: LMAO!!!

Jasmeet: hahahahaha... stand up vikrant lemme show u

at the evening:

Mugdha: ahhh that feels good... having some break

Vikrant: yaa...

Jasmeet screams on fon: WTH?????? are u mad?... u dont know Jasmeet Singh! im from punjab amritsar, just dont u dare 2 mess with me !!!! ...

Rajat: ohhh wooow!

Mugdha: oh god! look at her ... she is so angry...

Jasmeet. idiot! how dares he?

Rajat: di what happened?

Jasmeet: nothing

Rajat: oooh mmyyy girlfriend is looking so cute ,,, ohhh

Jasmeet: lolz

Rajat: phhhuuuh thnk god she has laughed infact i was totally scared of her... lolz

Vikrant: what happend?

Jasmeet: wrong number!

Harsh: oh!!! how dumb!

Jasmeet: i hate wrong numbers! grrr...

Rjata: i love them =p....

Mugdha: NO WONDER!!! snoppy boy

rajat: jangli billli!

Mugdha: bigda rayees!!! =p

Jasmeet: lol stop it!

All laugh.

At Jasmeet's home. Geet is sitting and listining 2 her fav song hum tumpe marte hain!

Geet: hum aap mein kuch hogaya kuch milgaya kuch kho gaya ...

Ranbir enters the room and looks at Geet. Geet look so sweet during dreaming. Ranbir sits nxt 2 her and start to 2 sing the song. Geet opens her eyes and sings 2.

Ranbir: i love u geet

Geet: i love u 2

Ranbir: lier!!!

Geet: aaah? what?

Ranbir: dont lie 2 me... u dont love me

Geet: Ranbir!!! ...

Ranbir: hahahah i was joking!!!!

Geet: i dont like jokes!

anmbir: i dont like u

Geet: oh yeah

ranbir: oh yeah!!!

suddenly both laugh and hug.

2 b continue...

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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31 Part

After 1 week.

The day has come and everyone are very excited. Jasmeet is very nervous.

Rajat: Jasmeet di, im very excited!

Mugdha: ya me 2

Vikrant: ahhh me 2

Priyanka: same here

JAsmeet: he waye guru plz plz help me! waye guru plz help me! hey guys til they will come why dont u repeat it again?

Harsh: good idea ...

all r repeating the steps and every one makes mistakes and laugh abt it.

The door bells, Saroj Khan enters the room. everyone run 2 Saroj g and take her ashirwad. after 5 mints Mr. Sagar and fighting guru if DV enters the room. Dvians take there ashirvad.

Jasmeet: ok... shall we start! haiin someone is missing i dont know who... Ranbir and Geet! ahh they both!!! always late

Ranbir and Geet enter the room: sorry di! we are late!!!

JAsmeet: hurry up!

Again the Door Bells: Rajat opens the door. and he looks so happy, his parents are here 2 visit him!

Rajat: mumyyy dad! love u! what a plasent surpise!!! im so happy 2 c u

rajat's mom: me 2, my god! dont u eat well? u look so slim!

Rajat: not again! im fine! lemme meet u Jasmeet di

Jasmeet: hello mam

Rajat's mom: hello dear hru?

Jasmeet: im fine thnk u hru?

Rajat's mom: fine thnk u, well rajjy always tells me abt u so its really nice 2 meet u

Jasmeet: my plesure mam

Everyone sitting there and Jasmeet starts 2 explain how they will perform!

Jasmeet: well guys!!! im happy that ur here, and we all are very exicted. we ready for the stage show, and today we will show u our whole perfomens. well, we have taken the storyline of DV, its like dharam veer 's friendship, Shera's entry Daku Rani , Sia's Entry, Dharam Sia love, Veer Shera love, DV and SS together, Rajkumari Agnis' entry, Veer's entry as shramik, DV Vs Agni and at the end we have the title song of dharam veer!!!

All the song have choosen my participants.

So i request to my ppl 2 start the dancing, and Plz plz plz do comments and tell me what ihv done wrong we still can change it in 1 week =).

Saroj Khan: Jasmeet, im sure there will be nothing wrong! u guys start

Jasmet okay... then rajat and Vikrant... shall we?

Rajat and Vikrant: yup!!!

sari khushi tere dum se hai.... DV

Chaliya chaliya ... Shera

Mera Kajal... Priyanka

Dharam Sia .... IShq hua

Veer Shera:... Hum tum pe marte hain

DS & VS... mr lova lova

Rajkumar agni... dum laga dum laga

Drona ... Veer the shramik

DV VS Agni: saila ru sailare

Dharam Veer title song.... the whole grop!!!

During this Jasmeet is praying. After everyone have danced. everyone start 2 clapping, rajat's parenst really look happy! Sagar is very impressed, Saroj khan is very very happy. Jasmeet is still nervouse! And the DVians also...

Saroj Khan: jasmeet! amazing wonderful, fantastic awsome work i love u! uhv done it!!! im really happy and i always knew it u will do it

jasmeet cries.

Mr sagar: i always knew it that my children will do their best. im very proud of u all... really keep it up!

Rajat's parents: just one word!!! woooooooowwwwwwwww!!!!

All are very happy. They all take their blessings.

Rajat: mummy, i was so bad in dancing everything has done Jasmeet di, she has teached me how to make it perfect

Rajat's mom: ya i know! ur improoving and ur expression were just awsome!!! keep it up! and yeah jasmeet thnk u

Jasmeet: thnx for what?

Rajat's mom: for all this today im very happy...

Jasmeet: ahhh nothing 2 thnx, no problem he is like my lil brother and i really have fun 2 work with him!

Rajat's dad: he is sooooo naughty how did u handle him lol?

Jasmeet: i handled him like i do my bro sis!! they are more then Rajat lolz... haha

Rajat's dad: hmmmmmmmm .... congrats!

Jasmeet: thnx!

Vikrant: Jasssssssuu!!! it was a awsome time 2 work with u! it was really good

Mugdha: ya Jasmeet! i just loved 2 work with u

Jasmeet: thnk u so much its all qauz of u im thnks ful 2 u

Priyanka hugs Jasmeet tightly. Harsh Hugs her 2. every looks very happy and waiting for the good day...

2 be continue...

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part 32

The Day Has come!!!!

All are getting ready for the show.

Jasmeet is very nervous. she looks after the dresses and the make up. Mugdha as usual look like the Shera in DV, Jasmeet gives her totally a new look! every Dvian look same as in the serial!!!

Jasmeet: WTH? it looks like we are watching TV!!! rubbish! Rajat what is this?

Rajat: what?

Jasmeet: ur hair!! very bad... sit down!!! Ranbiirrrrrrrrrrr..! change his hairstlye i dont like this its like Veer just came out of the television lolz change his look!

mugdha: ahh god!!! these shoes, doesnt match with my clothes!!! well anyway

Jasmeet: wait!!! take my shoes!!!

Mugdha: no no.. its ok

Jasmeet: take them come on we are getting late!!!

Vikrant: ahhh...

Jasmeet: what?

Vikrant: my bindi! hahah

Jasmeet: put it off it looks .... *pukes*

Vikrant: lolz!

Priyanka comes out and she looks perfect! lol

Jasmeet: wooow priyanka, ur looking fab! good !

Priyanka: thnx!

Rajat: di?

Jasmeet: ya... fantastic!!

Rajat: thnk god!

Jasmeet: wait wait wait! there is something missing!

Rajat: what?

JAsmeet: oh yes.. ur chain.. change it!

Rajat: i dont have another

Jasmeet: Take mine! it matches!!

Rajat: are u sure?

Jasmeet: it looks not over with ur clothes! the one ur wearing looking 2 much over!

Rajat: aaah really it looks good thn

Jasmeet: welcome! where is harsh?

Harsh: im here hahaah!

Jasmeet: looking fab!!! hurrry up guys!!! its ur turn!

Out at the Stage Mona Singh And Amir Ali are hosting the show

Mona Singh: so ali! tell me one thing! how is it possible?

Amir Ali: what ?

Mona Singh: well i prefer that how Dharam And Veer keep their Friendship so strong, i mean knowdays... its really hard to keep it no? well ppl should learn something from them! dont u think?

Amir Ali: hahaha, well i have a best frnd like Dharam Veer! so i dont have any porblem with it!

Mona Songh: ahh u boys!!!

Amir Ali: u girls! hahahah

Mona Singh;: well yes lady and gentlemen! the performes will be from Dharam And Veer! they are here 2 show u what the real friendship and brotherhood is!

Amir Ali: the Dance has been teached by a student of Saroj Khan! Miss Jasmeet Singh! She is very talented!

Mona Singh: ya let's c after all she is punjabi kuri like me and punjabis rocking! right guys?

Amir Ali: ya right! so put ur hands together for the Dvian main cast: Rajat Tokas, Vikrant Massey, Mugdha Chapekar Priyanka annnnndd Harsh Rajput for Dharam Veer!

all are clapping!

Jasmeet: ok guys!! wish ya good just do it forget everything just concentrate! ok guys go go go go go g good luck!

All hug Jasmeet: Bye jassu!. Rajat stays there and looks 2 Jasmeet:

Jasmeet: rajat! go!!! hurry up.

Rajat tajkes her belssing and hugs her tightly!

Rajat: thnx di! wish me good luck

Jasmeet: awwwwwww sweety good luck, know go!!!

* And Then They Met* - Part 1:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bJjhuHD4wF8

* And Then They Met * Part 2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2BiE0WJyZZE&feature=related

* And Then They Met* Part 3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DpQs5oHD_Zs

( Vdo to my Fan fic and this Part )

Jasmeet goes and sit next 2 saroj Khan.

Jasmeet: waye guruuuuu!!

Saroj khan: dont u worry dear everything wil be fine, inshallah!

Jasmeet: i hope so...

Everyone r perforning. The public look very excited and having fun to watchig it. The DVians love 2 perform at stage and having a lot of fun!

every one are clapping even some ppl stand up and clap!

After it finished! The whole Public stand up and clapping and look happy!!!

Jasmeet: Omg god! Master look at the ppl! they like it!

Saroj Khan: congrats jassu, congrats!

Jasmeet starts 2 cry. She goes 2 the Backstage!

All come 2 her and hugging her! every look so happy even Jasmeet cries loudly!

Ranbir and Geet come on Backstage, hug and congrating her 2!

Karan Johar comes on backstage.

He meets Jasmeet and give her a Choreoghraph Offer in his new film!

Karan Johar: well done Jasmeet im really impressed!! would u like 2 work in my film?

Jasmeet: haiiin!!! what? ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! i cant belive it!!! i.. thnk u sir!

Karan Johar: Saroj g, i think she has taken ur place!

Jasmeet: No sir! i cant take her place she is is my guru!

Saroj Khan: ohoooh!! its ok know! love u jaan!

JAsmeet: thnk u very much!!!

rajat fastly runs 2 Mona Singh and Amir ALi to request them something before they invite another Dance Team! he wanted 2 say something.

Rajat: Mona Di! i want 2 say sotmhing on stage plz may i?

Mona: sure why not! Amir! help him!

Amir Ali: well before we annouce the next Dancing Part here is somone who wants 2 say something! so ladies and genltemen, plz put ur hands together for Rajat Tokas!

Rajat comes on stage.

Rajat: Namaste, Salaam, good Evening! ehmmm fro where i should start? ehmm its abt Jasmeet Singh our dance teacher of the performens which we have given just a few mints ago! Jasmeet di? plz listen it! its very important!

When i saw her first time i was totally... i mean she is the best!! she is like my big sister and i never want 2 loose her! ihv met so many girls in my life, they want be my frnd they want be my sister etc, but today i ask Jasmeet infront the whole wordl would u like 2 be my frnd and sister For eva?????? And u know guys??? i really feel comfortable with her! she is so sweet i can share with her everything!! Jasmeet di!! plz gimme the asnwer soon thnkx I love u DI!

Thnk u!

All are clapping and Jasmeet comes on stage with a rakhi in hand. she puts the rakhi on Rajats Hand and the both hug !!

Jasmeet: ehmmm i dont have words 2 say anything. i mean he my fav 2.. and im really glad to have a brother and friend like him Thnx rajat! i wish ya good luck in future life. my best wishes are with u!

thnk u! thnx for being there

Rajat: ya thnx for being there! u r the best!

Everyone starting to cry. all The Dvains main cast come on stage and Hug Jasmeet Singh!!! Jasmeet is over happy!!!

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Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Part 33

Pooja Kumar is the cousin of Rajat! She is the daughter of his Masi!

She is 20 yrs old and is a nurse in a old ppl house! she lives with her family im Germany Frankfurt. she is engaged 2 Manav Kapoor. She is a very bubli and party time girl

Franfurt, hot beach and party time!

Pooja is at work! she is feeding an old woman

Old woman: pooja dear, u look very sweet today is today ur bday?

Pooja: no

Old woman: oh i thaught its ur bday but u look very happy there must be something

Pooja: qauz ur happy lol

Old woman: naa im not happy =(

Pooja: why?

Old woman: my son doesnt come 2 me i just hate his wife!! uurggh!

Pooja: calm down its not good 4 ur health to get so much angry dear!

Old woman: yes i know...

Komal is Pooja's best frnd: they boht work together at the same old ppl house. They even went together 2 school. Komal is married and her husband is in backhome who is comeing soon!

she is 20 yrs old!

Komal: Pooja i need ur help!

Pooja: ya im coming

Komal: good afternoon mrs mueller! hru today?

Old woman: im fine hru?

Komal thnx for asking! eat well its very good 4 ur health u know that

Old woman: yes i know =)

Komal good: pooja i need ur help! would like 2 come plz!

Pooja: yup im finished... ok Mrs mueller, i need 2 go c ya tomrrow * hug*

Old woman: ya c ya tomorrow! i love u!

Pooja: aww i love u 2!

Komal: bye mrs mueller * hug*

Old woman: bye god bless u

Komal: any plans 4 today?

Pooja: no not really just chilling

Komal: and yeah ur Masi is comeing when they arrive?

Pooja: aah yeah they will come on wednesday im very excited!

Komal: well good know! i didnt talk 2 my 4 hubby few days ... i need 2 talk 2 him.. ill call him today

Pooja: oh btw how is jija ji

Komal: he must be fine lolz

At DV Set:

Jasmeet: ahh i fell so good today! yesterday was the best day of my life which i will never forget thnx guys!

Mugdha: ya really !

Priyanak: right and the most cutest moment was when rajat came on stage and talked abt u awww that was really awsome right?

Vikrant yup! i loved it! hey jassu may i ask ya something?

Jasmeet: ya sure

Vikant: will u be my best friend? i mean.. i feel ur very special 2 me so i want 2 add u in my special frndz list!

Jasmeet: yeaah! why not it will be my plesure 2 be ur frnd!

Harsh: any plans for the cominh 2 months?

Rajat: ya! me and my family will go out of india and that will be a surprise for me... i dont know where we go!

Mugdha: ill stay with my family here in mumbai

Vikrant: same her family and frndz

Priyanak: ill go to jaipur, to my dadi! i miss her alot!

Harsh: ill go to Gujrat!!! im happy...

Aditi: ill stay here and work what abt u Jasmeet di?

Jasmeet: wellill go with my family 2 amritsar 4 2 weeks, and im very excited!

Harsh: hey Adtiti!! why dont u come with me 2 gujrat, u wil have a lots of fun there

Aditit: thnx, i would like 2 but i hve 2 work!

AT Jasmeet's home!

geet: im very happy that we go to amritsar! its so exciting!

ranbir: ya i cant wait 2 visit our old haweli

Veer: ya right!...

Jasmeet: hey guys! what's up?

Veer. oh hi dear nothing much just packing!

Geet: hi DI

Ranbir: Hi jass di

Jasmeet: hi... oh where is ma and tayee g?

Geet: they are at madnir and gurudwar yap!

Jasmeet: oh ... when we will lave?

Veer: on wednesday!

Jasmeet: great...

2 be continue...

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Part 34

At Jasmeet's Place:

Jasmeet: guys! we are getting late! hurry up Geet Ranbir!

Geet. Im here!!! Ranbir is coming!

Jasmeet: where is he?

Rabir: im here!

Jasmeet: ufff u both!! come let's go!

Jasmeet's fon bells: hello... hi vikky!

Vikrant: hi jassu hru?

Jasmeet: fine thnx what abt u?

Vikrant: im fine as usual, well just wanted 2 say have a lots of fun in amritsar

Jasmeet: awww thnx i wish ya al ot of fun with ur family and frndz

VIkrant: ur bijli wants 2 talk 2 u

Jasmeet: sure!

Vikrant's gf: heyy jassu ki bachi! where going?

Jasmeet: amritsar!

Vikrant's gf: awww nice! wish ya a lot of fun! dont forget 2 bring me something

Jasmeet: yaa sure!

Vikrant's gf: ok take care bbye

Jasmeet: bbye

and they go to amritsar!

Rajat's place:

Rajat is looking after his bag! and he is still confused where they are going!

Rajat: oh... yess! how can i forget! my cam! .... what else... oh ya my holidays diary!!

rajats' dad comes in the room

RT's dad: what are u doing?

rajat: well packing my bag looking if i need something

R's dad. u need this... * gives him ticket *

Rajat: ahan.-.. welll... * opens the pages*, wooow we are going 2 germany?

r's dad: yup! how is the surprise?

rajat: awsome! but dad where we will stay'?

R's dad: at ur Masi's s home...

Rajat: my masi? who?

R's dad: u were very little when they came 2 India for the first time, and the 2nd time they came when u were in baroda PRC but they couldnt meet u, u remember u talked 2 them on fon?

Rajat: ehmmm ya... ya! pooja di! right?

R's dad: yesss! and this time they have invited us 2 germany ... isnt that great?

Rajat: yeah it is... she has a brother right?

R's dad: ya! mannu! but he doesnt live with them, he lives in duesseldorf! he is a MBA student but he often comes to meet them! and yeah pooja is engaged... =)

Rajat: woow! im looking forward 2 meet them all

R's dad: ok then!

At pooja's Place:

Manav is Pooja's fiance, They met when they were in the 8th grade and from then Pooja has fallen in love with him. after passing the 11th grade they got engaged. Manav works as a assistent in a company. he is 21yrs old! he live with his family im frankfurt 2.

Pooja is calling manav, hes fiance.

Pooja: ya ya ya ya, i know u

Manav: yeah thats sad

pooja: what?

Manav: that u dont know me enough!

Pooja: ahan...

Manav: well...

pooja: if i dont know u u also dont know me that well

Manav: i do!

Pooja: u dont!

Manav: let's c...

Pooja's ma: pooja! can u plz come 2 help me?

Pooja: ya.. ok manav i hv 2 go bye!

manav: bye!

Pooja 2 her mother: ufff manav is getting really weird day by day

Poola's mom: i told u! think abt it but u said no its alright!

Pooja: ma its really alright! but u know somtimes i also have bad days so manav also has that's it

Pooja's mom: are u sure?

Pooja: ya sure!

Pooj's mom:well then dont tell me how manav reacts and does and says etc

Pooja: ok ma i wont... , ma when will masi arrive ?

Pooja's mom: tomorrow... im very excited

Pooja: ofcourse! me 2!!! woow rajat is so big know

Pooja's mom: well i think that how he will look when i will c him?

Pooja: ma... u watch everyday Dharam Veer! u should that how rajkumar veer oh i mean rajat looks so...

Pooja's mom: ohooh dumb girl! on screen and offscreen ppl look very different! im really excited

Pooja: me 2 hahaha... when wil the flight arrive?

Pooja's mom: night at 10'o clock! me and u will go 2 recieve them ur dad will saty at home!

Pooja: woow...

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Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Part 35

At Dehli airport:

Rajat is very excited and talks 2 his best friend, his dad looks after the bags and tickets.

Rajat: yaar im very excited, i cant wait anymore!

Rajat's frnd: ya! have fun buddy

Rajat's dad: ok guys! bags ar IN, the tickets are confirmed, in 10 mitns the gate will open and we need 2 leave... ready?

Rajat: yup! ma?? u ready!

Rajat's dad: why is she not ready? lol, she is gonna 2 meet her sister after a looooong time

Rajat's mom: ya! right!

Attention plz!!! the passenger for the germany flight plz go 2 d gate number 7, the gate is opening in a few mints thnk u!

Rajat: ok buddy! thnx for coming! *hug*

Rajat's frnd: i will miss u a lot!

Rajat's dad: ok beta! take care and thnx for coming with us

Rajat's mom: my blessing are always with u! thnk u so much

Rajat's friend: nothing 2 thnx uncle aunty, it was my plesure! thnk u!

Rajat: shall we go?

Rajat's mom: ya sure! hurry!

Rajat: byeee byeeee!!!!

Rajat's friend: byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee have a nice time!

At Pooja's place!

she is very stressed and her room looks so mess! she is very confused what she should wear, when she will recieve the family on airport! suddenly someone knocks on the door:

Pooja: come in!!

Komal: hi pooja! what are ya doing!

Pooja: komal, help me what should i wear when ill go 2 recieve my masi

Komal: lolz how do i know?

pooja: helllllllppppp!!!

Komal: calm down calm down! lemme c...

After 30mints she takes a wonderful anarkali suit! it is in balck and yellow!

Komal: woooow! why dont u wear this?

Pooja: are u serios?

Komal: ya! well i didnt seen u for a long time in a desi dress i think u should try this one!

Pooja: komal, its not a wedding or dilwali or holi or anythign! im going 2 recieve my family there! anarkali suit? er... im not sure

Komal: stupid! desi clothes are not only wearing on festivals wedding! u can wear them any time and i think ur Masi will look happy after seing u in this pretty dress try it!

Pooja: sure?

Komal: YAP!

Pooja gets ready for going 2 the airport!

In the plane:

Rajat talks 2 a fan. the fan is 7 yrs old and she watches Dharam Veer and like tt very much!

Fan: yaa bhayya! i know well i dont like it

Rajat: i also dont like it, i mean it makes u crazy!

Fan: ya! well ehmm how is DV going?

Rajat: its fine! after when i will go back 2 India DV maybe will b finished

Fan: i just love that serial i cant miss any episode!

Rajat: hahhhaaa

Fan: which role u like 2 play? prithvi or veer?

Rajat: hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.... lol! i dont know! well ihv started my real carrer as prithvi and after then im playing the role of Veer! so i enjoy both of the roles! but at the moment im enjoying 2 play Veer, it matchs to my personality u know, ppl say im very naughty very jumpy type boy, and im lolz! so veer is also like this! hihih...

Fan: hihihih... i like u as Veer, naughty bubbly jumpy boy haha! Prithvi is 2 much honest!

Rajat: yeah he was! u know he was a king? he had a biiiiiiiiig responsbility 2 look after the ppl in india u know that?

Fan: ya my mom told me something like that!

Rajat: right

Fan: well ihv heard that u and shera are good friends, but is bigger then u true?

Rajat: yeah shera is bigger then me. abt 2-3 yrs and i always do alot of masti with her! we really have fun on sets lol, and she is a very good friend of mine =)

Fan: dont u feel a lil strange whenever u do romatic scence with Shera? i man she is bigger then u no?

Rajat: ehmmm

Fan's mom: bubli! what are u asking him? shame on u! sorry beta! she cant control herself when eva she sees u on TV or anywhere

Rajat: no aunty its really ok, many ppl ask me this question!

Fan's mom: but i think my daughter is 2 umch young 2 aks questions like this...

Rajat: aunty its really ok! i dont mind! its normal lol its really fine plz dont get angry on her she is very sweet!

Fan: ur the best bhayya! * hugs and kisses*

AT Pooja's place:

Pooja is ready and looks very pretty! she is looking after her mom.

Pooja: mamma! come on let's go we have 2 leave!

Pooja's mom: ya im ready! how is my saree?

Pooja: woow! sexy! know come hurry up!

Pooja's dad come acrossed 2 Pooja and is talking on fon to his son

Pooja's dad: ya.... ya.... ok... here pooja!

Pooja: who's that?

Pooja's dad: ur brother!

Pooja: hi manuuuuuuuuu!!!! were are u buddy when are ya comeing.... sorry hru lol.... ahan... great! we will go toghether 2 the wedding... how is kathrin?... ahan... woow fab.... ya actually wer are leaving 2 the airport Masi is coming from india soo... ya ya rajat is coming!... i hope so lolz ... ya ok... take care.. bbye!

In the plane!

Attention plz! the plane is arriving 2 germany frankfurt airport in 15 mints plz fasten ur seat belts, thnk u!

Rajat: ohhhh

Rajats mom: ahahahahaha

Rajat: lol

The plane is landing!

everyone come out with their bags.

Pooja is looking all the time 2 her watch, at the landing board and gets confused! suddeny she sees: Dehli plane arrived!

Pooja: maaaa! its has arrvied im very excited! ahh!

Pooja's mom: calm donw! calm down! im more excited then u!

The gate Opens

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