AK & Rankan in Kya yehi pyar hai? Ended pg32! - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago
I'm disappointed!!😒 Come on, I know we can get more comments than this!! I know for a fact that there were a lot of silent readers today!! It only takes a second!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spate22

I'm disappointed!!😒 Come on, I know we can get more comments than this!! I know for a fact that there were a lot of silent readers today!! It only takes a second!!

Shreya

Thanks so much for all the comments everyone and thank you shreya you look like the only one waiting😛 lol. i'll definitely update today, im at work as soon as i go home for lunch will post the next update!😳 sorry for the delay! and thanks again!
Nadia
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Posted: 16 years ago
WOW We are on Page 15, will update by lunch time. Thanks everyone!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nadz_J

WOW We are on Page 15, will update by lunch time. Thanks everyone!

How long is your lunch break and don't you eat during lunch?!!😆 Where do you live?!! I can't believe it's afternoon from where you are!!! It's 1:38 am here!!😆
Shreya
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spate22

How long is your lunch break and don't you eat during lunch?!!😆 Where do you live?!! I can't believe it's afternoon from where you are!!! It's 1:38 am here!!😆
Shreya

Hey its 9am here, i've already got the update so just waiting to post it, and i live in sa! as soon as i get home will post it , and thanks for being so eager, reali feels nice to know😆😳
Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nadz_J

Hey its 9am here, i've already got the update so just waiting to post it, and i live in sa! as soon as i get home will post it , and thanks for being so eager, reali feels nice to know😆😳

What's sa?!!😕😆 You always make me read your FFs so late!!😆 Yeah, I stay up late but whenever I try to sleep a little early, you show up and post an update!!! Not fair!!😆
Shreya
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spate22

What's sa?!!😕😆 You always make me read your FFs so late!!😆 Yeah, I stay up late but whenever I try to sleep a little early, you show up and post an update!!! Not fair!!😆
Shreya

😆 what can i do, our timings are so different, sa is South africa where do you live? and you still up????
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Posted: 16 years ago
I live in Illinois!! I know, I was getting sleepy too!!! I was thinking about reading your update later!!🥱
Ok, I'm going nighty-night!!!🥱 I'll read it later and comment!!😉
Shreya
Edited by spate22 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spate22

I live in Illinois!! I know, I was getting sleepy too!!! I was thinking about reading your update later!!🥱

Ok, I'm going nighty-night!!!🥱 I'll read it later and comment!!😉
Shreya

Oh okay, well i'll update in a few minutes and do read and comment. Mwah!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Update 8

Kanya enters the house everyone is sitting and talking, astha and nats on one side and the oldies on the other and pooja and shanta are on the other side.

pam: [shocked she looks at the watch its only 9:30] Kanya, tu itni jaldi agayi [with a aproving smile on her face]

K: haan!

Pam: mansha kahan hai?

K: wo[hesitating] shes gone to her friends house, angad will pick her up on his way back.

N: so... how was your evening?

K: starts thinking about how it started and then ended, with ranbir being so sweet.

N: hello! kahan kho gayi?

K: it was Awesome! Main change karke ati hoon!

She takes her bag and goes up to change into her pjs, then she opens her bag to empty it and sees ranbirs jacket there. she feels something strange when she thinks about ranbir, she starts getting Goosebumps, although now she?s not sure if she still hates him after he saved her and was so sweet with her.

K: whatever! let me go down.

angad and manshaa also come back, and after a short while harry also comes and they all gather around in the lounge.

anand tells them that he has bought a bunglow and wants them to shift, but shanta insists she wants to live in the house her husbands memories are in.

she also tells them that they can shift if they want. but anand explains to her that he's memories are in everyone?s hearts not in the house and he wants all of them to live together and in luxury thats why he bought a 12 bedroom house.

Kanya gets really excited, also harry, mansha and angad get happy coz now they all can have there rooms back. shanta agrees.

K: oh this great! thank you dad! [she goes and kisses him]

An: anything for my princess!

K: thats why i love my daddy so much!

An: another thing, we need to move out in two weeks time as its my two princesses birthday on the 24th january.

K: oh yes! i just forgot, so dad what are you buying me on my 20th birthday?

An: well thats a surprise.

K: oh well i love surprises im so happy, ill start packing now! C?mon everyone get to work!

They all go in their own rooms and start packing.

Its Monday everyone goes college but kanya bunks. Ranbir looks for her, but she is not there.

R: Kanya, aaj kyun nahi ayi? Where is she?

N: hi ranbir!

R: oh hi, natasha!

Ranbir and nats become friends.

Harry is always trying to impress twinkle always behind her, he keeps staring at her and forgetting everything else. One day they are in class and twinkle is looking beautiful. Harry keeps looking at her;

H: Hi twinkle!

T: Hey!

H: how are you?

T: I am okay what about you?

H: I need to tell you something

T: what?

H: You are looking absolutely beautiful.

T: Thanks!

H: how about dinner tonight.

T: are you asking me for a date?

H: yes, something like that.

T: I don?t know, [looks around confusingly] okay.

The scene fades.

Azaan and mansha.

M: your music really drives me into another world, its so sweet, it makes me smile.

A: that?s why I do it, I love to see you smile, always!

M: that?s why I love you so much, you are my best friend!

A: only friend?

M: [looks at him and smiles] flirt karahe ho?

A: aisa hi kuch.

M: hmmm? [smiling and starts hitting him]

He runs away and She runs to hit him. They go to the garden and azaan picks up the hose pipe and starts spraying it on her. They both play in the water and the scene fades.

Angad and kripa

K: angad tum sara din ladkion se hi ghire hote ho,

A: hmmm. So

K: so, tumhe koi pasand nahi hai?

A; hai na,

K: really kaun?

A: tum!

K: what! Please don?t start again I told you we are friends!

A: haan. But ab pyar thodi na pooch ke ata hai, it just happens.

K: angad, don?t start warna mar khaoge!

A: really? [looks into her eyes while saying this]

They both get lost for a while then kripa gets up.

A: kya hua?

K: kya hoga? Don?t worry tumhara koi chance nahin hai! Ab chalein?

A: chalo!

The scene fades.

Kripa knows angad loves her but she doesn?t feel the same for him she just wants to be friends.

Pooja, she got a job in balaji telefilms, she is the head in creatives. Shes really excited. She goes to the mall with her friend anita. They go to a coffee shop and pooja goes to get her coffee and bumps into someone and drops all the coffee on him.

P: im so sorry, im really sorry!

Guy: what the hell! Mera poora shirt bigar diya, dekh ke nahin chal sakti? He looks up and stops.

P: kaha na sorry, aap ko dekhna chahiye na.

Anita: pooja, what happened?

P: nothing serious I am coming just now.

Guy: Pooja?

P: yes, do I know you?

Guy: hi im rishi, rishi mittal. [puts his hand in front to shake]

P: hhhhaaa, CHAMPU!

R: eh, ab koi mujhe champu nahin bulata, they respect me, im in CBI!

P: what this is a pleasant surprise.

[she hugs him]

P: I cant believe it after all these year. But btw ab tum kaafi handsome hogaye ho.

R: I know aur tum bhi kaafi khoobsurat hogayi ho, bachpan mein to ungli nak mein aur itni moti thi tum.

P: [hits him on the arm] just stop it now, mum aur dad tumhe dekh kar bohot khush honge, you have to come home!

R: not right now, actually am on duty, phir kabhi.

P: phir kabhi nahin next week Saturday ko meri beheno ki birthday he, you have to come no bahanas.

R: tum ab bhi nahi badli, still a bully eh, anyway main zaroor aoonga! Bye!
P: bye!

The scene fades.

The whole week passes and kanya bunks. They shift to the new house.

Nats goes to kripas house everyday and Ranbir and nats always sit and talk they become good friends, she also invites him to her b'day party, he doesnt realize that she is kanyas sister. Kripa tells them that nats is her friend but she is always talking to him.

At the new house

K: I am so happy, my own room. She starts packing her things in the cupboard, and dresser.

N: so, enjoying your freedom?

K: yep, definitely, I am so happy and next week is our birthday, WOW!

N: hmmm... but kanya dont you think you should come college from tomorrow?

K: ya, i was just busy shopping for my furniture and stuff, but ill come tomorrow!

N: cool, good night sis! Love you!

K: good night!

Natasha day dreams a bit about Ranbir, What is this? Is this love? Am I in love? Kya yehi pyar hai?

N: kya mujhe sach me ranbir se pyar ho gaya hai? [smiles to herself]

While Kanya is cleaning all her things, she finds Ranbirs jacket and starts thinking about him. She smells his jacket and gets a strange feeling and attraction towards it she hugs it and starts smiling and thinking about him.

K: What is wrong with you KK, the person you wanted to take revenge from you are actually thinking about him? What?s wrong with me? I don?t know, im so tired, I should sleep now!

Ranbir is thinking of Kanya, why does he want to see her so badly? When they meet they always argue so why does he want to see her? What is this? Can this actually be love?

R: No way! Me and that chipkali!

With there thoughts they all go to sleep.

That?s all for today, I know guys it wasnt that awesome, not much of Ran-kan, but i hope u all liked it, Plz, Plz Comment, even if you think it wasnt great tell me about it!

Nadia
Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago

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