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mahi

@larki_punjaban

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

hi guys

well ihv some new idea im my mind,

well im reading a lot of fan fics etc so i really like them

to meine socha kyoun na mein b yeh try karloon..

soo im gonna 2 write a FAN FIC with a lot of dialouges

qauz im not that good in writing looonnnggg texts story so i want 2 make it a lil easy for me and you ofcourse

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Title:

*And Then They Met*

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Main- Cast: 👏

Rajat Tokas

Mugdha C.

Vikrant Massey

Priyanka (Rajukumari sia, the old one )

Harsh Rajput

Co - Cast:👏

Jasmeet Singh ( Choreographer)

Ranbir Singh ( Jasmeet's counsin, Brother )

Veer Singh ( Jasmeet's Husband )

Geet Singh ( Jasmeet's sister)

Pooja Kumar ( rajat's door ki cousin, 20 yrs old)

Poonam n Gautam Chopra ( Pooja's door ki cousin, twins, 15yrd old)

Guest - Casts: 👏

Saroj Khan ( Choreographer)

Manav Kapoor ( pooja's fiance, 23 yrs old )

Komal ( Pooja's Best Friend, 20 yrs old)

Aditi Sagar ( sagar's niece )

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Storyline:

Its a Story about how two people meet and fall in Love, how they handle the people against love, how they expect Love...

It's all about Love

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1047560/and-then-they-met-updt-pg-25 <- And Then They Met

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

Part1:

They story begins with Jasmeet Singh who lives in Mumbai with her family, she recently has done MBA .

She is a Big Fan of Saroj Khan and she always wanted 2 be like her, so she tries to get anyhow to get her lessons to learn the best way of dances... and saroj becomes that much impressed by her that she even get the chance to work with the DV - Main Cast team on a stage show...

how does it come to... lets c:

The Alarm Bell: trrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

Jasmeet: aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh, shut up lemme sleep yaar- she switches it off and continues her sleep

Geet: di, jasu di, hey wake up, its morning

Jameet: yaar the collage is ova know 4 what i should get up?

Geet: yeah yeah u even cant remember, dont u want 2 go for the audition of saroj khan's show?

Jasmeet puts her blanket off her face and looks at the clock: ahhhh wahe guru.... 10'o clock? OHHH the Audition is on 11'o clock, ruuun jasmeeet ruuuunnnn

She gets ready very fast and goes downstairs to have some breakfast

Jasmeet's MOM: oye jassu, why ur so huury? take ur time and have ur breafakst

Jameet: No Ma, i really hv 2 run, i dont want 2 miss that chance...

J's mom: which chance?

Jasmeet: Oh mom,! ill tell when ill come back know im in hurry

Ranbir is the cousin of Jasmeet Singh who recently has got the admition for doing Diploma in Bussines like his brother Veer Singh, who already works in Canada as MD in a office

They both came across: Yaar Di! what happend why ur so fast?

Jasmeet: yaar ranbir plz lemme go im getting late

Ranbir: hey di take this parshad and good luck! wahe guru is with u!

Jameet hugs his brother: aww thnx sweety bye bye bye byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Ranbir laughed and goes to his mother: Ma! jassu di is really funny she always forgets everything! well i wish she never changed herself! i like har like that as she is hihihih!

Geet is the cousin of Ranbir and Jameet's sister, who is a heart patient and she wants 2 become a lawyer

Geet: hahah, well i wish her good luck ihv already put a tavees in her bag and wahe guru will take of her

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Jasmeet arrives the Office of Saroj Kahan, where she takes the Audition for her lessons! She get to secretary of saroj g, tells her name and sits in waiting roon. she is nervouse...

wahe guru g di ghalasa wahe guru g di fatteh ( prays still she has to wait)

Secretary: Miss Jameet Singh?

Jassu: yes?

Secretary: You can go in!

Oh no, its her turn, nervouse, the legs er trembling, hand and feet are cold! OH wahe guru plz help me!!

Jassu: May i come in Master g?

Saroj g: Yes my dear!

Jassu: Namaste Master g

Saroj g: namaste beta, god bless you

Jasmeet blushes.

Saro g: So Jasmeet Singh, 23yrs old, Graduated in MBA, interest in Music Dancing =) very good! So tell Me Jasmeet why u want 2 give the Audition for my show?

Jasmeet is scared and gulps...

Saroj Khan: Beta u dont u need 2 get scared u can talk to me like as u do with ur frndz :)

Jasmeet: Thank u mam, well im a big fan of you and since my childhood i love dancing music and i always

wanted 2 show my talent to ppl qauz my mom said that to live the life u should neva give up! so i want 2 take a try to give this audition and improve myself...

Saroj Khan: very good nice... so which song ur gonna 2 perform?

Jasmeet: Kahe ched Mohe - Devdas

She starts to dance. she impresses saroj g very much that even saroj g get up of her seat give her much ashirvad and give 500 rs. as her price!

Jasmeet is Jubilant and stars to criyng.

She went out of the room and suddenly she sees neha, swati, urmi coming on floor!

she thinks: woow , its awsome in the future im gonna 2 dance with them...

She goes home tells everyone, that she has got the the admition for dancing at saroj g show!

all are very happy!

Ranbir: woow di! i knew it, dat ull win hey ur my sister yaar

Geet: hey sis congrats! Love u god bless you!

J's MOM: wahge guru g di khalsa wahe guru g di fateh: thnk god, uvh done it i knew... very good beta

J's tayee g talks on fon and suddenly she say: really when? ... ahan... on then... flight numer? time? ... ( wrting down)., ok beta ill tell ur dad ... take care beta bbye

She Comes to the family and tell them the good news: hey guys Veer is coming on friday isnt that awsome?

All: wow dats awsome we were missing him

Jasmeet suddenly feels sad....

2 be continued....

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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Shraddha

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Posted: 16 years ago

Moderator's Note:
thank you for your lovely update dvfreak.. par 2 points.. one please continue updating in the same thread that you had originally posted your story in... please dont open a new thread for every part.. this helps keep the number of FFs in the section neatly arranged..another point is that being DV section... i think that only Dharam Veer fan fictions can be encouraged here as there is a separate section for stories and fan fictions too... i would request you to change the story slightly (if it is not a DV track) such that it could be permitted here if you would like to continue posting here

thank you soooooooooo much for understanding and your co-operation... 😳

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

Part 2

Veer: No Jasmeet forget it! i just cant take this risk!!

Jasmeet: what kind of risk? i mean love is not a risk...

Veer: dont mess with me girl! im really tired of ur sick love...

Jasmeet Cries...

Jasmeet: Veer! why dont u understand i vh neva tought to being with soneone else together as with u! i love u

Veer: But i dopnt1 plz lemme alone! i neva liked know plz dont hang on me i dont like this!!! BYE!

Jasmeet: VEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!

^^ its was a night mare...

Geet: di! what happend'? why ur so scared?

Jameet: veer.... veer ... veer... water...

Geet gives her water

Geet: what happend tell me? have u seen veer bhaya in ur dream? i guess...

Jasmeet starts to cry: i really dont why this haopoen to me all them time? just tell me my mistake! only that ihv loved veer so much... i feel like diying geet...

Geet: calm down di! everyting is n wahye guru g's hand, neva can be changed... just try sleep...

Geet sleeps but Jasmeet cant and thinks all the time abt the drean, veer etc well Jasmeet has fallen in love into Veer since her childhood, but when time comes that she told him, the time was over and Veer rejects her love... he was totally changed...

Know she thinks that will she do after he'll come back 2 India...

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Nxt day!

Jasmeet aarives the dancing scholl of Saroj g ? she is very exicted, when she cam in she saw saroj g is learning her students the song aja nachle... sheb was relly happy to all of them!

Saroj Khan: Very good! nxt step is

Neha: Master g there is someone on door

Saroj: ahh Jasmeet dear hru beta come in :)

Jasmeet: Namaste Master g, i hope im not late

Saroj kh. : no u arent we have just begun the song u want join us

Jasmeet: sure why not! * exicted*

Swati: ehmm mama she can joi us but how abt the frist step that u teached us? i mean there she has to be learn fron the beginniong no?

saroj: ya ur right! so today u only watch our practise and nxt time u can dance with us, is dat ok?

Jameet: ihv no porblem master g but the step uhv just teached ihv seen it and ihv it my mind so if u dont mind guys can i have try?

Saroj kh: wow u pick it up very fast lets c ! SOUND!

Jasmeet dances and Saroj Khan was really that she danced every Step perfectly...

Saroj Khan: woow very good beta! come join us!

Till 12pm they daxcned laughes and have fun1

after 12 pm Jasmeet is ready to go home and Saroj g came 3 her

Saroj g: Jameet! well im really impressed that u have today very well, actually at the first when i saw ur dance i set it in my mind dat u can be evyr good dacner and even a better choeographer like me...

JasmeeT: No master gg, ur my guru1 i cant take the level of u! why i shoudl do this! no no no no... plz

Saroj g: no i mean yes u can do it !

Jasmeet blushes!

Saroj! *smiles* ur a very shy girl right!

Jameet: no amam actually i talk 2 much u dont know me yet, but its everything new for me so that why im a lil quit but wait afew days lolz

saroj: hahaha, i dont need 2 wait i can c it right know, go home beta c u tomorrow

Jasmeet: bye bye thnk u master g

AT DV SET:

well i dont need 2 tell anything abt the DV main cast qauz u all know them very well :)

Sagar's: CUT! welld one rajat!

Rajat: ohh thnk god!

Mugdha: woow kewl buddy

Rajat: thnx i know im cool

Mugdha: huh?!?! come on yaar ur not that cool...

Rajat! im, if i would'nt be kewl the girls would run after me hehe

Mudgha: ohhhhhhhhh, i didnt know this *rolleyes* lolz

Rajat: aaah, something is smeliing here-1 what is it! ur jealouse hahah,

Mugdha: uifff bigra hua rayees zada

Rajat: ohhh jangli billi im scared!

Vikrant enters: hi dude! what's up? woow nice shot

Rajat: aah thnx borther

Spot boy to Mugz: mam ur shot is ready

Mugdha: ok! bye

Rajat and vikrant: have fun best of luck

mugz. thnx

Vikrant aaah i really feel realxed know! i cant wear those rajkumar clothes they are so have and lazy aaah feel good in jeans

Rajat: theheheh, well i feel much better in lazy clothes then jeans...

Harsh: then u can walk around like in dhothi kurta mr-toaks hahaha

Rajat: im planning abt it but i think its very uncomfortable for the media... LMAO

Aditi is sagar's neice, she works there, since Dharam Veer serial has started!

Adititi: ufff Harsh just shame on u man! ur talking to wo these brilliant rajkumars, u always got slapped by jayvardhan! looser

Harsh: hahahahaha they are only Rajkumar in the serial the realy rajkumar is ME! AHAHAHAHA

Aditi: U fool LMAO

Rajat and vikrants also laugh!

to be continue...

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

Part 3

its friday!!!

Jasmeet comes back from her dance practise...

GeeT: Hey wow brother1 dat nice thnx

Veer: ur welcome sis

Ranbir: aah where is my gift??

Veer gives hi a big packet and he Ranbir jumps aorund lolz

Suddenly Veer sees Jasmeet standing by the door...

Jasmeet: hi guys1 im back!

Geet: hi Di1 what's up? hopw was ur day?

Jasmeet: yeah it was fine... im tired, i just wanna sleep

Gee:T hey ook who is here1 VEER BHAYAYA! and see what he has broight for me isnt that cute?

Veer & Jasmeet look at eachother and then they get up and go to their room for having rest with saying anything

GeeT: uffff!!! how awful! i wish everything be fine beetween of them both...

Rabeer: ya ur right! but know what geeT? actually its also a lil Veer's fault i mean he shouldn't react like dat 2 di when di told him that she loves him.. dat was really mean...

Geet: hmmm! isnt there any way to get together!

ranbir: Na! i dont c any other way! i think nobody of them wants every perfect

GEET: hey1 jasmeet di wants!!! dont forget that

Ranbir: still? *confused*

Geet: i gues...

Ranbir: my dear geet, u better dont guess, have the confidence

GeeT: aaah u now what ranbir1 i think we should leave hem alone no?

ranbir: good idea!

At DV SET

Scene:

Vikrant: nahin veer1 hum aisa kabhio hone nahin denge

Rajat: Veer keliye kuch b na mumkin nahin hai... ek maseeha kelyie kuch b na mumkin nahin hota Maharaj Dharam!

Vikrant: theek hai veer ...fiuefhe?.... CUT YAAR i forgot the dialouge

both laugh!!

Rajat: yaar vikky this is 5th time u hv forget this one ...

Vikrant: yaa i dont know1 what sghould i do this line is very difficult

Rajat: wooah! man its not chinese that u canmt spek..

Vikrant: lolz

Rajat mobile bell: DON KO PAKAR NA MUSHKIL HI NAHIN MUMKIN HAI

Rajat: hello? .... Hi ma, im fien thnx hru? hows is dad? ahan,,, well nothign just fnishe a shot... yeah lolz... hmmm today is a lil cold... yes ma ill take care iof my self u dont worry... its ok ma lolz... where is daD? Hi dad hru?... fine thnx... ahhan... who? ... oh hehehe, he is so dumb really... haiin? dad not fair! IM... ;).. bye take care

Mugdha: MOM dad fon?

rajy: yup!

Mugz: what did they say

rajy: nothing muvh! eat well sleep well get warm chothes bla bla bla ... lolz

Mugz: aaah its so cold

rajjy yeah!

Ramsen is a spotboy there every like him and he make all the time tea in different flavour!

Ramsen: here u go! ur apple tea

Rajat: thnx ramsen, im happy to have u here, u look after us so well woow thnx for... hmmm yummy

Mugz: woow nice black tea.. thnk u

Rajat: have u heard it? sagar's planning a stage with us

Mugz: really i didnt ? what kind of?

Rajat: ofcourse with dance etc?

Mugz: woow not bad! even we have got something else to do expect only acting no?

Rajat: right! im really exicted

Mugz: btw1 when does it start

Rajat: maybe nxt moth or something... i cant wait heheh

Mugz: hahah geeting fed up being shramik maseeha haiin?

Rajat: pssshhh but dont! yea im... :p

Harsh! oh oh oh oh oh, what ihv heard ur fed up

Rajat: ehmm not more

Harsh: haiin! u just said ur fed up of this ...

Rajat :my opinion has changed... after seing u... =P

Harsh: yaar ur so mean!

rajat: im ;-) ,

all laugh

2 be continue

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

Part 4

Jasmeet walks on street for going back home and she thinks abt veer, what if she talks to him, what if he talks 2 her.. what if... what if ... what if..

suddenly she felt down and a car hold next 2 her and that was Veer's car:

Veet thinks: oh!! Shit! what is she doing here? i hope she is arltight

Jasmeet picks up her head and sees Veer in the car sitting, suddenly she gets full tears in her eyes...

Veer come out from his car: hey jassu are u alright?

JasmeeT: yeha im ... * and stads up*

Veer: what are u doing here? come one lets go home

JasmeeT: No Veer ill go myself thnx fro asking...

Veer holds her hand and try 2 get her back in the car...

Jasmeet tries to leave her hand by him... but he doesnt leave it

JasmeeT: let me go Veer ...

Veer: u dont need 2 walk come in sit in the car

Jasmeet sits in the

After arriving home when she got ut from the car Veer tries 2 talk 2 her:

Veer: Jasmeet i wnt 2 say ya something...

Jasmeet is quit

VeeR: u know what ... i couldnt sleep the whole night when i saw u yester im really scared abt u, i mean u look so diferrent and sick.. what happedn 2 u?

JasmeeT: thnx Veer

Veer: for what?

Jasmeet: its all beqauz of u... dat im Sick!!! in u7r love! still!

Veer: Oh mann.... listen jassu we can be good frind but love1 im sorry but i still cant do it...

Jasmeet: u dont do love u fall in love remember dat!

veeR: Jasuu... listen... to me...

Jasmeet walks away...

VeeR: SHIT!!!

after Dinner Jasmeet sits outside in her garden and thinks abt her back life! she was so happy when she always being with veer, but after that one day everything is destroyed ... why? why why why why??....

Ranbir: Jassu di? Jassu di? where areu! aah here u are! yaar im looking ater in the whole house ur sitting here?what happend? Jassu di?!?!?

JasmeeT: aah veer... sorry ranbir! what happend?

Ranbir: what happend 2 u? again?

Jasmeet: yup! again and again and again and again...!!!

Jasmeet cries and ranbir hugs her...

Ranbir: psssshhhhh its ok DI! everything will be fine...

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AT DV set:

harsh thinks: oh gd! till when ill hold on allt his?

Sagar's: hey mr. tokas: what are u doing man?

Rajat: uuppss sorry... sir one chance...

Sagar: ok one time!

again rajat does mistake in his take and again sagar uncle gives him one more retake... and every fivec mint he gots more retakes.. and after 10 retakes the scene was pefect.

but during this harsh was really angry and was thinking dat last time he didnt feel good and he has to take so many retakes dat sagar uncle was really shouting on him and say if one more he makes a mistake he'll trough him out of the serial...

Know again its harsh turn!

Sagar: ok Harsh ur turn i hope u will do it better this time , but u know what i told ya last time...

Harsh: YES SIR ! *rolleyes*

Rajat: hey buddy good luck

Harsh walks away...

again hasrh does a mistake in the scene and again sagar comes to him and shouts...

Harsh gets angry and goes away in his make up room...

Rajat comes in and tries to talk to him but he refuses to talk 2 anyone.

Harsh: just leave me plz *cries* im really tired of this plz go

Rajat: yaar what happend u can do it

* and during talking he touches his arm and his arme was hot life fire! *

RAJAT: aaah uur so hot! Oh god high fever?how does it happe u were

so fit last days...

Harsh: im still fit... but i dont know what mistake i do...

Rajat: U need some rest no scene know! ill go and talks 2 sagar uncle g

Harsh: NO THNX I DONT NEED THIS!!!! ILL DO IT!

rajat: are u sure?

during this sagar uncle comes in and c all this and say 2 : u dont need 2 take this scene ur ill and i dont think its good for u!

Harsh: why? ur scared that i will bang ur scene? i will do it

Sagar: then go!

Sound Camera Position and... ACTION!

Harsh speaks is dialouge and suddely he falls down and gets unconscios...

Rajat: abe! HASRH!... wake up wake up waakkkkkkkke uppp bring somone... Aditi! HeLP!!

All take him to the make up room and try get him back after a few mint he comes back!

rajat: i told u to not do this scene ur ill but u dont listen to me... man!!!!

Harsh again begins 2 cry...

To be continue...

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

Part 5

Fon Bell:

Jasmeet: hello? ... yes master ji... yes ... yes... no problem... yes ... yes ... ok im coming ... yes master g, bye

Geet? where is my car key? i cant find it have u seen it somewhere?..

Geet: No di! i didnt

Jasmeet: MAAAAAAAAAA!! where is my car key? have u seen it ?

JasmeeT's mom: No Beta! actually ur dad needed it and its away know!

Jasmeet: oh no! i need it! master g has called me and she want that i come to her... how ill go there? i... uffff!

Veer: what happened?

J's Mother: ehhmm beta jasmeet has 2 go for her dance classes but her dad kept her car key with him so she really doesnt know how she'll come there

JasmeeT: MA no porblem ill take a rikshaw it will take a few mint further late 2 there but ill handle it

VeeR: why? my car is here i can drive u 2 ur classes

Jasmeet : NOOOO!!!! ill go my self...

Geet: DI where ull find today a rikshaw! its sunday go with Veer bhaya its much better

Jasmeet: ill walk !!!

Veer hold her hand: im wiating outside in my car u come...

Jasmeet walks out but veer doesnt let her go. And after Jasmeet goes with him in the car

The whole away they dont talk 2 eachother but they think abt eachother

Jasmeet: OH GOD! what ihv done! i shouldn't go with him ! what is he thinking? maybe he thinks im a looser duffer! im confused i cant say i love him and i cant say i hate him! wahe guru! help me!!

Veer: she has changed herself! i think its qauz of me, how should i refuse it? i dont think she'll forgive me... no?

The car stops and without saying anything 2 eachother, Jasmeet gets out of her car.

Saroj g: And 1 and 2 and 3 and 4 an... stop!!! Swati! Swata! what are u doing ?

Swati? : sorry master g

Saroj g: why u sing the male line? swata?

Swati: sorry master g

Saroj g: lolz, ok sound... ok!! next step

Jasmeet:M ... Ma... Masterg ? im sorry im late

Saroj g: no beta ur not late come join us!

After they practise they had 15mint break and all he girls where having gossip but Jasmeet was listining and was quit! she even not smiles! saroj Khan sees this and sit next 2 the girl and tries to cheer up Jasmeet

Saroj G: hey girls ! what's up?

Neha: nothing master g!

Saroj g: Jasmeet what happend? are u ok?

Jasmeet: yes master g im perfect

Saroj g: yes i know ur perfect but today u look so sad! what's wrong with u?

Jasmeet: nothing... mam...

Saroj g: *smile* let me tell u something about when i get sad

Saroj g tells abt her sadnees the girls and how she get again cheer up. all girls listen this and laughed! even Jasmeet smiles.

Saroj g: Jasmeet, u know what i want 2 tell u something, its goof for u and ur future, neva get sad without any rason qauz if somebody knows abt ur dis weaksnees they will try 2 misuse ur feelings and make a fool of u i know ur a very powerfull girl and u will do it! show it dat ur Jasmeet Singh!!! they punjabi powerful gir!

Jasmeet smiles and thnx 2 Saroj g 2 give her a nice lesson abt life :)

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At DV Set:

Harsh is criyng and mugdha is sitting nxt 2 him and triying to get him calm down!

Mugz: ohoooh! harsh! u know u can do it better then look at ur role man! rajkumar agni1 what a fanatstic villian u can be i mean u can do it better then rajat! i like ur role better then veer everyone is doing better for itself so cheer up!

Harsh: DI! no body see my performams my hard working only rajat!! WTH?

Mugz: dont act like a lil kid! ur big man know!

Harsh: maybe u think im jealouse of him, im not but i also have some rights and feelings! why do sagar uncle do this 2 me?

Mugz: do u hate rajat?

Harsh: no... i mean.. yes ... NO NO, he is a good friend .. he is... ahh im confused!

Mugz: lol, i know its very bad to decide one thing! u know what u shoudl think positive abt others then u will affect 2 someother very nice and positive

Harsh: rajat hates me no?

Mugz! NO! he loves u very much! he cant c u like dat? u know what? today morning u didnt come on breakfast and he was worried abt u and looking after u! and u know what he didnt eat that much as he always do lolz motu!, haha

Rajat hears everything and get tears in his eyes

Rajat: thnx Harsh! i thaught we were good friend but know i realized ur so mean...

Mugz: oh oh oh! harsh.. say.. something... he is angry!

Rajat: no mugz im not angry im disapointed that my best friend thinks abt me like that!?!?!?!?

Harsh: I ... listen ... i

Rajat: What?!

Harsh: im sorry ... i just wanted dat i get one more chance 2 improve me..

Rajat: u could get a chance and u still get chance but ony in one way dat u stop thinking negative abt ur self!

Harsh: i know im a looser!

Rajat: SHUT UP! if u say this again then ill punch u! what i dont want 2 do! know shut up! and come on back 2 ur work!

Mugz: c i told u he loves u 2 he doesnt want 2 c u in that situation like as ur at the moment :) Know u both hug and get cheer up!!

Harsh and Rajat hug eachother and everyhting is fine, but harsh still is not feeling well if he should accept him as a good frnd! and rajat also realized dat this rajkumar is still confused but he will let him to go on his own way and will always help him out anyhow! :)

2 be continued...

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

Part 6:

AT DV Set:

Sagar is talking 2 his brother ( writer) abt Harsh:

Big Sagar: yaar! what haopend 2 Harsh? he was not like that before

Chota sagar: Bhayya. i think its ur fault... i think u should give some more chance to him for that one scene

B Sagar: yaar what ihv done he was taking so many retakes and that was just a time wasting

C Sagar: bhayya, he was ill on that day why he took so many retakes and then next day he got high fever, when ajjy were ill u give him 2-3days 2 rest and harsh even not one hr... Not fair

B sagar: ya i think ur right... lemme talk 2 harsh!

c sagar: do u think he will listen 2u?

B sagar: i hope so

Sagar goes to Harsh to talk:

harsh: aaaaaaaaacccchhhhhhhhhtttttttiiiii, he baghwan i cant anymore *sniff sniff* bullshit my fever is out but im still cold.. aaah

Sagar: beta? what happend? ur still ill?

Hash: yup *sniff sniff*, i hate it i could die... ahhh MA

Sagar: im sorry beta, i was really mean 2 u

Harsh: no sir its ok i think i couldn't do it better then rajat that u couldn't neva give me more chance

Sagar: Beta u know what? ur my fav

Harsh: aaahh sir g? maska? waahhh!

Sagar laughs: no maska actually u know im tensend abt DV episode, fans etc so in this im really confused abt it so thats why im ... yaar im sorry

Rajat: forgive him.

Harsh ok fine i forgive but haaaatttchhhiiiiiii....

sagar and rajats laugh*

After 2hrs they got break and Aditi sits next to Harsh

Aditi: hi Harsh whats up?'

Harsh: nothing much haatsschhiii...

Aditi: chi chi chi chi chi ... LOLZ

Harsh laughs 2

Aditi: what happedn to u yesterday? u were angry? chacha told me something 's

Harsh: i was sick i couldnt control myself, so i got angry with rajata nd sagar g, very bad of me ... i know im bad

aditi: who say ur bad? * and they looked intor their eyes*... hmm?

Harsh: ahhmm... ehhmm... oohhh... myself..

Aditi: U lier! haha, ur not bad... i know this *winkeS*

Rajat and Mugdha are watching this:

Mughz: have u seen something?

Rajat: hmmm, love in the air

Mughz: lolz, how sweet :D

Rajat: stop dreaming girl!

Mugz: haiin? u fool, im not dreaming, im happy 4 them

Rajat: hello?!?, they just have seen in their eyes.. u know 1st step, maybe its not that what we are thinking

Priyanka ( old rajkumari sia) enters:

Priyanka: It is! Mr.

Rajat: haiin ? di? how can u say that?

Priyanka: beqauz i know it *winks*

mugz: yeah rajkumai Sia, u know everything

Priyanka: heheheh

2 be continued...

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

Part 7

Jasmeet: Good morning girls!

Neha: Hey jassu good morning hru feeling today

Swati: u look very happy, any speccial reason

JasmeeT: i dont think there must be a special reason to get happy no?

Urmin: ya ur right hahahahah

Jasmeet: Where is master g?

Neha: dont know we are wating for since 20mints

Sarog j enters: sorry girls,. im late to much traffic outside today aahhh i hate it but im really happy to recieve ya all so hru?

Neha: we are fine master what abt u?

Saroj g: Fine thnx ! shall we start?

JasmeeT: oh yeah im eaady *jumps up*

Saroj g: wah wah wah wah * happy*, jasmeet has loaded full enegry 4 today, very good!

Jasmeet laughs

saroj g: 1 2 3 4 5 6 and 7! Stop well done girls! Jasmeet, have u ate som,ething from home ur just perfect today

JAsmeet: hihih, nothing master g, u hv given me yester day a very good lecture and i really thaught abt it, so then jasmeet singh decided that she will neva diaspoint Masterg Saroj Khan! so... im here today

Saroj g: im proud of u! next step.. aah Swata, Swati u were very good keep it up

Swati: ahhh thnx master g *jumping*

A boy came on the door to saroj g

Boy: Mama, mr. karan johar is sitting in ur office he is watinf for u

Saroj: haiin Karan? girls u continued witht he practise ill be right back

saroj wents in her office...

In the dancing room Neha asks Jasmeet abt yesterday

Neha: Jassu what happenend to u yesterda'y?

Jasmeet: what should i tell, i just had a bad day dats it!

Urmin:everyone get bad days in life so but today u very good, im happy

Neha: me 2!!

Jasmeet laughs

Jasmeet: ok guys, lolz, lets start the practise

At Jasmeet's home

Veer: OMG! where is it? i... Ranbiiiiiiiiiiir?

Ranbir runs : waye guru, not again... aaahhh what Veer bhai?

Veer: have u seen my Diary?

Ranbir: which diary?

Veer looks at him very angrily!

Ranbir: i dont know where it is, i dont touch ur things... yaar it must be here lemme look

veer and Ranbir starts to search the diary and suddenly Veer founds it : GOT IT! *happy*

Rabir: ifff bahyya, u really scared i thaught what happend know? uffff...

VeeR: sorry yaar...

Veer sit alone in his and reads the diary page 4:

My day,

i was really mean 2 jasmeet, no? i mean she really loves me? ehmm... im confused totally confused!

Page 5:

My day,

today im travelling to Canada back for my studeis and job, i hope ill foget it all what happend here between me and jasmeet...

Page 6 , 7 . 8 9, ....... Page14:

Oh ma! Jasmeet in injured? how didi it happen? i hope she is alright! i miss her

Page15:

I called today jasmeet and she didnt give me any answer she was just criyng and at the end she only says to me i love u veer and hanged up! oh shit man1 she is really carzzy abt me1 i need 2 do something...

After reading all those pages Veer really feels guitly abt what he has done with jasmeet, how can he refuse it?

Veer's MOM: VEEEEEEERRRRRRRRR??????? WHERE ARE U ?

Veer hides his diary fast

Veer's mom: oho, ur sitting here im lookong for u ion the whole come down ihv 2 show u something!

Ranbir, Jasmeet's mom, are sitting there and watching girls pics!... know u can think why!

Geet is sitting there watching all this and gets a lil sad for her sister

Ranbir: she is hot! perfect kuri for my brother!! my brother is also hot no?

Veer's and Jasmeet mom laughing!

J's mom, yeah he is!

Veer: what is this all?

Veer's mom: we are looking to girls for u, she is nice, from bhatinda, Preity, MBA, his father... has.... haiin? what Veer?

Veer: mom im not ready for geting maaried i mean its ... No mom reject them all

Veer's mom. haiin look my son any time u have to get marreid and u know what u dont need stay in inda u can take the girl with u in canada

Veer: no ma1 its not this, but im just not readdy for

after saying this, he goes out side in the garden...

***************************************************************************************

At DV SET:

Mugz is callng with her brother

Mugz: hmmm... shit! ... no bhayya... i dont think so... he is dumb *rolleyes*, No im not ready for this tell him!

NO! shall we talk abt somethign else? good *smile*, yaa ... dont know when, sagars are planning with us a stage porgramm dont when and where, i hope im mumbai... aah ym shot is ready i hv 2 go

take care say hi 2 mom and dad. Bye !

Mugz goes to her shot

Sound camera position... ACTION

Mugz ( shera): Maharaj Dharam? aisa kesa hosakta hai! shera ko pata lagana hoga!

Vikrant ( dharam): nahi rajkumari sia1 aisa nahin hosakta1 veer humara bhai hai

Priyanka ( sia) : maga...!?!?!?

Vikrant ( dharam) : Bas! *look at her angrly *

CUT!!!!! WOOW WELL DONE!

2 be continued...

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

Quote

mahi

@larki_punjaban

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#10

Part 8

At DV set:

Rajat is calling: Ma why are u worried abt it? ... i think its her own fault.. no... neva eva... forget it... maaa ???... where is dad? hi... fine.. dad yaarw ahat is this? im confused, dont make me crazy know... enough... *laughs* really? i love u dad... when? saturday? kewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwlllllllll, happy. haha bye take care

Mughz: u sound very happy

Rajjy: ya mom and dad are comeing on saurday isnt that cool?

Mugz: ya it is *get sad smile*

rajat: wha happend'? anything serios?

Mugz: nop...

Rajat: dont lie

Mugz: i dont

Rajat: then tell me what happened?

Mugz: my brothjer called me ..

Rajat so?

Mugz: well, what shoudl i tell, my brother doesnt have good days knowdays so... he is alil tensedn thatwhy he called me

Rajat: oh.. well everyone have bad day in life so what's new?

Mugz: yeah i tried to convince him the same thing but he is his own mind king! he neva listens 2 anyone, even not me..

Rajat: hahaha... sorry...

Mugz: what was that?

Rajat: sorry sorry sorry... im sorry... well i think u should let ur brother alone no?

Mugz: hmmm ... i wish that he always be happy =)

?Rajat: yup

suddenly rajat sees aditi and harsh sitting there and talking, again they were looking into their eyes

Rajat: Mugz look... there

Mugz: what? harsh and aditi?

Rajat: yeaj hahahah

Mugz: stop laughing!

Rajat comtinues laugh

Mughz:_ when ull fall in love then ill c how u react abt urlove

Rahat: me? and love? haahah noway1 thnx

Mughz: hahaha very funny *rolleyes*...

spotboy: ur shot is ready

rajat: neva no neva neva evaaaa no Mugz, forget it bye

Mughz: ya ya ya ya ya ya ill c... bye have fun!

rajat: haha thnx!

******************************************************

At jasmeets Place:

Geet is sitting in garden and is reading a shakespears book... and dream abt herself and Ranbir

suddenly Ranbir shouts: Geet? geeet? GEEEEEEETTT? damn where are u?

Geet: ahhn uu duffer! u waked me up...

Ranbir: no sleep time... look at this *shows her a photo*

Geet: eww she si ugly, are u looking for u ?

Ranbir: no duffer, for Veer bhayya. isnt she cutE?

Geet: hmmmm... *quit*

Ranbir: what happened?

Geet: dont u think its a lil unfair to opposite 2 Jasmeet?

Ranbir: no... ehmmm.. i mean yes.. but i dont c any solution abt it.

Geet. Veer bhaya say that he doesnt want get mareidjet, so why do force him to get another girl, i think its really unfair for jasmeet an Veer bayya no?

both are sittign there quiot and think abt it.

At the same time Jasmeet enters the house and has seen her mom and her tayii g talkig abt photos and mariage...

J's mom: hey jassu come here, know u decide, who is better she or she?

JasmeeT: what is this

Veer's mom: we are looking for girls 2 get married 2 veer. i like her ...

Jasmeet doenst say anything and goes upstairs...

2 be continue...

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago